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the legend of moon and light~difrent worlds,difrent dragons [CLOSED]
death horn Ripto Gems: 311
#1 Posted: 00:36:22 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
hope u like it
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chapter 1 powes of the night
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As midnight wakes light falls and moon takes to the skys the moon was full and moon felt strange like the powes of light and night flew through her she soon fell to the ground with a big boom.A couple hours later he awoke to find herself in a new world she got up and went to find some one that knew were she was.Light was still asleep fast asleep but she dident know were she was even when she woke up she was awake buy the crack of dawn and she screamed for moon"MOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!MOON!!!!!!MOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!".Moon was still in the other world but she could faintly here her she screamed back"LIGHT!!!!!!!!!!LIGHT!!!!!!!!!!LIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"but light couldent here her and began to worrie what has happed to her sister and was very scared.Moon finally found somebody to tell her were she was she ran over to him and asked were she was.She said"hello i am moon who are you and were am i??????"he said"hi moon i am night the master of darkness and you are in the land of moon vally the darkest of all the vallys why do you ask???".Moon told night and he under stood he also had been traped in moon vally by the power of the moon but he said"well i also had been trped in here and i had been given a talassman that i can not read"moon said"give it to me and let me read it"so night gave her the talassman and she read"you will seak the power of the night and all shall be gone and your free to have flight".
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all will be reveld in the next chaptersmilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:36:42 29/08/2009 by death horn
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#2 Posted: 12:29:24 29/08/2009
It's getting better! You have improved allot on the grammar for your story! See how better it looks? But one more thing, try to put more full stops in your story. smilie
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Please read my story!
death horn Ripto Gems: 311
#3 Posted: 13:09:42 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
ok thanxsmilie
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