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A Dark Tale [CLOSED]
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#1 Posted: 16:10:38 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Hey, yeah another story xD I havnt been in a creative mood lately, but this story popped into my head, about my Dragoness, Elle! ;3 Its about her life story till her death, so it may be pretty long xD I'l get the first chapter up later ;3

EDIT:

Here ya go, enjoy! ;3 The story has an amount of gore in it, so be warned

Chapter 1 -

She crouched up in a dark corner, the hot steam and dust floated around her. She looked up, still finding it hard to move her small skinny neck, a blazing orange light was flickering outside, followed by screaming and crys. The hatchlings Mother lay across the room, a sphere stuck out the side of her right leg, she knew there was no point in trying to help her, she was gone. She sat up, a pain in her right shoulder and tears streaming down her face, she tryed to stay strong but it was all too much to bare. The door crashed down, two grublins ran in swinging an axe, blood and guts flying everywhere. They ran for her, she lay scared to death, until a large burning bookcase fell before her very eyes, crushing both the grublins the the progress, a puddle of blood spilled across the ground. She got up, ash smeared across her face, she ran for the door, seeing nothing but smoke and blazing hot fire. Her eyesight began to fade and her breathing got heavier. A large elder Dragon looked over at the suffering hatchling, eventually running to her aid.
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#2 Posted: 16:44:44 28/12/2009
Interesting start smilie
I was really enjoying your other story, The Younger Years of Comet
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#3 Posted: 16:52:13 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm gonna continue with the next chapter to that now Dx Just been stuck for ideas, but i got my head around it now ;3 Should have the next chapter up later today

Thanx smilie
Sharon_Spirit Green Sparx Gems: 287
#4 Posted: 16:56:58 28/12/2009
Interesting intro...smilie
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Without pc = without account smilie
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#5 Posted: 19:55:39 28/12/2009
Intreresting....Can't wait for more!smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896
#6 Posted: 21:31:59 28/12/2009
Sounds good! smilie i wonder what will happen next?
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#7 Posted: 21:47:47 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx smilie

Chapter 2 ~

The hatchling awoken a while later to find herself in a lit up cave, food and refreshments surrounding her. She peeked up her little head, a large Female elder Dragoness sat across from her, giving her a shocking fright. ''Wh.....Who are you?'' she asked with her little voice. The Dragoness sighed, nudging some food over to her. ''A Friend of your Mothers'' she said sadly ''Well, was a Friend'' she said, hanging her head in shame. She knew she could have helped her, but she got to the hut too late. ''But of course, i hadnt seen her for years, i never even knew you existed little one'' she said, putting on a little smile, despite what she was feeling. ''Seeing as i know none else of your Family, looks like i will have to take care of you. May i have your name, little one?'' she asked softly. The hatchlings eyes widened.......she actually couldnt remember her name, she couldnt remember anything infact. She stayed sitting in her spot, silent. ''Well...?'' asked the Dragoness. She looked up at her, still not a clue ''I have no idea...'' she said sadly. The Dragoness rasied an eyebrow, she had never heard of memory loss like this.

The Dragoness sighed, it had been a while ago this was announced now, she was busy trying to think of a name, until she remembered her dear Friend who had died not that long ago, and seeing as this little Hatchling was her Daughter, she though it would be respectfull to name her after her own Mother. ''Elle'' she smiled 'Thats your name...''
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#8 Posted: 22:05:44 28/12/2009
Nice chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Dacon Emerald Sparx Gems: 3176
#9 Posted: 22:34:49 28/12/2009
Awesome :3
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GET ME PICTURES OF SPIDERMAN!

"I swear that thing has a mind of it's own." - Samius
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#10 Posted: 23:54:47 28/12/2009
Great chapter.smilie Plz continue.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#11 Posted: 11:30:57 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx smilie

I'l write the next chapter once i get home, have to go get my hair cut Dx xD
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#12 Posted: 14:08:16 29/12/2009
Okay.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#13 Posted: 19:16:14 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Writing the next chapter now ;3
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#14 Posted: 15:56:06 30/12/2009
MORE!
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#15 Posted: 17:48:59 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanx smilie

Chapter 3 -

That moment started to fade, swirling around like a whirl pool into pitch darkness. A young Dragoness quickly lifted her head up, gasping for breath, sleep was visible in her eyes. She stood up, her head feeling dizzy and her vision was blurry ''Just a dream'' she said quietly to herself, but it was most unlike other dreams she ever had. She looked at her door, which had a glimmering shadows of a fire swirling around under it, followed by a rather large and lizard like shadow.. ''Elle?'' said a voice, standing on the other side of the door. The young Dragoness lifted her head and looked at the door ''Yes, Zara?'' she asked in a worn out and tired voice.

The door slowly creaked open, followed by a large sky-blue Dragoness entering the dark and midst room. Sam looked around at her and sighed ''Hi...' she said, looking at the ground.
Zara looked at Sam and raised an eyebrow ''I just came to say your food is ready'' she said ''If you are hungry that is...'' Elle nodded and lifted her head up, she started walking to the door ''O.k'' she said ''You go ahead, i'l be there in a second'' she sighed, that dream was still taking affect to her mind and feelings, she had never felt this way before. Zara looked at Elle confused, walking slowly out the door and down the hallway, to where another young Dragon was sitting.

For those who entered my contest, becoming 1st or 3rd place, this is the story you Characters will be included in :3
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 10:31:46 24/01/2010 by xx chloebabez
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#16 Posted: 21:52:56 02/01/2010
Good chapter smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#17 Posted: 02:00:18 03/01/2010
Good chapter!smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#18 Posted: 23:03:11 03/01/2010
Just got around to reading. It's really good.
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#19 Posted: 21:48:28 09/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanx! smilie Writing the next chapter now :3
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#20 Posted: 21:54:30 09/01/2010
YAY!!! *claps hands* WRITE FASTER! lol. smilie
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#21 Posted: 22:11:19 09/01/2010
Wow D: Nice work, poor Sam
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Yeet
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#22 Posted: 22:13:37 09/01/2010
why r u going to write it till she dies? don't let Sam die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D: *cries to death*
in heaven:
*sees Sam*
Me: well, im sort of glad i died. now i get to see sam forever!!!!!! smilie
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...is this supposed to be my signature?
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#23 Posted: 16:47:39 15/01/2010 | Topic Creator
lol smilie I mean till the end of course, i'm not exactly sure if i will. I'm using another user's Dragon in this, because of during an RP we were doing. I do have his permission of course smilie *shifty eyes* So the death thing will most likely not happen...

I have added a few changed to Sam's appearence, including her name. Samantha was just a random name that popped into my head, not a name i particullary wanted. Her new name is Elle, and it shall stay that way 8P

*goes off to edit chapters*
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#24 Posted: 01:13:23 16/01/2010
oh, great. now i have to change all the Sams in my story to elle. this might take a while. smilie
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...is this supposed to be my signature?
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#25 Posted: 01:15:06 16/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Sorry lol smilie I'l show you Sams bew design in a sec also smilie Well, Elle smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#26 Posted: 01:59:05 16/01/2010
can i just keep on calling her Sam? i like that name.
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...is this supposed to be my signature?
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#27 Posted: 05:34:56 19/04/2010
Lolz, I didn't know this had already started. smilie So far so good smilie

More..
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#28 Posted: 15:43:21 26/04/2010
Sorry to double, but when does this continue?..
Dacon Emerald Sparx Gems: 3176
#29 Posted: 10:14:03 28/04/2010
Moooooooooooore!
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GET ME PICTURES OF SPIDERMAN!

"I swear that thing has a mind of it's own." - Samius
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#30 Posted: 06:48:44 10/05/2010
Continue!
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#31 Posted: 11:00:52 12/05/2010
^ Yes, more!!!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#32 Posted: 12:14:55 12/05/2010
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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