Chapter one
Szarotka settled down on the fresh grass and glazed over in the azure blue sky. She wagged her tail from the left to right, softly pushing the breeze out of place with her sharp ice shard at the end of the tail. An even red scaled dragon sat down in style in small centers away from her. Looking face-up at her staring amber eyes. Szarotka blushed and forced an odd smile at him as his piercing crimson eyes followed her every move. Szarotka took a deep breath in the clean air with a tuning sigh. Gamith glanced at her even more. Szarotka launched her eyes on him. Suddenly Gamith toppled over into the air. He fell flat face onto the bosky raw grass. Szarotka giggled lighty and helped him up.
"Are you ok?" She fitted into the laugh. Gamith blushed refusing to laugh. A faint shadow cornered them, belonging to Cheif Shenum. They looked up at the tall dragon with bulding eyes. Szarotka broke the laugh into a shallow choke.
"The dragons are in a shortage of food," He said wearly. He shifted his eyes at both of them. Szarotka relaxed and sighed with a tiny smile on her jaw.
"As by that means, All of the other dragons are on jobs. So I give this favorable circumstance and opportunity two you two," He then added.
"What do we do?" Gamith asked. Cheif hummed and smiled faintly. Szaorkta listened carefully.
"It is a substantial job and therefore must be cared with fine hands. Just collect berries and carry them back to the village. At your age, You must at least understand the rule. Now tell me, Do you promise to follow the rule?"
"Yes, Cheif Shenum," They both said, Mixing their voices in one bowl. Cheif Shenum nodded.
"Most necessary, You must never set foot in Broksemu," He said clear, making sure they were both listening his every word.
"Whats that?" Szarotka questioned. He breathed in deep to explain.
"Broksemu, The village of the dead..."
Szarotka and Gamith shuddered at the thought. He forced a smile to keep his mind off it.
"Now scurry off! We can't starve for any longer!"
They ran off to the berry bushes, Not aware of the events coming...
Szarotka stood upright, Only her hind legs supporting and pulled a black berry from the bush. The bush rustled and shaked as she brushed past it as she flopped herself down. Most of the berries had already been picked, None had bloomed from the old, drab twigs. They saw more berry bushes in a rusty empty village. Gamith frowned.
"Theres none left," He said looking at her as she threw the berry in her jaw. The purple juice splurted out from her jaw. She licked the juice clean from her jaw.
"But they is some down their," She replyed swallowing.
"Ain't that Broksemu?" He said sweating. Szarotka giggled.
"Broksemu ain't real! Its probally some set up!"
Gamith looked at her worried. He then pretended to laugh.
"Of course! I was only joking!" He lied. Szarotka grinned and raised the black scales above her eye. Gamith weakly whooped at Szarotka's expression. Szarotka leaped towards the berry bushes. Suddenly her heart banged inside her chest. Gamith ran after her. He wheezed and sweated. Szarotka looked around and explored the area. Bright vases remains lay half burried in the ground, along with many other broken objects. Szarotka wandered, slowly looking at the place. Unexpectingly a loud bang was heard. Gamith and Szarotka panicked. Her face swifted left to right rapidly with small gasps. Bones rattled as a dragon skelton emerged from nowhere and screamed a frightful snarl. Szarotka backed away. Her heart pounded. Claronk! Clerunk! The skelton unhurriedly lifted up its milky bony sticks and got closer and closer. Gamith stood in front of her.
"You'll have to get me first!" He cried. The skelton laughed in a deep voice. Gamith shivered, But snarled. His crest flopped back. He skidded his claws to spread out, Ready. The skelton screeched an awful sound and clawed Gamith.
"Gamith!" Cawed Szarotka in awe. Gamith slithered down neck first and shut his eyes. Suddenly Cheif came dashing towards them. He clawed the skelton till it was but a small dog. It whimpered and scampered away. Cheif looked at them in dismay.
"I can explain..." Muttered Szarotka at the very low of her voice. The cheif ignored her and stood in a moment of thought. Szarotka nudged Gamith. He fluttered his eyes open, Only to see Cheif and Szarotka.
"I am disgruntled by your callow behavior!" He recoiled as he walked. Szarotka and Gamith followed him head down.
"Never in the history of Ercu has a member disobeyed the Cheif rules," He added. Szarotka sniffed.
"But... What was that place?" She asked as they sat down in the neat grass. The moon had shown up. It hid in the navy sky.
"Well, I guess it's time I told you..." He soughed.
"Huh?"
"Well... You see... You were never part of the Ercu trube before..." He said, blinking hard.
"What do you mean?"
"Broksemu once was another tribe called the Gemu tribe. But it was invaded by... Ma... Mantle..."
"Who is that?" Gamith asked. Szarotka didn't say anything.
"Mantle... The scarred betraying mutt, Took all of the Gemu eggs. He took them and telported with his magic to The Dark Kingdom. But you managed to escape and somehow make the terror of a journey back to the island. We found you hung onto a log floating by the sea shore. You were half asleep. We took you into our tribe. And..."
"Why didn't you tell me! Everyone deserves to know who they are! Who is this Mantle? Who were my parents? Where are they?" Yelled Szarotka.
"Well... I don't know either if their dead or not. And the Gemu tribe.... I can't explain,"
Szarotka ran off. She wanted to get rid of the harsh feeling. She wanted to get rid of every single drop. Gamith catched up to her by the sea shore.
The sea's mighty body rolled back and forth. Its bark were loud lion roars each booming in and out of Szarotka and Gamith's ears. The salty scent flew in the air ready to be sucked into their nostrils. Szarotka watched. A stream of tears drooled down from her anime eye. Szarotka wilted down and stared down into the golden sand.
Gamith stared at her.
"Everyone deserves to know every detail about their self from the thin line of life to death, But I need answers," She whispered to Gamith.
"Answers are everywhere," He softly replyed. Szarotka scanned her eyes around for clues. Non.
"But they are no clues,"
"Exactly, They are clues, But they are deeply hidden..."
"But nothing is hidden, Everything can't be cloaked in veil..."
"Oh really?"
"Hur...Huh?"
"I love you,"
He kissed her on the left cheek. Szarotka nuzzled him.
"I love you too," She whispered quickly. She blushed. She glanced at the sea.
"I need to know who I am," She said sharply
"But you already do," He inhaled. He watched the sea. It had stopped rolling about and started to settle down.
"There is only one way..." She said. She casted her head up and sighed in the mint air.
They was a stale and musty old tree trunk. Soiled leaves and vines wrapped around it. It floated in the shallow water. It looked as if Szarotka had seen it before. She quickly looked away from its dishabille scene and foul smell.
She stood up high and breathed in for seconds. She shut her eyes until she picked up her pugnacity. Her courage flowed through her veins. She let out a enthusiastic grunt and spread her thin red skinned wings. Always ready.
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#2 Posted: 01:47:51 14/01/2010
Cool!!!!!!
Awesome!!!! |
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#3 Posted: 19:46:51 14/01/2010
Fantabulous!
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#4 Posted: 19:04:04 15/01/2010
Cool!!
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#5 Posted: 12:24:54 16/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2
"Your not going are you?" "I'm only to find out the truth," "But..." Szarotka disregarded him. She leaped up on the top of a tall palm tree. Its burgeoning leaves drooped down. Before Gravity took her down, She quickly glided from the tree towards above the cerulean royal sea. Before her glide fell, She flapped her wings supporting her to fly every few seconds. Gamith had to think fast. He barged up air born and flew after her. The winds howled and whistled as they thrusted past it. Szarotka swished her head round to see Gamith. "I guess your coming!" She said loudly. The wind muffled her words. "Yes," He said. Szarotka didn't hear. "What?" Suddenly Szarotka, who was only taking notice of Gamith toppled out of the air. She wacked Gamith out of the air too. They drowned in the water. Was this their end? Szarotka choked out the last drops of spit and water soup and finally made contact with land's hard surface. Gamith beated his coral scaled eye lids and scanned the area. The lazy tanned sand lay down in the direction of the gleaming sun as the palm trees swung their verduous young leaves repeatingly to side to side. "Where are we?" Gamith asked during his examines. Szarotka grumbled in sight of the setting. She blinked hard and turned her eyeball towards the shallow sea pushing back and forth. "Obviously we've been marooned to the Dragon realm," She said. Before Gamith could reply, A strange creature walked towards them. It had long brown hair along with sharp ears. The creature pulled at Szarotka's crest and flicked at Gamith's scales. "Ow!" Szarotka shouted aloud. The creature jumped back. "So it can speak English..." It muttered. She noticed the dragons heard her. "Oh hello! I am..." She fell backwards. But she quickly sprung back up in the air before they could say anything. "Ellie, Who are you?" "Szarotka, And this is Gamith," Szarotka said nudging Gamith. Gamith forced a smile. |
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#6 Posted: 20:26:40 18/01/2010
wow your chapters are rea;;y short compared to mine
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#7 Posted: 20:39:02 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol this is quiet so I can get away with leaving them to edit later lol. It's much fun to write in free time rather than school. You get limited time. It takes me about three hours to write a quick one, But thats because I rush,
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#8 Posted: 20:51:53 18/01/2010
thhree hours? 1 chapter takes me half an hour...
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#9 Posted: 20:55:20 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
The whole story. It's hard to think of simlees (Even though I love thinking of them) and adjectives. Sometimes I end up with really silly ones like: The wheel of emoctions changed rapidly and a storm hurled it's yellow arrows at the wheel.
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#10 Posted: 20:56:06 18/01/2010
lol LOL
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#11 Posted: 20:57:23 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol and:
Yellow as a bannana peel. |
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#12 Posted: 20:58:48 18/01/2010
lol! x3
brown as a pudding. |
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#13 Posted: 21:04:50 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Brown as poo lol
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#14 Posted: 21:07:36 18/01/2010
i was gonna say that X.X
purple as LOL |
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#15 Posted: 21:09:21 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Green as bogeys
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#16 Posted: 21:15:58 18/01/2010
LOL DD
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#17 Posted: 21:21:27 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Yellow as mutated poo
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#18 Posted: 21:22:11 18/01/2010
im bored
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#19 Posted: 21:25:07 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm going to finish my chapter tommorow.
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#20 Posted: 21:25:35 18/01/2010
i havent written mine in three days
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#21 Posted: 21:30:23 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol once I didn't write one for a week.
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#22 Posted: 21:33:08 18/01/2010
too lazy
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#23 Posted: 21:36:46 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Im much lazier than that
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#24 Posted: 21:37:53 18/01/2010
im so lazy im not paying for my plushies. i play video games all day and finish my homework thursdays.
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#25 Posted: 21:39:26 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I finish mine tuesdays lol but we get all week to do ours
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#26 Posted: 21:50:00 18/01/2010
i made smilies :3
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#27 Posted: 22:00:47 18/01/2010
you're good man. Really good, although chapters are a little short
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#28 Posted: 22:03:23 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm a girl. Lol i know i lazy
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#29 Posted: 22:08:03 18/01/2010
sorry, my bad.
cool, could you read my story, tell me what you think?
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#30 Posted: 22:08:30 18/01/2010
im a girl too good to see more girl gamers >
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#31 Posted: 22:09:35 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Im the only Mario and Sonic expert/geek in the class.
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#32 Posted: 22:12:32 18/01/2010
LOL! im the only pokemon expert, spyro expert, mario expert, and spore fan in my class. i still need to get spore though when i go on ebay again.
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#33 Posted: 17:01:15 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Same here with Pokemon and Spyro.
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#34 Posted: 17:06:37 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter three
Ellie stomped her spear into the sand and batted the dust from her tatted fawn robe. Her hair blew in the wind like a brown beaver holding onto the last of the the storm as it barged past the beaver. Szarotka chuckled at the thought of her fawn robes and her fawn features. Her hand with moose's spread out skin sprung with one or two long thread like hairs rubbed together. Her two jet black hooves moved in a slight manner, trodding on the sand. She looked into the wheel of thoughts, thinking. "What are you pondering?" Szarotka asked. Ellie mumbled. "Don't stick your nose in it! Besides, I'm not sure if Elder will let me take you funny, scaly lizards with me," "Lizards? We are Shenum dragonics! Not wet geckos!" Protested Szarotka. Gamith stayed out of it, but Szarotka encouraged him to side with her. "Yeah," He said with no emoction at all. Szarotka mumured some words to him. "Dragonics... Maybe I can show you around, err... Dragonics?" She led them towards a village. It was a bosky jungle full of never ending leaves spurling out to make a path of white dust towards the village. Soon the white dust expired. Claws and hooves hit the hard gravel symbols implanted in the white dust. Small birds, twicthy deer and smured faced lay onto the stone. She stopped Szarotka and Gamith moving any further. "Hurr?" They both spoke in confusion. She buldged her eyes at them and then continued. "Don't you know the basic rule? Simple, before setting food in the village, say village policy to mind," She said, as if 'mind' was a person. "Who is Mind?" Butted in Szarotka, anaware of the speaking tune. As the tune broke, she scrowled, but quickly stopped the wheel of emotions. Gamith shushed her. "Follow me of a third. Herbyn ly treef, Shar mar lacre, Neo le cra, ker yeal te garof ka. Lar woch che. Lar woch ge. Lar woch mar, lar woch cra me," Suddenly something sprung into Szarotka's head. "Truth lies here, lies lay here. Thou is hidden. Veil cloaks it. Let they be no veil. Let to be no lies. Let to be truth, only to set foot into one's village," "Wha... I have to show Elder this!" She gasped, skating off into the village. |
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#35 Posted: 22:50:15 29/01/2010
awesome chapter ^.^b
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#36 Posted: 12:12:23 30/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Teehee! Now I have plenty of space to write my story!
Chapter four She rushed back towards them tugging another one of her kind towards Szarotka. He stroked his grey beard and looked at the young dragons as soon as he was pulled out of his doing. "Well I never! Two young dragonics! A species I have never seen! I must examine this!" He cried. He tugged their crests and smiled, but then sniffed. "Shenum dragonics," He mumured to Ellie. "It's not that Elder sir, It's that they know the code of the tablet!" His mole eyes blinked in a amazment. finish later |
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#37 Posted: 12:32:20 30/01/2010
im a female gamer as well. we should start a club
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#38 Posted: 21:47:55 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Just a little add on.
"Welcome home," He said feebly raising his arms. He wiped his hand across his face, but sighed deeply. "Who found the code?" He snapped sharply "Szarotka did!" Gamith cried, sweating. Gamith nudged Szarotka forward. He winked at her. Just as the old man clenched his fist, he gave out his hand for a handshake. "Phew," She heaved up and gave him a quick Hi-five. "How'd you work it out?" |
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#39 Posted: 01:46:49 13/02/2010
let me join!
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#40 Posted: 11:15:42 18/02/2010 | Topic Creator
this is stupid im closing this.
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