chapter one:The Foreteller
'No......it cant be!' 'i am sorry but thats your destiny, you cannot deny your destiny or your existence will be passed on as well as your destiny and you will not be anymore, you will perish if you do not fufill you destiny. you have to leave...' the word ''leave" echoed in her mind 'NO! i will not leave him! and you cant make me!!' 'then you will die...perish....and pass' these words echoed again then it showed her a vision of the world being destroyed, then it showed a vision of the guardians dead and spyro was about to be killed ,but she wasnt there.... not with spyro 'SPYRO NOOO!!!!' her vision exploded she was being sucked down a black hole 'NOOOOO!!!'
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cynder woke up sweating and screaming 'whats wrong?!' spyro burst into her door, panting she answered 'nothing... just a nightmare' 'you ok?' 'im fine' 'well come on we've got training today' 'exactly how am i supposed to train when i have different elements?' spyro and cynder walked off to training.
MEANWHILE
ignitus was looking in the pool of visions 'and if she refuses?' ignitus had a vision 'if that is the matter then we will have to take measures..' ignitus contacted the chronicler 'chronicler does it have to be like this?' 'if the foreteller says this is to be exact then we will have to follow the rule and fufill our destinies.' 'then i fear for their relationship chronicler, she must do this on her own but she will not take it.' 'ignitus you have to reassure her if she does not complete her destiny then are world will be torn apart i am afraid they may have to be broken up.' ignitus replied sadly 'then i will tell her'
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#1 Posted: 21:01:18 23/12/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 21:11:35 23/12/2009
Try using speech like this:
"Hi" Bob said. Or "No!" Snarled Bob Don't right in caps, use !. |
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#3 Posted: 21:23:33 23/12/2009 | Topic Creator
ah fine but thanks for the tip
what do you think of it besides that? |
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#4 Posted: 00:15:33 24/12/2009
Rough path!
Cynder has to leave Spyro or the world will perish???? *sighs* Sometimes destiny just sucks!!!!! Good story so far! PC!!!
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#5 Posted: 08:53:53 24/12/2009
Good story so far
Please continue
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#6 Posted: 11:56:29 24/12/2009
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#7 Posted: 10:10:13 25/12/2009 | Topic Creator
alright guys heres chap two
CHAPTER TWO: Broken... when the other dragons had gone to bed one stayed up and looked in the Pool of Visions to see the two young dragons' futures. Ignitus was having a strange vision. 'yes i see her destiny, what if she refuses? i see...' Ignitus stopped having visions and contacted the Chronicler. 'Chronicler why does it have to be like this?' 'im sorry Ignitus but thats the way her destiny goes, if she does not complete her destiny she will perish and her destiny duties will go on to another dragon.' 'i fear for their relastionship.' 'you should Ignitus, i have something you need to know about it....' ________ the next day Ignitus called Spyro and Cynder to his chambers 'Spyro, Cynder i have to speak with you.' 'what is it Ignitus?' 'Cynder its about those dream you were having.' 'no..' 'im sorry Cynder, but their true.' 'am i missing something here?' 'Cynder has a destiny to save the world, but she can only do it alone.' 'why?' 'thats what the Forteller says' 'the Forteller?' 'yes the Forteller is like the Chronicler but is a higher rank, the Forteller contacts people, like the Chronicler, but tells them the downsides of your destinies...' 'wait what your saying is....' 'yes you have to be broken up.' 'what!?' Spyro and Cynder both cried simutaneously 'im sorry, buts its Cynder's destiny,also she will be gone for at least a year.' 'no...no!' Cynder ran out of Ignitus' chambers with tears streaming down her face,she ran outside and collapsed crying her eyes out. Spyro came after her and picked her up and held her close to himself 'Cynder no dont cry i wont leave you, i'll miss you every day, so what if we're broken up, when you come back we can get back together again, ok?' Cynder calmed down 'ok...' __________ wow destiny sucks stay tuned for chap three |
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#8 Posted: 17:48:53 25/12/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter three may come later today if i think of ideas for it quickly or tommorow.
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#9 Posted: 18:10:45 25/12/2009
True, some destinys really suck
Good chapter
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#10 Posted: 18:21:31 25/12/2009 | Topic Creator
thx ill get thinking for good ideas *sits on her thinking chair* i got nothin then ill just give you all a teaser!
chapter three:Her Journey Begins the next day Cynder was packing the things she would need for her journey ' aww where's my special onyx?' Cynder found her special onyx and put it in a gem hole in her chocker ,Spyro walks into Cynder's room 'I...Im gonna miss you Cynder' Cynder walks over to Spyro 'Im gonna miss you to Spyro' Cynder gives Spyro a kiss on the maw, Cynder put the bag over her shoulder and around her neck _______ who likes teasers? when i think of more stuff ill give you the real deal |
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#11 Posted: 17:39:42 20/01/2010
mooar
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#12 Posted: 18:23:10 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
i've had a block for ages i dunno what to write
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#13 Posted: 18:39:31 20/01/2010
Maybe an attack or a love scene?
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#14 Posted: 18:40:21 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
love scene? with who lol?
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#15 Posted: 19:07:13 20/01/2010
Spyro or someone else. Maybe she could love someelse like Flame lol.
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#16 Posted: 19:19:46 20/01/2010 | Topic Creator
now that is madness
i'll do something funny, its a suprise chapter three: Ignitus' Gayness (not the real chapter but something for fun) Ignitus was looking for terrador ''terrador! where are you?'' Ignitus walked into Terrador's chambers and saw him lying there looking at Ignitus strangely. ''Iggy you hawt!'' ''Terry you hawt as well!" Ignitus started making out with terrador FOUR WEEKS LATER "Iggy!'' "yes Terry?" ''im pregnant?'' ''OHH EMMM GEEE!!!!!'' spyro walks in ''sup?'' ''IM PREGNANT!!!'' ''HOLY?! THEN WHOS TEH DAD? AND HOWS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE??!!!'' ______________________ spyro has a dream. IN SPYRO'S DREAM some random guy ''wow i didnt think you could talk.'' ''i can do alot of things.'' ''yeah?'' ''yeah.'' ''yeah?'' 'yeah' 'yeah?' 'yeah.'' spyro wakes up ''AHHH OMG WHAT A NIGHTMARE!!'' sparx is in bed with him ''spyro my love whats wrong?'' ''AHHH!!!'' spyro wakes up again ''OH THAT WAS WAAAY PAST (bleeped) UP DUDE!! ember is in bed '' spyro whats wrong my love?'' ''AHHHH!!!!'' once again wakes up ''FRAKIN HELL!!!'' gual in bed ''hai baby!'' ''AHHHH!!!!!!!'' wakes up ''that was.. intresting'' malefor in bed ''spyro my love whats wrong?'' ''OH.. MY GOD!!'' APRIL FOOLS!!!! _____________________ yus i took that from the sonic vid. i had a block so i made a fun chapter enjoy! |
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#17 Posted: 19:24:22 20/01/2010
Awsome! xD If you are wondering why I posted fast, I read it before but forgot to comment.
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#18 Posted: 19:40:10 20/01/2010
lol at random guy as chris
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#19 Posted: 20:06:12 20/01/2010
Hmm, random
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