I have been working on this for a while now. The central plot is solid, but I'm still working out all of the kinks.
Feel free to add ideas and tell me if you think I should edit an area
NOTE: I am NOT a TLOS phycho. I am do enjoy the other spyro games as well, and am begging you all to not flame me on this game.
The Legend of Spyro, Dark Horizons:
Chapter 1: Signs
CUTSCENE: You see a teenage Spyro, lain out sleeping a few feet away from Cynder, who is also sleeping, and sparks, who snoring insanely loud is lying spread-eagled on a rock next to spyro. The two dragons and the dragonfly are on an overhanging ledge of grey rock, and there is a forest floor, thousands of feet below them. The camera pans up to a deep black sky, dotted with twinkling stars, then back to the two quiet dragons. The camera focuses in on Spyro's face, and you hear a faint "whoosh" like whispers on on a light breese. Suddenly, as though he has heard something very loud (besides sparks' snoring), Spyro sits bolt upright, and listens intently. You hear the hushed whispering asthe camera pans around Spyro's head. The whispering grows near deafening, and Spyro backs closer to Cynder. Then, through the indiscernable mutter, one hissing word is clear. "SSSSSSPYRO....." Spyro ducks his head down, as if in a lot of pain, and then remembers in flashes, his dark side. A brief image of black scales and white eyes, and then he yells "STOP!!"
Cynder wakes up at his cry and walks over to him. "is everything o.k.?" she asks. Spyro hangs his head in exhaustion and sits back down.
"Yeah.... It was only a bad dream..........."
TO BE CONTINUED
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#1 Posted: 05:57:00 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 12:12:19 03/01/2010
Hmmm interesting, for some reason it reminded me of harry potter
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#3 Posted: 18:00:13 03/01/2010
Nice but shouldnt this be in fanfict?
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#4 Posted: 01:12:17 04/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I moved it now!
Here's the next part of the game; CUTSCENE: It is the next day, and Spyro and Cynder are flying through a snowy mountain forest. Sparx suddenly zooms by Spyro's face, pursued by a odd black insect. "YAAAAHHHH!!! GET IT AWAY FROM ME!!" He screams, and flys off into the mouth of an odd-looking mountain cave. An audible THUMP is heard form the back of the cave and then more muffled yelling. Sparx doesn't emerge after a few seconds, and there is no more noise from the cave. Spyro and Cynder both look at each other, and Cynder rolls her eyes at Spyro. Cynder says "Do we have to go look for him? We'd get a lot more sleep without the snoring wonder around". Spyro looks at her reproachfully. "Cynder......" She sighs. "Okay, okay, lets go....." as she walks into the mouth of the cave, "........and then get get out of here as soon as we find him. This place give me the creeps." Suddenly, there is a huge rumble, and the ground starts to shake. The ceiling cracks, and a stalactite falls down. Cynder tries to jump out of the way, but it strikes her on the side of the head and she passes out."Cynder!" Spyro yells, and rushes into the cave. He frantically tries to drag her out before the more rocks trap them inside, but it is too late. An avalance of snow and frozen boulders falls at the cave mouth, and the two dragons are sealed underground. "Mmmmmm.....ohhhh........." says Cynder weakly as she stirrs. "Thank goodness you're all right," says Spyro,"but we won't be able to get out this way anymore. We'll need to find Sparx and then find a new way." Cynder staggers to her feet and then shakes herself off. "Great. Now I have a killer headache AND we're lost. When we find Sparx, I'm going to kill him......Lets go." PLAYSCENE: Lost Caves You start at the mouth of the cave, and begin to walk down a smooth, blueish passageway. There are puddles of faintly luminescent water and a stiff black weed. You continue to walk down the passageway until you reach a huge, central room. It has enormous, domed ceiling, and cobblestone walls which glow a sparkling grey-blue. There are four small passages much like the one you came from leading out to other areas from the central cave, and in the center of the four is a mammoth iron door, with a huge brass lock. The ground around the door is scurfed, as though it has been opened very recently, and one large word is inscribed above its huge arch...WIZEDON....The whole floor of the room is an underground lake of blue-green water, and there is a tiny sand island in the middlde. On the island are four gem clusters (two red and two green. if in tutorial-mode, little information bubbles appear on the bottom-left of the screen, explaining the uses of each gem, and Spyro and Cynder's elements, when you approach the island)arranged in a square, and there is a small circular table in the middle of the pattern. You fly closer and discover that on it sits a small grey peice of metal. The object is a key shard, and is a component of a much larger key. You collect it by walking into it. An inscription is carved onto the table where it lay. CUTSCENE: "Cynder, look! It has something written on it! Cynder reads the inscription aloud, slowly. "Great power lies beyond these doors,and a dark power stirrs deep within the heart of this kingdom. Sealed behind this door, this evil cannot escape unless it has a master to release it. Open not the door of Wizedon or a black shadow shall fall over the land." Spyro backs slowly away from the huge door and Cynder turns to him. "Cynder....."he says. "Spyro, what does it mean, 'a black shadow'? We defeated Malefore, didn't we?" "I don't know what it means any more than you do, but I do know this--- If there is any truth to that carving on that rock there, Sparx (wherever he is, and you, and me--well--we might be in a whole lot of danger, because that door has been opened.
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#5 Posted: 10:20:39 04/01/2010
This was preety interesting, i enjoyed reading it.6
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#6 Posted: 22:19:00 04/01/2010
Cool!!
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#7 Posted: 04:22:33 06/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Hey, Thanx! I will have the next part of the chapter sometime this week.
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#8 Posted: 22:49:32 06/01/2010
I love it! You should aim to make it one day! It would be a great sequel to the next game, when Spyro finds Sparx! I am designing a game (ad many other fans are) but it isn't as creative as yours
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#9 Posted: 01:13:00 07/01/2010 | Topic Creator
You are so kind, madison-dwrd! I have the next chapter today, and will check out your game as soon as I have posted it.
Lost Caves: The Inner Chambers CUTSCENE: The two dragons gaze up at the door in worry, and Cynder turns to Spyro. "Maybe we should just go----" "Cynder, I hope you haven't forgotten that we're sealed in here, and we still don't know where Sparx is," says Spyro. "Wait, wait, wait.....I hear something behind that door! Listen!" Then , faintly, you hear Sparx yelling from behind the heavy metal door. "SPARX!!!" Spyro and Cynder run over to the door and Spyro shouts. *Camera shows Sparx backed into a dark corner of red-rock with strange black insects swarming at him* Sparx yells back, "Spyro....Ow! get off!.....I'm kind of surrounded here!....Ah! Help! Spyro! HELP!" *Camera returns to Spyro and Cynder*Sparx's voice echoes away and all you hear are more thumping sounds. "SPARX?? SPARX!!! SPARX!!!!" yells Spyro. "He's in a lot of trouble!" "Calm down. All we need to do is find the rest of the shards of that key, and then we can unlock the door. I bet that they're hidden somewhere here in the caves." says Cynder. Both dragons run towards the mouth of the first small cave. PLAYSCENE: An Objective flashes across the screen "COMPLETE THE KEY AND OPEN THE DOOR OF WIZEDON"
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#10 Posted: 19:38:45 08/01/2010
cool, i so wanna play that game! sadly, i don't have my game ideas posted yet, but i should sometime this month or next. i dont really have a key board to type on, i'm on a dsi, so i will get on a laptop or computer soon.
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#11 Posted: 03:18:19 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you very much, Madi! i will check your game out!
I have the rest of the play scene: I have some new gem types to add to the game which are new and have never appeared in a Spyro game before. For your viewing needs, here is a guide to all gem types scattered throughout the game: Red: LIFE [Replenishes your health meter when broken apart or collected from defeated foes.] Green: MANA [Replenishes your magic meter when braken apart or collected from you meleeing foes.] Blue: SPIRIT GEM [Gives you points to upgrade your elemental abilities.] Purple: FURY GEM [Fills your fury meter. They are scattered throughout the level and also may be collected from defeated foes. When the meter is full, you may perform a devastating elemental fury.] Silver: METAL FURY GEM [These gem clusters are scattered scarceley throughout the level and small amounts of them may be collected from defeated foes. When your metal fury meter (this is separate from your elemental fury meter) is full, you may perfom a metal fury (I will explain this ability later on in the game).] Black: DARK SPIRIT GEM [This is an exceedingly rare gem which you may use (for the first time ever in a Spyro game) to upgrade your dark elemental attacks. Once you collect one of these gems, a special option screen appears, and you receive instructions on how to get back to it. Here, you can examine your various dark breath and radiant attack options and see how much you have upgraded each(yes, there is more than one kind of dark breath, though this will be explained later).] Now Here is the next part of the chapter. Lost Caves: The Dark Caverns You can walk around the inside of the central cave, and go back to the original spot where the rocks block the original entrance of the cave, but eventually, you must go into the mouth of the passage on the far left of the central chamber. The other two cave mouths are obstructed with giant boulders. They all have giant carved pawprints on them. From left to right, there are two pawprints on the first boulder, three on the second, and four on the third. You cannot get through the boulders, and so must go into the first, open cave. It is extremely black in the cave.....very very dark and quiet. The screen fades to black as it shows you running into the mouth of the first cave. CUTSCENE: You emerge into a large room, with disturbingly spikey walls. The light in this room is off, and everything looks too grey-pink. "What is this place?" asks Spyro. It is shaped like a giant beehive, and the camera quickly pans upward. The grass inside is black, and the rays of sunlight from a small hole in the roof look blindingly white. there is a strange, shimmering effect to the world, and Cynder and Spyro have changed from black and purple, to yellow-green (Spyro) and a pale grey (Cynder). There are steps leading in a giant spiral all the way up to a distant white doorway........almost like giant jutting honey-combs. In fact......"Look out!" yells Cynder. As several very large black insects wriggle out from INSIDE of the walls. PLAYSCENE: Green magic gems also grow out of the walls, and they regenarate if you break them. You start out with instructions for several basic melees, each one unique to either Cynder or Spyro, and also instructions on how to acess the moves list. The tutorial also educated you on how to block with your wings (which is VERY effective, as your wings are gigantic now because of your age). You fight the insects with your physical and elemental abilities. After you have killed them all, more even larger bugs with oversized wings emerge from the walls. You fight and kill them too, but they take more hits to die. After this, you receive a note at the bottom of the screen that you have unlocked new melee attacks for Spyro and Cynder and instructions on how to perform them. **Cynder: Double tail whip. Spyro: Double claw swipe.** Then, you start to climb the odd steps on the wall. You get info on how to fly over gaps in the steps, and then come to a landing. Suddenly, dozens of smaller, scorpion-like bugs dig up form the ground and wriggle out of the walls. Then an enormous, whip-tailed scorpion easily twice your size rises up out ot the earth. It hisses, and clacks it's jet-black pincers evily at you, as you hunker low to spring into attack.
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#12 Posted: 02:27:28 11/01/2010
Keeps going! It's awesome!
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#13 Posted: 02:46:40 11/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you so much! I want to see your game, but can't find it! WAAAH! What do I type into the search engine?
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#14 Posted: 02:59:45 11/01/2010
I'm making the first part right now!
edit: i made the first level and its on a new thread under fandom. Starlight- TDoAL: Game concept thread (Comments allowed, no flame please) |
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#15 Posted: 03:35:28 12/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Ah...I found it!
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#16 Posted: 02:44:28 14/01/2010
Awesome!!
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#17 Posted: 00:48:20 24/01/2010
This is a great story!I could not have done anything like this!!!!
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