darkSpyro

This story has some major fails..

1. Failiness! Was it that dragons have offspring every 10 years or something? Correct me if I'm wrong, I don't really know about that..

2. Hastiness! I don't really think that Spyro and Cynder would choose their beloved child's names just like that.
"SNAP! you are Cyndro and you are Spyder, now let's get to the part where you grow up!"

3. Messiness! You can't really get any sense out of the story.. It's written randomly, and the storyline just suddenly jumps forward a year or so..

4.Growuppiness! Yeah.. They're year old now, and they fight and talk? Shouldn't dragons grow up slowly..

5. Purpliness! Cyndro seems to have a notorious purple dragon cyndrome!
Purple dragons are born once, in every generation.. What a luck that purple dragon like Spyro just happened to have a purple child. It's not a heritage I tell you!

7.Last, but not least.. As already mentioned, this story should be in the fandom section. But you can't change it so I guess this will have to do..

Sorry for the negative opinion, hopefully it'll help you make your story better in future.

Edit: Oh yeah, you should give some information of the enviroment and the situation of the world. The whole story is not just talking, is it?

Ah, I just recalled. Dragons can have offspring anytime, but purple gragons are only born every ten years.. My mistake..

Sorry 'bout that, foolish me..

I bet you could learn quickly, if you'd want to.
Awfully bad for me to say, everyone says I'm a great writer..

Listen to other peoples opinions and tips. If you can't find any, ask for them. I bet they'd be happy to help.
It'll be good

I dunno really, I have never closed any topics, if thats even possible..
Dark52 can close them, thats for sure, but why do you even need to close this one?