Hi this is my first story I hope you like it!
Charcters
Spyro: A heroic purple dragon
Cynder: once a evil dragon turned good by Spyro, and now has a eye for him!
Sparx: Spyro's adoptive brother and best friend
Ignitus: The former fire guardian now the Chronichler!
Terrador: The guardian of earth
Cyril: The guardian of ice
Volteer: The guardian of electricity
Perock: A dark follower of Malefor...
Chapter 1: a message from Ignitus
Spyro and Sparx are slumbering away in there bed chambers in the Dragon City. It has been 3 months after the fall of Malefor/The Dark Master an all is well, but... there has been one problem, the earth has split apart! Creatures all other the world have been left stranded on these floating islands, and bridges are no good because they snap with the move ment of the islands, and people are starting to starve...
"Spyro wake up"Cynder said gentally"wake up"
"Snore"
"WAKE UP!"she yelled.
"I'm awake, I'm awake!"Spyro was in shock after that.
"Well it's about time sleepy head, I thought you would never come out of hibernation!"She giggled.
"Har har, very funny Cynder, why did you have to wake me up so early?"
"yer cynder I need my beauty sleep" Moaned Sparx, she had woken up him as well."Ha! It's not like you need it!" She chuckled.
"Oh thats well nice since wen have I been nasty to you?" He folded his arms."Oh just, every day" She smirked
"She's quite right Sparx, you arn't very nice to her you know, any way what is it you wanted us for?" He asked
"Oh Ignitus and the other guardians want to see us about some special mission" She replied
"Well come on what are you waiting for lets go!" Said Sparx, and they all flew off to the dragon temple where Ignitus was waiting for them.
I hope you like my first chapter! More comming soon!
darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Fandom > Fan Fiction > The legend of spyro: pulling the earth
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#1 Posted: 16:10:13 21/09/2009 | Topic Creator
|
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 19:12:11 22/09/2009 by Ice Dragoness
|
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#2 Posted: 16:11:04 21/09/2009
nice!
|
spyroGalNicoleX Yellow Sparx Gems: 1582 |
#3 Posted: 16:13:25 21/09/2009
Its good babes write the next chapter
---
''All I wanna be, is everything at once'' |
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#4 Posted: 17:54:29 21/09/2009
Interesting start
keep going
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#5 Posted: 19:02:52 21/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: Shut up Volteer!
Spyro, Cynder and Sparx flew to the dragon temple in the middle of the Dragon City. The temple was beautifully decorated with paintngs, sculptures and statues of famous dragons. The newest one was of Spyro and Cynder fighting Malefor but he is long gone, right?... When they arrived Ignitus and the other guardians were waiting for them. "Welcome young dragons, we have some news for you" Ignitus informed. "Yes some allfull, horrible, frightening, dreadfully horid news and some great, brilliant, amazing, lifesaving..."he was interuped by Cyril. "JUST SHUT UP VOLTEER!" Cyril yelled. "Why how rude, discraceful, dreadfully..." "BE QUIET!" They all yelled. Volteer for once was speachless."Thats a first" Sparx wispered to Spyro "He he he" they giggled. "Well back to that news, what is it Ignitus?"Asked Cynder. "As you know when you defeated Malefor the world split in to floating islands"Ignitus told them "Yes"Replied Spyro. "Well..." To be continued... I hope you liked that chapter I will try and do some more tomorrow! |
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 19:15:38 22/09/2009 by Ice Dragoness
|
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#6 Posted: 19:08:03 21/09/2009
SWEET!
|
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#7 Posted: 19:08:16 21/09/2009
nothing but a good old cliffhanger to end a chapter
This is good
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123 |
#8 Posted: 20:05:54 21/09/2009
yes really good continue...
|
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#9 Posted: 15:10:35 22/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry I cant do more today because im on my mobile phone and it dosent let me do speach marks. I think i will name my chapters, number 3 will be called Ignitus,s dream. (sorry cant do that aposterphie on my phone ether) I will continue tomorrow.
|
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123 |
#10 Posted: 19:39:37 22/09/2009
i can't wait...
|
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#11 Posted: 16:02:39 23/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter3: Ignitus's dream
"Well...oh, oh good heavens I feel rather faint...oohhh" CRASH! Ignitus had flopped on to the floor!"Get off me!" Said a faint voice from underneath him."Ignitus!" Yelled Spyro running over to him. "What is it, what is wrong with him?" Spyro said with a puzzled face. "I'll tell ya what is wrong, he is damn squashing me" Said a muffled voice from under neath him. "Oh Sparx" Cynder quickly pulled him out from underneath."Well it's about time he completely squished me, he needs to loose weight and take a bath what is wrong with that guy?" Moaned Sparx. Terrador rolled his eyes."As you know Ignitus is now the Chronichler and recives dreams when someone whants to contact him, so he passes out" Terrador explained. "Oh, I wonder who it is?" Asked Spyro. Mean while in Ignitus's dream... "Hello is anyone there?" Asked Ignitus. He was in the Celistial caves next to the giant hour glass."Yes i'm here" Said a shady voice from behind the hour glass."Who are you, and what do you want?" Asked Ignius, he was starting to get a little worried."I am Perock, leader of the dark followers of Malefor." He steaped out behind of the hour glass."I have come to warn you not to steap in our way, as we will resurrect Malefor from his cristal prison, and split up the earth for good! Whah ha har" He warned, and dissapered in to the darkness."Oh dear I must tell the others!" To be continued... I hope you liked that chapter! I might not be able to do some more tomorrow because I go to a club, but i'll try! |
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 16:26:35 23/09/2009 by Ice Dragoness
|
spyroGalNicoleX Yellow Sparx Gems: 1582 |
#12 Posted: 16:36:07 23/09/2009
Its really good babes carry on do another chapter when you can
---
''All I wanna be, is everything at once'' |
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#13 Posted: 17:25:53 23/09/2009
great!
|
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123 |
#14 Posted: 18:21:03 23/09/2009
keep going
|
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#15 Posted: 18:55:38 23/09/2009
Good chapter
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#16 Posted: 14:03:17 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: Some shocking news
"Oh...oh my head" Groaned Ignitus. "Ignitus!" Spyro yelled as he ran over to him"Ignitus are you ok? are you hurt? who was it?" Asked Spyro. "Don't worry young dragon I am quite fine" He assured him. "Ignitus these dreams must be bad for your health" Cyril informed. "Cyril I don't have health I am dead" He replied. "Oh yes I keep for getting that" He was now embarrased. "Well then Spyro, the person I saw, well heared was called perock he is a dark follower of Malefor, and plans to resurect him then split up the earth for good!" He told them. "What did he look like?" Spyro asked. "I don't know he appered as a shadow" Replied Ignitus. "Thats horrible! What can we do?" Cynder asked him. Ignitus shook his head."There's only one thing you can do, find the center cristals to pull the earth back together, and stop Perock" He told them. "Great come on lets risk our lives to fix the earth, THATS ALREADY FIXED!" Shouted Sparx sarcastickly."Sparx we would have sent you to fix the earth any way, creatures are stranded on floating island and are running out of food. We need to save them." Terrador informed. "Ok Ignitus where do we find these cristals?" Spyro asked. "I don't know, volteer will have found out tomrrow, and we will send you on the mission aswell" Ignitus told him. "Is this what you whanted to see us about?" "Yes, now then go rest up we have a big day tomorrow, and it's getting late" "Yes Ignitus" And they all flew back to there bed chambers. I hope you enjoyed that chapter more comming soon! The next one will be called under the stars. |
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#17 Posted: 19:12:33 25/09/2009
Good chapter
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#18 Posted: 20:47:56 25/09/2009
liking it!
|
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#19 Posted: 10:39:22 26/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5: Under the stars
Spyro, Cynder and Sparx have arrived back at their rooms getting ready to sleep, but something is trubbleing Spyro."Well good night guys. I'm going to bed, oh sorry Cynder I forgot you were a dragon-ESS! ha ha ha" teased Sparx."Oh very funny" Cynder said sarcastickly. "Night Sparx, oh and Cynder don't pay any attention to him" He told her. "Don't worry im not" She replied. Sparx flew in to his bed room and Cynder was about to go when Spyro stopped her."Cynder wait! Can I talk to you for a second?" Spyro asked her. "Sure what is it?" She asked. "Come on I will tell you on the ramparts" Spyro and Cynder flew to the ramparts, where the stars shine beautifuly over there heads."Cynder...there has been something I have been wanting to ask you. When we finished fighting Malefor you said..." He paused for a second."I love you...is this true do you love me?" He asked. "WHAT YOU HEARED THAT!" She shouted in disbelefe. "He you youngus keep it down out there" A naboring mole shouted. "Sorry sir" They yelled back. "Cynder yes I did hear that" "Oh well I thought you couldn't hear anything then so I said it...and yes I do love you..." She said embarastly. "Oh Cynder I love you to!" Spyro shouted. Cynder lent forward and kissed Spyro on the nose, then they flew off in to the night under the stars. "ahh young love, but NOISY young love" The mole muttered to himslef. I hope you liked that chapter! I will try and do some more soon! (It's not going to be all lovey duvy!) |
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123 |
#20 Posted: 11:17:27 26/09/2009
cool chapter.
|
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#21 Posted: 13:59:46 26/09/2009
Ah, now love is in the air
Great chapter
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#22 Posted: 15:48:03 05/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry I havent done this in a while
Chapter 6: first mission "yawn, time to go" Said Spyro sleepily. He got up slowly and headed towards the exit, Cynder soon followed."Grrr I dont whant to get up" moaned Sparx, but he soon tagged along. They all arived at the temple where The guardians were waiting for them."We no where to find the center cyristals now" Volteer informed. "Really where?" Asked Cynder. Volteer rolled his eyes. "Where do you think? the center of the earth!" He shouted. "Wait wait wait, you whant us to go inside the earth!" Sparx said sarcastickly."You can go but not me" "I'm afraid there is no other way" Replied Ignitus. "Yes you must go now!" Orded Terrador. "Good luck!" Shouted Cyril as Spyro and Cynder flew off. "Yes good luck young dragon, you'll need it" Said Initus with worry. "Guess i'll have to go" Sparx said to him self."Hey wait for me!" and they all started there jorney to the main drop point. I hope you liked that chapter! I will try and do some more soon! The next chapter will have some action! |
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#23 Posted: 18:22:29 05/10/2009
Journey to the center of the earth, cool
Good chapter
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123 |
#24 Posted: 18:44:48 05/10/2009
great chapter.
|
Kimey Babey Xx Yellow Sparx Gems: 1302 |
#25 Posted: 20:03:00 12/10/2009
Great storey soo far babes (Y) x Do mooree wen yuu can ;] x
---
"(so) Let it rain, Let it pour away, We wont come down, Until we hit the ground and pass out!" :') |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#26 Posted: 22:56:51 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7: The ambush
Are 3 heros have been flying for many hours now and they are continuosly getting nearer the drop off point where "Are we there yet?" Sparx asked. "Yes" Replied Spyro. "I can see it from here" he soared dow low with Cynder hot on his trail and Sparx tagging along. "We are hear! Finally my wings ache" Cynder moaned. "Your not the only one she_dragon" Sparx said as he floated down on a patch of moss "I'm going to bead" "Yes we should all get some rest as tomorrow we shall dive down to the center" Spyro informed. "Well night Spyro" -KISS- then she driffed of to sleep and so did Spyro. "Did I just see that?" Sparx asked him self "Nar, must be dreaming". Mean while hiding behind a bush... "We must attack with stealth and speed so they dont hear us, we must have the element of surprise!" Perock Ordered to a bunch of grublins. He was wearing a long dark cape that covered most of his repulsive body so you can only see his over sized grublin face. "Ok, on my mark, now, GO!" the grublins raced foward to Spyro, Cynder and Sparx! "ARRRRR!" Yelled a grublin as it clonked Cynder waking her up. "ARRREEEEEEEE!" Cynder let out her siren scream to wake the others and to kill the grublin. "ARRRRRH! SCAREY MONSTERS!" Yelled Sparx as he flew behind a small rock. "Grublins" Spyro said in shock, he then let out a chilling ice blast that shattered a grublin in to tiny pieces. "IEEY!" Cynder let out her shadow fire that killed most of the grublins. "HARRRRRRR!" Spyro let loose a bed of flames on to the remaining grublins killing them all. "We did it!" Shouted Spyro. "Grrrrr! You may of defeted us this time but we'll be back and stronger than ever!..." And they teleported away. "It's ok Sparx you can come out now" Spyro said. Sparx came out from hiding and asked "Who was that?" Cynder shook her head "That was perock the one from Ignitusu's dream" Spyro leaped foward and said with determination "We must stop him! Find the center cristals and stop Malefor from being reliest! Come on lets get some rest we have a big day tomorrow" Thay all nodded and driffted off to sleep. I hope you liked that chapter! I will try and do more tomorrow! |
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#27 Posted: 11:15:31 31/10/2009
Good chapter
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#28 Posted: 11:51:39 31/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8: Falling...
Spyro and Sparx were slumbering away, it was early morning and Cynder was watching the sunrise. She had not sleaped well last night after the ambush, she was worried that they would come back. "Yawn" Groaned Spyro as he stretched his wings. "Cynder did you even go to sleep?" He asked. "I got some sleep but not much" She replied. Sparx opened his eyes and sat up "Good morning! Did you sleep well? I did" He said cheerfully. "No, but Spyro did" Replied Cynder. They all walked up to the edge of the crator and peered over. "Are we going to sky dive in to there or something, cause I might puke over your girl riend Cynder" He teased. "What! How did you know that she is my girlfriend?" Spyro was now very confused. "Easy! She kissed you last night!" Spyro and Cynder rolled there eyes "So!" They shouted. "Ok ok... doesn't matter" Cynder gave a smile to Spyro "Don't you think that Sparx should be the first one to sky dive down?" She asked. "Yer!" Spyro and Cynder pushed Sparx down the creator! Soon after they leaped down there too and folded their wings plunging down in to the darkness... "ARRRRRRRH" Screamed Sparx. "Why did you have to do that? It really scared me" He shuddered. "You deserved it Sparx, it's called pay back for all of the things you've done to me" She smiled. Sparx shot her a dirty look. About one hour later... "Are we there yet? We have been falling for ages" Sparx moaned. "Yeh Spyro are you shoure we took the shortest root?" She asked. "I think so but I'm starting to have doubts" He replied sounding not so sure. "Wait I can see a light" Cynder said squinting her eyes. "I see it to, it's getting closer" Spyro's eyes lit up. "I can't see anything" Sparx said. "You have had your eyes shut the whole time Sparx" Cynder teased. "Oh year, I forgot" He opened his eyes. "I can see it now! It looks like i'm going to hit it in a couple of seconds..." SPLAT! Sparx banged in to the rectangular cristal! Spyro and Cynder let out their wings and drifted down slowly landing on their feet. "Are you ok Sparx?" Spyro asked. "Never better" He replied sarcastickly. Cynder gasped "Spyro! Don't you reconise this place? It's Malefors prision!"... I hope you liked that chapter! The next one will be called "an encounter with Malefor" |
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 12:34:32 31/10/2009 by Ice Dragoness
|
Kimey Babey Xx Yellow Sparx Gems: 1302 |
#29 Posted: 14:07:04 30/12/2009
OMGee!! Amazing chapters! Can't wait till the next one! x (:
---
"(so) Let it rain, Let it pour away, We wont come down, Until we hit the ground and pass out!" :') |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#30 Posted: 15:33:38 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9: An encounter with Malefor.
As Cynder caususly walked towards the giant purple cyristal her heart pounded, every time the name Malefor was mentioned memmories of her darker days appered in her head. They wizzed round, and round, and round! Untill it all went black! The one she feared most was gaul currupting her. "Spyro" She paused. "Do we have to go this way?" She asked with fear. "We have to, there's no choice. The passege is on the other side of the cyristal" Spyro felt bad having to treat her like this. Cynder lowered her head and walked by the crystal when a purple shimmer caught the very corner of her eye. "OHHHH!" She gasped! "What was that!" Sparx looked around the crystal in confusion. "What! What!" He shouted "Hey! I don't see anything!" Spyro staried at the Cyristal looking for something. "Cynder stop messing around!" He told her. "But... Spyro! i'm not! There was a purple shimmer from inside the crystal!" She yelled. Spyro took one last look at the crystal when he saw something. "Wait she's rite, there is a shimmer." Spyro approched the cyristal slowly. "A I the only one sane here?" Sparx muttered to himself. "NO!" A voice bellowed from deep inside of the crystal. "Yearrrrrrh! Im not sain, i'm not sain! I'M INSANE! ARRRRRGH!" Sparx Screamed. "For gods sake Sparx! Calm down!" Cynder hissed. A shadowey figuer moved forward from inside the crystal, as it got closer it took the shape of a dragon... Malefor. They now could see him clearly standing rite behind the crystal wall. "No, glowing bug your not saine, BUT BLIND! MWAHHAHHAR!" He laughed. Spyro frowned at him "Don't talk to him like that" Spyro's eyes glaired. "Oh it's Spyro, the one who defeted me, When Perock gets here he will free me from this cold prison, and I will have my revenge!" He yelled. "Well thats not going to happen cause we kicked his butt!" Cynder said. "Oh why Cynder, I almost for got you, TRAITOR!" He screamed "Do you know what i do to traitors? I strip them of there flesh then leave them to dwelle in the shadows and feed on the life fore of others!" Cynder had never been so sceared in her life! "But there is a way to redeme your self... Free me now and I will spare you" He said "No your lying!" She shouted. "You have the power... I gave you the power, remember?" he said "NO! that is behind me!" Malefor narrowed his eyes "You belong to me! I own you!" He gritted his teeth. "NO! STOP!" She yelled "Remember all that power and strenth you once had? It can be yours again! Free me and join me! A nd all my power will be yours!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHHAHAR!" He laughed so loud that his lungs felt like they were at the top of his throat. "ARRRRRRRRGH!" Cynder few the fastet shed ever floan before to the enterance of the passage way, he memorys of being dark were wizzing around her head! "Cynder wait!" Spyro flew after her. "Hey don't leave me here with him!" And then Sparx flew after them both. "Fools! They don't know who there up against!" Malefor screamed with rage, one of his only chances to be free and he'd blown it... TO BE CONTINUED... I hope you liked that chapter! |
Kimey Babey Xx Yellow Sparx Gems: 1302 |
#31 Posted: 21:10:48 30/12/2009
Good chapter!! Sparx is abit stoopid for following them both :L
---
"(so) Let it rain, Let it pour away, We wont come down, Until we hit the ground and pass out!" :') |
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 21:12:40 30/12/2009 by Kimey Babey Xx
|
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#32 Posted: 20:21:09 11/05/2010
Awesome story!!!!!!!
|
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#33 Posted: 21:46:00 11/05/2010
Good chapter , however, you need to work on spelling
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#34 Posted: 05:31:05 12/05/2010
Yeah, you do...
|
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#35 Posted: 16:40:21 12/05/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: Solister
That is the target I get after every English test I have, never anything else |
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#36 Posted: 08:18:07 18/05/2010
Can't wait for more!
|
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042 |
#37 Posted: 13:51:41 27/05/2010
good story
more!
---
"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero. |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#38 Posted: 11:03:24 04/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10: The center crystals.
"Stop Cynder!" Spyro yelled as he flew down the small passage way. Cynder did not listen and continue to fly fast. suddenly she stopped, and looked up. "wow". Spyro had to grip on to the sides of the passage way because he was not expecting her to suddenly stop. Too bad for Sparx though. "oww..." Sparx crashed in to the back of Spyro. All 3 of them looked up and steard with amazement. "The center crystals... They are beautiful" Cynder said slowly. The crystals seemed to glimmer all of the colours of the rainbow in wavy rays. "I Have never seen such a pertty thing" Sparx flew over to them. "We should take them and go... Before Perock finds us..." Spyro grabbed one of the crysals then Cynder took the other, then they flew back down the passage way. But taking a different corner to avoid Malefor. When they turned the corner they were in a big chamber. *Spyro! Spyro!* "ah" Spyro felt a pain in his head. "Whats wrong bud?" Sparx asked with concern. *Spyro it's me, Ignitus. I am talking to you telephathicly* "Its Ignitus contacting me!" They all smiled. *Spyro, I am going to tell you and Cynder how to work the center crystals*... TO BE CONTINUED... I hope you liked it! More soon! |
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042 |
#39 Posted: 12:03:30 07/06/2010
nice.
---
"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero. |
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#40 Posted: 17:30:36 07/06/2010
Good chapter
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#41 Posted: 22:20:49 07/06/2010
Awesome story!!!
Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!! |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#42 Posted: 15:27:22 11/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanx every one!
Chapter 11: Pulling the Earth *Now then, Spyro, Cynder Stand facing eachother* They did what he said. *Now focus all of your energy on to them* They focused on the crystals. Suddenly Spyro, Cynder and the crystals glowed brightly. They all lifted up in to the air then the crystals spun round Spyro and Cynder. *Good! good! Now picture the Earth whole in your head and pull!* They thought of the whole Earth then pulled with their wings and legs. *Keep going! Do not give up!* They pulled even harder untill it hurt. The chamber was now shaking, the whole Earth was moving. "I hope no one gets hurt on the surface..." Sparx thought to himself. They continued to pull untill there was a massive Bang! Everything stopped. Spyro and Cynder dropped down on to the floor, the crystals smashed and the Earth was solid once again. "Spyro! Cynder! You guys ok?" Sparx rushed over to them. *They will be fine Sparx, they will get up in a minuite or two.* Spyro moved his head, it was throbbing pain. "oww..." Sparx smilled. Soon after Cynder came round. "Oh my back" She stood up and flexed her spine. "I want to leave this place, but the cracks are sealed" Spyro lowerd his head. *dont worry, Terrador will make a tunnel leading to the surface for you. We came to your position* "So you guys are standing above our heads on the surface?" Sparx asked. *yes* "cool." Just then, a massive hole appeared above them. "I think that is are way out" Cynder said. And they all flew up the tunnel back to the surface where the Guardians were waiting for them.... TO BE CONTINUED... I hope you liked that chaptet! More soon! |
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042 |
#43 Posted: 15:43:19 11/06/2010
nice.
---
"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero. |
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478 |
#44 Posted: 16:20:31 11/06/2010
Very good
---
Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO! |
TheFlyingSeal Diamond Sparx Gems: 8584 |
#45 Posted: 16:31:43 11/06/2010
OMG. That was amazing!!! MOAR! make sure you make paragraphs every time someone talks though k?
---
#CynderIsAFireDragon |
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#46 Posted: 06:49:06 13/06/2010
Awesome story!
Can not wait for more!!! |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#47 Posted: 12:24:51 13/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 12: All's Well?
"I new you could do it!" Yelled Cyril as Spyro, Cynder and Sparx flew out of the hole. "Great job!" Volteer congratulated them. "Well done young dragons" Ignitus said. "Oh that’s nice, no thanks for me" Sparx moaned. "You did very well Sparx" Terrador asured him. "Now I just need to seal this hole so no one can get in or out..." Terrador reared up then stomped his feet on the hard ground, the hole quickly sealed up. Something rustled behind a bush close to them. It was Perock and some of his Grublin minions. "Gah! How am I supposed to release Malefor with all the passage ways sealed up!" He spoke with anger. "I must get them, We must attack!" The grublins nodded their mangy heads. "Did you hear something Spyro?" Cynder asked him. "Yes, It was like someone spoke." "Look in the bush!!!!" Sparx yelled. At that moment, Perock and his minions raced out of the bush and screamed. "ATTACK!" Everyone got in to fighting position. “Roar!” Spyro and Ignitus let out a sea of flames, killing some grublins. A grublin flew over to Cynder and started to whack her with a stick. “Oww!” Cyril blasted the grublin off of her “Are you ok?” He asked her. “I am now, thanks”. Terrador slammed his tail on to the ground causing an earth quake, the quake swallowed up four grublins. Perock shot an energy ball at Volteer, soon after wards he sent out an electric shot that knocked perock off of his feet. Cynder then rushed over to Perock and used poison on him. “Nows are chance! Get him!” Shouted Cynder. Every one fired at perock “Arrgh!” Perock was knocked out. “Well thats over” Spyro said with relief. Every one nodded. TO BE CONTINUED... |
TheFlyingSeal Diamond Sparx Gems: 8584 |
#48 Posted: 14:02:00 13/06/2010
Great job! It seemed you used my advice. Im in advanced language arts so I know what im doing.
---
#CynderIsAFireDragon |
Kimey Babey Xx Yellow Sparx Gems: 1302 |
#49 Posted: 14:06:04 13/06/2010
Cool. You should have said "Jabbed her with a stick" cos I find the word jabbed funny :L x
---
"(so) Let it rain, Let it pour away, We wont come down, Until we hit the ground and pass out!" :') |
Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#50 Posted: 14:24:58 13/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 13: Jail for you!
When Percok woke up he found himself locked in a jail cell. “oww my head” he groaned. “Oh no! How am I supposed to free Malefor if im stuck in here?” He asked himself. Volteer and Cyril were walking down the hall to Perocks cell. “I bet he will spend the rest of his days in there” Volteer chuckled. “He might change sides and be able to get out if he is reasonable” Cyril considered. “No chance of that happening!” Volteer laughed. Perock lifted his head, "Gah, what do you want?" he asked miserably. "Your co-operation" Volteer replied. Perock stood up and walked towards them. "I dont play games. Set me free!" he orderd. "We will if you can get us information from Malefor's followers" Cyril replied. "A double agent? Never! I would get caught!" "So your interested?" Volteer nudged Cyril. "NO! I just want out. Will I spend the rest of my days in hear if I dont?" "Yes you will, but if you co-operate you can go" "Fine I will tell you" Perock gave in. "How do we know you are telling the truth?" Cyril asked. "I think we should do a deal" Volteer suggested. "If he tells us he can walk free, but Only inside the dragon city" "I would do that, its better than being stuck in hear" Perock said. "Deal" Cyril opened the cell door. "And dont try to escape, there is a magical barrier keeping you in" Cyril smircked. Perock gave him the evils and went with Volteer to see his new home. While Cyril went to tell the others the news. TO BE CONTINUED... (the next chapter will probbly be the last!) |
Please login or register a forum account to post a message.