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The Legend Of Spyro~Malefor's return [CLOSED]
Cynder Phox Ripto Gems: 125
#1 Posted: 12:44:59 30/11/2009 | Topic Creator
ok here is chapter onesmilie
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"Spyro..."Cynder said."Yes..Cynder"Spyro said."What is it.."Spyro said."It's Malefor...."Cynder said."Yes...what about him"Spyro replyed."He has returend..."Cynder said.
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It is a short story what are you going to dosmilie
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#2 Posted: 13:05:37 30/11/2009
(Insert stupid text here)

smilie
SpyroGirlCazy Emerald Sparx Gems: 4436
#3 Posted: 13:33:21 30/11/2009
Agreed^
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#4 Posted: 13:58:30 30/11/2009
Improved but still bad version...

"Spyro...?"Cynder said, with a look of fear and sorrow in her face. Spyro turned his head away from looking at the sky to looking at Cynder.
''Yes, what is it?'' he asked. Cynder hung her head low, she was trembling with fear. ''Its Malefor'' she sighed, fear was heard in her voice. Spyro widened his eyes, he knew something was wrong. ''Yes, what about him?'' he asked. Cynder lifted her head again to look at Spyro, her face fullfilled with horror. ''He has...returned'' she said shakingly. Spyro just stared with shock, staying silent......
SpyroGirlCazy Emerald Sparx Gems: 4436
#5 Posted: 13:59:40 30/11/2009
Wonderful! :3 smilie
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#6 Posted: 14:00:13 30/11/2009
smilie
Its still bad anyway smilie
SpyroGirlCazy Emerald Sparx Gems: 4436
#7 Posted: 14:01:38 30/11/2009
Yesh ... but still smilie
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#8 Posted: 14:02:24 30/11/2009
Its the bad improved version smilie
SpyroGirlCazy Emerald Sparx Gems: 4436
#9 Posted: 14:05:39 30/11/2009
Yesh :>
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#10 Posted: 05:42:06 04/12/2009
Quote: xx chloebabez
Improved but still bad version...

"Spyro...?"Cynder said, with a look of fear and sorrow in her face. Spyro turned his head away from looking at the sky to looking at Cynder.
''Yes, what is it?'' he asked. Cynder hung her head low, she was trembling with fear. ''Its Malefor'' she sighed, fear was heard in her voice. Spyro widened his eyes, he knew something was wrong. ''Yes, what about him?'' he asked. Cynder lifted her head again to look at Spyro, her face fullfilled with horror. ''He has...returned'' she said shakingly. Spyro just stared with shock, staying silent......


Ooh! Let me try! smilie

"Spyro?" Cynder murmured. Fear and shock were bright in the she-dragon's green irises. Green met purple as Spyro turned in response to her.
"What's wrong, Cynder?" he replied concerningly, hearing the note of fear in her voice. She looked away, wincing. "Malefor," she whispered, shivering at the mention of the dark dragon's name. "Yes," Spyro said anxiously, wanting to get the truth out of her, for he knew that at the mention of Malefor, it wasn't a good truth, and it needed to be heard.
Cynder turned to look at him again. "He has returned!" she cried with terror. "The Dark Master has returned!"
Spyro's heart nearly missed a beat as the words came out of her mouth. It stung his chest with a terrifying crack, as if the Malefor had gotten inside him already and begun to wreck havoc. "No... it can't be! It can't be true!"

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Well, that's all I got!
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 05:44:00 04/12/2009 by Firestar
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