Chapter one
The Earth is nothing but a measly coward. It's lands are infested by dust. It's lands are covered with darkness. It hides in the deep dark galaxy. Staring into darkness with bulging eyes. I slowly opened my jaw. A tall dragon stood in front of me. I was the coward. His shadow cornered my face. I shuttered meek and tense. He looked down onto me. It was my turn. He nodded his head quickly with a nasty wide smirk shaded onto his crooked face.
"Your turn," The dragon hissed rapid. He slightly bobbed his head downwards and then shifted out to the left. Dust scattered across as I choked in the silent crowd. The large shimmering bright gem glittered in front of me. The Mantikane.
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#1 Posted: 11:57:23 05/12/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 12:46:37 05/12/2009
Ooo......PLZ continue
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#3 Posted: 13:04:02 05/12/2009
Interesting
Please continue
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#4 Posted: 20:07:34 05/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter two
The mysterious Mantikane. It held the atmosphere for each element. Fire, Ice, Earth and the lot. That's all I knew. I had to smash the spellbinding magic. I was in danger. Everything was in danger. I was the last of the ones to smash the Mantikanes. Most of the grass, plants and water had wilted away due to the thousounds of Mantikanes destroyed by those forced into evil. Including me. Last of greens, water and needs had shrinked into thin fists of nothing. Only the last were standing. All by to the last Mantikane. It would be my fault everyone was screaming of hunger. I would never be able to do it. I'm just a stupid minion. A dragon with no element. Designed just to serve the powerful. Each from generation to generation each of my ancesters were used. I stood there grimly, frowning. All was staring at me. All was depending on me. Smash it up? Save the world? A simple brown dragon couldn't do anything. I turned my head. I sighed. "Marakai!" A deep voice snapped. The master would slaughter me if I didn't follow his rules. But I thought. I didn't want to be a slave to the powerful. I wanted to slave for good. I wanted everyone to be happy. I quickly unearthed the Mantikane from the ground and ran for it. My large claws trotted in the dust. To somewhere far away. Away from everything... |
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#5 Posted: 20:22:29 05/12/2009
Good chapter!!!
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#6 Posted: 23:07:28 05/12/2009
Good chapter
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#7 Posted: 16:07:26 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter three
The ring pierced in my ears jangled as I ran. I suddenly triped over a dead branch. My face wen't flat on the floor. I lost the chasing crowd. The moon hid it's self in the darkness. A howl echo boomed through my ears. I was alone. I was in a swamp full of dead branchs and digusting muck infested lumps of swamp slime. I stared at the puddles of swamp slime. Suddenly something slithered from the slime. I screamed and stood a step back. |
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#8 Posted: 16:13:08 06/12/2009
Good chapter, plz continue!!!
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#9 Posted: 19:03:55 06/12/2009
Good chapter
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#10 Posted: 17:13:29 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter four
"Beastly groguglars!" It gasped. A tall brown dragon struggled out from the swamp's lumpy sludge. The repulsive rotten liquid swarmed over the plain empty land. I looked up wide-eyed and discountenance. I opened my jaw flimsly in motion. I didn't know what to say. I didn't know what to do. The dragon didn't lamet. Neither did he sigh or groan barbarously and absent-minded. He looked back at me as if he understood. |
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#11 Posted: 18:52:54 09/12/2009
Good chapter
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#12 Posted: 22:28:05 09/12/2009
PLZ continue!
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