A female laid down and dusted off her new born eggs. A door on the far side of the room opened with a blue male entering.
'My queen, is everything ok?' She looked up at him and smiled.
'Everything is fine Zarek.'
'Do you require anything?'
'Only some water..'
'I will bring some, your highness.' He then exited and shut the door. The female looked back at the eggs. The were three in total, blue, white and a lighter shade of blue.
'One day, you'll be on the throne, all of you.' she smiled.
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#1 Posted: 15:11:13 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 15:46:43 14/07/2009
a New story?
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#3 Posted: 15:47:09 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, got two pages written in my book.
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#4 Posted: 15:50:06 14/07/2009
Hmm...a new story.But first of all,I need to translate the title.
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#5 Posted: 15:54:52 14/07/2009
Them more please!
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#6 Posted: 15:58:29 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
A short while later, another male walked in. The female looked up. The male walked over and kissd her.
'Are you ok?' 'Yes, i'm fine.' the male looked at the eggs. 'Future heirs...' 'And your children Seron.' Seron smiled. 'That too.' He turned to look at her. He laid down in front of her. 'So what do you want they're names to be?' 'What? Now? Shouldn't we wait till they hatch?' 'I know... sorry.' She looked down. 'Hey... There's nothing to be sorry about.' He smiled lifting her head. She then smiled.
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#7 Posted: 15:59:48 14/07/2009
Seron....
It sound familiar........ But more
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#8 Posted: 16:02:49 14/07/2009
More please.And Seron sounds familiar too,reminds me of some Croatian word...
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#9 Posted: 16:03:38 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
While walking down a corridoor, Zarek looked out of a window to the side of him to check everything was fine. Normally he would have walked on normally, but today he felt something was comming. Looking out, he thought he saw nothing and began to walk away, but something made him look again, only this time did he see a wave of dragons approaching.
'Like an army... An army attacking!!' He quickly ran off to raise the alarms.
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#10 Posted: 16:06:35 14/07/2009
O..ou
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#11 Posted: 16:10:43 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
'All we have to do is wait.' Seron said. The doors burst open with Zarek standing.
'My queen!! Invaders!!' 'What?!' Seron replied shocked. 'An army approaches!! I can't count the numbers!' Seron then thought and turned. 'Amilia, hide the eggs, have no one find them!' 'What about you?!' She asked. 'No army invades and wins, and today is no exception!' 'But your children..' 'Need protecting! Hide them!!' Seron then ran out the doors. Amilia, shocked, turned to her eggs, She then turned to where Zarek stood. 'My queen! We need to go!' Amilia turned back to her eggs while Zarek left.
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#12 Posted: 16:14:02 14/07/2009
Drama...i like that
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#13 Posted: 16:19:45 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Seron ran towards the front entrance. He stood waiting for the attackers. A few minutes went before Seron turned to Zarek.
'Are you sure you saw an army approach?' 'Positive' Seron turned back to the door. Just as he looked, the door flew off as it burnt from something hitting it. Seron quickly jumped out of the way while some of the ensemblement were chrushed by the door into the wall behind. Prepared to fight, Seron looked at the burning enterance, waiting again. When no one appeared, Seron became comfused. He waited, a few moments later his expectons came. The attackers, black dragons with dark blue aura's , poured in already begining to fight the opposition. Seron quickly prayed that Amilia and the eggs would be safe.
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#14 Posted: 16:22:42 14/07/2009
More?
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#15 Posted: 16:28:35 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Amilia had since moved from her room. She moved slowly as she was carrying all three eggs and making sure no one found her. She had chosen an old and unused passage way to escape. The poor light and dusty passage made it even more difficult to find her way. The dust sometimes made her sneeze, and the cobwebs temporarily stop her. But none of this concerned her, as long as the eggs are safe, she thought to herself. As she wandered, she wondered where she was and where she was headed.
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#16 Posted: 16:28:56 14/07/2009
Cool,post more!It kinda reminds me of that game Lair,I don't know why.
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#17 Posted: 16:30:02 14/07/2009
Reminds me "Promise of the wolfes" book
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#18 Posted: 16:34:25 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
The battle at the entrance continued to grow worse for Seron. He began to realize that he may have already lost. However he still fought. Soon he was the only one left standing still fighting, but he was now out numbered. Before he could attack anymore, he was grabbed and stopped from moving. trying to break free, Seron tried hitting the ones who held him, but ultimatly failed. A taller, darker male then walked through the burnt entrance. He had no aura, but was still darker none the less. Seron watched as he remembered the face.
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#19 Posted: 16:35:45 14/07/2009
Hmmmm.....
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#20 Posted: 16:46:19 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Amilia walked further and further into the passage way. With every turn she became more scared. She had to get out soon.
OOC: gotta think o more first..
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#21 Posted: 16:48:09 14/07/2009
Nice ,while you're thinking of more,I'm going to watch something on YouTube.
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#22 Posted: 16:56:02 14/07/2009
Nice story!
But i have to go, i be back after 2 hours
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#23 Posted: 07:15:14 17/07/2009 | Topic Creator
More comming today!
Will Amilia escape? Will Seron beat the attackers? And what will happen to the eggs? Find out soon
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#24 Posted: 07:20:30 17/07/2009
Your last post kinda reminds me of commercials
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#25 Posted: 16:01:46 17/07/2009
This is great!
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#26 Posted: 16:06:52 17/07/2009
Quote: Cynder_fan
When?
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#27 Posted: 16:15:36 17/07/2009 | Topic Creator
When i next get a hold of my yellow book
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#28 Posted: 16:23:06 17/07/2009
Then grab it fast!
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#29 Posted: 16:29:06 17/07/2009 | Topic Creator
It's round someone elses!
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#30 Posted: 18:51:54 17/07/2009
Oh....
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#31 Posted: 18:57:47 17/07/2009
great story! write more please!
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#32 Posted: 12:45:27 18/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry i didn't write yesterday.. Busy day
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#33 Posted: 13:06:32 18/07/2009
Today?
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#34 Posted: 13:23:29 18/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep
Amilia, still looking for a way out, continued looking. But she was growing tired. She set the eggs down and paused to rest. Amilia was to far to hear the fight, but she was hoping Seron had fought all the attackers off. She then wondered if he did, and it was safe. Amilia looked at the eegs, wether or not Seron had won, they still needed protecting. She thought to herself. She looked at where she was headed, still wondering where it would lead.
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#35 Posted: 13:39:28 18/07/2009
More please!
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#36 Posted: 13:50:43 18/07/2009 | Topic Creator
After seeing the dragon walk in, Seron knew his fate. He looked up at the dark figure, in particular, the yellow eyes.
"I should have guessed it would be you... Zenith." "Well who else?" He smiled. Seron tried to escape again, but still failed to break free. 'Don't try it, but if you do want to be free, I'll let you go.' Seron looked up. 'Provided you tell me something in return. 'Being?' Zenith slightly chuckled, then moved closer. 'I'll let you go, if you tell me where Amilia and the eggs are.' 'Forget it!! Like i'd ever tell you that! I would rather die than put them in danger!' Zenith moved back smiling. 'Well, if that's what you'd rather want.' Seron then figured out what Zenith meant. He then felt a strong sharp pain in his back as something was hit into him. He was then dropped as his strength weakened to nothing. His vision was next to go as his body then lay lifeless. Zenith looked at the dragons. 'Find Amilia and the eggs!! Now!! And kill them both when you do!!' The dragons acknowledged and ran off.
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#37 Posted: 14:00:08 18/07/2009
*takes flips* Continue.
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#38 Posted: 14:12:26 18/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Amilia had since began her escape again. She had walked so far now that she had no idea if she was under the castle anymore. She still had her hope for Seron, but something crossed her mind.
'What if Seron doesn't win? Or What if he does? He won't know where to find me.' She still continued on. There was almost no light now and Amilia was finding it hard to search in. She stopped to rest again, but this time, she heard voices. 'Try down here!' The voice wasn't familiar, and it definitely wasn't Seron looking for her. Amilia knew now she had to escape. She now ran for an exit, only to reach a stone wall. Now panicking, she tried hitting the wall to make it break, but the voices were coming closer.
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#39 Posted: 14:20:22 18/07/2009
It's getting more interesting,continue!
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#40 Posted: 14:23:32 18/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Zenith turned and looked out of the burning entrance. He smiled.
'The beginning of a new era, my new empire...' A couple of the dragons returned. 'We can't find Amilia or the eggs! She's escaped with them!' A male one said. Zenith turned and hit a wall with his rage. 'Well look harder!!' The dragons ran off again.
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#41 Posted: 14:26:31 18/07/2009
I though he said vampire,not empire
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#42 Posted: 14:29:59 18/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Need more ideas.
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#43 Posted: 14:44:09 18/07/2009
Okay,I'll wait.
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#44 Posted: 16:08:16 18/07/2009
*Eats popcorn*
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#45 Posted: 07:47:47 24/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Dammit! I lost the book, i have got ideas though...
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#46 Posted: 08:59:28 24/07/2009
Then write ideas from your head,if you get what I mean
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#47 Posted: 09:02:14 24/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Alright Yusei!! Give me a brake
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#48 Posted: 09:05:16 24/07/2009
Alright I am Yusei!! Ok I will wait.
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#49 Posted: 20:41:02 24/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Amilia, tired of hitting the wall, groaned. She looked behind her, hearing the dragons coming. She knew she had no time. After seeing ashadow run closer, she turned back to hitting the cracking wall. She feared she may have been too late, that it was over for her.
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#50 Posted: 05:32:51 25/07/2009
Wondering will she be save...
and the eggs......
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