darkSpyro

Ok...I DID NOT MAKE HIGURASHI NO NAKU KORO NI/KAI/REI I am only just an insane fan. :3 this is a fandom i am making out of it...
enjoy. (warning,extremely good story)

EDIT:I call the topic,whatever chapter it is on. just so ya know


Haunted friends chapter one: Beginning

I just moved here to the town of Hinamizawa,and can already tell something is wrong,I have'nt even went to my new school yet,not enoguh time;with all the un-packing I need to do. I'm not really sure how,but this new town looks familiar...like from a dream maybe?
The next day...
Keiichi gets out of bed,well...falls. Rena has made her way into his house somehow and shot him with a small squirt gun,"Wake up Keiichi!" She smiles. "How do you know me!?",He says,sort of confused..."I was watching you move in,i'm Rena Ryuugu." "Huh? I-",He forgets what he was going to say as Rena laughs. "Here,Keiichi;was it? Let me show you around town." "Uh,I-" She grabs his hand and runs,taking him to the center of the town. "Hmm...where should we see first,Keiichi?" She looks over at him. "Well,I did'nt have any breakfast...thanks to that squirt gun-" She quickly takes him into a resturaunt. (Wow,)He thinks,(She doesnt give anyone much time to talk,always in a hurry,huh?).
After the resturaunt...
"Haha! There it is!" She runs down a hill. "Hey,Rena! Wait up!" He follows Rena down to a sort of dumpster. "This is sorta like a hideout,huh Rena?" "I guess you could say that." Keiichi looks all over the place,expecting something but he doesnt know what. "Well,Keiichi...Where to next?" "Hmm...Anywhere?" "Yep! You name it,i'm sure we'll find somewhere." She smiles,so does Keiichi,but strangley different smiles...
Later that night...
"Bye,Keiichi!" Rena waves. "Yeah,you to. I'll see you at school tomorrow. I'm finished moving in." "Mmkay!" He walks back home...


Keiichi-

Rena-

Haunted friends chapter two: A first day

Keiichi wakes up,this time on his own with no water gun. He picks up his remaining things,and leaves.
At school...
"Keiichi!" He looks over to see Rena with a group of others..."Oh,who are these people?" "These are some friends I want you to meet. This is Mion,and her twin sister,Shion. There's Satako and Rika,they're a bit younger than the others." "Uh-huh." Satoko walks up to him,having to bend her neck back to see his face. "Hello Keiichi!" She smiles;(these people are happy,huh?....too happy.) "Keiichi! KEIICHII!!!!" He snaps out of his thoughts,"Huh,what was that?" "I've been calling you for over 10 minutes!" He freezes (TEN MINUTES!? This can't be possible!) He is shocked,how could his thoughts last that long!? "But...How!? I was only like that for a few seconds!" "Yeah,sure,whatever." Mion says sarcasticly. Rena laughs at him,as usual. Rika joins too,tilting her head to the side and having a finger on her cheeck. "Ha,yeah." He starts laughing also,as the class begins.
after class...
"Hey,that was a fun day guys!" He says to his group of new friends. "Yeah,let's have another great day like this tomorrow." Shion says. He looks at Rika;she looks a bit pale. "Hey,Rika are you feeling ok?" "She probably is just tired from the great day!" Satoko says...But then Rika falls down,probably uncouncious. "RIKA!" They all say,Satoko helps her to her feet and puts her over her shoulders,barely though,being so small like Rika. "Is she okay?"Keiichi asks. "I don't know,i'll take her to my brother,Satoshi. Maybe he can help." "Ok,see you tomorrow.",Rena says,as the group goes back to thier own homes...But about Rika..Life for her friends were never quite the same.


Rika-

Satoko-

Shion-

Mion-

Satoshi-

Rena

Mion

Shion

Satoko

Keiichii

Satoshi

Quote: black dragon

Rena

Mion

Shion

Satoko

Keiichii

Satoshi

HA****INHA! That last JUST satoshi.

i was sorta hoping u wouldnt ruin my ****ing experience here. *shot*

I was looking forward to a new fandom by you,spyro fan 8. It seems pretty good so far.

And Black Dragon;try commenting in the future,ok?

Yayz!




Haunted friends chapter three: Rika's secret (€part 1)

He wakes up in the morning,and goes to school,he is suprised that Rika isnt there..."Hey,Rena;what happened to Rika?" Satoko answers,"She needs rest,satoshi thinks. We have'nt found out what happened to her yet." "hmm..." That keeps Keiichi wondering all day...
after school...
He walks straghit home,being early. He stands outside...Then hears,"Ahh!",like if someone was screaming in pain. He runs inside and finds hit parents...dead. he screams and hears a crash through a window,the murderer must have escaped. He chases after them,not knowing hwere they went. He walks back inside,(Lets see,how could they have been killed? What weapon?) He finds that they were stabbed to death. He finds no knife. He reports a murder...and finds a blue strand of hair.
At school...
He walsk up to Rika,"Where were you last night?!" "Asleep,resting like the Satoko said i should." He looks at Satoko,"...


more tonight i GTG

Quote: silver wind

I was looking forward to a new fandom by you,spyro fan 8. It seems pretty good so far.

And Black Dragon;try commenting in the future,ok?

I was simply providing extra sources incase someone didn't fully know what they looked like .

yeah that what i ****ing thought.

it sucks,i know it. ._. ima close it now.


EDIT:but,anyway it ends when Rika goes insane because of Satako and her get in a fight and Satako injects that one drug/thing and Rika kills satako on a boat that her and her firends are on,there ends up being TWO Rika's because of the curse,the haunted one was the one who kills Satoko and Mion has to kill Rika to protect her friends,but kills the wrong Rika,Keiichi kills Mion and shion trys to attack keiichi but misses,falling off the boat,her death is unkown..Rena and keiichi are the only ones on the boat,with the haunted Rika...his bat goes through Rika,nothing can hit it,it leaves and destroys almost all of hinamiwaza until satisfied and it leaves...keiichi finds that Rena,(after they get back to the town) has killed herself,knowing the town has no hope,Keiichi thinks that also,but doesnt kill himself...

Keiichi dies in the end..by Shion finding him in his room and uses Rena's cleaver. so in the end,Shion gets away with the murder...

*closes*