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Spyro and Cynder. Small Story [CLOSED]
Thericadragon Red Sparx Gems: 45
#1 Posted: 15:06:16 20/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro and Cynder stared at the sky, Avalar was not far from the location they were at but they wanted some time to themselves.
Spyro had so much to say to Cynder but he had no way to start
I need to rest Spyro, me to Cynder. My heart has so much to tell her
but I don't know where to begin. Spyro placed his wing over her shoulder and closed his eyes... He found himself seaching throughe
her mind. The I love you ecoed on his head. He woke to find Cynder
with tears in her eyes. She woke upset for her past and what she had done. Tears rolling down her cheek, she rested her head on Spyro's
shoulder. Spyro was stuned for a moment then put his head on hers.
He wispered, I understand, Im with you. Then he said to her I love you
too.

My first story SO BE NICE please give me give me AT LEAST ONE nice comment. Hope you like it.
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When you have nothing to live for, when your heart has failed you, run. You must
find who you are and throw away your past.
cornys Blue Sparx Gems: 665
#2 Posted: 15:16:21 20/07/2009
interesting but confusing... nice Idea but you need to use quotes and make a new paragragh every time a different character talkes.

First comment! smilie This is where the part is at now! lol smilie
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Thericadragon Red Sparx Gems: 45
#3 Posted: 15:19:09 20/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah I was never good at litature but Im still learning.
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When you have nothing to live for, when your heart has failed you, run. You must
find who you are and throw away your past.
cornys Blue Sparx Gems: 665
#4 Posted: 15:21:55 20/07/2009
hey... we all are... trust me smilie
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Thericadragon Red Sparx Gems: 45
#5 Posted: 15:35:27 20/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yes I want to make a story but this is just an intro and I may not.
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When you have nothing to live for, when your heart has failed you, run. You must
find who you are and throw away your past.
goldengeye Yellow Sparx Gems: 1818
#6 Posted: 15:59:06 20/07/2009
well if u do then i will read but plz read my The Conduit 2 Finding the Truth story somthing i came up wit
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i trust everyone just not the little devil inside of them. come listen to me brothers this is my assassin order you have questions come ask
cornys Blue Sparx Gems: 665
#7 Posted: 16:06:21 20/07/2009
sounds good to me but just take your time and read over what you have worte.... shouldn't be all to bad as long as your story has a good plot.
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Thericadragon Red Sparx Gems: 45
#8 Posted: 16:25:19 20/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Sure I will read
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When you have nothing to live for, when your heart has failed you, run. You must
find who you are and throw away your past.
Thericadragon Red Sparx Gems: 45
#9 Posted: 16:28:00 20/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Well the plot is that Spyro and Cynder adjust lives
Then here comes flame and ember. If I do make a
small story.
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When you have nothing to live for, when your heart has failed you, run. You must
find who you are and throw away your past.
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