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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438 |
#1 Posted: 17:51:42 19/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Basicly... The Malefor story... From birth to... Well I was gonna say death but did he realy die when he went into the well of souls?... Yeah... But you get what I mean ... I know I was already writing a story like this but I've decided to scrap that and make another one... So I should post the first chapter soon... Hope you enjoy!
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#2 Posted: 19:10:29 19/05/2009
Awesome dude, like I say many times, if its about Malefor, I'll be there reading it! Hopefully at school....
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#3 Posted: 23:13:44 28/05/2009 | Topic Creator
*Facepalm* OMG! I FORGOT TO WRITE THE FIRST CHAPTER!!!
Ok... I've decided to write this from Malefor's point of view... It adds mystery Chapter I: The Egg I opened my eyes as a bright yellow light shone, blinding me. I had been trapped in the dark cold egg for so long. It felt like my prison that I was destined to stay in for all eternity. Six tall creatures stood looking down at me. I felt worried as I slowly crawed back into the broken shell that had been my prison for as long as I could remember. One of the creatures to my right smiled at me. Tears of joy poured from their shimmering orange eyes and trickled down their black smooth head. I smiled back at them as if I knew that they meant no harm to me. All the other creatures just looked at me curiously as if they had never seen anything like me before. Four of the other five creatures looked to an old grey creature that stood to my left. The grey creature shook its head. "A dark aura shrowds this young Dragon..." They whispered. The smile from the creature to my right turned to an angry glair as they turned to the grey creature at the end. They did not speak, just staired at them in anger. "Malefor, that shall be his name..." Said the grey creature. The creature to my right turned around but before they could speak the grey creature said "You know the rules, the guardians get to choose the names of new borns. I would have thought you'd have known that by now, Althea..." Said the grey creature. The creature to my right walked through the door infront of me following the grey creature. The remaining four creatures stood infront of me. One red, one yellow, one blue and the last one green. They smiled down at me as the blue one said. "Welcome home." In a caring voice. The green one rolled its eyes and looked at her. "If your going to be like this every time a Dragon is born then we'll stop bringing you here Ice... Your not the mother, you'll confuse the young one." The green one said in an angry voice. The blue one looked at him sternly. "At least I care!" They said as they walked through the door ahead of me. I looked at the green creture curiously as it looked at the blue creature as they left the room. "Oh Ragnar, I think your being a bit to harsh on Ice. She's only just joined the guardians, you can't blame her for getting excited." Said the red one. The green one looked at him as I walked up to the red one. "Thats easy for you to say Vulcan..." He said as he left the room along with the other three creatures. To Be Continued... |
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#4 Posted: 06:10:01 29/05/2009
You...must...continue....at....this.....moment, NOW!!!! SERIOUSLY!!!!!!! If I wait any longer....who knows what will happen...
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#5 Posted: 20:01:38 29/05/2009
awesome! plz post more :D
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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438 |
#6 Posted: 22:19:12 29/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter II: The Dreamer
Not much had happened in five years. It was boring, almost like being trapped in the egg again. I lay on the floor of the sleeping chamber awake with my front feet under my small purple head. I sighed as everyone else around me was asleep. 'How can they waist their time asleep' I thought to myself. I didn't want to waist a moment asleep but I kewn sometimes that I had to. I stood up and slowly walked through the door that lead into the nesting room. The large golden dish shimmered in the moonlight coming from a blue glass window above it. I walked up to the golden dish and glaired into the smooth surface of the green liquid that was motionless in the dish. I remember the day that Vulcan, the fire guardian, told me that some Dragons had the ability to see visions though the green liquid and that Spyridon, the time guardian, was one such Dragon. I had always hopped to gain this ability but I couldn't see even a glimps of a vision. Everyday I would walk up to the dish hoping to see something within its green sparcling liquid. I closed my eyes and attempted to empty my mind and when ready I opened my eyes enthusiasticly looking down into the green liquid. Nothing happened, it just remained still and motionless just like before. "It won't work Malefor..." I turned around as Spyridon looked down at me. I sighed and turned around back to the golden dish. "I just want to-" I said before I was interupted by Spyridon. "Wanting will get you nowhere Malefor, you must feel the energy of your anncestors flowing through your body." Spyridon said as he walked around to the other side of the dish. "And how do I do that..." I asked annoyed. He shook his head. "Paitence young Dragon, over time it will come to you..." He said. I turned around and stomped through the door annoyed. I wanted it now, I didn't want to have to wait. I wanted to know my future, what use would it be if I didn't know it now. I lay down onto the grey stone floor of the sleeping chamber facing the door to see if Spyridon came it at all. He didn't. I was awake for the rest of the night but he had never returned. I wondered what he could be doing in there so I walked up to the door and peeked through a small hole. He stood there infront of the dish looking down into the liquid. To Be Continued... |
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#7 Posted: 00:15:32 30/05/2009
Can't wait for the next part!
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#8 Posted: 16:29:15 30/05/2009
PC!!!
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#9 Posted: 18:35:31 15/06/2009
Did you cancell this story?
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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438 |
#10 Posted: 21:33:46 15/06/2009 | Topic Creator
No... I just forgot... OK BIONICLE2809! NEW RULE! SUBSCRIBE TO YOUR FANFICS THAT YOU ARE WRITING SO YOU DON'T FORGET! GOT THAT?
Yes... GOOD! Now hit that button after your done talking to yourself... Your the one who started talking to me... I'm talking to you! And you are me! SO HOW DOES THAT MAKE SENCE! Press the damn button crazy dude... I'll do it once you've stoped talking to me! Look, we can sit here all night and talk to ourselfs or we can submit this post and click the subscribe button... Got it? Yes... WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT TALKING TO YOURSELF! I dunno... I have bad memory... I KNOW! WERE THE SAME PERSON!!! (Note: I know that was random but I litteraly just came up with that as I was going along ) |
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#11 Posted: 21:53:39 15/06/2009
Come to think of it, I forgot bout the story too!!
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#12 Posted: 00:40:16 16/06/2009
Soooo, where is everyone?
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