darkSpyro

since the first Flame's revenge got closed, i'm going to try to start another one! hope it works this time.
(also, i added 2 charictors from my story)
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One morning, Cynder, Star, and Night were flying over dragon city. "What's that?" asked Night looking at a giant crystal.
"That's where teh old hospital used to be. Flame is trapped in there" Cynder answered.
"Wasn't Flame the dragon who liked Ember and tried to kill everyone?"
Star asked.
"yes," Cynder replyed. "and i hope that he stays in that crystal. There's no telling what he'll try to do if he gets out of that crystal"
Night didn't hear, because she was already flying towards the giant crystal. She landed a few feet away.
"Be careful!" Cynder warned.
"Is that red thing inside Flame?" asked Night.
"yes. Be careful!" Cynder said again, but is was too late.
There were voices sort of like when Spyro and Cynder's Crystal broke.
"What's happening? whats hapening? what's happening?" Flame's voice echoed.
"Get out of here! Or you'll be frozen too! Or you'll be frozen too! frozen too." Ember's voice echoed also.
"Quick! Get out Ember!" Cynder looked a little stunned hearing her own words from a long time ago.
"It's too late. I already know my fate. I know my fate. my fate." and after the 3 dragons heard those words, they saw the Crystal break and Flame fall on the ground.
"Wow. I hate de ja vu now." Cynder muttered to herself.
"Wha.. What's happening?" Flame stammered.
"We need to tell the others!" Star said. The three dragons were off to the temple flying at their fastest speed.
At the temple:
Ember, Spyro, and Vine were practicing in the dojo. Ember was using flame, Spyro was using ice, and Vine was using earth.
"I'm already to 30! I'm so going to beat you guys!" Ember bragged
"really, because i'm at 35" Vine replyed.
"50!" Spyro yelled triumphantly "you two will never beat me at monkey dummy races!"
"Next time i'll..." Ember was interupted by Cynder, Star, and Night flying in.
"Spyro!Ember!Vine! Flame's crystal is broken! he's free!" Cynder yelled franticly.
"No!" Ember said despretly. "Are you sure? Where were you when you saw it? What happened?"
"We're sure" Star answered.
"We were right next to the crystal" Cynder said.
"It's my fault. I got too close and broke the crystal. I'm so sorry." Night said sadly and then flew off into the sky.
"I'll go get her" Cynder offered.
"No. I'm her sister. There's more of a chance that she'll listen to me." Star objected.
"I'm her sister too." Cynder replied.
"We can both go, but everyone else has to stay in the city."
"Star is right" Spyro said. "We have to have all the people we can get if we want to keep Flame from causing any harm. Ember and Vine, you go get all the dragons fit to fight and confront flame. I'll warn everyone in the village. Cynder, when you get back help me. Star, when you get Night, both of you help Ember and Vine. Lets go!"
"Come on" Star said to Cynder. "We have to get Night"
"She could be anywhere. How do we find her?"
"Just follow me." Star said.
Cynder and Star lifted off into flight and flew towards Night and Stars' old home. The cave at Crystal Falls.
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add on ppl! plz! i don't want to be the only person writting this story!

Great story....keep going plzz

COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!

Quote: Sharon_Spirit

Great story....keep going plzz

you can add on if u want to.

why'd flame try to kill everyone?

Quote: Pinkdesi101

Quote: Sharon_Spirit

Great story....keep going plzz

you can add on if u want to.

Really!?? Cool....

But just if u want of course, the mine is in my guestbook *if I write everything what I wrote of she I'll take all the day*

Hmm, i started the first. i apprecieate you trying to ressurect it.

Spyro was confused. That crystal was very rare, and it couldn;t be broken. How on earth did it break? Spyro wanted to investigate, but Flame could still be around, it would be dangerous. Still, Flame was just one dragon, he couldn't do any majour damage right away. Spyro decided to investigate the crystal. He flew quickly flew to the abandoned hospital. the crystal was shattered into pecices. Spyro sniffed a chunck. It was half melted with ice chips still locking its right side,and he reached a conclusion. It had been a harsh winter, and a very mild spring. The cold weather must have frozen the crystal and the spring thaw must have weakened it. the crystal just couldn't take anymore damage, so it broke when Night touched it. If Night didn;t touch it, something would have happened to break it anyway.
if anything, it would be better for Night to be the one to break it, then Flame wouldn;t have the elment of suprise. It wasn;t Night's fault at all.
"Well, well well, look who decided to show up?" A voice said. Spyro whipped around to find Flame.
"You think you can come here, and trap me again?" Flame snarled.
"You wouldn;t need to be if you hadn;t gone off the deep end." Spyro said cooly.
Flame laughed evily.
"Oh, You have no idea. Spyro, you always thought you were the stronger one, but not now." Flame growled ominusly.
Spyro saw that Flame had gotten quite buff. the magic in the crystal must have made Flame stronger. Flame shot a beam of fire at him and singed his side. Spyro barrel rolled and pounced. Flame kicked Spyro on his side and pinned him down, bitting his throat. Spyro choked for breath and bucked him off. Spyro breathed electricity on Flame, but it barely affected him. flame shook his head, giving Spyro enough time to headbutt him.
Flame roared and breathed fire, buring Spyro. Spyro screeched and Flame kicked him in the belly. Spyro's eyes were stinging with soot, unable to fight back. Flame slashed Spyro in the neck, leaving deep wounds.

Spyro finnaly got the soot out of his eyes, and saw Flame standing over him, panting and bloodied, but his eyes burned with hatred.
"Get out of here. Its not time, yet." Flame growled lowly. Spyro stood up, and tried to hiss, but his wounds were deep and stinging. Spyro retreated, and got a chilly feeling. This was the start of a war.

flames a biatch!

Ugh! Your supposed to add on, people!

Back at Crystal Falls
"Night!" Star said as she landed in a cave. "Come out. Please."
"I can't," She replied. "I broke the Crystal and Flame is free."
"It's not your fault." Spyro said flying into the cave. "The crystal was weakened from the harsh winter. It would have broken even if you hadn't touched it."
"Spyro!" Cynder said when she saw his wounds. "Your hurt! What happened?"
"Flame snuck up on me and attaked me. The crystal has made him stronger. His attacks are stonger and when i used my lightning breath, nothing happened." Spyro told the sisters.
"Oh no!" Night said softly. "We need to go now, before he hurts anyone else! Spyro, you should go to the hospital."
"I'm fine." Spyro tried to reassure them, but as he said that, he fell onto the ground. "ok. i'll go to the hospital, but i can't stay for a long time. I still need to help you and the other dragons get rid of Flame. Can you please help me to fly a little? my wing is scorched."
So the four dragons flew back to dragon city, but they would be surprised how much damage Flame had already done in that short time.

0.0 more more!

why don't you try to add on kk?

um.......... can more ppl plz add on?

OK MEAN WHILE IN DRAGON CITY...
jimmy netron comes to help fight but gets his brain blasted
into smitheriens by flame so jimmy neutron's dog throughs hot coffe in flames eyes but nothing happend and flame ate his dog leaving it up to star, night and the others to save the day themselves...

THATS WHY,IM TO FUNNY WHEN I ADD TO OTHERE PPL'S STORIES OH WELL...

don't you remember Jimmy Netron died in the first one? as for his dog, that part is ok.

fine his dog brought him back to life satisfied? tee hee

ok....................
now go ask Night Owl if he can have Jimmy's dog bring Infinity back to life.
PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL! I DON'T THINK THAT WILL WORK

in the words of Night
We can at least try!
strange, i'm quoting my own story.

then gotard brang himself back to life and blasted out of Flame's stomache. Flame took his last breath, then died.


JK!
you didn't think i twould be THAT easy. did you?

Ok, this just isn't going to work with that dumbass Jimmy Netroun or any other chracter from other games, tv shows, movies e.c.t. it also isn;t going to work if nobody puts any effort into it. this is the exact stuff that ruined the other ones. Don't you people ever learn!? iam going to continue this, and ignore the stupid ones!

Once Spyro was gone, Flame watched the sky for a little while, wary. then he stood up and flew away. he landed by a ravine in a nearby jungle. He walked into a hidden cave and sniffed a pool of water. It was acctulay invisibilty potion he stole from a wizard just after he broke out of the crystal. he had put it in here to activate, but left it to dissolve. Thats when he discovered Spyro and kicked him out. He scooped his paw in. the potion ahd dissolved, and now his paw was invisble. Smiling, Flame spalshed into the pool. Soon he was compeltley invisible. he flew toward Warfang, flying unnoitced passed the gaurds. Dragons were building a barrier,and Flame knew that they were protecting the city against him. they probaly even thought he would gather an army. But that would eb stupid. He was only trying to win Ember, maybe even Cynder,, this was not a war to be fought with armies. Flame landed by the spell bulding. he snuck in and got to the potion room. He started grabbing all the diffrent kinds of love potions he could find. the door slammed open and Flame jumped in suprise, baning his head on the shelf.
"Who's there!?" Vine barked. A potion fell and dropped onto Flame. the invisiblity spell turned to liquid and formed a puddle around his, feet, making him visible again.
"FLAME!" Vine roare din anger, then lunged. Flame chraged and clawed Vine in the side, kncoking him over. An alarm was called, but Flame flew faster, then ever before, and soon escaped back to the cave. He stored the potions on the shelves. His plan was starting to come together.

sorry about messing around.

That's okay. Anybody else going to add on? i can't right now, then I'd be hogging it.

we r the only two ppl adding on! where are the ppl that helped on the last two?!?!?!

I could but I'm horrible to make stories....sorry

it's ok. I don't get why the ppl that added onto the last two stories arn't helping now.

Well, dont waste time bawling over it. Its your turn. If its only gonna be us two, then that will be that.

Star, Night, Cynder, and Spyro flew into dragon city. They heard someone faintly say "Help!". Cynder decided to fly over to see who it was. When she discovered it was Vine, she quickly helped him up and they walked over to the hospital where Spyro was. Once Vine woke up, Spyro asked him who did that to him.
"Flame." Vine answered. "He had invisability potion all over him. I walked into the potion room to see how many healing potions we had left, and a potion got spilled over flame, making him visable again. I think he took all the love potions."
Cynder, Star, and Night exchanged worried glances. They all had to be careful or they might have a love potion on them. Flame was the last dragon anyone wanted to fall in love with right now.

Cool, I could try
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Day turned to night, the dragon city surrounded by dragon guards who were to keep an eye out for Flame. The power that he had now was threatening the city. Some dragons were asleep, while others were up, walking the city pavements in groups of three or more.
Two guards by the main gate, one dark green and the other yellow and orange, were having an innocent conversation by a small torch when a dragon figure was spooted approaching them.
"Who goes there?" The dark green dragon called. The dragon only approached further with no reply. When he was close enough to the light that the torch was producing, it was clearly Flame.
"Stop right th-urk!" The yellow dragon couldn't finish before Flame, with incredible swiftness, grabbed his neck, choking him while letting out a blast of scolding fire towards the green dragon, burning his entire left side badly. Flame then threw the yellow dragon to the ground, kicking him hard in the stomach also, causing him to pass out. He then lunged at the green dragon's burnt side, dealing great damage.
The green dragon was close to passing out when Flame grabbed his head and made the green dragon look at him.
"You-you... won't g-get... away... with th-this..." he spat, glaring the best he could at Flame.
"I already have" Flame replied. He then slammed the dragon's head against the wall, knocking him out.
Flame dragged the unconsious dragons behind a nearby bush, hiding them from sight. He took some of their armour (or what fitted and hid his identity anyway) and headed through the gate, the city unaware of his arrival.
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How was that?

Awesome...

Good. my turn.

"Alert! Alert!" A voice screamed.
Cynder,Star and Night raced toward the voice. It was Vine, crouched over two knocked out dragons. They were bloodied and injured, and were breathing fanitly.
"Flame must have done this." Star growled.
"They were left here all night. They will die without treatment." Vine said. The dragons were older, and a little bigger then them, so it took them a long time to drag them to the hospital. Spyro ran up to them and came to help. Nurses rushed by and took over, taking them to the emergency room.
"What happened?" Spyro exclamied.
"We found them in the bushes by the gaurd post. Flame is somewhere around here." Night explained. Soon the city was put on alert. Hatchlings and young dragons were stuck inside, gaurds patrolled double time, and defenses were built.
"I can;t belive one dragon can be this much of a threat." Ember sighed. Ember, Spyro,Cynder, Star, Vine and Night were all hiding in the same room, along with all the other young dragons.
Spyro paced the floor angrily.
"Flame is about the same age as us. I don;t see why the teenagers have to be locked up." Spyro snarled.
"They probaly think he formed an army." Vine suggested.
"So? Spyro and I fought the golem all by ourselves once, and won." Cynder pointed out.
"Exatcly! If we can take on the golem, why not Flame!?" Spyro growled impatiently.
"Last time you ran into Flame, he beat you into a pummel." Night argued.
Before anybody else could speak, a huge rumble shook the bulding, shaking sand from the roof. A loud bang followed, shaking pictures and vases off the shelves, breaking them.
"What the heck was that!?" Vine yelled, running out of the building,followed by the others.
"Oh, my,," Star breathed.
A huge giant walked through the city, crushing buldings. It was so huge its face was hidden by clouds.The dragons only caught glimpses of its face when it walked away from clouds. It looked like the Destroyer. It was so wide and tall, tons of trees grew on its back and head. Shrubs grew on its face, giving it a beard and mustache. Vines grew around its arms and hands. It even had a tail, even though it was a stump, like a hamster tail. Even with a short tail, the tail a,one was the size of a dinosaur.
Dragons were already attacking it, wacking it and breathing elements on it.
"Its some kind of golem." Ember whispered. Terrador and Volteer flew in beside them.
"Quick, we need your help defeating it." Terrador commanded.
"Oh, and you refused help from us when Flame was the threat." Spyro snarled.
"Theres no time. Besides, you'll only be doing work from a distant." Terrador grunted.
"Iam coming too." Ember decided, following Terrador. Vine stepped in her way.
"No Ember. its too dangerous." Vine said.
"Why not? I don;t need protection." Ember snapped.
"I won;t lose you Ember.It's a dangerous fight." Vine said. Before Ember could argue, Vine turned away, flying toward the wepon staion. Ember steamed with fustration. Ever since Flame was a threat again, Vine wouldn;t let her go anywhere without him. She started to feel trapped. Ember spotted a tower witha archery turret at the top, and ran toward it.
Iam going to help with this Vine forbidding or not!, Ember thought angrily.
Ember reached the top of the tower and aimed at the monster's eye. She shot three times, and hit it in the center of the eye, one missing.
The golem roared in pain, swinging around.
But it was closer then Ember thought, and before she could blink, it's stumby tail knocked the tower down! Ember was sent flying across the city, and banged her head on the street pavement and barrel-rolled through the streets. Ember groaned in pain, and her vison seemed to blur and swirl all around her.
"EMBER!!" A voice screamed, but to Ember it just vibrated painfully through her head. A dragon in armor landed beside her, shining brightly in the sun. Ember flinched, suprised by the armors brightness.
Are, are you an angel? Ember wanted to say the words, but she couldn;t find the stregth or focus to speak.The dragon scooped her up,and Ember was helpless.
"I'll get you out of here. You'll be all right, just hang on." The voice soothed, yet, even though in her delusional state, Ember could tell the dragon was sobbing.

Flame carried Ember back to the cave. he landed roughly and placed her by the pool. He took out a healing potion and gave it to her.
Don;t let her die, don;t let her die,, Flame prayed silently. Then Flame felt strange,, he never felt this much emotion ever since the Valentines Day Fiasco. Since then, he only felt hatred, and deterrmined to get Ember,,
All the sudden Flame's world seem to spin out of control. He felt like the world just slapped him in the face. He had been fighting for Ember, but it had esclated into so much more. He didn;t need love potions or killing to win Ember's heart.

ooooh i'm getting excited X3

my turn! (after a long time.)
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Ember woke up. "F.. Flame?" she stammered, a little frightened that she was alone with him. "why did you bring me here?"
"you got knocked out. i brang you here and gave you healing potions. I'm glad your alive."
"umm... what happened to trying to kill everyone to get to me? i mean, im happy that ur not doing anything bad right now but," Ember was verry confused.
"I saw u get hurt. I couldn't let you die."
Ember looked at Flame. Something about him was different. she could even see him going back to his normal size a little.
"Ember, I... I'm sorry" Flame said and flew away.
Ember stayed in the cave for a while then, gathering all her strength, she flew back to Warfang.
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i'm still REALLY SORRY for not adding on for a while.

The monster was dead. It had lots of vunerble weak spots after the turrets removed some of it's armor. Lots of dragons helped drag it to the river, which was amazingly wide and deep enough to carry it.
Ember reached the city, and she couldn;t belive her eyes. Numerous buldings were wrecked, fountains and parks were ripped to pecices, and many dead or wounded dragons lay everywhere. She landed by Main Street, where the fountain was broken and leaked water everywhere.
"There you are!" A voice called. Ember turned to see Vine running toward her.
"I thought I told you to go somewhere and hide!" Vine growled.
"Well, i wanted to help too! Just because Iam your girlfriend doesn;t mean you can boss me around!" Ember agrued.
"But look what happned! You've been missing for hours, and you got a lot of bruises!" Vine hissed. Spyro,Star, Cynder and Night came racing toward the scene.
"Thank goodness your okay!" Spyro panted.
Ember nodded to Spyro before Vine spoke again.
"How were those healed anyway?" Vine demanded.
"Flame healed them." Ember growled. The other's gasped with shock.
"WHAT!? How dare you let him do that to you!?" Vine screeched with rage.
"Well, its not like I had much choice! I was hurt so bad , i was hallicatning!" Ember snapped. She immideatly regretted those words.
"It wouldn;t have happened if you listned to me! Come on, we need to get you to the hosipital, Flame probaly put some spell on you." Vine said, herding her away. For a moment, Ember was too tired to argue. then she remembered Flame's apolgoy, the truth in his eyes,,
"NO!" Ember snarled, jumping back from Vines grip. Her friends looked so shocked from Ember's ourburst that they didn;t breathe. Ember understood too. It wasn;t like Ember to argue strongly. Ember was ussaly passive, but not anymore.
"If Flame was still evil, he would've given me a love spell, and I would have never come back in the first place!" Ember defended him.
"But Ember, It's not that simple! I thought you loved me!" Vine yelled. Ember was very shocked at Vine's rebuttal. Of course she loved him,, untill he started getting too overprotective and bossy.
"Well, i guess I don't. You don;t have the slightest clue how to make me happy Vine. Were though." Ember sneered coldy. She stomped away, her friends too shocked at the Ember's ferice words to go after her.

Flame landed at the crystal sight. A voice rumbled through his head.
"What are you doing, Flame!? You can;t go too soft. Go get Ember and give to her what she deserves!" IT was Malefor. He teached himto be bitter ever since Ember told him she didn't like him. he suggested the evil plans to make her love him, but slowly, Malefor removed all the love from Flame, so he could wlak in his steps, and could kill EMber like the rest of them.He sowly corupted Flame, and now Flame knew his pln.
"Forget it, Malefor. Iam on to you. I won;t let you use me like you did Cynder!" Flame growled firmly. There was silnce, then a fuirous roar.
"Who needs you! I only needed you for a few years anyway." Malefor sneered lowly, but omniulsy. A sharp pain crawled up Flame's belly. Soon it engulfed his whole body. It felt like a millon kinves diiging deeper and deeper into him. Then a purple outline appeared. It was Malefor.
"Thanks for the gadern of hartred Flame. But now, Iam afriad your'e doomed." He rumbled. Flame panted and his yees filled with horror. Malefor was slowly growing soild. He was being resurrted from the dead!
Flame didn;t care if he would get killed. Flame flew fast toward Warfang. they had to be warned!

my turn!
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Flame quickly landed by Ember, who was sitting all alone. "Ember!" he said urgently. "Maleor is alive! He's comeing here right now! You need to warn the others!"
"Why didn't you go straight to Spyro?" Ember asked.
"I thought I would get attacked. if ur with me they won't attack. come on, we need to tell them"
Ember and Flame flew off to tell Spyro, Cynder, Star, and Night about Malefor.
"Spyro!" Ember yelled before she even landed. "Malefor is alive! we need to prepare the city!"
"How do you know?" Spyro asked suspiciously
"Flame saw it." Ember answered.
"How do you know he's not lieing?" Spyro asked.
"I don't think he is. tell spyro what happened, Flame"
Flame stepped forward and told the other dragons what he saw.
"This is bad." Cynder said.
"I think ember was right, we should prepare the city." Star said.
"Great. We JUST defeated a golem and now we have to defeat Malefor too." Night said.
"I think we should go out of the city to fight with him." Cynder suggested. "That way no one else in the city can get hurt. Last time Spyro and I defeated him, so it should be easier anyways with all of us."
"I think Cynder's right. We should keep everyone else in the city safe. Lets go."
So they all flew out to meet Malefor.
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i have a cool idea for how this one will end. AND it involves making ANOTHER ONE! Yay! *Claps*
it will be about the bad person in my story Vine teaming up.
do u like the idea?

Hmmm,, you resurrected this story, I think you have a right to it. But, on one conditon. you let ME end the story, you start the next one. PM me to tell me more about your ending Idea, and I'll twist it with my idea. Deal?

Vine saw Ember return, and wanted to talk to her, about their arguement. he flew after them, untill he saw Flame with them. He flew faster,a dn tackled Flame, pinning him to the ground.
"What are you doing!? Theres No time!" Ember yowled.
"Your not fooling me! Get out of here Flame!" Vine snarled.
Spyro dragged Vine off and slapped him.
"He warned us about Malefor. He's truly not against us anymore."Spyro explained.
"Like Iam gonna belive that!" Vine snapped. Terrador and Volteer flew towards them.
"Whats going on here?" Terrador demanded.
So the dragons explained quickly what was happening.
"Your not going to stop us?" Night asked.
"No. Spyro and Cynder defetaed him once, you can do it again. This time, you'll have back up, including us." Terrador rumbled.
"Sure, you stop us from fighting the golem but not Malefor." Cynder muttered under her breath.
The dragons flew toward the crystal sites, where swirling purple clouds formed. Vine stomped away. He wasn;t going to help. Not one bit.

my turn!
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The dragons flew throught the putple mist, trying to see the best they could. then, all the clouds dissapeared suddenly. they looked around but forgot to look behind them, which was exactly where Malefor was.
Night yelled out in pain as she started to plummet to the earth. her wing was badly hurt by malefor's claws.
Star dove down to catch her sister while the other dragons started to fight. Once Night was safe in warfang, Star went back to help the others.
The fight was verry confusing, considering there were 3 dragons that were purple, so malefor had a little bit of an advantage. Malefor got an idea, then hit Flame hard with his fury breath. He plumeted down to the earth before anyone could respond. Malefor thought he just got rid of Ember too, but he didn't realize how powerful she could be. She was filled with so much madness that she turned dark. all the other dragons put a little distance between themselves and Ember, they all knew when a dragon was dark it might attack for no reason.
Malefor got a stunned look on his face, but he didn't have time to respond. he was too surprised. Ember used her dark fury breath on Malefor. "AHHHHH!!!" he yelled, getting pounded into the ground. The other dragons thought he was dead, so they went down to Flame to see if he was OK. He wasn't too hurt, amazingly.
Ember flew down to Flame and the others. He had never seen Ember like this. He never even thought she could turn dark.
"GET AWAY FROM HIM!" Ember yelled angerly at the others. They all backed up quickly, fearing that she would hurt them. "Flame... Come with me. We can get revenge from these dumb dragons that didn't care to catch you.
Flame looked up at Ember. "No. I thought revenge was the best way to solve your problems, but it isn't. Ember, you don't want to be dark. Beleive me, you feel powerful at first, but it's not worth it. you have no friends, everyone hates you, and lots of other bad stuff happens to you. Please don't stay dark Ember, I love you, but I can't be with you if you choose to be like this."
Ember saw in his face what hers had when Flame turned dark. She felt so sad and alone. She turned back to normal. Just then, Malefor stood up.
"You can never defeat me." he said laughing. He used his earth breath to go underground. When he came back up, with him there were golems that he had apparently been hiding all this time.
" oh no." cynder said.
" we need backup." terrador said. " Volteer and I will get other dragons who will be able to fight." so they flew off to warfang, leaving the other dragons to fight for a while by themselves.
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dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun
i was starting to see it going to end, so i had to keep it going for u ignitusforever. it took me a long time to do this, mostly because i switched some things and remembered that i shouldn't end it.
ur turn ignitusforever.

Thanks.

Spyro couldn't belive what was happening. WHat happened to the old Ember? But there was no time to think about that now.
"Okay, Flame,, Ember, and Star, you fight the golems. Me and Cynder will take care of Malefor." Spyro instructed. Nobody argued.

Spyro climbed back up and shot ice shards at Malefor. Malefor grunted and fell backwards, but quickly got back up.
Malefor striked and his Spyro on the wing,a nd he stumbled down the slope. Cynder trotted up fast toward the cliff.
Spyro was hurt, bad. But he was still moving. With help, Spyro climbed back up. Cynder shot poison at Malefor slowing him down. Malefor moved his paw in slow motion, trying to crush Cynder. Spyro shot ice at him, and soon he was frozen. Not a inch of him moved, but his eyes revaled pure hatred and annoyance.
"The golems are taken care of." Star reported. Spryo looked in the distance and saw the golems sinking in a pit of lava. He saw earth magic at the ends. Terrador flew overhead, and Spyro knew what happened.

Then the poison started evaporating the ice, and the ice creaked loudly. the dragons braced themsleves, then the ice exploded.
Malefor was stunned from being frozen. He blinked as he tried to remeber what was going on. All six dragons thought of their last fury time, and felt it glow in their bellies. The feeling streched through their shoulders, and then there was a enourmus explosion. All the furies combined created a greenish black color, and it shook the rock they were standing on. Some of the rock crumbled, and some spilt into pecies. the fury his Malefor and he stumbled down the cliff. Spyro, Star, Cynder, Flame and Ember ran to the edge to see what became of Malefor.
Malefor was in a heap. One of his paws were twisted, he had sevral bruises, one of his cuts were so deep Spyro could put his whole arm in it, one of his horns were broken, and his tail was at an old angle. Malefor was dead.
The dragons cheered, and when Terrador and his army joined in, it was louder then the fury. The six friends turned back and walked casusally back to Warfang.
"I think this deserves a -" Flame was cut off when he was dragged down the cliff. Ember and the other whipped around. Malefor climbed up the slope, Flame in his jaws. He began to sink his teeth into his scales, and Flame let out a bloodcurling scream. Terrador, Volteer and Cyril watched in horror, then got back in positons. Malefor shook Flame voilently, then tossed him away.
"FLAME!" Ember screeched, trying to run after him.
Malefor striked for Ember, blocking her path. He nipped her wing, then threw her back to her friends.
"Fools! Do you really think a tiny dragon can survive a beating like that?" Malefor snarled.
Spyro hated to admit it, but he was right. It wasn't Malefor who died, but Flame.
He looked over to Ember to see if she was okay. To Spyro's astonishment, Ember looked furios, and determined, to kill the murderer of Flame.
"And you were even stupider, to assume you won! Do you really think it would be that easy!?" Malefor roared. Then Malefor began to glow red. A whirring noise evolded around Malefor as the red glow became larger.
Spyro prayed this would never happen to him but now it was. It was Malefor's deadleist fury of all.
the fury wrapped its victim in darkness, and the dragons soul would be lost in it forever, never making it to Dragon Heaven. The fury was so cruel, Malefor used it only for the dragons he really, really loathed. Then the beam was unleashed, and the dragons huddled, wing and tail wrapped around eachother.
Then there was a faint splat, and Spyro opened his eyes. The beam stopped, right in front of their muzzles. the beam began to evaporate, then hissed into a harmless mist. Malefor struggled to breathe, a trickle of blood rolling down his chin. Then he colappsed in a heap. A sharp rock lodged in Malefors throat, choking him. Now, Spyro hoped, he was truly dead. Crouched behind him was Flame. His paw was streched, as if he just threw something.
"Flame, Flame you saved us!" Ember squealed with delight. She ran over to him and hugged him tight.
Flame puffed for breath.
"Take it easy!" he panted.
"But Flame, why? Aren't you still mad at us?" Spyro questioned.
"If I was still evil, I wouldn;t have helped would I? Besides, i would get lonley in Heaven without you guys." Flame joked. Everybody laughed.
"Well, you are not going to ehaven, mister." Ember scolded.
"You want be to go to H***!?" Flame exclaimed.
"No, silly! Your not dying yet!" Ember teased. Ember and Star walked on either side of Flame, helping him walk. All of them breathed all the elemnts they had on Malefor to make sure he was dead.
Two weeks passed. the city was being re bulit with new improvments. Flame and Night recovered fast,and there was a celebration every night. Everybody was having so much fun, that they didn;t notice Vine was missing.
Vine had met a white dragon named Storm.
"So whats the plan?" Vine huffed.
"Oh, we don;t start here, that's where Flame went wrong. Above The Chroniclers cave is a giant rock with all the gems you could think of in there. When we destroy it, the whole world will fall into a acopslaypse. The weather will go wacky, dragons will panic, and there can;t be new gaurdians without that stone. Thats where they take their oath. Then we will strike Warfang, when there weak." Storm insturcted. Vine nodded in approval. This wasn;t about winning Ember back, that was useless, a waste of time. This was about revenge.
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THE END.

i like it! yay!
i need to start the new story now.
for the ppl who don't know it's Storm and Vine: The dark aliance.

awsome

great.

me,malefor,spyro and craft went to twlight falls of dragon city,warfang."should we land on valley of avalar"said malefor.