darkSpyro

OK, I don't rly know where to put this, so im gona put it right here. Its a comic, but im just going to post the words and panel storyline, I wan't you guys/girls to be my publisher/editor, and tell me wut it needs.

Page 1
Panel one: Terrrador, Cyril, and Voltterr standing in a dark chamber, sitting around a glowing orb.
Panel two: :Terrador: Cyril, we can't stop this, I thought Ciltra was dead, crushed by rocks.
:Cyril: I'm afraid your right, Terrador. Ciltra will wan't her revenge*holds head down*
Panel 3/4: Voltter: We must retreat to the formost safest bottom of the- :Cyril:*raises head* Humphem.
:Voltter: Sorry, we must take all we can to the bottom of the Dragon Temple, and the Under Ground City.
Panel 5: :Terrador: Agreed, Ciltra could be escaping now. It's best we get moving.
Panel 6: *Terrador looks up as a young scout dragon flys into presence*

Page 2
Panel 1: :Cyril: Demeatreus...
Panel 2: :Terrador: Have you found anything?
Panel 3: Demeatrus: I bring news, I must tell you, Spyro and Cynder cannot be found*holds head down in sorrow*
Panel 4;(huge panel) All three: WHAT???!!!!

Page 3
Panel 1: Demeatreus: Are you ready for the rage ment to be cast on the land?
Panel 2: Terrador: Yes,*hope/determination in eyes: I'll take Demeatreus, Asrod, and Dreacot with me. Cyril, go and round up the children and the wives.
Voltter, gather the army moles and the young scout dragons. We'll take them back with us to the Temple.
Panel3(huge panel again) *All fly out the crack in wall*

Page4(huge panels only 2)
Panel 1(in the coner of page) Terrador: Good-bye, spyro and cynder.
Panel 2(takes up rest of page) Terrador: Farewell...

END OF PART ONE.

Does it intrest you?
Tell me wut it needs
I thought of doing a 3D thing, but forget it.
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