Written by: Christopher Ramos (Kyo Tanaka)
The Prologue:
A sin-filled angel... An angel that is part angel, and part demon, who've committed sins in his past lifetime. 100 years ago, a sin-filled angel was given birth to, which was told that he looked like a normal human being, whenever he cries, blood comes out of his eyes instead of tears. The legend says that they have more than one personalities, changes when the eyes turn into holy blue as an angel, or bloodish red as a demon. Now in the present, a presense of that kind has been awaken once again, and the doorway to where the demons were hidden, is now at risk of being unlocked.
The last known location of the presence was in Tokyo. In a village which had low population, only one school with one classroom, and 100 years ago, an uproar about demons had happen. The village was called "Hinamazawa." The presence of the angel in the legend was last found in this village. Would mishaps and chaos happen in this peaceful village? Will the sin-filled angel will be found before it is fully awaken?
Chapter one: An angel's awakening?
July 23, 2009
A moving truck drove into the Hinamazawa village, a boy named "Kyo Tanaka" and his family recently decided to move into a peaceful place. Around at nighttime, they've arrived at their new household. A little girl called out, "Kyo! Is this where we will be living in?" The little girl was named Mika, she is at the age of 8, she likes to play games, but she's really shy when it comes to new places she've never been in. Kyo turned around as he was carrying the box into the new come, "Yes! I've heard many humors about this place, I'll tell you some of them after
we're done unpacking!"
Mika jumped right in front of Kyo after they've finished unpacking. "Where's Amaya? Did she took a wrong bus? What are the humors about this village? Are the people here kind?" As the sky started to gets dark, and the clouds move in, the rain started to fall. "It's a legend from 100 years ago. The legend was about an angel that was also part demon. The story goes like this." Kyo paused, then tell Mika the legend of a Sin-Filled Angel.
"The angel was called Sin-Filled Angel. This angel appears in your dreams, if that happens, your life will end very soon, mostly in two weeks. There was no way to prevent the death, or the dreams from happening. Because of this angel, the gateway to the world of the demons was almost opened. Just in time, he was killed before the seal broke, the sin-filled angel appeared to be human, but have a trait that isn't human. When they cry, they cry blood, not tears. Anyone
who are suspected to be a S-F Angel was to be burned alive. One of them went into a rampage in anger, killing the whole village with no survivors."
Mika froze in fear for a moment, then opened her mouth, "They sound scary... I hope their no more angels like that..." Kyo replied, "You should get to bed now, it's time to sleep." as he lend over and patted her head. Both of them went into bed. Red glow was around Kyo, covering Kyo, and disappeared into Kyo.
"Emiko! You should get to bed already! This is why you're failing in class!" Akane shouted at her sister. "It doesn't matter right? Besides, the only reason why I am failing is because I don't like to study.
If my grades really need it, I'll study." "You've used that excuse for more than 10 times this month!" She grabbed her and tucks her into bed. "You need to be more worried about your health." Emiko stared into Akane and said, "Alright, if I get real good grades, I'll get to stay up later." Akane kissed her forehead, "Only if you get 100 in all work," Akane walked out of the room, and turned off the lights and closed the door.
July 24, 2009: 1:42 A.M.
A figure of an angel appeared in Emiko's dream, he put out his hand to Emiko. As Emiko reached out her hand and grabbed it, blood oozes from the ceiling, the angel's wing turned into what you would see from
a demon, and the demon looked into Emiko's face with red bloodish eyes, and murderous face. She woke up and screamed like there was a bloody murder happened in front of her eyes. Akane was still in her deep sleep, she didn't moved at all from the yell. Emiko looked at her own hands, "Sin-Filled Angel... I can't believe it's real..."
I'm not finished with the story, but when I have free time, I will continue the story, I'm planning to make it have about 3 to 5 parts, 8 chapters each part. What do you think?
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#2 Posted: 23:15:36 28/12/2009
Sounds interesting, cant wait to read it 8D
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#3 Posted: 19:01:50 29/12/2009
I like it. I gave me a chill down my spine while I was reading it. X3
Write moar plz :P |
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#5 Posted: 19:12:06 29/12/2009
Awsome. But its in the wrong section. *points to the Non-Spyro section*
More please.
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#6 Posted: 19:23:58 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Night Owl
Where is the Fiction in Non-Spyro? Oh nvm, noticed it was in Fandom. But meh, who cares? Not dark52, he didn't move it.
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