O.k, this is a new Trilogy that i'm going to be writing. Its about most of my fan dragons, and the world around which they live in. Just a brief description there, as i dont want to give away the story. This is the first of the Trilogy, there will be more after i finish this one.
Writing first chapter, just after i finish the one to my other story.
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#1 Posted: 00:11:44 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 00:13:24 13/11/2009
Yayz! Can't wait.
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#3 Posted: 02:19:42 13/11/2009
Start soon! I want to read.
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And I don't even care if he's a bit of a moron. |
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#4 Posted: 02:27:41 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Got the 1st chapter on its way, should be done by tonight
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#5 Posted: 03:10:50 13/11/2009
Yay! more letters.
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#6 Posted: 03:17:33 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
O.k, here goes ~
Chapter 1 ~ A hundred years had passed since the fall of Darkness and its Followers. A Dragon capable and worthy of surviving such conditions and mastering untold and forgotten powers. Now it seems that darkness has came back with surprise and impossibilities. Throughout the land are Dragons, young Dragons capable of banishing darkness and its evil nature once and for all. This is their story..... It seems as if Winter had stayed for ages, not even that, mabye forever. Samantha or Sam as she was called my Friends and Family, was sitting beside her friend Jewel in a rather cold and dark cave. Sam was a rather decent looking Dragoness, she had long black eye lashes and dark blue hair with green streaks hanging over her eyes and snout. She had pink horn's that would slightly curve in the air, and is slender with soft wings. Jewel however was a little opposite. She was beautifull with medium length eyelashes and light purple hair with blue and pink streaks in it. She had golden brown horns that stuck in the sir and slightly curved at the end, she is also slender with large and delicate wings. They both kept their wings wrapped around them, keeping the cold away and hopefully, out of the cave. Jewel sighed an turned her head to Sam, who was staring upon the frosted ground like a puppy begging for food. ''You really find that ground interesting dont you?'' she smiled shivering. Samantha turned her head away quickly to Jewel ''No'' she smiled ''Not really, was just thinking about something'' she said turning away again. Jewel looked at her and raised an eyebrow, she knew what her friend was like, especially after all those pranks Sam had pulled on her, making her immune to them now knowing every trick of the way. ''Are you sure?'' she asked. Sam looked back at Jewel irritated ''Yeah! I'm sure'' she snapped. ''How come you never believe me?'' she asked, waiting for an answer. Jewel looked at the ground, she couldnt come out with the right words ''No reason'' she sighed, Sam gave her a sharp look ''So i guess you dont trust me for no reason?'' she askes standing up ''Never mind, i'm off for a flight''. Jewel yet raised another eyebrow as Sam flew off into the distance, she sighed and looked at the roaring fire, hoping she wouldnt do something stupid while out there. I dont think its as good as the other chapters will be. xD |
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#7 Posted: 03:21:14 13/11/2009
I think it's a good start.
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#8 Posted: 16:22:49 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Just writing the next chapter now xD
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#9 Posted: 00:20:06 14/11/2009
Extremly good, in fact I love it! But try not to capitialize unnessesry words. Besides that though......Write more...or i'l have to kill you
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#10 Posted: 21:18:20 14/11/2009 | Topic Creator
kk thanx
Oh, this is Sam xD Took me quite a while to draw D: xD Chapter 2 ~ Sam flew over the icy plains, the ground sparkled beneath her from the moon shining above. The wind blew through her hair as she thought, ''Why didnt anyone trust her no more?'' . Its not like she had done anything wrong to deserve it, mabye it was just her calling, or due to what she acted like, but she wasnt near sure. The wind had started to get stronger, mabye soon to turn into a blizzard, either small or big Sam knew that it was too risky to stay out here. She turned around slgihtly, being carefull not to injure herself from moving too fast, she remembered the last time she had done this, she nearly broke her wing due to the wind force. Snow started to fall from the sky, but not the soft and gentle way, the cold and fast way, Sam knew she wouldnt be able to handle this, she had to find shelter, fast. By the time she neared the cave, the blizzard had actually started, and extremely badly, so she couldnt see where she was going. The wind blew into her eyes as she tryed to keep them shut, her eyelashes were full of snow sitting on the strands, making it even worse when she tryed to blink. Around and hour had passed and Jewel was starting to get worried ''Where can she be?'' she thought to herself standing up, she had a look outside, the blizzard was severe now, all that was clear was the grey sky and snow shooting past at top speed. Jewel sighed and held her breath as she flapped her wings and took off into the blizzard, her skin and scales started to sting not long after as the snow shot onto them She landed on the cold, crisp ad icy ground, making it had for her to walk. There was no sign of Sam anywhere, well not for what she could see anwyay. |
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#11 Posted: 23:40:40 14/11/2009
Interesting. Keep going.
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#12 Posted: 16:04:44 15/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx Just writing the next chapter now
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#13 Posted: 17:20:33 15/11/2009
its really good
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Leaving, For good.. |
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#14 Posted: 18:03:20 15/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx
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#15 Posted: 19:30:09 15/11/2009
( points Master Muffin Sword of Truth at you) I'm waiting....
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#16 Posted: 07:28:31 16/11/2009
Epicsauce Don't you bring those dastertly muffins into this topic....
Now...CONTINUE THE STORY! *Swings Ax of the Great Pineapple*
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#17 Posted: 07:29:24 16/11/2009
Cool story!!
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#18 Posted: 22:15:33 16/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx I'l write the rest of the next chapter in a while.
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#19 Posted: 00:53:52 17/11/2009
Quote: The DoomSong
I can bring muffins in if I want! |
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#20 Posted: 16:49:20 18/11/2009 | Topic Creator
O.k guys, calm down
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#21 Posted: 17:38:19 18/11/2009
Okay. We should keep our fight in Stuff and Nonsense.
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#22 Posted: 21:09:14 18/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Agreed
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#23 Posted: 21:19:03 18/11/2009
Stuff and Nonsense... The place where the most magical things happen...
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#24 Posted: 19:16:08 19/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Indeed....
xDDD |
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#25 Posted: 19:39:53 19/11/2009
Well get the chapter finished!
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#26 Posted: 14:48:39 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I will....
eventually. |
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#27 Posted: 15:30:07 20/11/2009
Heyy! You didn't tell me you were starting on a new story! >:U
It's good so far, keep it up.. |
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#28 Posted: 21:29:08 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
I forgot about it D:
Thanx |
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#29 Posted: 21:32:17 20/11/2009
( is waiting)
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#30 Posted: 01:16:44 21/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry for delay, been busy....
Chaper 3 ~ Meanwhile... Sam shivered, the snow was piled on top of her and the freezing cold shot through her body like a bullet. She slowly lifted her head, trying not to hurt herself and poked it out of the snow. ''Where am i?'' she thought standing up slowly. Not far ahead of her was a forest, a dark forest that was told me hold dangerous and marvelous mystical creatures, but who went in never came out. But due to the weather and no shelter to be seen, Same knew she either had to freeze to death out here, or brave the forest and try to survive. She ran forward as fast as she can to the entrance, the darkness was already reaching her eyesight and gave her a distinctive feeling as if no life was nearby, she knew this was false of course by seeing the Crow's flying around her. She walked futher in, the leaves rustled around her feet, but she heard what sounded like footsteps nearby. She ran deeper into the forest, her eyes and heart full of fear ''Was something after her?'' she thought ''If so what could it be...?'' Sam cowered, she looked through the trees, but saw nothing but mist, her eyesight slowly turned black as she felt a hit on the head and fell to the ground. A dark figure rose from the shadows, and dragged her through the forest. |
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#31 Posted: 03:42:22 21/11/2009
Cool.
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#32 Posted: 16:16:32 24/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx I'm working on the next chapter now xD
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#33 Posted: 19:52:50 24/11/2009
Awesome.
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#34 Posted: 19:15:49 25/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Coolie
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#35 Posted: 01:58:53 29/11/2009
Good PLZ keep going
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I'm batman!! Shh... |
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#36 Posted: 15:27:43 29/11/2009
Nice story (as always, amiga!)
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Sitan ali dinamitan |
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#37 Posted: 23:45:31 11/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx
I'l do the next chapter after i finish the next to my other story Also, this story is going to contain a little of gore and violence, i'm just warning you. |
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#38 Posted: 13:13:54 12/12/2009
Yes, don't look children!
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Sitan ali dinamitan |
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#39 Posted: 14:28:00 12/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Indeed *starts writing*
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#40 Posted: 13:53:27 26/12/2009
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... ... ... ... Riiiiiight... when you say you 'Start writing' you said it how long ago? I'M WAITING. I'M STILL WAITING.
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Sitan ali dinamitan |
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#41 Posted: 16:58:43 26/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry, just not been in a very creative mood. I'l continue it later ;3
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