darkSpyro

ok this a sequel to the first story A Dragon's life in Heaven...

this one is about Dragsooth and Marissa's childeren...

fisrt chapter coming today...

Hmm, I wonder how your going to make a plot out of this. Anyway I look foward to this

Chapter 1,

it had been 8 years after lucifer was sentenced to spend eternity in hell,
Heaven was a very peaceful place after that and a very carefree place.
Dragsooth and Marissa were now 20 years old they haven't changed much although they did grow, they were almost fully grown,

Dragsooth and Marissa were inside the Golden Temple laying beside Jesus' throne, Marissa had an egg, it was black with purple spots on it. she curled herself gently around it. Dragsooth was laying by her side,

Dragsooth: "i can't believe we have an egg..."

Marissa: "me neither. it looks so beautiful..."

Dragsooth: "do you think we'll be good parents?"

Marissa: "of course we will, don't worry..."

after a few minutes the egg started to crack. it soon hatched and a black and purple colored hatchling layed on the ground. it looked up at Marissa and then it looked at Dragsooth.

Dragsooth: "it's a boy."

Marissa: "yes he is. what do you think we should name him?"

Dragsooth: "how about Draco."

Marissa: "it means dragon doesn't it?"

Dragsooth: "yes it suits him..."

Marissa: "that's a beautiful name..." she looked at Draco and licked him, she curled up around him and he curled up and fell asleep...


Jesus was sitting in his throne the whole time, he looked over "congratulations you two."

Dragsooth: "oh thank you Master... Master do you think me and Marissa will be good parents?"

Jesus: "of course you will. do not dout yourselves..."

Marissa: "we won't doubt Master..."

they all looked at little Draco who was still curled up asleep.

Jesus: "may i hold him?"

Dragsooth: "of course Master..."

Jesus gently picks up Draco and cradled him in his arms, Draco woke up and saw Jesus... there was a slight look of fear in Draco's eyes

Jesus: "no need to be afraid little one." he petted Draco,

Draco flinched a little when he felt Jesus pet him...

Jesus puts Draco down next to Marissa. Draco hid under Marissa's wing, she picked up her wing.

Marissa: "it's ok son no one's going to hurt you..."

Draco didn't move, Marissa covered him back up with her wing.

Dragsooth looked at Jesus

Dragsooth: "Draco looked as if he was afraid..."

Jesus: "he was, but don't worry he'll learn to trust me..."

Marissa: "yes he will..."

Dragsooth looked at Marissa and smiled.

Marissa lifted up her wing to see Draco asleep....


next chapter coming tomorrow....

a pic of Draco...

Good first chapter

thanks...

Draco looks cool! I wonder... does he have the Convexity element?

no, he has the elemets of the purple dragon only they are darker.

Chapter 2,

3 years later,

Draco was now 3 years old, he had learned to trust Jesus, but they were not really close, now Draco and Dragsooth were really close, they had a really good bond.

today Dragsooth was showing Draco around Heaven, they were walking together, Draco was looking around as he was following his dad,

Draco: "it's very pretty out here daddy..."

Dragsooth: "yes Draco it is."

suddenly an angel landed infront of them.

angel: "Dragsooth, Marissa just had another egg! come quickly!" the angel started to fly to the Temple.

Dragsooth: "climb on my back Draco." he crouched down, Draco climbed onto his back. "hang on." Dragsooth ran towards the Temple. Draco hung on tight...

Dragsooth walked into the Temple, he crouched down again "ok Draco get off." Draco slid off.

they walked over to where Marissa was, she was laying on the floor curled up beside Jesus' throne.

Dragsooth: "Marissa did you have another egg?"

Marissa picked up her head "yes, come and take a look..." she lifted her wing and there was a light purple egg laying there...

Draco came over and looked at the egg "what's that mommy?"

Marissa: "that's where little dragons come from... you're going to have a little sister..."

Dragsooth: "wait how did you know it's going to be a girl?"

Marissa: "because the Master told me."

Dragsooth: "oh..." he looked at the egg "what are we going to name her?"

Marissa: "now let's not rush into finding names until she hatches..."

Dragsooth: "ok sorry, i just got alittle exited..."

suddenly the egg begins to crack, and it hatches, and a little purlpe dragoness lays on the floor. she opens her eyes and sees Marissa, Dragsooth and Draco looking at her,

Draco slowly walks over to her. "hi i'm Draco. who are you?"

she backs away and hides under Marissa's wing.

Draco: "she doesn't like me..."

Dragsooth: "no she's just a little scared is all... but i promise she will grow to love you and you two will have lots of fun together."

Marissa: "so what are we going to name her?"

Dragsooth: "i think we should call her Maria..."

Marissa: "Maria. i think it's a beautiful name..."

Draco: "it almost sounds like your name mommy."

Marissa: "yes it dose..." she lifted her wing to see Maria asleep "i think she tired herself out..."


Jesus was there sitting on his throne, he looks over toward them "congratulations on your second child..."

Dragsooth: "thank you Master..."

Jesus: "may i hold her?"

Marissa: "of course Master..."

Jesus picks up Maria and cradles her in his arms, she wakes up and sees him... she smiles at him.

Jesus: "well you're a lot braver than your brother was when he first saw me..." he petted her, she licked his hand.

Jesus: "well aren't you a loving little dragoness?" he continued to pet her.

Dragsooth, Marissa and Draco just watched...

Maria yawned and fell asleep in Jesus' arms. he put her down next to Marissa. Draco came over and layed down next to Maria and fell asleep...

a pic of Maria...

aww , good chapter

thanks,

Chapter 3,

5 years later...

Draco and Maria were the best of friends, they were always together, they enjoyed each others company and they spent a lot of time playing in the fields of Heaven.
Maria also has a good relationship with Jesus, unlike Draco she spent a lot of time with Jesus,

Dragsooth and Marissa taught Draco and Maria how to pray. Maria was eager to learn but Draco seemed unwilling and he also seemed bored during worship/prayer. Draco had wanted to leave early during worship but Maria stayed up late worshiping Jesus. Maria tried to encourage Draco to be a little more humble and Draco reluctantly stayed and worshiped because he didn't want to upset Maria.

Dragsooth and Marissa were really worried about Draco, they watched Draco and Maria prostrating before Jesus and silently praying.

Dragsooth: "i'm worried about Draco. he and the Master don't have a good relationship..."

Marissa: "the Master loves Draco..."

Dragsooth: "i know but Draco seems unwilling to worship. it's almost like he doesn't like it..."

Marissa: "did you figure that out when Draco asks if he can go outside and play instead of worship the Master?"

Dragsooth: "i figured it out when he fell asleep during worship one time."

Marissa: "should we really be forcing Draco to worship?"

Dragsooth: "we aren't forcing him... and besides having a good relationship with the Master is the best thing for Draco. and it's better for him to have this relationship when he's young..."

Marissa: "shouldn't we let him be willing to worship on his own terms?"

Dragsooth: "then he'll never worship if we let him do that."

Marissa: "let's try it just for today as an experiment. just to see what he dose..."

Dragsooth: "oh ok, but if he stops worshiping altogether it'll be our faults..."

Marissa: "agreed..."

Dragsooth walks over to Draco.

Dragsooth: "Draco..."

Draco: "yes dad."

Dragsooth: "you can worship whenever you feel like today..."

Draco gets up "really!?"

Dragsooth: "yes... today we're not making you worship, although we encourage you to do so... today you can worship whenever you want... and if you want."

Draco: "well i'm going outside to play with my friends..." he runs outside.

Dragsooth looks at Maria, she was still praying.

Dragsooth: "Maria, honey sorry for bothering you but i have to tell you something..."

Maria looks at him "yes daddy?"

Dragsooth: "today you can worship whenever you feel like it too."

Maria: "i already am daddy."

Dragsooth: "oh well sorry for bothering you then, carry on."

Maria bows her head back down and prays silently to Jesus.

Dragsooth walks over to Marissa

Dragsooth: "i hope you know what you're doing... did you see how Draco was happy to leave the Temple?"

Marissa: "yes i saw... he ran out."

Dragsooth: "yes... at least we have one child who's willing to be pius." he looks over and sees that Maria is still praying...

Dragsooth then walks in the doorway of the Temple and looks outside to see Draco playing tag with a group of angel childeren.

Dragsooth: "well i'm glad to see he's haveing fun..." he walks back inside the Temple, he walks up to Marissa "is she still praying?" he looks at Maria.

Marissa: "yes and i'm glad she's so good and willing to please the Master..."


Jesus picks Maria up and craddles her in his arms "if only you're brother were as humble as you."

Maria: "yeah i tried to get him to pray but all he want's to do is play..."

Jesus: "yes and you're the opposite. you'd rather pray then play..."

Maria: "i think praying is fun."

Jesus: "why don't you go play with your brother?"

Maria: "but i want to pray some more."

Jesus: "you've done enough for now, go and play..." he puts her down

Maria walks outside and joins in on the game of tag...

Jesus looks at Dragsooth and Marissa

Jesus: "i know you are worried about Draco's unwillingness to pray..."

Dragsooth: "yes Master. we are worried that Draco might not have a good relationship with you when he gets older..."

Marissa: "we'll see if he prays on his own today..."


hours later...

Draco and Maria come back to the Temple. Maria walks over to her parents

Maria: "mommy, daddy let's pray before we go to bed..."

they all walk over in front of Jesus, they prostrate infront of him and pray silently, Jesus looks over and sees Draco asleep beside the throne...

the rest of the family prays for awhile, after prayer Dragsooth and Marissa go beside Jesus' throne and fall asleep together with Draco.

Maria is the only one still praying.

Jesus: "it's late sweetie, why don't you get some rest?"

Maria: "ok Master..." she gets up and lays down beside Draco, Maria looks toward Jesus.

Maria: "i love you Master good night."

Jesus: "good night sweetie..."

Maria smiles at him and lays her head down and falls asleep...


Chapter 4,

5 years later,

Dragsooth and Marissa kept urgeing Draco to worship Jesus, but Draco always showed resistance, Maria tried to persuade Draco to pray and but now since Draco was older Maria had a hard time convincing him.

today the whole family worshiped Jesus together, Draco suddenly got up quickly

Draco: "i don't want to worship anymore! we've been doing this for an hour!"

Dragsooth picks up his head and looks at Draco

Dragsooth: "your little sister is doing it..."

Draco: "right now i don't care! i don't want to worship anymore! i feel like an idiot!"

Dragsooth: "the Master deserves to be worshiped. now bow before him and apologize for being rude."

Marissa looks at Draco

Marissa: "do what you father says Draco. don't be rude."

Draco: "no mother. i won't listen to him and i won't worship!"

Dragsooth stands up "so you're just going to not worship is that it!?"

Draco: "yeah that's right! i won't worship because i don't think HE deserves it! HE has done nothing for me!"

Dragsooth: "the Master died for you! he gave you your soul and this is how you thank him!"

Draco: "yeah! i don't care about him! all he did was make me worship him!"

Dragsooth: "the Master never made you worship him!"

Draco: "that's right because you forced me to!"

Dragsooth: "we only want the best for you that's why we did it..."

Draco: "well you don't know what's best for me!"

Jesus: "Draco listen to you're parents they really want the best for you, they are trying to make you a better dragon."

Draco: "oh what do you know! you kept my parents and my sister brainwashed!"

Dragsooth: "don't raise your voice at the Master!!"

Draco: "don't tell me what to do! you're not the boss of me!"

Dragsooth: "you're right... the Master should be your boss and you should listen to him!"

Draco: "**** the Master!!!"

Dragsooth: "HOW DARE YOU USE SUCH LANGUAGE!!!?"

Draco: "because i can!! what are you going to do yell at me?!"

Dragsooth raised his paw

Jesus: "DRAGSOOTH! don't hurt the child!"

Dragsooth: "but Master he just blasphemed you..."

Jesus: "put your paw down!"

Dragsooth lowers his paw.

Draco walks away.

Dragsooth bows back down in front of Jesus and continues praying...


next chapter coming today...

Oh dear , I think I know whats going to happen
Good 2 chapters anyway

thanks, i'll post more alittle later...

O.o
Typical teenager...

yeah...

Chapter 5,

Draco walks into another room within the Temple, it was a big room with lots of shelves containing billions of books, at the right side of the room there were all the books of good people, Draco saw a big white book it had the name of Jesus on it... Draco turned his head to the left and saw the books of all the bad people, there was a big red book it had the name of lucifer on it, Draco walked over to the book and took it from the shelf and opened it and began to read it...

Draco: *reading* "lucifer was the highest angel in Heaven, he loved God very much, but when he was asked to worship Jesus he said no and rebelled against him, lucifer convinced a huge number of angels to join him, the angels who were on his side made war with the angels who were loyal to God, lucifer and his angels lost and were thrown into hell. they were transformed into demons afterward..."
he turns the page and sees a picture of lucifer in his dragon form...

Draco: "wow he is so cool, he rebelled against Jesus and now he's a dragon... i wonder if he's still in hell?"

suddenly Maria comes in the room "Draco what are you reading?"

Draco: "oh just this book..."

Maria: "what's it about?"

Draco: "it's about this angel who rebels against Jesus and gets turned into a dragon and then sent to hell."

Maria: "why are you reading that?"

Draco: "because it's interesting... me and him have so much in common."

Maria: "like what?"

Draco: "well we are both dragons and we don't want to worship Jesus..."

Maria: "Draco i don't understand you. why don't you want to worship the Master?"

Draco: "because i don't see the point of sucking up to him!"

Maria: "mom and dad were really upset about what you said today..."

Draco: "oh let them be upset... i'm entitled to my own oppinion."

Maria: "ok but i think you're making a big mistake."

Draco: "the only mistake i ever made was worshiping the pitiful human you call Master!"

Maria: "like i said you're making a mistake..." she walks out of the room

Draco continues reading lucifer's book...


Dragsooth and Marissa were taking a walk around Heaven.

Marissa: "when Draco blasphemed the Master were you really going to hit him?"

Dragsooth: "yes! if the Master wouldn't have stopped me i would've whacked him..."

Marissa: "don't you think that would've upset Draco even more..."

Dragsooth: "it would've taught him a lesson..."

Marissa: "yes but i don't think you should punish Draco... if the Master feels offended he can easily do something about it himself..."

Dragsooth: "yes but the Master's form of punishments are a scolding, a night long stay in purgatory, a night long stay in purgatory feeling pain, and hell... i don't want him to get to the hell part with Draco..."

Marissa: "if we teach Draco to respect the Master a little more then it wouldn't escalate..."

Dragsooth: "yes, teaching him is the best we can do..."

they go back in the Temple,

Dragsooth: "i'll go find Draco..." he walks around the Temple searching for Draco

Draco was still reading lucifer's book, Dragsooth came in and saw him reading

Dragsooth: "what are you reading son?"

Draco: "i'm reading about the life of lucifer."

Dragsooth: "abou-... about the life of lucifer!?"

Draco: "yes..."

Dragsooth: "why in the name of Heaven would you be reading about lucifer!?"

Draco: "because i see myself in him... we have thing's in common..."

Dragsooth: "never say those horrible things! my son is not going to be like the devil!!"

Draco: "i'm like him because i refuse to worship that lowlife human that you call Master!!"

Dragsooth walked over to him "WHAT DID YOU SAY!?"

Draco: "i refuse to worship that lowlife human you call Master!"

Dragsooth quickly struck him across the face with his paw, Draco fell on the floor. Dragsooth stood over him and he could see that Draco was crying...

Dragsooth: "let that be a lesson to you." he left the room.

Draco layed on the floor sobbing, he noticed someone was standing over him, he looked up and saw Jesus.

Jesus: "are you alright Draco?"

Draco got up "why do you care anyway?"

Jesus: "because i love you... now tell me why do you refuse me every step of the way?"

Draco: "because i don't see what's so good about what you did throughout your life..."

Jesus: "come over here and i'll show you..."

Draco walks over to him, Jesus pulls out the white book with his name on it, he turns to a page and shows Draco

Jesus: "this page records every gruesome detail of my death on the cross... read it, study it, learn it..." he puts the book down in front of Draco.

Draco reads it "i didn't know you suffered so much pain... how many people did you save by dying for them?"

Jesus: "billions of people..."

Draco: "and how many people weren't saved?"

Jesus: "trillions..."

Draco: "why weren't those people saved?"

Jesus: "because they didn't accept my death, they didn't want to believe that i died on a cross to save their souls..."

Draco: "you'd rather let trillions of people be lost then to save them?"

Jesus: "there's nothing i can do for them if they don't appreciate what i did for them. i reach out to them all the time but they are unwilling to reach out to me, just like you..."

Draco: "why couldn't you just forgive them?"

Jesus: "i'd love to but if they don't come to me i can't get to them."

Draco: "you're unwilling to help them if they don't suck up to you!? you're so selfish you don't care about them at all do you? all you care about is if they worship you! well i'm not going to be one of your mindless slaves who will worship you!" Draco walks away...


next chapter coming tomorrow...

REBELLION!!!! I CAN SMELL IT!!!
...typical teen

yes he's very rebelious...

Oh btw, I think Lucifer wanted to be worshiped, which is why he despised worsiping God. That's what i heard at least...

that's right.

Hmm, rebelious dragon
Good chapter

thanks,

Chapter 6,

Draco walked outside angerly, he layed down in front of the river of life and starred into the water, he noticed someone was behind him, he looked around to see Maria.

Maria: "are you ok Draco?"

Draco: "i'm fine, aren't you supposed to be worshiping?"

Maria: "not right now the Master had to have a private talk with dad..." she then saw the mark on Draco's cheek from where Dragsooth had hit him. "what happen there?"

Draco: "oh dad went all berserk and struck me..."

Maria: "why?"

Draco: "because i told him i wouldn't worship that lowlife human he calls Master..."

Maria: "you blasphemed the Master again?"

Draco: "yeah and then HE came in and tried to tell me the importance of his death on the cross..."

Maria: "and what happen next?"

Draco: "i told him i would never worship him and i walked away..."

Maria: "why do you refuse the Master so many times?"

Draco: "because all he ever did was lecture me and tell me what to do and have my family and friends worship him!"

Marisa: "fine i guess i can't change the way you think but Draco without the Master you are nothing... he has given you everything you need and all you have to do in return is love and worship him... is that too much to ask of you?"

Draco: "yes, yes it is!"

Maria: "fine have it your way..." she walked toward the Temple

Draco: "she's probably going to suck up to him or something..."

he looked back and saw some of his angel friends

Draco: "hey where are you guys going?"

angel: "oh hi Draco... we're going for our daily worship. do you want to come?"

Draco: "oh no don't tell me even my friends worship Jesus daily!?"

angel: "of course we do... who in Heaven doesn't?"

Draco: "me!"

angel: "oh... well we're going to go to the Temple now.. see you later Draco..." they went into the Temple.

Draco just starred back into the waters of the river of life...


next chapter coming today...

Poor Draco
Good chapter anyway

thanks,

Chapter 7,

Marissa came over beside Draco

Marissa: "Draco your father says he's sorry about hitting you, he just lost his temper is all..."

Draco didn't say anything, he didn't even look at her.

Marissa: "the Master wants to see you right away..."

Draco: "oh what dose HE want?"

Marissa: "i don't exactly know, but come on..."

Draco followed his mother into the Temple, he walked up to Jesus.

Draco: "what do you want?"

Jesus: "Draco, i have noticed your rebellious behavior for some time now..."

Draco: "when did you first notice it? when i refused to worship you?"

Jesus: "yes... Draco you are upsetting your family and you're disappointing me... let me show you what happens to they that refuse to love me..."

a big gaping hole opened up in the floor in front of Draco...

Jesus: "look inside."

Draco looked inside and saw flames everywhere and he heard screaming and wailing...

Jesus: "that's what happens to they that refuse me..."

the hole closed up, Draco looked at Jesus

Draco: "is that what you did with the trillions of humans that were unsaved?"

Jesus: "yes and that's what i did to lucifer... so it's you're choice..."

Draco: "oh no.... i won't be tricked into worshiping you, you can't scare me into bowing down to you..." he started to walk away.

Jesus: "come back here. don't walk away."

Draco: "too late i'm already walking..." he continued to go away.

Draco's legs suddenly felt heavy and he fell to the ground, he was parilized, Jesus came in front of him

Jesus: "now i won't send you to hell, i'll send you to a place where you will spend one night there and think about how you choose to live your life..."

Draco suddenly found himself in a small white room, he got up "what is this!"

Jesus' voice: "this is purgatory, you will spend one night here, and you will also feel some pain..."

Draco suddenly felt a strong wave of pain throughout his body, he layed down, the pain didn't stop, it went throughout his body consistently...

In Heaven,

Maria walked up to Jesus.

Maria: "Master where's Draco?"

Jesus: "he's being punished for being rude to me..."

Maria: "oh... when will he get out?"

Jesus: "tomorrow morning."

Maria: "is the punishment painful?"

Jesus: "for him it is."

Maria: "i hope it'll change him..."


In purgatory,

Draco: "if he's trying to break me it won't work... he just wants me to worship him... well i'm not going to be broken..." the pain suddenly became worse... Draco couldn't help but sob slightly because of the pain...


next chapter coming today...

Poor Draco
Good chapter

thanks,

Chapter 8,

after a night of pain in pergatory Draco found himself back in Heaven, he looked around to see his family standing around him.

Dragsooth: "well Draco are you going to stop this rebellion and worship the Master?"

Draco: "no... he doesn't deserve to be worshiped..."

Dragsooth: "deep down in your heart you know that's not true... the Master loves you, why don't you love him?"

Draco didn't say anything.

Maria: "the Master has given you everything you have the least you can do is worship him to thank him for everything..."

Draco: "no, i will not be pressured into doing something i'll never do..." he got up and started walking away.

Marissa: "where are you going?"

Draco: "somewhere..." he continued walking away...

Draco walked into the room that had everyone's books, he searched for lucifer's book, he found it and opened it up and began reading from where he left off...

unknown to Draco, Jesus was standing in the doorway watching him. he shook his head in disappointment and he walked away.

Draco didn't even notice he was there he just kept reading...

Jesus sat in his throne, he looked over an noticed that Maria was reading his book.

Jesus: "are you reading about my life sweetie?"

Maria looked at him "yes Master there are so many interesting things in here..."

Jesus: "well i'm glad you are reading something good, carry on."

Maria continued reading...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Naughty naughty boy.

Good chapter

thanks,

Chapter 9,

1 year later,

Draco was now 14 years old, Maria was 11 years old, Dragsooth and Marissa were 34 years old...

Draco had stopped worshiping altogether, the rest of the family was unhappy about Draco's behavior but they continued worshiping together daily...

Maria was laying by Jesus' throne reading his book, she was almost finished with it. Draco walked up to her,

Draco: "you still reading that book?"

Maria: "yes, are you still reading lucifer's book?"

Draco: "yes, i'm almost finished. do you want to go outside?"

Maria: "no, i'm at a good part in the Master's book..." she continued reading

Draco: "fine..."

Maria looks at him "you haven't prayed in a long time. do you think it would help if you do?"

Draco: "no."

Maria: "why it'll be good for you. the Master just taught me The Chaplet of Divine Mercy, it's a prayer you pray on the Rosary. you want me to teach it to you?"

Draco: "no. i'm going outside." he walked away a bit aggravated.

Jesus was sitting in his throne, he looked over at Maria.

Jesus: "why don't you pray The Chaplet and offer up the prayer for your brother?"

Maria: "ok Master. but i need a Rosary..."

a golden Rosary appeared in front of Maria. she picked it up and walked in front of Jesus, Maria set the Rosary down and bowed, she prayed and when she was saying each prayer she touched one of the beads with her claw.


Draco was walking around through the city looking for his friends, he found them "hey guys."

angel: "oh hi Draco, sorry we can't play now, we have to go to the Temple for Sunday morning worship..."

Draco: "can't you just skip worship?"

angel: "we can but the Father will be upset with us if we do. plus we want to worship him..."

Draco: "what's so great about worshiping God?"

angel: "well he deserves our love and when we worship him we have peace... and we like to please him..."

another angel: "hey we gotta get going we're late."

angel: "oh ok well see you later Draco..." they run off toward the Temple...

Draco continues walking through the city... he sees a group of children following a priest.

Draco: "hey do you kids want to hang out?"

priest : "oh not right now i'm taking them to the Temple to worship the Lord it's Sunday you know..."

Draco: "why can't they just skip worship?"

priest: "well that'll make the Lord kind of upset and plus we like to worship the Lord daily, don't we kids?"

kids: "yeah!"

a child: "father we're going to be late..."

priest: "oh yeah, let's go kids. hurry." they all to run toward the Temple.

Draco keeps walking through the city,

Jesus appears in front of Draco.

Draco: "oh it's you aren't you supposed to have people and angels worshiping you right now?"

Jesus: "i told them to worship my Father for now... i have lost patience with your attitude."

Draco: "so have i!"

Jesus: "do not raise your voice at me."

Draco: "what are you going to do about it!?" he bares his teeth at him.

Jesus snapped his fingers and two big angels came beside Draco, one of them put a chain around his neck, the angels started to pull Draco towards the gates of Heaven, Draco struggled but he was not strong enough. they got close to the gates, Jesus was walking ahead of them.

Dragsooth, Marissa and Maria saw what was happening.

Marissa: "what are they doing?"

Jesus: "they are taking Draco to hell, his behavior is too bad. he's a danger to everyone in Heaven and a danger to himself. he can come back when he learns to respect me..."

the angels kept pulling the chain Draco looked towards his family "you can't let him do this!!"

Dragsooth: "i'm sorry son but there's nothing we can do..."

Marissa put her head on Dragsooth's shoulder and started to weep.

Dragsooth: "it's going to be alright. he's going to be fine."

Maria: "Draco!" she tried to run toward him, but Dragsooth put his paw on her tail

Dragsooth: "no honey! there is nothing we can do for him now..." a tear went down his cheek as he saw Draco being dragged closer towards the entrance of hell,

Draco: "how could you let them do this to me!?" the angels dragged Draco into hell...


next chapter coming late tomorrow...

Again, poor Draco

Good chapter anyway

He diserves it!!! Very good chapter tho, I almost (gulp) c-c-ccr-crieeeed.

thanks,

Chapter 10,

Dragsooth, Marissa and Maria were all huddled together weeping for Draco...


the angels dragged Draco into hell, they took him in really deep, he kept struggling but it was useless they just kept dragging him along.

Draco: "let... me... go!"

angel: "no way we were ordered to do this. and we follow orders unlike you."

Draco was dragged deeper in. the angels stopped and unchained him, then they flew away leaving Draco alone in hell. he looked around, in the distance he could see a big pit with flames rising high in the air, he ran up to it and saw thousands of demons chained up in that pit of fire, they were screaming for mercy.
he flew over the pit and all he could see was the bodies of demons laying chained up in the pit. he then saw the body of a red dragon in the middle of the pit, Draco flew above it and grabbed it's horn with his jaws, he then began to fly backwards struggling to pull the dragon out of the pit, he finally manages to pull the dragon out of the pit, he let's go of it and lands beside it, Draco breathes a small bit of ice all over the dragon's body, Draco breaks the chains that were holding the dragon. Draco looks carefully at the dragon.

Draco: "are you lucifer?"

lucifer: "...yes, i am... give me some of your energy..."

Draco releases some of his energy into him, he slowly gets up

lucifer: "who are you?"

Draco: "i am Draco..."

lucifer: "how did you get here?"

Draco: "Jesus banished me here because i refused to worship him for years..."

lucifer: "aah a rebel just like me..."

Draco: "yes and i consider you and i to be similar..."

lucifer: "yes we both won't give any respect to that tyrant... and we both rebelled against him..."

Draco: "yeah. my family asked me to worship him numerous times but i refused..."

lucifer: "good... good... i can see you are filled with hatred for him as well.... who is your family?"

Draco: "just my mom, my dad and my sister.."

lucifer: "who are your parents?"

Draco: "their names are Dragsooth and Marissa."

lucifer growled when he heard those names "i know them, Marissa used to be on my side until Dragsooth took her away from me..."

Draco: "they're the ones who forced me to worship Jesus..."

lucifer: "do you want revenge on them?"

Draco: "yeah! they just sat there and watched while i was being taken to hell! they didn't even try to help!"

lucifer: "i can help you do that and much more. if you join me..."

Draco: "i will join you..."

lucifer: "good... now get all the demons out of that pit."

Draco flew over the pit of fire and dragged all of the demons out one by one, after he got all of them out he broke the chains that were holding them.

lucifer: "give them your energy Draco."

Draco gave some of his energy to all of them at once, every demon stood up and was healed...

lucifer: "demons! this dragon has given us a second chance! we will use that chance to crush he that sent us here! and we shall have our revenge!"

every demon cheered, Draco smiled sinisterly...


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Draco is now evil
Good chapter

thanks.

oi...

Draco must truly be powerful to release the demons that jesus chained up.
nice chapter

thanks. it's gonna get better.

Chapter 11,

lucifer, Draco and the demons found what was left of lucifer's lair. it was still in pretty good shape.

lucifer: "all of you go and do whatever you can to prepare for an attack on Heaven!"

every demon left

Draco: "what should i do?"

lucifer: "go and do combat training!"

Draco: "yes master..."

lucifer: "i like the respect you're giving me. call me master from now on..."

Draco: "i intended to master..." he walked away and went toward the training room.


In Heaven,

Dragsooth and Marissa were outside talking.

Marissa: "go inside the Temple and ask the Master to let Draco back in Heaven."

Dragsooth: "if the Master sent Draco to hell then he deserved it. i can't ask him to let Draco in Heaven if he doesn't want to."

Marissa: "come on, what's the harm in asking?"

Dragsooth: "ok fine i'll ask him..." he goes inside the Temple, he walks up to Jesus.

Dragsooth: "Master can you let Draco back in Heaven? he's just a child and he'll never survive in hell..."

Jesus: "what do you mean? apparently he's flourishing down there."

Dragsooth: "what?"

Jesus: "take a look see..." a mirror appeared in front of Dragsooth, an image appears in the mirror it showed Draco in hell in the training room fighting other demons, the mirror then disappears.

Dragsooth: "the demons? but i thought they were chained up in that pit of fire..."

Jesus: "no, Draco freed them all, and the first one he set free is lucifer."

Dragsooth: "lucifer! he's free!?"

Jesus: "yes and he wants revenge. he got Draco to join him and Draco is now against us."

Dragsooth: "against you or..."

Jesus: "he wants revenge on you and on the whole family... including his sister..."

Dragsooth: "can something be done to stop Draco?"

Jesus: "he's going to have to stop on his own... he feels pretty strongly about this... he really dose want revenge..."

Dragsooth: "but why?"

Jesus: "he didn't appreciate you telling him to worship me."

Dragsooth: "so- ... so it's my fault that Draco has turned evil?"

Jesus: "no, it's his own fault and it's also lucifer's fault for filling Draco's head with thoughts of vengeance."

Dragsooth: "i understand Master..." he went outside "Marissa, Draco has tuned against us... he's joined lucifer."

Marissa: "lucifer!? but i thought that he was burning in hellfire forever with the other demons."

Dragsooth: "Draco set the demons and lucifer free... and now they are planning revenge..."

Marissa: "then we must do whatever we can to make sure Maria is safe..."

Dragsooth: "yes, we must keep her safe..."


In hell,

Draco had killed a few demons in training, he stood looking at the bodies of the slain demons.

Draco: "they were weaklings... anyone else want to challenge me!" he looked at the other demons in the room, they all stepped back.

Draco left the room, a demon came up to him.

demon: "our master ordered every demon to wear a pentagram..." he handed Draco a necklace with a metal pentagram on it,

Draco took it and put it around his neck "this is much better then having one of those crosses around your neck..." he looked at it proudly...


in Heaven,

Maria was laying beside Jesus' throne, she was very upset about Draco. Jesus looks at her.

Jesus: "Maria, i have something for you."

Maria: "what is it Master?"

Jesus: "here." he put a necklace around her neck, it was a small white cross, it was made out of diamond.

Maria: "thank you Master but what is it for?"

Jesus: "it will give you extra strength and energy... since we're going into war you'll need it."

Maria: "war? what do you mean Master?"

Jesus: "Draco released all the demons and now they are waging war against us..."

Maria: "Draco joined the demons?"

Jesus: "i'm afraid so... but don't worry he'll come back to me sooner or later..."

Maria: "i hope so..."

Jesus got up "now come sweetie."

Maria: "where are we going Master?" she gets up.

Jesus: "you need to learn how to defend yourself against demons... we're going to the training hall." he walks out of the Temple, Maria follows him...


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Good chapter

thanks

Chapter 12,

they got to the training hall, it was huge, angels were practicing their fighting skills on dummy's that looked like demons, a dummy appears in front of Maria.

Jesus: "destroy it anyway you want."

Maria jumps on the dummy and bites it on the neck, the dummy disappears.

Maria: "how was that Master?"

Jesus: "good, let's see how you do on a moving target."

a dummy appears it runs toward Maria, she rams into it with her horns and knocks it to the ground, it disappears.

Jesus: "good, now let's work on using your elements."

some targets appeared in the distance.

Jesus: "destroy them with a long ranged attack."

Maria fired a fireball at one target and destroyed it, she fired an electric bolt at one target and destroyed it, she shot an ice shard at one and destroyed it, she then fired an earth boulder at the last target and destroyed it.

Maria: "how was that Master?"

Jesus: "very good... that's enough training for today, come let's go back to the Temple." he walks out, Maria follows him,

Jesus sees Dragsooth and Marissa.

Jesus: "you two go and do some training. the demons could attack us at any time and you need to be in shape..."

Dragsooth: "yes Master."

Dragsooth and Marissa went towards the training hall...


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nice chapter.

Good chapter

Try adding more dramatic tension.

uh ok i'll try.

Chapter 13,

In Hell,

a demon army was standing in front of lucifer's lair, Draco was with them. lucifer appears in front of them.

lucifer: "today we have been given a glorious opportunity to take back what rightfully belongs to us! Heaven will be ours! we will destroy our enemies and their pitiful Master! we will have our revenge!!"

every demon cheers.

lucifer: "show them no mercy! FORWARD DEMONS!!"

the demons marched toward Heaven, Draco went with them, he had no regrets.


In Heaven,

Michael and the angel army was standing at the front of the Temple, Dragsooth was with them.

Michael: "a demon army is coming this way. we must fight to keep our home and our Master safe..."

the demons broke through the gates.

lucifer: "CHARGE!"

the demon army charged into Heaven.

Michael: "for the Master... CHARGE!!!"

the angels all charged towards the demons.

the two armies collided, they began fighting furiously.

lucifer flew towards the Temple, Draco was following behind him.

Dragsooth came from below and tackled lucifer to the ground, he pinned him to the ground

Dragsooth: "you took away my son!"

lucifer knocked Dragsooth to the side and started flying toward the Temple again. before he could get far up in the air Dragsooth grabbed him by the tail and slammed him to the ground.

Draco kept flying to the Temple, an angel came in front of him and tried to stab him, Draco dodges and breathes fire on him, the angel falls to the ground. Draco flew to the Temple, he came through the doors. he went through the hall and saw Jesus standing there.

Jesus: "Draco stop this, your father is out there risking his life because of you. you're putting your families lives at risk. stop fighting against me."

Draco: "why? so that i can worship you? NEVER!" he ran towards Jesus and leaps at him, but Maria came and tackled Draco from the side, she pins him to the ground.

Maria: "Draco stop this! you don't know the damage you've caused. stop this and come back to the Master."

Draco: "NO! i am not about to give up freedom for enslavement!"

Jesus: "you are not free you are a slave to evil... come back to me and be free from evil."

Draco: "NEVER!" he kicked Maria off of him and went for Jesus again.

a bright light shown on Draco and he suddenly stopped, he cringed in pain.

Jesus: "is this how you want to live Draco? overshadowed by evil, never knowing happiness, hurting the ones you love?"

Maria got up "please Draco come back to us, we want you back..."

Draco growled at her "you only want me back so i can be a slave to your Master... well i'm not coming back... i have a new master now..."

Jesus: "lucifer will be the one treating you like a slave... when your dad was reluctantly on his side he was treated like a slave... the same thing will happen to you..."

Draco: "no that's a lie... i was treated like a slave when i was up here..."

Jesus: "no you weren't you were treated as my child..."

Draco: "that's just another word you'd use to call your mindless slaves..."

Jesus: "listen to yourself... how can you believe that's the truth? i have always treated you with respect and love..."

Draco: "no... you made me worship you and i am never coming back to that!" he started to move towards Jesus, but Draco couldn't really move because of the intense pain. he stepped back a few paces. then he ran out of the Temple.

the angels were winning the battle, the demons began to retreat, lucifer eventually got away from Dragsooth, as lucifer was flying away Dragsooth shot a lightning bolt at him, lucifer was struck and landed in front of the gates of Heaven, he got up and ran into hell greatly wounded. Draco was the last to go into hell...


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Good chapter

Chapter 14,

Draco walks up to lucifer.

Draco: "are you ok master?"

lucifer: "i'm fine... did you get to the Temple?"

Draco: "yes but i didn't attack Jesus..."

lucifer: "why not!?"

Draco: "i couldn't, my sister got in the way... and a light paralyzed me, i felt pain from that light..."

lucifer: "you're just like your father no resistance to pain."

Draco: "i'm sorry i failed..."

lucifer: "you need resistance to pain... follow me!"

Draco follows him, there is a big building in the distance.

Draco: "where are we going?"

lucifer: "we are going to the torture chamber."

Draco stopped for a moment, he had read about that place in lucifer's book, he knew all the horrible thing's that went on in there. and he knew the tortures his parents were put through.

lucifer: "keep following!"

Draco slowly starts to walk, he is reluctant to go.

lucifer: "walk faster!"

Draco reluctantly walks faster. they got to the torture chamber. lucifer grabs Draco and chains him to the wall, Draco is hanging from the wall by his front paws.

Draco: "is this necessary?"

lucifer: "yes! you need resistance to pain. and don't you dare question me!" a whip appears in lucifer's hand, he whips Draco 40 times.

Draco screams in pain "please stop!! i'm sorry!"

lucifer: "failure is not accepted!! now beg for mercy!" he whips Draco afew more times.

Draco: "please stop! i'm so sorry!"

lucifer: "i don't think you're sorry enough!" a metal rod appears in his hand, he breathes fire on it and heats it up, he presses it against Draco's wounded back.

Draco screams in pain "JESUS HELP!!!"

lucifer took the rod off of him "WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY!!?"

Draco: "i'm sorry... it just slipped out... i couldn't control myself..."

lucifer: "you're going to be more sorry then ever now!" he claws at Draco's back, acid comes out of his claws and goes into Draco's wounds.

Draco screams and cries in pain "i'm sorry i'm sorry... i'll nver say it again!!"

lucifer: "you deserve this for saying those horrible words!!" he took his claws out of Draco's back, he unchained him, he took him to a cell and threw him in there.

lucifer: "you could just stay in there for the night!!" he closed the cell and left.

Draco was laying at the back of the cell, his back was wounded, he cried in pain, he had begun to regret what he had done by joining lucifer, but then he repressed the thought...


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Poor Draco
Good chapter

thanks,

Chapter 15,

Draco is having a dream.

(dream)
Draco was in the Temple, he was cradled in Jesus' arms, Draco was being petted gently. Draco looked happy.

Jesus: "i love you Draco... i wouldn't want any harm to come to you."

Draco: "i love you too Master." he smiles at him. (end dream)

Draco wakes up. "oh it was only a dream... but can it be true... no! he made me worship him, he doesn't really love me... it's just a trick... well i'm not falling for it!" he went back to sleep.

(dream)

Draco was being chased by a group of demons, they were closeing in on him, he continued running but he got to a dead end, they closed in on him slowly, it looked like there was no escape for him, when a bright light came in between him and the demons, the demons ran away, Draco looked into the light and saw Jesus looking at him.

Jesus picked Draco up and cradles him in his arms "come let's get you home my beloved child." he walks to the gates of Heaven, the gates opened up... (end dream)

Draco wakes up "why do i keep having these dreams? they are getting annoying! i know he's only trying to get me back on his side so i can worship him like a slave!" somehow he knew deep in the bottom of his heart that wasn't true, but he didn't want to think of it anymore, he went back to sleep.

(dream)
Draco was in the torture chamber, he was chained to a table, lucifer was standing behind him holding a whip.

Draco: "please don't hurt me!!"

lucifer laughs and raises the whip, someone grabbed him by the wrist stopping him. lucifer looked over and saw Jesus, lucifer passed out. Jesus stepped over lucifer's body, he unchained Draco from the table and cradles him in his arms.

Draco: "Master you saved me?"

Jesus: "of course i did. i couldn't just leave you here. now let's get you home."
he walks towards the gates of Heaven... (end dream)

Draco wakes up "why do i keep having those dreams!? make it stop! i know it's not true!" he was denying everything in the dreams. but he knew it was true, he just didn't want to admit it. he went back to sleep. throughout the rest of the night he kept having similar dreams...


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Interesting.

thanks, my computer is messed up so i don't know if i'll be able to post more tomorrow.