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(REMADE MODIFIED)SAOD Spyro Age Of Darkness/light indarkness (my made up game) [CLOSED]
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#1 Posted: 00:47:17 21/05/2009 | Topic Creator
(MODIFIED NEW VERSION)
light in darkness

SPYRO AGE OF DARKNESS
game one-Light in darkness(not sure if title will stay)


In Game changes(to TLOS)

1.Swimming and Diving
2.New Elements for Spyro
3.Brand new characters like (name not revealed) the dragoness and her partner (not revealed) the she-dragonfly and much more.
4.Brand new more epic and complicated full of action storyline and game play!
5.Brand new looks for spyro,sparx and hunter
6.New abilities and more lifelike worlds
7.more enemies
8.and most of all a longer storyline compared to the trilogy of TLOS(seriously short! smilie)

For years peace has been in the land of dragons,that is till by time an ancient evil called the shade was waiting for centuries to awaken.......
And after years the dreadful shade,s prison a large shadowy red Cristal glowed faintly in an underground cave surrounded by magma.
The Cristal glowed violently in a dark red state,and it started to shatter,
Meanwhile the dragons and the cats(cheetahs and tigers)where celebrating the new age of eternal peace and so it came with a brood of new dragon eggs all of them where huddled up together from green,blue,red,orange,yellow,black,white...but the olny ones that standed out where the strangest eggs ever seen.
One pure purple with yellow patterns on it, and the other was a pure dark silver with gold patterns.
they all placed the eggs under large incubator in the shape of a large nest,The dragons and all of the other creatures danced and cheered as the day turned to dusk.
But little they knew that an evil had escaped and it would be almost impossible to stop the dreaded shade.
Meanwhile in the volcano deep in its chambers the Cristal had already had a big chunk broken off to reveal a shadowy creature with pure evil smoldering red eyes,in a large burst of energy the shade breaks free and spreads its large shadow wings(The shade,s appearance is that of a phoenix made of shadows and bones,but it can shape shift,in this case has no true form)
Screeching to the sky as it flew out of the volcanic chambers.
The earth shock by the shades screech,and the volcano began to erupt with pure beams of magma into the air as a large shadowy creature rose from its crust!
The Dragons and the cats began to gasp in pure horror as the creature ascended into the air a large shadow crept over the land covering the land around the dragon city.
RETREAT!
the elder dragon roars as in horror he sees that out of the shadow a full army of vile dog like creatures sprang up and began to charge straight at the doors and jumping over the large walls,
THE EGGS! cried out a young white tigress as she saw the dog like creatures approaching the eggs.
one off the large dog like creatures approached the chambers to be stopped by a large blue water dragon using her hydro pulse.
but they where too many the blue dragoness gasped in horror as one of the creatures smashed a pink egg under its feet,and another one slashed one egg in half with its tail.
The other dragons stared in total helplessness as they could do nothing...or could they?
The purple and silver eggs where next to a drop off or a cliff,the dragons nodded it was the olny hope.
so they flew to the corner where the eggs where and in a flash a red dragon picks them up and trows them down the cliff........
(So the game starts here)
Both eggs keep falling down and crash into trees and bushes softening the fall,as both eggs keep rolling on the grass and fell in the river.
Both eggs bobbed in the water as they both rid the current and went down the river into a forest,they both began to roll onto the soft ground,
After some time some dragonflies come along,
One was a pure blue while the other was a glowing green with some tinges of brown they both looked with curiosity at the eggs,
Then two other dragonflies came along to the scene but these where more strongly built,they where the infamous aggressive battle dragonflies(Battle dragonfly's have spikes or stabbers at the end of there tails to attack intruders)
One of them was ruby red and the other orange
Both species of dragonfly argued over who found the eggs first and who was going to keep them
they both thought that the eggs where going to be mega dragonflies.
At the end they decide do split up the eggs,
The blue and green(Sparx,s parents) take the purple
And the red and orange take the Silver (Not revealed She-dragonfly's parents)

Dont steal this! or u will die!!!

so yeah y modified it because the last 1 sucked!!(Y failed but this one is better!)
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 03:54:47 23/05/2009 by WINDAKI
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#2 Posted: 14:53:37 21/05/2009
I didn't understand that at all. WHO is the black dragon? WHAT'S going on? Is Spyro even in it?
DARK CINDER Ripto Gems: 1062
#3 Posted: 18:32:30 21/05/2009
Atleast you you wre brave enoth to get rid of cynder i meen shes ok but EVRYONE loves her TOO much
Sam the Dragon Green Sparx Gems: 224
#4 Posted: 18:43:53 21/05/2009
[quote=DARK CINDER]Atleast you you wre brave enoth to get rid of cynder i meen shes ok but EVRYONE loves her TOO much[/quote]

Cynder is AWESOME!!!! What are you talking about?
Sam the Dragon Green Sparx Gems: 224
#5 Posted: 18:44:24 21/05/2009
You got me with the title!!!!!
DARK CINDER Ripto Gems: 1062
#6 Posted: 19:08:54 21/05/2009
1. dont dubble post
2. i said i LIKE CYNDER smilie look next time
3. get used to it not evryone gets hot over cynder smilie
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#7 Posted: 19:57:59 21/05/2009
Quote: Sam the Dragon
Quote: DARK CINDER
Atleast you you wre brave enoth to get rid of cynder i meen shes ok but EVRYONE loves her TOO much


Cynder is AWESOME!!!! What are you talking about?


Cynder is RUBBISH! Stupidbloodymary-sues.
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#8 Posted: 23:57:19 21/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Its being modified to a better opening scene but (Y like cynder too but y am following the start brand new thing on it!)<y don't wanna kill Cynder!

the black dragoness y made her up she will be revealed later.
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
BlackDragonAJ89 Green Sparx Gems: 480
#9 Posted: 01:48:46 22/05/2009
Another black dragoness?!

I think the Legend series was the rightful reboot... =/
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"Never argue with a fool; some people can't tell the difference."smilie
Visit my DA pagesmilie
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#10 Posted: 15:07:11 22/05/2009
The title is a bit... Unimaginative... And the story line is to much like TLOS...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#11 Posted: 16:15:48 22/05/2009 | Topic Creator
y will fix it later thank u!
and its supposed to be simmilar to TLOS Because its AN RPG!!
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#12 Posted: 17:57:06 22/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
y will fix it later thank u!
and its supposed to be simmilar to TLOS Because its AN RPG!!


And? Just because its an RPG doesn't mean it has to have the same story line as TLoS...
DARK CINDER Ripto Gems: 1062
#13 Posted: 19:58:52 22/05/2009
Quote: bionicle2809
Quote: WINDAKI
y will fix it later thank u!
and its supposed to be simmilar to TLOS Because its AN RPG!!


And? Just because its an RPG doesn't mean it has to have the same story line as TLoS...


i know thats like saying all the Crash games have to be the same because there platformer
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#14 Posted: 03:59:23 23/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Y FIXED IT!!!!
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#15 Posted: 08:05:56 23/05/2009
Question... Why do you keep putting Y's instead of I's? Also its STILL to much like TLoS... The whole thing about the eggs going down the river and then Dragonfly's finding them... And there the same 2 Dragonfly's (Flash and Nina) from ANB... This is no better than the last one...

Quote: WINDAKI
Dont steal this! or u will die!!!


If they have a brain they wouldn't even bother to steal it...
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#16 Posted: 11:55:58 23/05/2009
Hey look! ANB with a slight change! Woo hoo!
DARK CINDER Ripto Gems: 1062
#17 Posted: 12:11:46 23/05/2009
Quote: Tango
Hey look! ANB with a slight change! Woo hoo!


smilie LMAO!!!!!!!!
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#18 Posted: 14:26:17 23/05/2009
Quote: Tango
Hey look! ANB with a slight change! Woo hoo!


Edsactly... Its no better than the story he came up with before...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#19 Posted: 19:36:20 23/05/2009 | Topic Creator
THE STUPID STORY INST EVEN ONE FOURTH DONE!
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#20 Posted: 20:42:47 23/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
THE STUPID STORY INST EVEN ONE FOURTH DONE!


Yeah... The other parts will involve rescuing the Guardians and then finaly defeating an evil Dragon...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#21 Posted: 01:11:54 24/05/2009 | Topic Creator
THIS IS NOT TLOS!
Whats next in brief:
is stopping some evill bountyhunters,and recover the stolen shade keys
and finally defeat a giant 3 headed dog demon! that is challenged ....(Not like cynder)
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#22 Posted: 10:43:40 24/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
THIS IS NOT TLOS!
Whats next in brief:
is stopping some evill bountyhunters,and recover the stolen shade keys
and finally defeat a giant 3 headed dog demon! that is challenged ....(Not like cynder)


Still sounds like ANB to me... You just replaced Guardians with 'shade' keys...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#23 Posted: 20:35:43 24/05/2009 | Topic Creator
there is 12 shade keys>>>and i finally give up this is not the real story i don't want people to know the true story for spoiler reasons and its not even close to this!!!!
the only characters that will be left from TLOS
are flash and nina)aka spyro and sparx,s mom and dad!
the rest of the characters are brand new and totally this storyline is very different than this one
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#24 Posted: 21:11:25 24/05/2009
Then I'm not reading, or whatever its gonna be... Flash and Nina were only in the game for 5 seconds... If theres no Spyro then I don't care...
DARK CINDER Ripto Gems: 1062
#25 Posted: 21:14:12 24/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
there is 12 shade keys>>>and i finally give up this is not the real story i don't want people to know the true story for spoiler reasons and its not even close to this!!!!
the only characters that will be left from TLOS
are flash and nina)aka spyro and sparx,s mom and dad!
the rest of the characters are brand new and totally this storyline is very different than this one


your sounding despret to convince us now smilie
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#26 Posted: 21:20:39 24/05/2009
Quote: DARK CINDER
Quote: WINDAKI
there is 12 shade keys>>>and i finally give up this is not the real story i don't want people to know the true story for spoiler reasons and its not even close to this!!!!
the only characters that will be left from TLOS
are flash and nina)aka spyro and sparx,s mom and dad!
the rest of the characters are brand new and totally this storyline is very different than this one


your sounding despret to convince us now smilie


EPIC WIN! Yeah... He's changed the story line what?... 3 times now... He just keeps trying to hope we like it...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#27 Posted: 22:50:13 24/05/2009 | Topic Creator
spyro is in it(and i am not trying to convince you at all,i already got the story,and the art i totally am not going to post the original unless you want the first spoiler
DONT READ THIS UNLESS YOU REALY WANT TO SPOIL THIS!!
Please note if this game ever becomes real you are going to spoil this)


Spyro as an egg gets stolen from the dragons in an invasion and the egg is going to become lunch to some dog creatures,including the also silver egg witch was stolen and about to get eaten,but he gets smashed into the floor shattering his egg and half stunning him for a while,
Spyro newly hatched and already has to battle.
this is the first fight in the game,
after you defeat your foe,the other egg hatches (silver egg)
and the young dragon runs out of the cave the moment it hatches.
and spyro as well runs out of the cave into the forest
No more spoilers will be revealed.
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#28 Posted: 23:04:05 24/05/2009
Wow... That was amazing smilie... Why had Spyro just hatched? This makes no sence...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#29 Posted: 23:15:50 24/05/2009 | Topic Creator
he hatched because his egg was smashed!
omg it was right there!
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#30 Posted: 23:34:17 24/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
he hatched because his egg was smashed!
omg it was right there!


*facepalm* I didn't mean that! Never mind...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#31 Posted: 00:49:31 25/05/2009 | Topic Creator
well that is the original story in brief and that's the olny thing y got so say and reveal.

hey by the way aren't you that guy on da who is making a spyro game?
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#32 Posted: 01:13:52 25/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
well that is the original story in brief and that's the olny thing y got so say and reveal.

hey by the way aren't you that guy on da who is making a spyro game?


Yes... I am...
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#33 Posted: 13:19:39 25/05/2009
If it became a real game? Dream on. It never happens.
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#34 Posted: 13:21:58 25/05/2009
I bet he's gonna ask me to make it...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#35 Posted: 19:08:13 25/05/2009 | Topic Creator
no i am not!!

and i got so many ways to convince people!!!
if this game ever becomes real! (IT WILL BECAUSE I AM CONFIDENT OF MY SELF!)

and the olny people who will get the beta game and the real ting early are!

FROM DA

BFF Chuchirimon(know her for reals
and CASF cuz her art rocks!
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#36 Posted: 20:20:18 25/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
no i am not!!

and i got so many ways to convince people!!!
if this game ever becomes real! (IT WILL BECAUSE I AM CONFIDENT OF MY SELF!)

and the olny people who will get the beta game and the real ting early are!

FROM DA

BFF Chuchirimon(know her for reals
and CASF cuz her art rocks!


Umm....no, the game will never be made.

Because it is rubbish, by the time your even old enough to get that kind of job Spyro would have moved on or died, no one wants games like that, and it's rubbish. I already said that? Oh, then make it really rubbsh.

I'm not one of those peremistic (Sp?) I'm realistic.
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#37 Posted: 22:15:57 25/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
no i am not!!

and i got so many ways to convince people!!!
if this game ever becomes real! (IT WILL BECAUSE I AM CONFIDENT OF MY SELF!)

and the olny people who will get the beta game and the real ting early are!

FROM DA

BFF Chuchirimon(know her for reals
and CASF cuz her art rocks!


Ok then... How are you going to make it?
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#38 Posted: 22:28:18 25/05/2009 | Topic Creator
well y was thinking about joining the spyro makers and giving me the best results in creating spyro games,and not stupid ones.
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#39 Posted: 22:35:29 25/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
well y was thinking about joining the spyro makers and giving me the best results in creating spyro games,and not stupid ones.


Your 14... By time you leave school Spyro probably won't exist...
WINDAKI Red Sparx Gems: 43
#40 Posted: 01:00:45 26/05/2009 | Topic Creator
well i can re get it and re model it and i don't necessarily have to be 18 to have a job!

and surely i am not good at making the storyline but i am good at making characters i confess that!
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Light and darkness make deadly combination : SAOD
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#41 Posted: 10:52:41 26/05/2009
Good at making charactors. i don't belive that, gimmie a detailed description on one. I won't judge it myself, I'll let my sister do that...
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#42 Posted: 14:47:56 26/05/2009
Quote: WINDAKI
well i can re get it and re model it and i don't necessarily have to be 18 to have a job!

and surely i am not good at making the storyline but i am good at making characters i confess that!


Your realy gonna get a job working in a major video game company before your 18 arnt you... And even if you did get a job in Activision, wether it be now or when your older, no one is gonna agree with this...
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