darkSpyro

Meh, i dunno where i came up with the name for the Dragon. I just heard a Friend at school mention it, so i thought it would be a pretty cool name for him, seeing as he is part-wind Dragon xDD

Anyway, Skyler is my official Dragon, also love his design <3 *cough* Yeah....so i thought i'd start a story about his legend and life, sounded pretty good to me :3

I know i have other fanfics, although i'l do one chapter every 3 days for them, including this one. I'l start on the next chapter tonight or tommorow, since school is finished by then :3

Jeeze you have to many unfinished stories and roleplays. But meh, I'll read this one, even though the others sit and collect dust. xD

Meh, writing the next chapter for the Comet fanfic now. I've just been stuck on ideas for them ._. And i've not been in the mood of role-playing lately, too many things going on in life at the moment. Since the weekend starts tommorow, i'l see about bumping up those role-plays again, guess they can cheer me up a little xD I also have a little more time to roleplay, i would start on them tonight, but unfortunetly my laptop's ran out of internet data, i got my PC up and running again so i'm using this right now xD

But meh.....i'm gonna cut down on the role-plays at the moment, just do the ones i have open right now xDD Same with stories

I dont get to stay up as late on my PC D8

EDIT - Meh, i'm not so good with intro's, only other parts of the story xD Hope you like it :3

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Chapter 1

The young Dragon stood there, looking over his burning village, blazing flames of orange fire burst into the air, a tear fell from his eye as he tryed to forget everything, it was all too much to bare. A group of elder Dragons stood a few meters behind him, chatting gravely about this recent and tragic incident. ''I dont believe this!'' yelled one of them ''This is the biggest crisis we've had, how'd you suppose we move on!? Because of that attack, my Mate, my Child and the rest of my Family are dead!'' he snapped, full of anger and malice. A rather grey Dragon walked over beside him and shook his head, full of grief and doubt ''There was nothing we were able to do, Zaiden'' the Dragon said calmly ''The forces were too strong and they were armed with large and dangerous weapons'' he sighed, looking at the ground which was now piled with ashes from villagers and the trees which were once around. Zaiden lowered his head as the others towered over him, they had no idea how he was feeling, and this made him rather angry. Although he knew he couldnt take it out on them, he just had to deal with this the rest of his life. He looked up at the sky, seeing what looked like a large and slender shadow, it was a Grey Dragoness, the one who they had been expecting.

She flew closer to the ground, her large and skinny claws dug into the soggy and burnt mud, her emerald green eyes sparkled in the glimmering moonlight. The dark Dragon looked at her and sighed ''Nala...'' he said in a deep voice ''I guess you are here for that reason???''. The Dragoness narrowed her eyes and gave a gentle and friendly smile ''Yes, i am'' she said in her soft voice, looking over at the young Dragon, she slowly walked over.

The Dragon sighed and quickly glanced around at her, fright and fear clear in his eyes. ''Wh--who are you?'' he asked with a shaky voice ''W--wha--what do you want?''. The Dragoness nudged him, folding her wings at her side ''Skyler...'' she sighed ''I have bad news, but some good news. But both of them may be rather unpleasent....''

i like it :3

Thanx

Next chapter is tommorow........when i get home from school i finish the next chapters to my other fan-fics

np ;3

its good, really. Is that all the chapter?

Thanx

Yeah, my chapters dont tend to be long. It makes the story longer and leaves a good cliffhanger, making the reader want to read more :3

Hmmm... i dont know about thta. i just hit 220 pages, and some of my chjapters are up 2 20 or more pages long. And another thing is that the story shouldnt be just THIS and then THIS and then THIS, a chapter has a main focus of which you have to draw attention to.

You got any more story?

I know that, i'm in a standard grade english class, one of the highest infact. Thats the first chapter remember, like an introduction. Its going to be different from other parts of the story.

There are many styles in writing a story, and the way i'm writing mine is one of them. Yeah, i'l have more soon. Just doing art requests first of all, then the others chapters to mah other fanfics :3

well, same hhere. iv been in every extension avaliable for my school.

yes, well i guess 1st chapters are generally shorter. Mine was... only 6 or seven pages... i think, not sure.

Yeah, i'm one of the best story writers in my class. A few have asked me to do a few for them, now i have to do a twisted/evil version os Snow White for an essay

Thats another type of style you use, when chapters tends to be very long. I use that for writing books, but on the computer i use a totaly different style :3

Hmmm... the problem with me is that i can only write long stories. well, i can write short stories well, but its hard for me.

We did the rewriting fairy tales thing last year, it was funny.

Yea, in year 7, my extension teacher asked to use my story in the years to come as examples in class. That was my best short probably

lol I cant write long stories, gets on my nerves for some reason

Rly? xD Mines is crazzy. included the Credit Crunch in it Dopey's wicked in it

Cool :3 Mine was put up on the main school board, although thats only ever happened once. My art work gets put up for others to see a lot

i was nvr good at art, but iv always been a genius at english.

Mine was the err.... goldilocks one, ya thats rite. at the end the bears went all evil and made a club. W.N.T.G.U.A.T.L.T.H.G.O.T.P.S.P, which stood for: WE NEED TO GOBBLE UP ALL THE LITTLE TWIT-HEADED GIRLS ON THIS PUNY STUPID PLANET.