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deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#1 Posted: 19:31:59 20/09/2009 | Topic Creator
This part have nothing to do with my story, but i keep writing more. I am not perfect writer and i migth do some mistakes (sorry for that) and i write slowly because of the reason i just mentioned but anyway...
i hope you like this story...


Prologue
Long before the current time, during the time when all creatures believe in magic, when dragons where free, time when humans and dragons lived in peace with each other. But time of peace was not long and lasting. Two mighty races almost rip each other to pieces. Dragons were victorious at first; they won many battles but in the end number of the humans increased very fast. Even they were small and weak, they keep fighting back furiously. At the some point of war oldest dragons noticed that they can’t keep living under a war or under human’s control, they were too proud race to be a lowest servants of the race which they hated more than anything else. The decision of the oldest and vicest, dragons retreated and vanished unexplainably. Part of youngest dragons refused and stayed, but their flesh and bones rotten under mother earth even now…
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 16:41:27 02/10/2009 by deaver88
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#2 Posted: 19:42:49 22/09/2009
cool story. smilie write more.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#3 Posted: 08:50:32 23/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. i try write more today
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 08:50:59 23/09/2009 by deaver88
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#4 Posted: 15:15:45 23/09/2009
Nice story
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#5 Posted: 19:23:19 23/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thank you Solister, here is a bit more like i promised (it's sort but i was busy today)

Chapter 1

Crysdell began to wake up; he opened his eyes and stared at white roof. The roof lights blinded him for a moment, he squint and tried to focus.
Where am I? This isn't my house….or my room…
He thought and shivered. Crysdell lift his head and looked around, room was small, white and empty except for a small table on the left side of his bed. He moved the blanket aside and sidles to sit on the edge of the bed. Crysdell thoughts were blurry and his throat was dry. He rubbed his forehead and wondered where he might be or how did he get there. Before he could think anything, someone knocked. Crysdell looked around but didn’t see any door or a window. He heard talking and someone knocked again.
Yes?
Crysdell said dry voice. The door opened, it was hided in the wall so it couldn’t be seen from the inside.
Slender white doctor's outfit dressed woman came in and shut the door behind her; Crysdell thought he maybe saw a black suited person before door were shut but he shook his head and push the thought aside.
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 16:42:03 02/10/2009 by deaver88
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#6 Posted: 23:20:57 23/09/2009
hmm...i wonder who that is...
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#7 Posted: 06:32:53 24/09/2009
Good cliffhanger
I wonder whats going on
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#8 Posted: 05:21:50 27/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I try to finish this chapter today
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#9 Posted: 18:56:24 27/09/2009 | Topic Creator
The women walk closer and looked at Crysdell’s light-brown hair, his light blue eyes.
Good evening, how are you?
She stopped front of Crysdell’s eyes and view at him, Crysdell thoughts were still a little cloudy, he opened his mouth but not a sound came out.
I see, I will come back later
Women said and sighed
No wait!
Crysdell said in hurry, women smiled slightly and looked at him again, curiously this time
Yes?
Where am I? How did I get here? Who are you?
Women face looked surprised for a moment but it disappeared fast.
First things first, do you remember your own name?
Yes….it is…Crysdell
Well……Crysdell, I am a doctor Lauren and you are in hospital. You have been brought here a couple days ago
Crysdell remembered the name but when he tried think about it, a pain hit his thoughts suddenly and he stop thinking about it. Crysdell rubbed his forehead again; Lauren touched his neck by her right arm
How are you?
Lauren asked again; at the same time Crysdell felt a small stinging on his neck, he grabbed Lauren’s arm and held it, Crysdell thoughts became even more cloudy.
a Headache……and tired…
You should rest. You are save here, I will take care of you and I promise nothing bad is not going to happen to you
Crysdell nodded and let Lauren to help him back on the bed, he fell in sleep immediately. Lauren smiled and walked over the wall. The door opened, Lauren looked at Crysdell before dismissed
you are valuable Crysdell, even you don’t know it yet
Lauren said gleam in hers eyes and the mayor smile on her lips.
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:59:23 27/09/2009 by deaver88
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#10 Posted: 19:04:27 27/09/2009
Nice smilie
wonder what will happen next
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#11 Posted: 20:37:53 28/09/2009
good story. please continue. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#12 Posted: 05:33:42 29/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks both of you, i will write more soon
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#13 Posted: 20:10:47 29/09/2009
your welcome. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#14 Posted: 20:21:57 29/09/2009
your welcome smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#15 Posted: 16:43:32 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2

The text and images keep flashing on the screen when Lauren looking at them quickly and moved ahead. Clock show already an over midnight but she still continued the tireless work. DNA test result laying front of her left hand and right one keep clicking a computer mouse. Lauren felt herself tired and bored, it was already been 2 days when she saw Crysdell last time, boy slept a much thanks to drugs Lauren and the others gave to him everyday.
Lauren didn’t feel guilty or responsibility for what they did to him but sometimes Lauren stop think about it; with out us, he wouldn’t even exist
She thought and stops worrying. Crysdell was interesting in many ways; his blood was darker than normally, the skin was thicker and harder, Lauren had to use force to obtain a blood samples.
He is not a human!
One researcher yelled when he saw the test results first time.
Then what he is?
Lauren had to ask back, the man was so shocked that he only could shake his head. Memory of that day made her grin and laugh every time.
Fools……He is perfect!
Lauren repeated many times, when her researcher friends blame Lauren for mistakes, failures and her past. But now she had Crysdell, she had all what she needed.


next part i am going to reveal some things.......
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#16 Posted: 20:31:48 02/10/2009
Interesting first part to chapter 2 smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#17 Posted: 20:35:45 02/10/2009
cool. write more. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#18 Posted: 08:56:43 06/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks again, i write more soon
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#19 Posted: 18:42:25 06/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Any progress?
Voice asked not far behind Lauren.
Lauren startled and grabbed a short knife from her pocket; she quickly turned around and was ready to stab if needed to.
Mark dam you! Don’t do that again, I almost got a heart attack. Dam you!
Lauren cursed again, her heart still beating fast. Mark was hers closest assistant and always ready to help, he had only one problem thought, He liked scary people to death and seemed to enjoy of it. Mark smirked to Lauren reactions and step closer offering a cup of coffee.
I thought you would want some coffee…… I never want to scare you
He lied fast and leaned against Lauren’s desk
Oh come on! We both know that’s not true
Lauren echoed sarcastically, she sat back down and drink some coffee which Mark gave to her. It was hot and black, just like she wanted.
At least you learned something from me
Yes, you’re up very late. Problems with Crysdell?
Mark was nervous when he mentioned Crysdell name; he didn’t like boy at all.
Not really, But these test results are very interesting, did you know? He can remember his past.
Mark face was amazed and curious same time, Lauren voice was serious and the face she had was full of enjoy
But it is not possible! He is only two weeks old, even his age won’t be right. He looks like 16-17 old.
I am not sure yet but I have an theory
Lauren said and drinks more coffee
Mark chanced his position a little before asking
and what it is this theory?
Lauren enjoyed when she had a chance to tell her research and how stupid it might sound but it was only thing that make it possible
Crysdell have a genetic memory
But, is that even possible? You’re crazy woman Lauren or just smart. I don’t know which one but I hope you’re right. A genetic memory
Mark replied like tasting the word on his mouth
Yes, yes. But he can remember how he was brought over that room and his name……no one knows where he got it but he knows Mark, he knows it. This is very interesting
Do Crysdell have parents?
Mark asked and tried chance a subject, all these new information’s he just got were to shocking and unscientific.
No
She said fast but raised her finger
or he might have one but it is not alive anymore
Lauren repaired smiling
What you mean? it?
Mark said, Lauren normally didn’t hide anything from him but in this case when Mark looked at Lauren’s eyes; he saw a small flames burning in them.
I explain later but let’s say that it is a big lizard
A lizard? Crysdell is human
Part of human, part of something else
Lauren said before Mark could finish his sentence. Mark was totally confused,
He had more questions but he decided ask only one
Do he or should I say it sleep?
Mark eyes moved over the screen where he saw sleeping Crysdell
Maybe, who knows. There is still a lot we don’t know and I must ask you to leave, I have to continue my research
Lauren said, she put the cup away and turn her back to Mark. She began to read test results and reports of Crysdell condition.
Mark sighed and walked behind Lauren carefully.
You are really pain. you know?
Lauren had no time to answer. Mark grabbed her head and turn it 180 degrees left, Lauren first fell in unconscious but very soon she fell on eternal darkness where no one have ever return.
Mark had he hands full when he hacked Lauren’s computer and stole all files on it.
Now I need only one thing, Crysdell will join you soon
Mark said to Lauren’s lifeless body and laughed. Before he left; Mark throw some bottles on the wall and dropped a lighter on the floor, when he shut the door flames slowly swallowed everything.

There is rest of this chapter
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:43:34 06/10/2009 by deaver88
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#20 Posted: 22:24:04 06/10/2009
intresting. write more.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#21 Posted: 16:27:01 07/10/2009
Very interesting smilie
You might want to work on your spellings; just an option
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#22 Posted: 05:59:49 08/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah i know. i still do some mistakes sorry about that
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
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