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The legend of Spyro: A hero's tragedy :) [CLOSED]
spyroGalNicoleX Yellow Sparx Gems: 1582
#1 Posted: 08:01:10 04/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Characters:
smilie - Spyro a legendary and rare purple dragon born only once every ten generations, very friendly, outgoing, light hearted and brave friends with Cynder.
smilie - Spyros new companion, was once evil but was turned good again after defeated by Spyro. She is mysterious, friendly, outgoing and brave.
smilie Like a brother to Spyro and goes with him where ever he goes, he is wise cracking, cocky and cowardy alot of the time.
smilie- Guardian of fire and Like a father figure to spyro. He is brave wise and friendly.
smiliesmiliesmilie - Other elemental guardians. Talkative wise and sophisticated. Good leaders.
smilie - as a ghost though evil, large, intimedating.
smilie - A cheetah from a tribe in the valley of Avalar, he is mysterious but a good friend towards the dragons, he finds them facinating.
My fan dragon: Aurora - check her out in the link in my guestbook anouncement.
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Chapter one:
"Cynder, you don't have to go, nobody wants you to leave...I don't want you to leave." Said Spyro to his companion Cynder.
"Yeah, I mean it would be awfully sad for you to go and leave me alone with this purple lump, wait! Did I just say that!" Said Sparx scratching his head.
"It wouldn't surprise me if you did Sparx, you always make remarks about my weight and the fact I'm purple." Replyed Spyro.
"Nooo, Mr Stupid from stupid land, I was talking about what i said about Cynder, GOD! where have you been, dancing with the Cheeseburgers, come on keep up fat boy!" Sparx remarked. Cynder giggled.

The three of them reached a large cliff that hung over the valley of Avallar. The view was breath taking. Beautifully coloured flowers and peach trees covered the land which was separated by shimmering lakes and rocky waterfalls. A tribe of cheetas known by the friends wandered the grassy plains, practicing fighting skills. The valley was shrouded in a pretty red, orange and yellow light as the sun began to fall slowly from the sky. The three friends looked around admiringly until Spyro and Cynders eyes finaly fell upon one another.
"It is nice and all, what you guys were saying back there but after all i've done I just can't stay." She said lowering her head. "I mean after all what happend with the destroyer, it all came back to me. I just want to be as far away from everything as possible, keeping it out of harms way."
"I will miss you Cynder, your like my family... maybe more!" Said Spyro lowering his head! "But if you must go don't let me or any one stop you!"
"I will miss you too Spyro, thanks for being there for me and having faith in me!" She edged closer to Spyro. " Well I guess this is it, good bye Spyro!" She laid her neck under Spyro's kissed him on the cheek and took off flying gracefully into the horizon.
"I'll never forget you Cynder!" Spyro shouted hoping she'd hear.
"And I you, and I you!" She cried back.
"I am not gunna cry, I am not gunna cry!" Muttered Sparx to himself, tears welling up in his eyes.
Spyro and Sparx watched their friend disappear into the horizon.
"Well that's that!" Sighed the purple dragon. "Lets head back, Ignitus and the others will be wondering where we've gotten to!" He added.
"Should we tell them about cynder?" Sparx asked.
"Yes, we shall, they must know!" Spyro replyed.
The two flew back to the temple to tell the guardians what had happened that evening, what their reaction would be, the pair had know idea, but they needed to know.

Just so y'know this is what aurora looks like: [User Posted Image]
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
Edited 7 times - Last edited at 06:02:39 11/09/2009 by spyroGalNicoleX
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#2 Posted: 11:18:04 04/09/2009
I loved it at the beginning of it what Sparx said! smilie well as a title what about.
The Legend of Spyro: Cynder's dissaperance or something like that.
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#3 Posted: 11:44:43 04/09/2009
what she said^
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#4 Posted: 13:10:28 04/09/2009
LOVE IT! can you have a read of my story? plz! LOL smilie
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#5 Posted: 15:43:12 04/09/2009
Nice start smilie
I don't really know what to call it
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smilie
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#6 Posted: 16:08:14 04/09/2009
whats about The Legend of Spyro : Tradgedy strikes it describes the feelings of others for cynder dissapearence
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#7 Posted: 16:34:18 04/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I like your name chloe but i love dark cynders too! i'd combine them but hard smilie
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#8 Posted: 16:36:00 04/09/2009
hmmmm......
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#9 Posted: 16:40:13 04/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I named it ! Used part of urs!
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#10 Posted: 16:44:21 04/09/2009
YAAAAAAAAAY!
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#11 Posted: 16:49:34 04/09/2009
Nice title smilie
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#12 Posted: 16:54:56 04/09/2009 | Topic Creator
:L well ill write some more smilie post anything you want included!
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
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#13 Posted: 17:00:02 04/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:
"What do you mean she's gone! She can't be, it's not safe! Is this a joke, oh Spyro please tell me this is all a setup!" Said ignitus worryingly.
"Have i ever lied to you before Ignitus, what i don't understand is why are you so worried, shes not your responsibilty any more, she may have been years ago when she was merely an egg but now she's her own! Besides i am sure she can look after herself, after all we've been through!" Spyro replyed Looking at ignitus strangley. He noticed a look of fear in ignitus's eyes one like he'd not ever seen before after all that had happened, he was sincerly worried about her.
"Spyro what you don't understand is that malefor, the destroyer and his henchmen may be gone but theres plenty more evil in the world yet to be discovered, I just don't want her to get caught up in all that nonsense again!" Ignitus said dropping his head.
"Don't worry Ignitus, I am sure she'll be fine, infact i am certain she will be fine!" Spyro replyed. "Anyway where are the others?!" He added.
"On there usual flight check, making sure everything is in order across the land, I told them to make sure all is well amongst the citizens of warfang also they should be back by day break." Said the fire Guardian raising his head to see the young purple dragon sat infront of him. "Come on young one, it has been a long day and i am sure you are tired. Go on, go get some rest Spyro." He said glancing at Spyro who was now half asleep. Spyro curled up in a ball wings covering his head and shut his large purple eyes. Ignitus looked at him and a smile grew upon his face. "Goodnight Spyro." He whispered. The elder turned away from him and all was quite as he was consumed by the darkness in the halls of the temple and the sound of his heavy feet on the ground faded out.
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
Edited 4 times - Last edited at 06:03:38 11/09/2009 by spyroGalNicoleX
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#14 Posted: 17:36:26 04/09/2009
STILL LOVE IT!
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#15 Posted: 18:17:13 04/09/2009
Good chapter smilie
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smilie
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#16 Posted: 12:56:26 06/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:
Spyro ran through the deserted ruins of warfang. The residental moles were no where to be seen. But why was he here, what was the purpose of his visit. " Hello, is anyone here?" Spyro asked. "Why am I here?" He whispered to himself. " Maybe I'll take to the skies to get a better look." Spyro muttered as he jumped into the air gracefully. "Now I can get some answers." He said whilst a small grin appeared on his face. Spyro swooped and darted in and out of ruins, hoping to find a reason to why he was even there. Suddenly, as Spyro turned a corner something caught the dragons eye, something blue darted across an alleyway. "What was that!...Hello, is anybody there?" cried spyro curiously, anxiously waiting for a response. He called again and again until finaly he heard something, however it was not a voice, but merely a soft humming sound. Spyro followed the sound and came to a uninhabited tomb in the middle of the ruins. "Well, if I want to know what i'm doing here, I may aswell go inside, besides it's uninhabited and if that thing was running from me, it can't be that scary...Can it?" He mummered to himself. The purple dragon stepped foot into the tomb, ahead of him was a huge, dusty, spiral staircase. As he walked towards it he noticed something, the sound had stopped...all that could be heard was the sound Spyro's footsteps bouncing of of the walls and creating an echoe. The atmoshere was tense. There was no blue thing however. The dragon trotted over to the staircase and began to climb slowly. He got up only 10 steps when a he heard a slurred voice come from a corridor at the bottom of the stairs, he carried on walking despite the sound though without noticing it he found himself running up the stirs away from the noise...he was petrified. Soon enough he found himself at th top of the stairs panting, "Wow, what a climb that was!" He sighed gasping for breath.
"I know, but after a while it's just too easy" Whispered a female voice from the shadows of the corridor ahead.
Spyro jumped and looked into the the shadows, squinting to try to see clearer. "Who's there!?" Asked Spyro, trembling with fear.
"You don't know me!" said the voice. "But I know you all too well fair Spyro." It continued. A strange figure began to emerge from the darkness. Spyro stepped back with caution as a blue female Dragon appeared. "I am aurora, i have been close to you ever scince you were an egg... i know all about you Spyro." She said, elegantly jumping towards Spyro.
"Wait, so you know all about my past present and future!?, who are you, the chroniclers daughter or something." Spyro giggled sarcasticly.
"Grand-daughter actually! I weild the dagger of time you see, he gave it to me when i was mereley your age i have been destined to be your kind of gurdian angel type of thing." She replyed a grin appearing across her blue and lilac face.
"Okay i am now officially freaked." Spyro. "Anyways that's not the reason i am here, infact i dont even know why i am here, maybe you can tell me...Aurora" He added looking at Aurora hopefully.
"You don't know!? Well follow me in that case" The blue dragon replyed, walking to a balcony situated steps from where they were standing. Spyro followed his friend cautiously he still wasn't sure about her although, as he reached the balcony all his uncertanty went and he felt a new feeling a feeling of panic, as he looked over the stone barrier lining the balcony he saw...Cynder being pulled away by a group of grublins lead by what looked like an ape, he took a closer look, what he saw nearly made his fall of the balcony with shock. GAUL! and he was taking her away, away from Spyro...forever. "What are we waiting for, lets help her aurora, your the chroniclers grandaughter sureley you have a trick up your sleeve" Spyro said panicing wildly.
"we can't, you see, we're in the future...This hasn't happened yet!" She replyed grabing Spyro to calm him.
"So this going to happen soon, well i am ready, i will help Cynder, i shouldn't have let her go. Aurora send me home i must help her" Spyro said edging closer to his new found gurdian.
"Okay i shall but promise me something young dragon, dont mention me, i want to remain as anoymous to everyone else as i was to you" She whispered.
"I promise...Goodbye Aurora, and thankyou for everything" Spyro said smiling.
"No problem spyro, nice to see you too, i will see you around" Aurora whispered as she shot her dagger of time into the air, a blinding light was issued from the tip and all went black. " Goodbye Aurora!" Those words whizzed around in Spyro's mind until it changed too. "Spyro...Spyro...oi chubby wake up....WAKE UP!" Shouted sparx, moving out of the way as Spyro's head shot up. "What is it, is it Cynder?" Spyro screamed.
"No you iddiot, you've been sleepign for ages, it's practicly midday." Sparx replyed looking at his purple friend strangely.
"Wheres ignitus? I must speak with him, its vital" Asked Spyro.
"He's flying, whats so desparate anyways!?" Sparx added curiously.
"Okay well i guess i can tell you sparx , but you can't tell another being, you see i had this dream...." Said spyro beginning his story.
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
Edited 8 times - Last edited at 06:04:23 11/09/2009 by spyroGalNicoleX
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#17 Posted: 13:02:02 06/09/2009
Run out of ideas or are we supposed to continue this
otherwise this is an interesting start to the chapter
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#18 Posted: 16:09:57 06/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Just so y'know solister, i mixed up two chapters so my post is really what it is! the chapter i started before is the chapter too come enjoy smilie
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
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#19 Posted: 15:22:17 07/09/2009
Okay, thanks smilie
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#20 Posted: 17:22:15 10/09/2009
GREAT!
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#21 Posted: 05:23:15 11/09/2009
nice story. smilie pls continue... smilie
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
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#22 Posted: 10:39:48 20/09/2009
Your story is great! smilie
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#23 Posted: 18:07:54 20/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4:
"So you're telling me, you had a dream that...Gaul was back in dragon city and wherever he was going he was dragging Cynder with him...well Spyro thats one weird dream!" Sparx remarked giggling under his breath.
"Sparx, I am serious, plus... it didn't even seem like a dream, it seemed kinda...real!" Spyro replyed confidently with a weary look on his face.
"Real, Spyro your really are going senial, its probably all that cheese you eat before you go to bed i told you it gives you nightmares and also kinda makes you fat, but if you do think that dream means something maybe you should tell Ignitus and the others and then you can..." Sparx stopped in mid sentence as Spyro butted in.
"NO SPARX!, nobody else can know, not even Ignitus, i swear you tell them and they'll never trust me again and neither will Auro..." Spyro said putting his purple claw over his mouth.
"Auro.. who were your refering to then buddy boy!" Sparx asked tutting under his breath.
"Uhh, no body, just dont say anything" Spyro finished turning and wandering into the temple.
"That dude really worries me at times it really is that cheese before bed thing, and he wonders why i call him fat" Sparx remarked as he followed his friend into the temple.
The pair scurried into the temple one after another, ahead of them on the floor lay Ignitus, Terrador, Volteer and Cyril who were sound asleep at the dojo door.
"They must have been training before bed" Spyro stated looking admiringly at Ignitus and the others.
"Probably, god...how can they do that?" Sparx asked Scratching his head.
"Well you'll find that when the world rests on your wings fighting is the only thing you can do, so by training their just upping their chances in a fight.
"Oh okay, so about that dream you no the bit where....." Sparx started as Spyro butted in AGAIN.
"No Sparx we aren't saying anything not even...." Spyro muttered trying not to wake the dragons, he was stopped in mid sentence as a bunch of words began ringnung around in his head.
"Young dragon, you've been keeping secrets." Those words of Ignitus still bounced around Spyro's head, ever scince the last secret he had kept from him.
"If i don't tell him and he finds out somehow..." Spyro looked at sparx and growled. "...He'll never trust me again, making my life here hard...i guess i'll tell him...yeah i'll tell him when he wakes up!" Spyro announced as he walked over infront of the Dojo doors and perched himself there awaiting the awake of the wise guardians. "No more secrets Ignitus...I promise." Said the young purple dragon proudly holding his head high.
"Oh jeeze..." Sparx moaned putting his face in the palm of his hand."Here comes the modesty..all this heroic business hasn't done anything for him i swear." He continued.
The pair were sat infront of the door for an hour, then at last, the guardians awoke.
"Spyro, well good morning young hero." Ignitus said as he stretched and began to stand. "Would you like me to open the door to the dojo for you? If you did you shouldn't have waited for this long you should've ju...." Ignitus stopped as Spyro politly interupted.
"Sorry Ignitus but it's not that, it's something else.....something I really need to tell you." Spyro said as he began to tell Ignitus the same story he told sparx although before he started an image appeared in his head, one of Aurora nodding in approval and saying " Well done Spyro, it's the right thing to do." As this image disappeared another, dissolved into picture, it was what he saw in his dream...Cynder.
"Not again, ill save you Cynder." Spyro muttered under his breath so no one could hear, he turned back to Ignitus and said " You see Ignitus i had this dream...." Spyro said beggining his story again.
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 06:00:02 22/09/2009 by spyroGalNicoleX
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#24 Posted: 18:09:29 20/09/2009
SWEET! smilie keep it up. smilie like the avvie? also can you check out my new story?
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#25 Posted: 18:37:46 20/09/2009
That chapter was great! Keep up the good story. smilie
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#26 Posted: 20:11:45 20/09/2009
Great chapter smilie
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#27 Posted: 15:13:34 21/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5:
"Spyro, It was good of you to tell the truth, however this dream can't possibly become reality." Ignitus questioned himself.
"It did before didn't it, i mean with the whole chronicler situation" Spyro answered thinking vaguely of Aurora the chroniclers grandaughter.
"But it can't be, Gaul can't be back and have taken dear Cynder." Ignitus muttered with an uncertain look on his face.
"Trust me in the world we live in old wise one, anything weird and wonderful can happen...we've leanred the hard way eh Spyro, Spyro!" Sparx remarked as he looked at the purple dragon who was in a daze. He was thinking about Cynder. "No Cynder, come back...CYNDER!" Spyro screamed out of the blue. His cry startled the others and they jumped back from the purple dragon in confusion.
"Spyro what's wrong!" Sparx cried "Whats gotten into you?" He added.
"I want cynder" Spyro growled lifting his head. "I want my friend" he growled again louder. The purple dragon then swiftly jumped into the air as a dark cloud shrouded him. Seconds later he burst out of the mist as dark spyro. "I want my friend Ignitus and there's nothing you and the others can do to stop me."
"Spyro no!" Sparx cried hiding and quivering behind Ignitus's wing.
"Stop you, only you can do that Spyro, we are merley helping you." Ignitus whispered as he looked deeply into Spyro's eyes which were filled with hatred.
"You made her leave...you led her to Gaul." Spyro snarled at Ignitus.
"No Spyro you must understand, it was her choice she chose to leave, force was'nt in the question." Ignitus replyed.
"No it was you, ill kill you!" Spyro screamed as he swooped to attack ignitus. Just as Spyro was about to dig his claws into ignitus, hunter had jumped through the window and threw himself at Spyro leaving them both in a bundle on the floor. As hunter stood Spyro's darkness fled from his body and the poor purple dragon lay muttereing on the floor.
"Good timing hunter, i could've died." Ignitus sighed taking a deep breath, restoring his nerves.
"I don't think he wanted to intentionally hurt you wise one, he just needs Cynder back, when you have no one, you try to hold on to what you got with whatever it takes." Hunter said reassuringly.
"I know he would not do so on purpose however this darkness thing could cause a problem, we must talk to him when he awakes then we can find ou...-" Ignitus stopped mid sentence as Terrador burst through the doors followed by Cyril and Volteer who were both panting. "Ignitus, it's Gaul he's back...and unfortunatly..he has hold of our fellow Cynder" Terrador gasped.
"Spyro was right, it was reality...oh no Cynder" Ignitus muttered as he turned to face the other guardians. "Hunter go prepare your tribe, Terrador and volteer head to warfang to alert the moles, Cyril you stay here with me and wait for Spyro to wake, he must know and prepare for fight.
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
Edited 4 times - Last edited at 16:33:33 21/09/2009 by spyroGalNicoleX
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#28 Posted: 15:17:54 21/09/2009
Cool chapter! smilie
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#29 Posted: 15:48:04 21/09/2009
NICE! smilie smilie
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#30 Posted: 18:00:40 21/09/2009
Very good chapter
Keep it up smilie
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#31 Posted: 05:54:27 22/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6:
"Spyro, you must wake! c'mon it's late we need your help!" Ignitus whispered to Spyro gently trying not to alarm him. Spyro sturred violently his legs and head being thrown in every direction.
"SPYRO!" Hunter shouted, intending to wake the dragon from the nightmare he was having.
"Ill kill you!" Spyro shouted as his head shot up from the ground. "Oh Ignitus it's you, boy im glad that was a dream..." Spyro added with a sigh of relief.
"Spyro, what was your dream about, cynder maybe..." Ignitus stopped abruptly at the mention of Spyro's companion.
"Yes Ignitus it was but you were stopping me from getting her back, this then evil feeling came over me, like i was being swallowed by darkness and sinister ways, then I...I...I..." Spyro hesitated, he didn't want to say what was next to come.
"C'mon Spyro we must know maybe it'll help us get Cynder back!" Ignitus said gently trying to make the young Dragon speak.
"I...Attacked you!" Spyro sighed lowering his head softly. "I'm sorry Ignitus, i've never dreamt like that before, it felt real, but I'd never attack you, you know that dont you?" Spyro whispered as waterdroplets left tiny marks in the shadow cast by spyro's dropped head on the ground.
"No Spyro, i can assure you now..you would never do such a thing" Ignitus said trying to reassure Spyro as hard as it was as the thought of Spyro looking so sinister still pondered around his head.
"Ignitus, you're like a father to me, if that ever really does happen...forget about me and get yourselves out, i wont risk any of you getting hurt for my sake" Spyro said lifting his head and looking into Ignitus's eyes awaiting a response.
Ignitus and Cyril shared an look of uncertainty when suddenly Hunter spoke up. "Sorry to bring this up again but Ignitus, Cyril didn't you need to tell Spyro something" He beckoned moving his head in the direction of Spyro then returning to his stance behind the two guardians.
"Oh yes, thank you for reminding me Hunter" Ignitus said in a weary voice. "Well Spyro about your dream..y'know the one with Cynder well it's sort of reality, like you suggested" Ignitus said stepping closer to Spyro but was startled as he sprang to his feet.
"Yes it's as Aurora said...the FURTURE, my dream was a premonition kind...of...thing..." Spyro said ashamed that he had spoke of Aurora, he had broken his promise.
"Aurora, you would'nt be refering to the Chroniclers grandaughter as such, would you Spyro?" Ignitus asked.
"Yes, i am Ignitus, though I promised i wouldn't mention her name she said she wanted to stick with a low profile, but apparentley she's been keeping an eye on me scince i was just an egg is it true Ignitus... has she?" Spyro asked still unsure of Aurora.
"Well legend tells she watches upon all purple dragons but scince Malefore, shes kept her distance i suppose thats why she was in your dream, talking in person would draw malefore once again to her power and the dagger of time" Ignitus told wisely.
"Once again, hes used her before, and whats the dagger of time?" Spyro questioned in curiosity.
"Well, legend also tells of a time in which Aurora was used by the dark master to try and resurrect evil from past times using the dagger of time. It is a legendary artifact that can only be wielded and used correctly by the chronicler, Aurora herself and a purple dragon, it allows the user to visit different times, i am guessing that is how she avoided Gaul on her way to you and used it to make your dream a premonition as you said" Ignitus answered.
"So what are we gonna do, we can't just leave Cynder, i wont lose her again Ignitus, please we must fight." Pleaded Spyro looking hopefully into the fire guardians eyes.
"Spyro, we are already plotting against Gaul, we can't risk him finding a way of bring back malefor!" Ignitus answered seriously.
"What malefor can be ressurected?" Spyro asked curiously.
"Yes, indeed he can young one, however it may take some time, however we can't risk it, hence we are planning an attack now...We will get Cynder back Spyro, i promise" Vowed Ignitus nodding at Spyro.
Spyro nodded back in approval "I trust you Ignitus, I really do." The four guardians, Hunter and Spyro began constructing a plan that night with every hope they wouldn't be too late to save thier dear friend Cynder from crossing paths with the dark master once again.
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 15:31:44 22/09/2009 by spyroGalNicoleX
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#32 Posted: 16:05:42 22/09/2009
Nice chapter smilie
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#33 Posted: 17:07:28 23/09/2009
COOL! Thats great babes! smilie
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#34 Posted: 17:15:05 24/09/2009
thats really good i sugest you make it a bit shorter because i spent a long time reading it smilie
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Leaving, For good..
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#35 Posted: 18:22:22 24/09/2009
all stories are supposed to be long though, one of my friends fan fics are around 60 chapters long. Get get used to it, i want this story to continue.

Anyway, good job! smilie
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#36 Posted: 05:09:36 25/09/2009
Please continue.
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Please read my story!
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#37 Posted: 05:33:22 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks everyone i much appreciate the comments i am writing a new story now, its a fan dragon story new enimies new allies ill give you links smilie
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''All I wanna be, is everything at once''
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#38 Posted: 08:11:57 25/09/2009
Yeah... It's Good...... smilie
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#39 Posted: 09:19:44 09/10/2009
Man so cool... I like this Story.
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Don't let your emotions control you. And follow your heart. It will never fail you.
Call me Xanver.
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