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My Na'vi story [CLOSED]
Spyrobaby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4254
#1 Posted: 10:42:13 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Now, I have not seen Avatar yet, so these Na'vis are in my own made up world since I have no idea whatsoever what the places are.

And the characters:

Josh, the brother: http://i45.tinypic.com/1zgw7eo.jpg
His gf, Eliza: http://i49.tinypic.com/1yqr04.jpg
Josh's little sis, Jessica: http://i49.tinypic.com/30wovfn.jpg
Their cousins, Kariyala, Kasey and Kelly: http://i50.tinypic.com/2nulmwo.png http://i48.tinypic.com/245ef0h.jpg http://i50.tinypic.com/30av1on.jpg
The Grace and Marine Na'vis (not on human side, only pretend): http://i47.tinypic.com/2dh91m0.jpg http://i47.tinypic.com/j160s2.jpg

Like I said, I have no idea what Graces and Marines are, so I'm gonna make it up, that ok? You don't like it? Tough.

Prologue coming soon.
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The darkness only stays at nighttime, in the morning it'll fade away. Daylight's good at arriving at the right time, it's not always going to be this grey~
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#2 Posted: 10:45:13 06/02/2010
Awsome. :3 I'd like to read it.
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Spyrobaby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4254
#3 Posted: 10:52:50 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Prologue part 1:

Many years ago in the Na'vi city, all was peaceful with nothing to harm them, until the day came. Houses were destroyed, Na'vis were killed, it was a tragedy. Those people were humans disguised as Na'vis. It started when a young girl travelled and saw them, but she fell for their evil plan. They were dressed as poor Na'vis with no home, and the little girl couldn't help taking thm into the city. She died a few days later because they had secret weapons. Then the city fell. Fortunately, five Na'vis survived and wanted to fight back. The humans would stand no chance against them.

Part 2 coming soon.
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The darkness only stays at nighttime, in the morning it'll fade away. Daylight's good at arriving at the right time, it's not always going to be this grey~
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#4 Posted: 10:54:43 06/02/2010
Awsome. :3
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#5 Posted: 10:56:49 06/02/2010
awesome start. :3
Spyrobaby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4254
#6 Posted: 11:11:00 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Part 2:

The 5 Na'vis were only babies, and nobody knew how they could have survived when those dreaded humans attacked. One Na'vi was not a baby, and that was Josh. He trod through ashes and rubble, getting the young ones to safety. It was difficult walking through a dead city, with noone to greet you or even just smile at you. It was a horrible sight. He didn't have his parents or his friends, but there was a small village near by where he could stay. It was only a 6 minute walk from where he was, so he could get there no problem at all.
When he arrived, he saw a fair amount of Na'vis in small huts.
"Excuse me, is there an empty hut?" Josh asked to an adult Na'vi. The adult pointed to a hut in the corner. Josh, excausted, sat down with the young ones beside him. They were going to wake soon, very soon.
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The darkness only stays at nighttime, in the morning it'll fade away. Daylight's good at arriving at the right time, it's not always going to be this grey~
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#7 Posted: 11:58:09 06/02/2010
that's a good chater. hopefully i'll see you tommorw. smilie
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