darkSpyro

Chapter one
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Dark one

One day of pure deep darkened world only open to the dark and darkened dragons of their time to live the realms of this area. The Dark Dimension. The force that blocked the dark and darkened dragons forced them to stay their forever, only the powerfulest and mightest dark and darkened dragons could open this portal to the dark or darkened dragon mortal. These dragons want to destroy the light until the numbers of light has downed. That very day of darkness on the earth, one dark young female white scaled dragon aged eleven creeped past a flowing creek from an azure waterfall. The young dragon was quite acute. She had white scales, azure like green head spikes, a blue frill head spike, two grey horns much like Spyro's, deep blue eyes, a blue triangle like shape at the end of her tail, blue outsided wings and white inside wings and a grey underbelly. The young female dragon's name was Szarotka, named after a rare dark dragon stone called a Szarot. Szarotka sighed. I am darkened. Is they anyway out of this world? She thought, frowning of her lack of freedom to roam the outside world. Suddenly just of that moment, a black darkened adult dragon dragon walked towards Szarotka and smiled at her.
"Greetings," The dragon said smiling even harder. Szarotka smiled back, but the smile didn't fool the dragon. The dragon was Szarotka's father, Drake.
"What ever is this matter?" He asked. Not smiling this time. Szarotka snorted and then it was silent for a few seconds until Szarotka finaly spoke up about her father's question that requested for a detailed answer. Szarotka knew that.
"Well, I-I-I," Szarotka spluttered, she then glared at her father. Her father, Drake, glared back but not to hard. He then spoke up.
"What is it? Spit it out, spill the beans," He growled, angered this time. Szarotka sighed. Szarotka then said it.
"I want to go to the second world," Szarotka said in a small voice. Drake then roared and grabbed Szarotka by the neck.
"You know the dark and darkened ones cannot ever reach the Light world, you young mortal dragons have to understand that!"He growled throwing Szarotka into the creek. Szarotka got up, unharmed. This was harmless to all young dark and darkened dragons above the age of six. He then sighed.
"You do know that your freedom roams around here, the family policy is stay where you belong, well, after the chaos of your mother being slaughted by that monster," He said, then a tear dripped down his eye. Before Szarotka could say a word, he walked away. Szarotka began to walk to the forbidden forest. Which was not forbidden. Just dark. Szarotka finaly got to the place, until she saw a dark dragon spirt. Malefor's sprit.
"Uncle?" Szarotka asked.
"Yes," The sprit replyed
"Why are you here? Ever since the light monster Spyro came was unfrozen, we never saw you again," Said Szarotka, frowning.
"Every dark or darkened dragon's sprit remains here forever, the light dragon's sprits remain the the second world," Said Malefor
"How did you escape the dark dimension?," Asked Szarotka
"I used my hope all of it, but I lost my hope battling with Spyro," Replyed Malefor
"I'm leaving the dimension, please leave note to my father," Said Szarotka
"Agreed, Only one thing, when I battled with Spyro I learned something, always hide your form, get along the light dragons, even if your on a mission," He said
" Dark one, " He then added

Look out for chapter two! Just to let you know, I am also making a series on youtube based on this story. It will be out late this year or the start of next year.

Chapter two
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The truth can't be trusted

Szarotka walked away from Malefore's sprit to leave Malefor in peace. Szarotka began to wonder. Who is my mother? She pondered hard about her father's words, You do know that your freedom roams around here, the family policy is stay where you belong, well, after the chaos of your mother being slaughted by that monster'. She thought about the bit about your mother and seeing a little view of her father's tear. Szarotka didn't know much of her mother before ever since then. Maybe it is true. Maybe its to find out in the second world. Did she disappear because of light? Szarotka pondered hard until it began to turn late. The moon shined above Szarotka's head beautifuly.

As Szarotka thought more of it, it became darker and darker until Szarotka finnaly fell fast asleep. There it was. The moon shining on Szarotka. She woke up breathing heavily and panicking all of a sudden. She saw it. A light. A tunnel. A enemy. A force. Szarotka ran away but the light took her. She then found herself in another dimenson. Szarotka was on a small platform in an amazing area with a deep navy blue and black sky dotted with tiny gleaming stars, some platforms near were moving around very fast and not for Szarotka's powers to cross. They was no way out. Szarotka could only glide. Szarotka then began to hear voices repeating rapidly inside her head.
"Szarotka," Repeated the voice. Szarotka then began to get angry. The voice didn't stop. Szarotka then make the decission to speak up.
"Stop it!" She yelled. The voices still carryed on.
"I said stop it!" She yelled even louder. The voice still carryed on. Szarotka was really annoyed now.
"Stop it!" She screaming, she shot out a large amount blue breath. Szarotka then began to be suprized.
"What was that?" She asked herself, or the voice.
"I have brought your breath to be summoned, you must visit the temple to search of this breath," Said the voice. Szarotka then woke up back in the place she had fallen asleep. Was it a dream? She thought. Szarotka knew that the temple was in the second world. She also knew how to get into the second world now. Follow your dream she thought.

Chapter three
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The second world


Szarotka began to think about her blue breath. She had not really thought about her not being able to breath a breathe before, but that was not for thinking of thought Szarotka. Szarotka carryed on with opening a portal to the second world. I can do it. I can do it. I can do it. Szarotka thought. A portal didn't appear. I can do it. I can do it. I can do it. Thought Szarotka. Suddenly a portal appeared, Szarotka walked in the portal and found herself by a lake on fresh green grass. The second world. Just then a young electric dragon around the age of fourteen was wondering around the place.



"Hello whats your name?" Asked Szarotka to the dragon.
"Enern, yours?" She replyed. Szarotka smiled, and then she replyed.
"Szarotka, do you know where the temple is?" Szarotka asked, confused, but desprate to learn her breathe.
"The temple? Most dragons know where the temple is, it's right behind me, look," Said Enern, turning round. Szarotka was silent for a few seconds, then she spoke up.
"Oh," Said Szarotka, remembering to try and keep a low profile about The Dark Dimension. Enern glared at Szarotka. Enern feeled something not quite right about Szarotka, she needed to earn Szarotka's trust. Enern made the decission to found out more about Szarotka.
"I'll come with you, to meet my uncle, Volteer," She said, following Szarotka to the temple door. The door opened.
A young red adult dragon stood in front of them both.
"What brings you here?" He asked wisely.
"We have come to learn our breathes and train," Replyed Szarotka.
"Well come on in then!" He said welcoming the two young female dragons.
"My name is Flamen, After Ignitius's death, I took his place as the new age's master of fire," He said
"She is Szarotka and I am Enern," Enern said
"Now tell me? Who has only just seeked there element?" He asked
"Me," Claimed Szarotka.
"What was it like?" He asked
"Well, I was getting pretty annoyed, and then a burst of blue element came out of my jaw," She said
"You have the ice element," He said he then called.
"Cyril!" Called Flamen
"Yes Flamen," Said an azure ice dragon appearing from a portal.
"Teach this dragon the masters of ice," Said Flamen.
"Right to it," Said Cyril, Szarotka followed him.
"And Enern would like to be trained," Said Flamen also.
Enern followed Cyril and Szarotka.

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Chapter four
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Gamith

When Szarotka, Enern and Cyril came at the training room door a young male eleven year-old white ice dragon was training. The young ice dragon did a few air combos on the dummy and knocked it's head off, the head was nearly flying, then it hit beside the wall and fell. The young dragon smiled as a small bunch of dummys came in.
Szarotka stared at the young dragon. Enern watched, but then she got bored and figeted a bit.
"Stop!" He comanded. The dummys disapeared before your very eyes.
"Yes," Said the dragon
"This is Szarotka and Enern, they have come here to train with you," Said Cyril pushing Szarotka, the dragon and Enern into the training room.
"Who are you?" Whispered Szarotka to the dragon.
"Names Gamith, yours?" He said
"You don't have to whisper Szarotka, I'm Enern," Said Enern
"I'm Szarotka," Said Szarotka shyly.
"Get on with your training!" Shouted Cyril
"Don't worry, It's fine after you try it, i'll show you what Cyril taught me," Said Gamith. He then whispered to Szarotka and Enern:
"It's hard to understand what Cyril means sometimes, Lucky enough it's not Volteer," He said
Enern smiled. Szarotka giggled.
Cyril sighed loudly and then some dummys appeared from his magic.
Gammith opened his jaw and a small ammount of ice element spilled out onto the dummy. Straw dropped out the dummy, Gammith then turned to the next dummy and did a rough air combo roughly knocking the dummy straight at Enern.
"Watch it!" She said
"Oops," Said Gammith
Enern kicked the dummy away and turned to Szarotka.
"You fancy him don't you?" She said, Gammith was to busy to hear Enern and Szarotka.
"No I don't!" Said Szarotka
"Yes you do," Disagreed Enern
Gammith had defeated all the dummys. They were on the floor, straw spilled out.
"Get it?" Questioned Gammith.
"Yep," Replyed Szarotka
Enern and Szarotka began to wait for the dummys. Eight dummys appeared.
Szarotka jumped up high and flapped her wings wacking a dummy.
"Give it a big wack!" Shouted Gammith who was fighting a big dummy.
Enern was alreadly trained and doing just as well as Gammith.
Szarotka gave the dummy a big wack and the dummy it shot up in the air about a CM taller than Szarotka falling onto the training floor.
"Well done," Said Gammith smiling. They had killed all of them now, mostly Gammith and Enern.
"Times up, get yourselves out, come back when you need to!" Shouted Cyril.
Enern and Szarotka were about to walk out.
"Wait! Can I come?" Asked Gamith (Sorry I was spelling it wrong before)
"Sure," Said Enern. Gamith followed them out of the temple.

Hello? Looks like no one reads this story... Yet...

Chapter five
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The dragon falls

Gamith smiled, then looked at Szarotka and Enern as they exited the temple carefully just to make sure anything breaks on their path.
"So, what are you doing today?" Asked Gamith, Szarotka blushed, Enern was the one left to answer.
"Nothing much," Replyed Enern, smiling. Gamith smilied back.
"How about we visit the dragon falls, a beatiful sight, maybe we could have a swim or something," Suggested Gamith. Szarotka nodded.
"Sure," Said Enern
"It won't take us long to get there, but all I can say is that it will get dark when we are there though, it's in this forest," Said Gamith
"Don't you have to fly to get there? Szarotka can't fly," Asked Enern confused. Szarotka blushed again.
"Me neither, Can you fly, Enern?" Asked Gamith.
"Yeah," Replyed Enern
"There is a way to get there though if you can't fly, follow me!" Said Gamith. Gamith leaped away and Szarotka leaped after him while Enern flapped her wings and flied while following Gamith.
Later on, they got to a huge temple like square building.
"Copy me!" Said Gamith. Gamith leaped up on the wall of the building and grabbed his claws onto some ivy and climbed onto top of the building. Enern copyed Gamith, but more skillfully. Szarotka then copyed, the same as Gamith.
"Go down here!" Said Gamith jumping down a hole on top of the building. Enern flew down the hole. Szarotka jumped down the hole too.
They were in a tunnel like area now with shallow water. Gamith and Szarotka were walking in the shallow water, while Enern was flying. Later on they came to the end of the tunnel. There was a beatiful gleaming moon in the corner of the deep blue sky shining a small light on the green triangle like trees.
Gamith glided into a deep river with a waterfall. Enern flew there and laned in the water and Szarotka glided in the water.

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Chapter six
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Is it a soul?

Szarotka dived under the water and Gamith did the same.
Gamith was really good at swimming, Szarotka was amazed and tryed to copy him.
The dragon falls were very, very, very deep and Szarotka and Gamith were still trying to get to the bottom. Until suddenly, they saw a huge angry sea dragon who was ready to attack!
"Help us!" Shouted Gamith, but the water muffled his speech, and only a mutter and some bubbles splurted out.
The sea dragon splurted out some fear breathe, and the next mintue Gamith was floating down to the bottom. The dragon then swam down to the bottom, forgetting Szarotka.
Szarotka quickly swam towards Gamith sinking down to the bottom and grabbed his leg carefully. Szarotka swam and swam until she got to the top, Szarotka then breathed rapidly.
"What happened?" Asked Enern. Puzzled. A tear dripped down from Szarotka's deep blue eye and splashed into the dragon falls.
"He's dead!" Szarotka cried in tears. Enern looked puzzled.
"Just because he's un-" Enern stopped. A strange eerie noise was shreiked and repeated. It was coming from the trees. The sound got louder and louder.
"What was that?" Enern said panicking. Enern could hear her heart pumping. Thump! Thump! Szarotka was alerted too, still crying.
The voice howled. Szarotka howled. Suddenly a black scaled dragon, about the same age as Szarotka and Gamith appeared, with scarlet red glowing eyes. Enern flew out of the water. The dragon attacked Gamith and water splurted out of his mouth. He choked.
"What happened?" Asked Gamith weakly
"Gamith! Your alive! Your alive!" Szarotka chanted, very happy. She then kissed Gamith on the cheek. Szarotka blushed.
"Never mind that! Look at this!" Shouted Enern looking at the dragon. The dragon clawed Enern. Enern yelled and shot out some eletric breathe and a bolt of eletric breathe shot out at the dragon. The dragon fell. It's scaled turned white and the dragon's eyes turned blue.
The dragon got up.
"Hi immortals, I'm Ebony," Said Ebony, she then smirked.
"Hello Ebony," Sighed Enern.

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Although I didn't get the very last part.
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Chapter seven
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The mature and the immature

"So, whats the matter circus freaks?" Said Ebony, rudely.
"Don't call us that, well, I guess you was in a dark form," Enern replyed.
"Dark form?" Gamith said, confused.
"Some dragons have a dark form, mainly effected by the enternal night, that turns them dark," Explained Enern.
"Oh! What a shame!" Yelled Ebony.
"Yep, you nearly got us killed," Said Szarotka.
"That I didn't stay in my dark form!" Laughed Ebony. Szarotka sighed.
"Well it's getting late," Said Gamith
"So are you all going then?" Asked Szarotka.
"Szarotka. I have no where to go." Said Gamith.
"You are so funny! You get a life for once Gamith! You are hanging out with some girls here!" Laughed Ebony.
"Shut up!" Yelled Szarotka. Ebony didn't stop.
"What? I didn't expect Gamith to have a girlfriend!" Said Ebony, laughing even harder.
Szarotka was having enough of it. Szarotka breathed an element of ice.
"Oh? So it's a fight you want? Well bring it!" Shouted Ebony. Ebony charged towards Szarotka and stabbed her with her horns, Szarotka jumped up and tried to miss the attack, but Ebony's horn stabbed Szarotka's leg causing Szarotka to yell. Blood dripped down Szarotka's leg, but the battle wasn't going to end this quick.
"Stop it!" Yelled Enern. They ignored her. Suddenly Szarotka remembered the air combat she had been caught. Szarotka ran up towards Ebony and wacked her hard, she didn't exactly go up in the air, she just skidded back and ended up on the ground. Nows my chance, thought Szarotka. Szarotka wacked Ebony hard. Ebony got up to attack her back. Ebony did it. A fear dash. Szarotka could hear the yells and fear inside her head, crawling up her spine, eating her nerves rapidly.
Szarotka yelled, she wanted to rip Ebony apart. Ebony wanted to the same. They were about rip each other apart, well try, until Gamith ran into the middle of the attack.
"Stop!" Yelled Gamith. They stopped.
"You stupid idoit! You circus freak!" Shouted Ebony.
"You immature little rat!" Screamed Szarotka.
"I said stop it! I've been on my own since I was three and all I want is some friends! Just stop it!" Shouted Gamith, even louder. All was silent. Even Ebony.
Szarotka walked closer to Gamith.
"Well, has anyone else got anywhere to go, I guess don't want to go back, there is no one to look after me," Said Szarotka
Enern frowned.
"My parents died in battle, I only have my uncle Volteer and I don't think he's got time for me," Said Enern
"Mine are dead," Said Ebony
"Well I guess we are kind of like a group of friends," Said Enern.
"Well, It's late now," Said Gamith
"We need some sleep," Said Enern. The dragons all found their spaces to sleep and soon wen't to sleep.

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Chapter eight
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Nightmare

There she was, Szarotka struggled to walk through the deep snow of the cold blizzard of this winter's day. The trees whispered as the wind blew hard, the moon shined brightly in the deep navy blue sky. The wind suddenly pushed Szarotka back rapidly, she fell into the deep snow. Suddenly a dragon appeared behind her. The dragon was an adult slender black scaled female dragon, with gleaming scarlet red eyes like blood spilling. Szarotka gasped for help from the dragon, but she was to scared to not fail her message. The dragon suddenly picked Szarotka out from the snow, wrapping it's claw round Szarotka's neck.
"You belong in the dark side and you escaped from the dark side," Snarled the dragon, Szarotka saw it's milky white teeth smashing together as it talked.
"I'm not!" Lied Szarotka. The dragon growled.
"You lier!" Yelled the dragon. The dragon clawed Szarotka.
Szarotka woke up gasping.
Everyone else was asleep. Gamith, Enern but Szarotka turned to Ebony. Ebony was still awake.
"What's the matter circus freak? Having nightmares?" Asked Ebony, rudely, even though she was gasping too.
"Yes, I had this dream..." Said Szarotka frowning.
"What dream, circus freak, I had one where this stupid dragon that can't kill me tryed to kill me in the snow, who did not kill me in my dream," Said Ebony.
"Oh," Said Szarotka. She was freaked out that they had the same dreams, but she thought she should keep a low profile about it.
"I'm going back to sleep," Said Szarotka, hoping she won't have another nightmare.
"Wait! Don't!" Said Ebony. Szarotka was suprised.
"Why?" Asked Szarotka.
"I keep having these nightmares..." Replyed Ebony.
"What nightmares?" Asked Szarotka
"The same ones," Said Ebony.
"Well, don't go to sleep then," Said Szarotka
"No! Because I'm scared!" Shouted Ebony.
Enern and Gamith woke up.
(Sorry, really short one this time)

I make one chapter every day in weekdays, sometimes more, two a day in weekends if I'm not busy.

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I'm to busy at the moment to write some more chapters. I'll write another one at the weekend.

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I have time to make one now!

Chapter nine
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Coming legends dead

"Whats the problem?" Said Enern, yawning. It was early in the morning, but just about time to get up and about.
"Nothing," Lied Ebony. Everything was silent after that, Gamith yawned and was the one to speak up. Gamith took a deep breathe.
"So what shall we do today?" Asked Gamith. Ebony had the chance to be rude.
"Spread rumors, kill each other, battle," Suggested Ebony. Szarotka looked at Ebony, angered.
"Let's stick on the safe side for now," Said Enern with a faint laugh. Ebony whispered something to Enern. Enern looked at Szarotka.
"How about we just travel, to find another dragon realm," Suggested Gamith. Ebony whispered something to Szarotka.
"You know that Gamith's a light dragon spy right and he hates you," She whispered to Szarotka.
Szarotka looked at Gamith, Szarotka ran away. She ran and ran, not caring about anything else, toppling over rocks, just to get away from Gamith. She toppled over the final rock, a big tall stone. She layed flat on the floor breathing rapidly. Gamith ran after.
"Szarotka!" He called. He caught up with her.
"Are you ok?" He asked. Szarotka got up.
"Yes I'm fine!" She yelled, running away. Enern flew towards them. Ebony glided towards them. Suddenly they was telported somewhere. The Dark Dimension.
"What happened?" Yelled Enern. The next mintue they were stuck in an icy cage in the Dark dimension. Ebony grabbed Gamith by the neck and holded him on the wall, she brought her free claw out by his neck.
"Tell the truth or Gamith gets it!" She yelled. Szarotka and Enern were confused.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Keep it up

I'll continue it tomorrow

Chapter nine
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Coming legends dead
CONTINUED

"I said tell the truth!" Yelled Ebony.
"Help!" Yelled Gamith. Ebony's teeth clashed together.
"Ok then! I'm not a light dragon!" Cried Szarotka. Enern and Gamith looked suprised. Ebony roared.
"Explain!" She yelled. Szarotka wanted Gamith and her friends to live.
"Ok! I escaped from The Dark Dimension!" Shouted Szarotka. Enern walked back. Ebony let go of Gamith, he dropped to the ground.
"Ow!" He cried. Szarotka sighed. Suddenly a dragon telported in the cage. It was Rou. Rou was the master of all dark dragons, the dragon master of The dark dimension. He had dark blue scales, amber eyes, bronze horns and a red cape. He was quite slender.
"Thank-you Ebony," Said Rou as he telported in the cage. Ebony creeped close to him sighing. Rou was Ebony's father.
"Rou!" Cried Szarotka. Ebony frowned.
"I'll be kind and set you all free, but to live Szarotka your going to have to kill me, come to the Floating islands, before it's to late," He said.
"Ebony with guide you," He then added. He then telported Szarotka, Gamith, Enern and Ebony back to the Light world.

Chapter ten
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Traveling

A tear dropped down from Szarotka's deep blue eye. Gamith walked towarded her.
"Szarotka?" He asked.
"I'm fine," Said Szarotka, she wiped the tear away.
"I'm not going to walk away, I'm going battle Rou too, beside you," He said. Enern came towards Szarotka.
"I'm going to help you to Szarotka, were a team, right Ebony?" Said Enern.
"Right," Said Ebony.
"Follow," Added Ebony. Ebony leaped through the falls, checking behind her a few times. They soon came across the Enchanted forest. The lake flowed, the grass was beatifully green. Szarotka sighed.
"Were at the Enchanted forest now," Said Ebony. Gamith smiled. The sky was azure. Enern, Gamith and Szarotka were staring at the sky.
"Come on then!" Said Ebony. Ebony leaped through the grass. Szarotka followed. They traveled following Ebony. It soon came to the evening.
"We need some food," Said Enern
"One of us will have to get some food," Said Ebony
"I will," Said Enern. Gamith, Szarotka and Ebony say down while they waited for Enern to bring them some food.
"Is they food here?" Asked Szarotka.
"I think they might be," Replyed Gamith
"Well there is somewhere," Snarled Ebony. Enern came back with four scarlet red ripe apples. She handed one each.
"All I could find," Said Enern.
"Next time, i'll do the food," Said Ebony.
Szarotka chewed hers. It was tasty. She had some more. Sooner it was all gone. Gamith had eaten all his too, so had Enern. But Ebony was still nibbling the sides of her. She looked worried.
"Are you ok Ebony?" Asked Enern.
"Yes," Said Ebony, chucking the apple away.

Next chapter out tomorrow.

Nice chapters

I don't have time to make a chapter today, two chapters tomorrow.

Chapter eleven
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Boarhounds

Suddenly a brown fured, pig snouted dragon leaped up at Szarotka, Gamith Enern and Ebony. They were all suprised and shocked, there hearts pounding, expect for Ebony.
"What is that thing?" Yelled Gamith. Szarotka snarled at it. Five more jumped out, but smaller than the other.
"I think were under attack!" Yelled Szarotka at the top of her voice. Enern glided back. The strange attackers growled, suddenly one leaped up and clawed Szarotka.
"Help!" Szarotka shouted. The thing wouldn't stop. Suddenly Szarotka was bleeding, she was panicking rapidly. Gamith jumped up towards the best and pulled it off. He air combated it and kicked it hard, it then skidded across the clean grass, Dead.
"What was that thing?" Asked Szarotka.
"I don't know!" Said Gamith as another one of the beasts clawed him, suddenly Enern began to help him. Enern grabbed one of the beasts and bit it hard, killing it. Szarotka rammed some with her horns. Ebony just watched. Soon enough, all of them were dead.
"We need to find out about those things," Said Enern. Szarotka and Gamith agreed.
"Follow," Hissed Ebony. They followed Ebony. Later on it was getting dark, they passed trees and stones as the sky changed. It started to rain, the rain was quite a heavy shower. They were just passing a cave.
"We shall sleep here," Said Ebony, pointing her claw towards the cave. The cave looked habited.
As they walked inside, they saw a few dragon vases, until they saw another dragon. The dragon had red and green scales.
"Ahh, Visitors," Said the dragon.
"Hello," Greeted Enern.
"I am Greenfel, what brings you here?" Asked Grenfel.
"We were attacked by some beast, it was like a pig, a dog and a dragon," Asked Enern
"A Darkhound or a Wildhound?" Asked Grenfel
"No, it had a pig's snout and it looked like a dragon," Explained Szarotka
TO BE CONTINUED...

Very nice
The whole story so far is very good

Chapter eleven
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Informed

"A Boarhound is a boar snouted hound, a beast with a dragons soul, only to be seen if a dark dragon master is angered," Said Grenfel. Ebony snorted, Szarotka and the rest listened carefully, there eyes and face aware of Greefel. Grenfel had not finished his words yet. Ebony looked at him as if she was fed up with him. Greenfel stared at Ebony and then cleared his throat. Ebony jumped back.
"Much related to the Darkhound, it has teet-" Grenfel stoped and sighed. Ebony clashed her teeth together, Enern looked delayed. Grenfel scampered over towards an old oak bookshelf stacked up with books. They were thick and thin books, all stacked up. Grenfel grabbed a thick red book, that had 'Hounds' printed in golden text on the front. He muttered Page eighty-five to himself while he flipped open the book and flicked through the orange and yellow worn out pages. He soon cheered faintly, as he found the page.
"Boarhounds are a boar-snouted hound related to Darkhounds. Boarhounds are often living in clans working for Dark dragon masters. The alpha Boarhound is a much bigger sized Boarhound than a normal Boarhound, with also tusks, the female alpha is slender with thicker fur and no tusks. They are commonly brown fured, but they can live in cold areas. If they live in a cold area, there coat is thick and white, if they live in a hot area their coat will be thin and brown. Boarhound have the best nose in the hound family, they use this to sniff out enemys. Boarhound's ar-" Grenfel stopped.
"We get the point!" Yelled Ebony as she clawed the book away, it thumped onto the ground.
"Ok then, so where shall you be sleeping?" Asked Grenfel, he forced a smile.
"Here for shelter," Said Enern
"Good, I'll show you the spare room," Said Grenfel, they follow Grenfel into another room in the cave. It had pile of books and a dragon rug.
"Call me if you need me," Said Grenfel leaving the room. Ebony leaped in the corner of the cave room and rested.

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Chapter twelve
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Chapter


Szarotka stared at Ebony. She was kicking the dragon rug.
"Stop it Ebony," Said Szarotka. Ebony didn't stop. Szarotka soon began to feel tired. Szarotka was asleep. Szarotka woke up, her heart pounding. She could hear a noise, she had to get up and find out for herself.

So thats what she did. Szarotka creeped into the other shadow infested room in the cave, Gamith was flickering through Grenfel's books, he looked suprisingly desperate and furstrated.
"Gamith?" Szarotka asked. Gamith was reading a book titled 'Book of the dragons'
"Go away," He hissed. Szarotka glared at him.
"What are you doing?" Snarled Szarotka.
"Shut up and go away," Said Gamith. Szarotka took a glance of him, he didn't look very happy.
"I can't find any trace of my family," Hissed Gamith. Szarotka walked closer to him and peered at the book.
"Nessie, Violet, Ruby - " Szarotka stopped reading.
"Why not read another book?" Added Szarotka pulling out another book from the shelf.
"Ok..." Muttered Gamith under his breathe. Szarotka opened the book wide open in the middle without even reading the title, she then began to read.
"across the lands of the dragon. To open a portal to Lavastone, other nicknamed as The Floating islands, due to the many earthquakes they are now different 'islands' across the land. A tower was build by Manweersmalls when enslaved by Cynder. The portal of Lavastone requires one fury gemstone, one Shinepearl, A feather of a dove,"

To be continued...

(SORRY EXTREMLY SHORT ONE, ILL EDIT AND FINISH SOON)

nice start to the chapter
i can wait till all of it is up

Chapter twelve
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Portal

(Finished the chapter above!)

Szarotka read out.
"Don't we need to get to the Floating islands?" Asked Gamith
"Exactly, Whats that over their?" Said Szarotka, pointing to a bowl on a small tea table with a white dove feather, a fury gemstone and a shinepearl.
Grenfel walked into the room.
"Whats going on?" He asked.

Chapter fourteen
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The floating islands

"We need to open a portal to The floating islands," Said Szarotka
"Well, I do have the stuff for it," He cleared his throat and shouted for Ebony and Enern. They ran in.
"What is it?" Panicked Enern
"We can open a portal to The floating islands," Explained Gamith. Grenfel took hold of the portal needs.

Cool... Nice...

Nice chapter start

Filler

Filler reply

Chapter fifteen
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The floating islands

A portal opened, a portal to the Floating islands. (NEXT CHAPTER IS THE LAST ONE!)

Chapter sixteen
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The end

"Go in!" Cried Grenfel. Ebony was stood right back, away from the portal. Szarotka walked in. So did the rest, departing Ebony. Before Gamith left, he stopped to ask Ebony a question.
"Are you coming?" He asked. Ebony took a deep sigh and walked in with Gamith.
Rou was on the exact island the portal telported them too.
"So you came, I never thought you would make you weak rats," Hissed Rou, shooting a bolt of the Darkness element right at Enern. Enern screamed, she lay on the floor.
"Enern!" Yelled Szarotka
"Fight him without me," Said Enern weakly
"We can't! We have to do this as a team!" Cried Szarotka
"Just go!"
Szarotka rushed away.
"I can take you all down one by one, seconds by seconds," Boasted Rou
"You can't!" Ebony yelled faintly. Rou looked suprised.
"I'm your Dad, remember? You supposed to lure them into the lava pit, kill them, think of cunning plans? Besides what happened to my Boarhounds? They were the only strong ones left," Said Rou
"Well,"
"What is it?" Hissed Rou
"Their my friends," Mutter Ebony
"Well let that very well be farwell," Hissed Rou
"Never!" Yelled Ebony charging right at her father. His scales were too hard, she screamed in pain.
"We have to help her!" Cried Szarotka as blood spilled down Ebony's jaw.
"We have to work as a team," She then added.
"Enern!" Called Gamith
"Wa?" Enern yelped. Rou did a nasty snigger.
"We need to kill him somehow," Said Szarotka
"We can't..." Moaned Ebony
"Come over here!" Shouted Szarotka, Rou looked ready to fight, he ran over to Enern and clawed her with his massive claws.
"We can do it, We can do it, We can do it," Whispered Szarotka, Gamith copied.
Bolts of strong ice element shot out of their jaws right at Rou.
"Think you can defeat me?" Growled Rou, still clawing Enern. Enern was in bad shape.
"We can do it, We can do it, We can do it," Whispered Enern, struggling. A bolt of Eletricacy (Can't spell!) shot out as Rou clawed her. Rou jumped back.
"Ebony," Mouthed Gamith
Ebony snarled.
Suddenly a bolt of shadow shot right at Rou, creating some sort of fury. Gas and smoke flooded the area, they choked. The smoke scattered away revealing Rou. Dead.

The end.

Great Story
Is there going to be a sequel?

Yeah.