darkSpyro

Yes, I did get the idea from Malefor's childhood.

Chapter one

Everything was dark. I stared into the ebony black blurs of the darkness. I suddenly heard smashing and fluttering. I could feel a smooth shell under my claws. The smashing stopped. I heard footsteps rushing towards me. I then heard someone lift me up. A mysterious dark shadow. I closed my eyes and drooped down like a wilting flower. They was a crash and a bang, I woke up. I looked about. Still same old darkness. I wanted to get out of the darkness, away from it. I heat-butted the smooth cage. The cage smashed. I poked my puny and petite head, free from the chains. I saw the world. The horrible world. It was a dusty infested wasteland along with strange furry creatures. A purple dragon stood in front of me, with a nasty smirk on his face.
"The hatchling, our future, it's finally hatched," Hissed the dragon, removing the horrible smirk on his face. One of the funny furry creatures scampered towards him, as a bigger creature pushed him in place.
"Master," Spluttered the creature. I took a glance. The purple dragon looked down onto the small and puny creature. The purple dragon did a face, the little creature backed away uncomfortable.
"Ignitus, He tells us that the purple dragon is..." The little creature stopped.
"Dead?" The purple dragon smirked.
"No! Master Malefor! The dragon is still alive," The creature spluttered once more. Master Malefor grabbed the creature by it's neck and hurled it far into the ground. It let out a nasty bubble and cough and lay down dead. I let out a faint scream as I climbed out of the egg shell to see my view better.
"Our answer to the death of the purple dragon is that dragon," He snarled, pointing a finger of his sharp angled claws at myself. I yelped, helpless I was.

hmm, interesting start

Chapter two

That was weeks ago. Suddenly one of the creatures took hold of myself.
"You lousy apes! You should have done this hours ago!" Shouted Malefor in the distance. The ape rushed towards in the empty space, I saw a chain. For me. I yelled and struggled, trying to escape the arms of the ape. The ape was too strong. The ape trapped me in a chains, I kicked, yelled and screamed. Nothing happened. Another ape came over and zapped me with a strange staff. The bolt hit me, I suddenly felt bigger and stronger. I could feel power within my veins, flowing. I stood up. Everything looked small.
I was unsure what to do, I followed what Malefor told me to do anyway...

Chapter three

Thirteen years later...

I took a deep breathe and let out a faint and soft howl. My long, horrid claws smashing onto the shadow infested concrete of Warfang, the dragon city. All was silent, apart from a feeble humming from a old mole, who was on a rocking chair reading. I swifted my long and skinny head directly at the old mole. The mole didn't notice my tall black shadow corning her. Not the snarl, not the footsteps of my long claws. Nothing. I took hold of the mole with a nasty snarl. The mole let out a nasty bubble in return and a loud yell, struggling with it's little legs.
"Aye! You'll find yourself in awe if ya cway on likes dis, you norra normal dra-agaon!" The mole snapped, clawing my claws. It didn't hurt badly, but it was pain and pain can't be ignored. I let out another growl. The mole wasn't impressed.

Very interesting

pc!!!

Chapter three

"Ya risan evil rampart hogga, unfold your gnasty claws!" (I'm writing hwo the mole speaks in how you pronouce it, the mole is saying: You Risen evil rampart hogger, unfold your gnasty claws,) Yelled the mole. I slashed the mole with my claw. It took a last nasty bubble and died. I let go of it, it crashed to the ground as the blood spilled. I then rushed away. Master Malefor had told me to take no surrenders, I had to kill all the moles. Or else. Every other mole was hidden inside scared, others protecting their young. I looked up at a bold black and white paneled house. I ran over to it bashing the door, the door soon fell down with a plump. A family of twenty moles stood their, as if they were going to jump out from their muddy black fur. Some were travelers with rucksacks and long coasts, along with four richly dressed moles. One was wearing a green blouse with lilac trousers, one in a lilac dress, one in brown trousers and a white shirt and one in black trousers with a blue shirt. The rest of them were maids, cooks or holding a bible chattering their teeth.
"Merci, Merci," A maid muttered, down on her knees.
"Sava ma merci, Bon que," The mole in the lilac frock howled. The rest howled along with them as a young baby mole in the hands of a maid cried out.
"Sava bein howlet, Sava ma merci per! Darlin ma cha dark!" Another mole cried out, holding the bible close to his head.

Hmm, french moles, Very interesting indeed
Please continue

hmmmm religous french moles very interesting indeed.

(I'll continue tormorrow)

Gah, why not? But short.

Chapter four

I unleashed my claw through the bible, clawing the mole.
"Non ala!" Yelled the mole. I whipped out a rope tied to my wing and squeezed the moles together in the rope. I then dragged them onto my back, to keep them as slaves.

poor moles... poor bible...

Oh dear
Good first part to chapter anyway

Chapter five

Smoke rushed from my huge tore wings as a leaped up into the orange sunset sky, back to The Master.
As soon as I landed, dust floated into the air. The moles choked.
"Istam la mol'e! Minsu Mistress, Ette Darki'plo," One called out to The master as he trotted slowly towards the moles. Another ape was then pushed towards the moles, a french ape.
"Sir?" The ape asked, The Master looked down on him.
"Get a move on, We need slaves!" Hissed The Master, The ape yelled and ran towards the moles faster.
"Do-do no speak engi-lish?" The ape asked, blushing. a mole stepped forward, but yelled as the rope was in front of him.
"I spea-ak, but non ful-ll," The mole groaned.

Good chapter. First part?

Chapter six

The rules. I had to kill all elder moles and keep huge familys as slaves. Suddenly a dark shadow corner me. The Master. He grunted.
"Cynder, fly towards that ice island, the purple dragon is there. Watch over him," He snarled.

Good chapter

Without any other world I flew off towards the old ice island. The trolls were helping master their. I flew over a purple blob. Watching him.

Nice part

this is kinda cool

Awsome!

The purple dragon turned and saw me, I quickly flew out of sight.

Short but interesting

I flew away, back to the land.

"Cynder! Why do early?" Hissed Malefor.

Again short but interesting

My heart pounded. I tried to think of the simplest thing.
"The purple dragon, he well..." I stopped. Malefor looked up.
"Gone? Have you failed? None of my minions fail! I want them to suceed in the misson! I want them to kill!, I want them to demolish!" Yelled Malefor. Cynder hissed.
"Well that's what I'm alive for you Master, for I am just yet a measly minion just to fight on your behalf. You spared my life. I have a reason for my life. I i'm for to fought the other, yet a slave to a Master. This is not my real form. I can't change anything,"

Good chapter

yes very good chapter.

Malefor just laughed. His laugh was like a snort. He quickly slurred his laugh with another snort and flipped his head back and laughed once more. He then slowly rotated his head back and let out another nasty growl.
"Exactly, I'm eternal, Remember? You can't live forever!"

Good part

I just ignored and stood up tall.
"Yes master," I hummed in tune. Time was ticking faster than ever I needed to kill the purple dragon. And fast.

Umm,good. But why so short?

Good part
Short though

I'm doing chapters in small parts. Heres a bit more:

"I'll go then," I annouced clear. Malefor smiled.

I cleared off into the distance. I suddenly saw the purple dragon. He seemed to have set free one of the guardians. I flew over him and quickly dived down and made a quick attack. But the guardian attacked me back. The purple dragon started flying away. I quickly tried to go after him but he was too fast. I fluttered over to the castle for where the purple dragon was traveling too. I was scared. But I needed to be tough.

Nice

(filler)

i like it.

Cool.

I hissed in the castle. I knew some apes were there now. I knew Spyro was killing them all. He would get to me soon.

Good part

I waited. I waited long to see the blur of the purple dragon. I longed to be my self. But Darkness controlled. Only my mind was sane, but my mind was hidden in the Darkness. There it was, the purple dragon.

Good part

The purple dragon looked up at me. I looked down on him. He was my enemy. He was my foe. I was his enemy. I was his foe.

Good part

I snarled and gave him a nasty glare. His big bulging eyes stared at me.

good part keep it up.

Good part

sweet

The fight began fast.
"My master returns," I said grabbing the gem my jaw. It jangled as if it was desperate to escape the sharp knifes of my jaw.
"Were to late!" He gasped in error. I turned to him and laughed.
"Hmm... Persistant little fella aren't you?"
He backed away and prepared to fight.
"This is where it really ends!"

"Bring it!"
"No mercy this time," I said remembering the moles.
"I can't watch this," His friend said turning. I took a short glance at him. Strange little fella I thought.

The fiesty little pain wacked me as I flamed him with buckets of fire.