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darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Fandom > Fan Fiction > Cynder's Legend 3: the Dragon's Return
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#1 Posted: 01:00:23 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 13:52:18 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Here we go!
Prologue: A thirteen year old human girl walked through the forest, club by her side. She was hunting,in the east, for her tribe, in the west. Her three male companions had perished in the north. She saw a small twinkle in the sand to her left. She went over to it eagerly, hoping it was food. When she got there she saw a claw, not from a bear or a lion, no. It was much larger than any of those. It was a dragon claw. It was a blood red with orange, vertical stripes. The girl heard a bush rustle behind her and drew her club. Then two turquoise blue eyes stared at her from a tree. An ear spiting roar joined the pair along with many rows of sharp, milky white teeth. She swung her club at the creature, for she was frightened. It withdrew when the club hit it, losing a small amount of blood. Then the creature come into the clearing with the girl. She was astonished to see a dragon in front of her. Dragons were supposed to be extincted. The dragon was black with hot pink wing skin and under belly. It's eyes were turquoise blue, it's tail tip and six large horns were milky white. It was large, as tall as four full grown men. It's body was bony and thin. "Hello." It said in a feminine voice. "Hello." the girl breathed. "My name is Cynder, what is yours?" Cynder asked politely. "Sierra." the girl replied. Then a light purple griffin with yellow tail fur, ear- fur, and beak swooped down. "COO! COO!" it called. "This is Spyro, he is just a bit hungry that is all." Cynder said glaring at him. Sierra was still very bewildered but sat down on a sturdy rock. "I am sorry Sierra, but now that you have met us you cannot return to your people. You will be fed and protected by me. You will live in dragon society." Cynder said. "BUT MY PEOPLE NE-" Sierra started. "Need to leave dragon alone!" Cynder said sternly. Sierra could see that arguing was not going to get her anywhere, so she went to live among dragons. She was not afraid, for she had Cynder by her side. |
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#3 Posted: 15:47:55 30/10/2009
Good prologue
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#4 Posted: 18:59:27 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thank you. I am thinking and it it may take a small while.
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#5 Posted: 20:38:57 30/10/2009
You started, YES!!!!
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#6 Posted: 22:57:32 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
well guys, here is the real story.
___________________________________________________________ (This story will be from Sierra's point of view.) Chapter 1: Riders I walked with my new companion. I was afraid when we reached the dragon village. There were so many breeds. Wyverns, Lindworms, Knuckers, Europians, Ampitheres; if you can name it, it is there! I still had my small club and an extra ax by my side. There was the occasional old man, but other than that nothing other than dragons. Still I was unsecured and unhappy. We entered through a large hole that was big enough for Cynder to get in without any problem. There were many complex tunnels and caves. There was another eighteen year old human male here. "Ardi, this is Sierra. She will be your apprentice. Teach her well, I know she has the spirit." Cynder commanded. "Yes master." Ardi said as she bowed. "I told you to stop that; call me Cynder." she grunted. I went over to the new person. "Train me for what?" I asked him. "To be a dragon Rider." he said with a grin. |
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#7 Posted: 23:01:39 30/10/2009
Did you get the idea from our pm's And also the hole storry is going to be in Sierra?
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#8 Posted: 23:40:31 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
no, maybe, of you all are good, there will be parts from Cynder's or Ardi's point of view. and Yes I did.
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#9 Posted: 11:07:27 31/10/2009
Good first part to chapter
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#10 Posted: 23:17:02 02/11/2009
When are going to right the next chapter PLZ keep going.
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#11 Posted: 16:27:57 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry, Still thinking about how to make this work... But the next chapter will be before this Sunday!
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#12 Posted: 15:43:37 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: a New Life
"WHAT!?" Sierra yelled. "A dragon rider, and please don't shout." Ardi said calmly. Sierra was frightened, she was in a new place to be the servant of a dragon, and now she going to be a dragon rider too! "Sierra, don't be frightened. we won't just plop you on a dragon and fly around until you fall off! of course not!" Ardi laughed. Sierra smiled slightly at his hummer. Now she looked around. A small candle was on a table in the center of the room. Three small chairs were placed around it's crooked edges. There was a massive table in the next room, obviously for the dragons. In the next small chamber there were four medium sized mattes, a two dressers, and a bookshelf. Cynder came and poked her mouth though the smallish opining. "Do you like it? It was all I could do on short notice." Cynder said with confidence. Cynder was worried, though, that Sierra's tribe might come for her, and for the blood of dragons. "Yes, I like it." Sierra said, breaking Cynder's train of thought. But, something troubled Sierra, Ardi looked familiar. but she couldn't place where she had seen him. TO BE CONTINUED... |
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#13 Posted: 22:33:55 05/11/2009
GREAT PLZ keep going
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#14 Posted: 22:38:07 05/11/2009
Good chapter
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#15 Posted: 21:27:04 06/11/2009 | Topic Creator
The Village was burning and Sierra was looking for her cousin.
"Ardias, Ardias where are you!?" she called into the smokey air. Her eyes watered from the smoke, she also was crying. then her cousin approached her. He bent down and hugged her. "Get out of the smoke, I'll come for you when it is safe." he coughed. Sierra nodded and ran. She burst out of the cloud of smoke and sat under a large fur tree. She took off the necklace that her cousin had given her. It was made of pine needles and straw. It had a small poppy flower on front. She lay it on the ground beside her, waiting. Then a burning branch fell on it. Sierra coughed as the smoke leaped closer to her. It almost made the shape of a mighty wolf as it moved. The wolf leaped, mouth open, snarling. It was about to engulf her. Sierra screamed and sat up with her hair in a tangle. She was panting and gasping for air. Now she knew who Ardi was. Her missing cousin! |
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#16 Posted: 21:52:29 06/11/2009
OMG Keep going PLZ
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#17 Posted: 22:45:14 06/11/2009
Good chapter
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#18 Posted: 23:06:43 06/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thank you for all the nice comments, the next chapter will be very soon.
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#19 Posted: 01:37:51 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: a Realization
"Ardias!" Sierra cheered. The tears of joy ran down her face as she ran into the main chamber. Ardi was startled when she sped in and hugged him. "Oh my gosh! What is with all this hugging?!" he gasped. Sierra let go of embrace. She stared at him with her gray eyes. "Ardias, I am your cousin, remember." she whispered. "Si- Sierra? Is that rely YOU!?" he cried. They hugged and wailed with joy of their lost happiness. Then Cynder walked in. "Looks as if I missed something." she laughed. The two looked at her with tears in their eyes. "Sierra is my cousin. We were separated by a fire eight years ago. Oh, I have missed her." he squealed. "Oh, that is wonderful! Also, Ardi, today is a special day for you, so I have a surprise for you." she said as she turned and left. Several moments later. In her mouth was a medium sized cage. inside was a large bird, blood red with golden crests. It was a Fire Bird. Ardias gasped and slowly stepped forward. "These are the rarest things on earth, how, how did you-" he stammered. "Lets just say I had eggs this morning." she said licking her lips. Ardias took the cage and handed it to Sierra. "I thought it was your birthday today." she said. "It will be ours." he beamed. To be continued... |
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#20 Posted: 04:54:07 08/11/2009
Cool!!
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#21 Posted: 09:06:04 08/11/2009
Good part
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#22 Posted: 14:50:22 08/11/2009
Keep going PLZ
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#23 Posted: 20:59:55 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks for all the comments!
_________________________________________________________ Chapter 5: Training Begins "Sierra! Time to start training!" Cynder called. Sierra leaped off her mat. She sprang into the room like a spring. Cynder flinched and slightly gasped. "Sierra, can you ride a horse bareback?" she asked. "I know a little." she replied. "Hmm, maybe we should start by teaching you how to ride a dragon while walking first. oh but not enough time," she said, "Ardias! Hurry, we need to go to the Kingsberry Vally!" she called. Ardias rushed into the room. "Okay, Sierra, let's get you onto Cynder." he said as he moved a large rock next to her body. Sierra walked to it and slowly mounted the dragoness. Ardias did the same. "Now, you two are lucky, you have more than one head to hold on to!" Cynder laughed. she leaped into the air and flapped her wings hard. Sierra screamed as they took flight! |
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#24 Posted: 21:03:48 08/11/2009
Keep going PLZ the story's going good.
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#25 Posted: 21:25:39 08/11/2009
Good chapter
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#26 Posted: 01:01:57 09/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6: Hold On
"Whoa!" Sierra yelled as Cynder bounded. She leaped and took flight. Sierra was holding one of Cynder's three necks, eyes tightly shut. "Sierra, open your eyes to Kingsber-" Cynder stopped short. She opened her eyes to see a burned black waste land. "What happened to the valley!?" Ardias exclaimed. Cynder flew down to the ground and let the two humans off her back. A brown and white ferret scurried to the troop. "Oh thank the gods, Killsten what happened!? Where is everybody?" Ardias asked. The ferret sat up in it's hind legs and put it's fron paws on it's belly. "Most killed, the rest are scattered around the rubble that was the Horrdion Forest." he said in a high pitched voice. cynder looked around then snapped her head around. "ONLY A SUPER POWERFUL THING COULD HAVE DONE THIS!" she bellowed. Now there were drops of poison dripping from her mouth. "It was a machine! A large device! It came and spurted a new element! We call it Fritost! [FRI- stost] It was more powerful than convexity!" he shuttered. Sierra had herd of convexity. Now she was stiff with fear. "What if it kills Cynder!? what if it kills Ardias!? What if it kills me!?" she thought. To Be Continued... |
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#27 Posted: 07:55:29 09/11/2009
Nice chapter
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#28 Posted: 12:40:45 09/11/2009
Keep going PLZ
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#29 Posted: 19:13:14 09/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks for the comments, also I the next chapter will be today.
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#30 Posted: 21:26:35 09/11/2009
YES!!!!!
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#31 Posted: 23:53:25 09/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7: The Ferret People
My home, the valley I had once lived in, gone. Destroyed by some pile of scrap mettle! I looked at Sierra and Ardi. Sierra stared right back, horrified. Ardias had run into the charred wood looking for trapped ferrets. "squeak!" I heard. I looked around, seeing nothing. "SQUEAK" it said louder. I looked and saw a small black tail sticking out from under a branch. I hurried over to it lifting the log and moving the small body under it. It opened it's small yellow eyes. "Thank you." it breathed before collapsing. It had died from lack of oxygen in my paw. "These people shall not die in vein! We shall go destroy this monstrosity! We must gather ourselves and prepare, we all shall depart soon." I bellowed. Killsten, Sierra, and Ardias looked at me as if I had gone mad.Yes, I was angry at this thing. "Sierra come with me, Ardias stay with Killsten and look for survivors." I commanded. I lowered myself for Sierra to mount. We took off leaving a large cloud of dust behind us. I was going to the dragon village to get, supplies. Supplies to fight! |
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#32 Posted: 23:57:39 09/11/2009
KEEP GOING PLZ This is getting good
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#33 Posted: 00:06:56 10/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks, the next chapter will be tomorrow!
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#34 Posted: 06:37:49 10/11/2009
Good chapter
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#35 Posted: 01:52:24 11/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8: Preparing
"Cynder, what the heck are we doing!?" Sierra cried. They landed at the blacksmith and Sierra dismounted. The Blacksmith himself was a large Ampithere, green and brown with gold feathers. He looked up at his costumers. He looked startled that they suddenly appeared while he was in his simple little shop. "Ah, Cynder, how ya doin'?" he said cheerfully. "Very well thank you, now Chaos, I need armor, lots of it too. I need a set for Killsten, Sierra here, Ardias, Spyro and myself, fast." she whispered. "I see, this may take a day or two, come back in thee days." Chaos said back. Cynder grunted, annoyed. She gestured for Sierra mount. She did so and they flew back to the burned waste land. They were greeted by five adults ferrets and two children. Ardias was startled by the sudden sound of flapping wings. He turned and was relieved to see Sierra and Cynder. "We found some survivors and they are willing to fight!" he said happily. "Good, for we leave in four days. To face this beast." Cynder growled. To Be Continued... |
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#36 Posted: 12:32:44 11/11/2009
Keep going PLZ PLZ PLZ
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#37 Posted: 16:12:30 11/11/2009
Good chapter
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#38 Posted: 16:17:55 11/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks, the next chapter will be later today!
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#39 Posted: 21:25:41 11/11/2009
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#40 Posted: 02:41:42 12/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9: The armor
"Sierra come here, I want you to see something." Chaos said. Sierra followed the dragon. He led her to his shop and showed her a silver helmet with brass lining. The breast plate, boots, and gauntlets were the same. There was a large gold club and ax along with a small sward on the shelf next to the lovely armor. Sierra gasped. "This is lovely, who is it for?" she asked as she carefully lifted the helmet. "You." he smiled. She looked up at him with a big grin on her face. "Thank you!" she almost yelled as she hugged the blacksmith. He flinched at first but then wrapped his wings around her. "Sierra, I want you to tell something to Cynder." he said and whispered to her his message. She grabbed her suit of armor and the gold ax and ran off. The armor was heavy and the ax was heavier, but still she ran with joy. "Cynder! CYNDER!" she called Cynder landed beside her and panted for a small while. She then stood up staid and with dignity. "Yes, Sierra?" she asked. "Well, I got my armor and an ax, but that is unimportant," she started, "You see, Chaos wants to join us to dismantle the, uh, thing." she panted. Cynder smiled and looked south to the village and whisper some words that Sierra couldn't hear. She ran off to tell Ardias of her new things in witch she could fight the monstrosity! |
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#41 Posted: 12:40:28 12/11/2009
Keep going PLZ
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#42 Posted: 16:21:16 12/11/2009
Good chapter
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#43 Posted: 01:30:18 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10: Lift Off
The Next day Cynder and Killsten got their armor, and the after that Ardias and Spyro got theirs. Cynder's was gold with an amethyst stripe though it. there was armor for her shins, fore head, and hips. Killsten's was made of emerald and steel, it covered his face and all for legs. Ardias' was made or bronze and had gold lining. Spyro's was made of ruby and steel, the armor covered his head and shins. Ardias had the gold club, Killsten had the sward, and Sierra had the ax. The troop put their armor on and Sierra and Ardias mounted Cynder. Killsten rode Spyro. The two creatures flapped their large wings and took off. Chaos Had no armor, his skin was as tough as armor. He carried the other ferrets and had given them all daggers and shields. Everyone was silent. Only the sound of Cynder, Spyro, and Chaos' wing beats broke the silence. "Do not be frightened you guys, this should be easy." Chaos breathed. "Okay, we will try to be strong. I will fight this monster even if it's to my dieing breath. I will protect my home at all costs." Killsten said strongly. "Me too." echoed around the ferrets. "Me too." Sierra said boldly. Ardias gasped and looked at her in worry. "what if she does die?" he thought. There, in the middle of the sky, was a large, fearsome, deathly looking forest land. It floated up and down slightly. A mass of gusty winds knocked Spyro back a foot or two and Chaos about twenty. |
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#44 Posted: 19:54:10 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Is anyone reading this story?
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#45 Posted: 22:25:03 13/11/2009
YES are you kidding, i'll NEVER stop reading....well until you finish.
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#46 Posted: 00:50:37 14/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Ha ha! I get it! any way the next chapter will be tomorrow!
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#47 Posted: 00:59:16 14/11/2009
Ok, and i wont stop reading!
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#48 Posted: 01:03:10 14/11/2009 | Topic Creator
hee hee, I will not worry anymore!
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#49 Posted: 07:41:04 14/11/2009
Good chapter
I am reading as well
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#50 Posted: 17:20:39 17/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Grrr, sorry, I have writers block! So it may be a LOOONG time. Once again, sorry.
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