darkSpyro

I'll start soon

STOP TAKING MY IDEARS!!!!

FIRST ITS THE SONIC
THEN ITS MY SONIC STORY!!! ARGH!!!!

Wut? Whar? Lol I copy you all the time!

white dragon your gonna have to make your own stories some day

I do make my own stories. Since when did I copy? This is different plot, characters etc.

Chapter one

"At last!" Cawed the man in awe. His burnished brown moustache sprung upwards as he leaped up in joy. The female bat fluttered her eyes open. That was the first thing she saw.

((Ill finish this soon))

Rouge isnt it?

Nope, Thorn the bat. My fan character.

darn i thought i i was on a roll

LOl its my fault for not explaining

oh you copy me all the time........ Okay i dont mind carry on with the story :3

Lol I'm suprised I didn't copy your DP and siggy.

RAWR


moar words

nu i tu lazy

I trapped Shadow yayz :3

Give him back i sez

Noez!! He iz mine!!!

Please continue.

giv him bak

"At last!" Cawed the man in awe. His burnished brown moustache sprung upwards as he leaped up in joy. The female bat fluttered her eyes open. That was the first thing she saw. A shadow cornered over her. She stood up emotionless and rubbed her claws together.
"Master..." She mumbled in program, out of tune of the lab. The man laughed with a wide simper on his face.
"Yes indeed, I am your master," He said. She buldged her eyes at him and stood up for the first time.

Nineteen years later...

Thorn stubbornly leaped past a tall cliff, gun in hand. Mission to murder. She had never been granted the wish to be free, but never would she think of that. Her mind was full of lost memories, forgotten. She only had one purpose: To kill.

The village was silent as a mouse in the night. The coward of a moon hid in the sky shivering. Thorn carried on walking. She kicked a coke can, but ignored it's yells. She saw a shadow stroll past. She shot her gun and sniffed.
"Hedgehog," She said, following the shadow. It led to a brown hedgehog, the same age as her. She began to feel strange feeling she never feeled before for the hedgehog, she blushed, but pretended she didn't have it.
"Hello..." He whispered sharply. Thorn snarled.
"What are you doing out here?" She snapped, the hedgehog picked up she cared for him, but he did to.
"Are you the girl who comes here every night?" He asked.
"Yes, what are you? Some kind of freaky stalker?"
"Nope, pal,"
"Pal? I only met you a minute ago! Any way what the hell are you doing here?"
"I'm hiding,"
"From who?"
"Eggman!"
"Why? Who is Eggman?"
"Dr. Ivo Robotnik methinks,"
"Maa...Master?"

MOAR!!!!!!!!

"Who wha?"
"Your gay!"
"No I'm not!"
"Yes you are!"
"Besides you my pal!"
"What is that? Personal ass licker?"

Just a little add on.

Wtf??? thats kinda ewwe

"It means buddie!"
"Get some balls,"
"What?"
"Yes you, what-your-name,"
"I'm Gamith,"
"I'm Thorn... Never had a 'buddie' before,"
"Thanks, wanna go to my house?"
"Go die,"
"Nope, I think your pretty?"
"Really? Should I enter a fashion consest?" She blinked her eyes and tripped up.

(Can I use Kil for the next chapter? You can use Thorn if you want... Heehee... Thorn thinks shes pretty)

wha??? kilamaya???? ummm okaaaay?? but dont make her do stupid stuff or say stupid things

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The following day, Thorn was in a pink lacy dress. She twiddled her finger across the fancy white scribbles on the edges of the dress. The dress clearly didn't suit her. Her thick fur stuck out now and again. Gamith stood in front of her constantly trying to hold in the sniggered laugh that lurked, waiting to come out. Her make-up was smured, and she looked like a monkey. She got into a pose, ready for her turn.