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In a world of dragons...(Silver and Charcoal) [CLOSED]
spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#1 Posted: 01:00:01 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok, here is the second Legend of Silver story. smilie


Main characters-[User Posted Image]-Silver,the main character of the story. He has the powers of a silver dragon. He also has ice powers,the strongest in all of the land...He may be strong but he claims to be nowhere without his family. Age:21

[User Posted Image]-Scarlet,the ice goddess of the world. She is Silver's mate and shares two kids. Age:21

[User Posted Image]-Icicle,the first ice kid. Older than his smaller sister and willing to protect her,being like his dad. Age:13

[User Posted Image]-Snow storm,the frightened one. She is mostly scared,but can be tough when she wants...being protected by her family,she is rarely hurt. Age:10

[User Posted Image]-Luna,the dark hero. The darkest dragon,also one of the greatest heros who ever lived. Age:19

[User Posted Image]-Miles,the static knight. The electric dragon knight. Age:19


Island kids-Barely even a role in the story,but they are the citezens of dragon island (read 1st story for summary)


Story-After the 3 great battles that raged in Silver's younghood,he must ban his strength of him and his family,to defeat the remaining shadow's of the dragon world,experiencing new enviroments,and adventures so big,that even Silver has a hard time with these. Him and his family have just came back,but shadow's have overcome...Silver and his family are unaware of the darkness until it may be too late.

I'll start after i write the first part one...welcome...to a world of dragons!
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#2 Posted: 01:04:44 07/05/2009
YAYZ!!!
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#3 Posted: 01:07:24 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie,yeah i'll start after school tomorrow...ill probably have part typed up by then. smilie
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#4 Posted: 10:47:48 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Here it is. smilie I hope you all like this. smilie


Chapter 1-Silver's homecoming...


Silver and his family are relaxing at Dragon Shores...They are ready for the vacation to be over so they could go back home to Dragon Island...But the kids can't fly yet..."Hey,Icicle,Snow storm.",Silver says "What,daddy?",the kids reply, "Since you both can't fly yet...How about I teach you both?" "Yes!",is the reply of the kids...They spread thier wings and Snow stom says, "What first?" "Well,Snow storm...First spread your wings and start to run...Then jump as high as you can and flap your wings a bit until you are getting the hang of it...then just glide for a while,and point up..." Scarlet comes, "*chuckle* Keep going kids!" The two kids fall down on thier first attempt. "It's ok."Silver says,"It takes more practice than you think." Then they get up and try again...and again...and again...and they fall each time they try..."It's ok,like I said before." "But we'll never get it at this rate.." They look down.. Silver makes them set up for it again,and this time whispers in his children's ears,"I belive you two will become great dragons when you grow up..like your mother and I,just get it right this time...and we insure you a great future" They try again...and fly.."We're flying!".Icicle says as he ogdes to the left of a tree...when they land,Snow storm keeps talking about how great it was to fly. "Well,Kids,Scarlet...Let's go back,Whattya' say we fly?" The kids agree as Scarlet just smiles and the family fly's back to Dragon Island together...They arrive right next to thier house...and Scarlet says,"Hey,since they can fly now,why don't we teach them how to fight?" "Great idea,Scarlet" The kids agree and they go into the forest,"Well,kids." "Yea,daddy?",Snow storm says.."It's been a pretty nice Homecoming right? Being welcomed back,and you two can fly. But now...It's time to learn how to fight.",Silver says as he grows a small smirk on his face,possibly in the thought that his kids will one day be like him and Scarlet...Two Grublins come,the forest is a great place to find Grublins...Luckily these are the weaker species of Grublins...easy for kids.."Are you two ready?" "Yes!!",Icicle and Snow storm reply...And now...Silver's kids are ready to continue the first step...to becoming a hero..

Is this good? smilie Please comment.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#5 Posted: 15:06:21 07/05/2009
NO!!!
it is awful

jkjkjk
Its great!!!!
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#6 Posted: 15:56:25 07/05/2009
Icicle?! you thife! you stole Icicle from my fandom!smilie JK it's ok, it's good so far. smilie
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spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#7 Posted: 19:19:55 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: silver dragon
Icicle?! you thife! you stole Icicle from my fandom!smilie JK it's ok, it's good so far. smilie


hey,u used blaze. smilie


smilie i didnt know he was from ur stroy. smilie i read his name wrong i guess. smilie
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#8 Posted: 19:40:00 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Here is the first story...it explains who the kids are,and about Silver's childhood.
silver dragon Yellow Sparx Gems: 1071
#9 Posted: 20:18:01 07/05/2009
blaze? where is he from? (other than my story)
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#10 Posted: 20:40:19 07/05/2009
More!
spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#11 Posted: 21:08:12 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
ok ill post more soon. smilie


blaze is from my first season. smilie
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#12 Posted: 23:22:24 07/05/2009
Continue! smilie
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I'm lacking people to talk to. smilie
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#13 Posted: 23:38:55 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Here is more! smilie

Chapter 2: Steps to becoming a hero...(part 1)


The kids get ready,they charge up thier energy,and Icicle charges;full speed at the grublin,while his sister,Snow storm,Whacks the other with her tail...Silver says,"Go get 'em!" As usual,Scarlet chuckles at him...Icicle is hit with a small stick by a grublin,he falls,then emmediatly gets up again,his sister is being hit and he moves in the way of the hit,he uses a small ice-ball on the grublin and it's frozen solid..his sister throws one into a tree and rams it,the grublin grabs the frozen grublin and they run. Scalret and Silver applaud thier kids,"Great job,Kids!" Icicle says,"Thanks dad,and mom!" Snow storm, "Yeah,daddy! Mommy!" They laugh and Silver explains more to his children,"Well,guys...I can't help you in these tests...Becuase you kids must learn to fight on your own..if we ever need,"He looks at Snow storm and Icicle real close,"If we ever need you two to help save the world anytime soon..." They walk back to the villiage and get ready for the second out of the three tests...they need to challenge the kid's strength's in every dragon attribute,almost..Fighting,Magic,And courage...Now they are taken to a water fall,And This time...Scarlet will help them with Magic..A treant appears from the water-fall,Icicle gets ready with his sister,for the challenge that requires almost every bit of energy he has...being a ICE type like his father...and being young..this test will start to release the Silver,within Icicle and Snow storm...If they succeed in this task...Silver knows his kids will be able to learn silver-attributed magic,like thier parents.."Kids,"Scarlet says,"Start" They get ready to continue thier 3-part quest to become small heroes.

Good? smilie
silver wind Green Sparx Gems: 168
#14 Posted: 23:39:55 07/05/2009
Good! smilie I can't wait until the next chapter! smilie
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spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#15 Posted: 00:19:49 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. smilie
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#16 Posted: 21:06:45 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
kids want sum candy? smilie
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#17 Posted: 21:10:55 08/05/2009
KIDDNAPPER!!!!
i hav more story
peas tell peeps to read me story
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#18 Posted: 21:56:13 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
ok ill tell them to read urs. smilie
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#19 Posted: 22:03:19 08/05/2009
thanx
u the best
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#20 Posted: 22:04:04 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
yea. >^< im so proud. smilie


im currently writing the 3rd chapter.smilie
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#21 Posted: 22:10:36 08/05/2009
u should be
lol
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#22 Posted: 22:14:47 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
>^< yesh.
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#23 Posted: 22:17:54 08/05/2009
lolol
XD
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#24 Posted: 02:08:13 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
ok here comes more...im almost done. smilie
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#25 Posted: 02:20:01 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: steps to becoming a hero...(part 2)


The kids charge and knock the Treant down. Icicle breaths a small silver bolt. "WHAT!?" He stares in amazemnt,then turns to Silver,"Dad? What was that?" "Icicle,being a young silver dragon...you seem to learn quicker than other dragons...try it again...hold your breath and focus on a small silver ball." He tries and shoots one at the Treant. He is staying down this time. Snow storm tries to breath Silver..She does. the kids celebrate.as the Treant gets up quietly...He swings an arm and hits the kids...they fall into the water...At first..Silver thinks the kids are okay...but then...he rememebers that his children may die...he saw Icicle trying the Silver bolt again...but if one of the kids would use something that close to an ice type magic attack...they would freeze to death and his children would die...he waits....and waits.....and waits....until he thinks that the children.....are dead...

good? smilie
spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#26 Posted: 02:35:12 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: steps to becoming a hero...(part 3)


He watches and holds Scarlet..as they wait...but almost gave up hope on them...when the kids come out of the water...soaking wet,and freezing...but not literally. "Dad!" Icicle screams,"Dad! Come look!" He reply's,"First..*he smiles* the Treant." The kids jump out of the water and simotaniously use a silver bolt on him.The kids start to feel weak..the effect is staring..."DAD!",Snow storm yells,"MA! what is happening to us!?" "Here, take these...ill explain." He hands the children some gems and hugs them. He explains,"Kids...this happens to every silver dragon,when they use silver magic,they are using a great amount of energy also,energy needed to live. If a dragon uses too much,they die. Don't use it all at once,use other techniques instead...use those for emergency's only." "Yes,you father is right. When we had you,two,i turned silver also. And it also injures be careful." Silver asks the kids,"Now..What did you both need to show us?" "Follow us.".they say,motioning the two parents to follow them...they go underwater...Silver notices is something as Flare comes down..from his almost weekly-vacation. They stare at a large door as the Dragons go through the huge key-hole..and meet something they never thought existed.

good? smilie
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#27 Posted: 02:38:49 09/05/2009
great!!!
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#28 Posted: 02:41:31 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
awsome. smilie same for urs. smilie
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#29 Posted: 02:52:06 09/05/2009
u had 12 readers on the 1st story
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spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#30 Posted: 11:54:19 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Icera
u had 12 readers on the 1st story


i know...but this is a new story...all that i have in this one,that was in the other one,is the charctars (mostofthem) and the islands.
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#31 Posted: 16:34:46 09/05/2009
tell the peeps that read it before to read
u got 4 on here
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#32 Posted: 22:07:56 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
ill try.
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#33 Posted: 22:09:59 09/05/2009
i can help
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#34 Posted: 22:10:51 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
cool. smilie
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#35 Posted: 22:12:12 09/05/2009
who shall i tell
bronze dragon?
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#36 Posted: 22:15:33 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
huwa jiccaqilqu u wont jigu hawn ghal ftit zmien,so we have to wait for him. smilie
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#37 Posted: 22:16:41 09/05/2009
im not,............watever that langauge is.................if it is one
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#38 Posted: 22:19:07 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
its maltese.
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#39 Posted: 04:56:45 10/05/2009
Quote: spyro fan 8
Main characters--Silver,the main character of the story. He has the powers of a silver dragon. He also has ice powers,the strongest in all of the land...He may be strong but he claims to be nowhere without his family. Age:21


huh In my Fic I should probably make him a little more depressed or something cuz so far no one in the story knows of Silvers personal life cuz he never showed his family...yet...

depressed cuz he gotta be away from them.
silver wind Green Sparx Gems: 168
#40 Posted: 18:54:12 10/05/2009
Keep going! smilie
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I'm lacking people to talk to. smilie
spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#41 Posted: 21:41:30 11/05/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 5: ineptune...(part 1)

they see a large sea-creature that is unkown...they swim through the hole and stare at it...silver wispers,"what is that!?" The creature sees them...at first...it is confused...then it charges towards them and takes flare before they can do anything...she/it..takes flare into a cage,the dragons are going as fast as they can...silver warns the kids to not move..he runs up to the creature and rams it...it stands tall and absorbs the hit...it grabs silver and throws him into a wall...he is losing breath..he can only last a small bit longer..he rams again and she dodges...Scarlet says,"Its Ineptune! She is too fast! come back!" he starts coming back...ineptune gets up and runs past him...she grabs icicle and is about to punch him..he thinks,"Oh chroniceler....im gonna die...im gonna freakin' die.." as everything becomes a blur...
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#42 Posted: 10:41:43 12/05/2009 | Topic Creator
[User Posted Image]-Charcoal,the mesterious one..im sure you've heard of him in RP. He will have more revealed of himself later. :3

NEW DRAGON! *shot*
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#43 Posted: 05:04:40 14/05/2009
coolio
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#44 Posted: 18:42:38 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6:Charcoal's legend (a small intro)

ok this chapter is on the other side of the world,where Charcoal is at...


One by One,Charcoal's friends fall in front of him,having lost his parent years ago,he screams,"This is it! My legend,my life,and my war to win!"
He looks up at gual,ready to become a legend
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#45 Posted: 19:09:28 16/05/2009
cool
me hav more story to
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#46 Posted: 19:10:40 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
ok ill read urs. smilie
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#47 Posted: 23:52:57 20/05/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie


Chapter 7:the fight (part 1)

he runs at gual and strikes,he doges a sword,then rams again,knowing gual is no match for him...gual catches him by suprise and throws him,he hits a wall,and falls..he gets up and breathes fire,a huge flame,and gual falls...
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#48 Posted: 02:04:21 21/05/2009
bye bye Gauly
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#49 Posted: 14:17:29 23/05/2009 | Topic Creator
not yet! smilie y'd u close urs? smilie that was getting really good.


chapter 8:the fight (part 2)

Gual awakens,and charges at him with his sword pointed at him,charcoal is stabbed...he lays down...bleeding....his body glows,a Black/Silver glow....he starts to get up,letting his wings grow larger...he flys/charges towards gual,he is stabbed again,but..keeps going. he finnaly gets a sword stabbed in him again...through his arm,but still keeps his horns on gual,pushing him back...Charcoal uses fury,a black fury. and Gual is dead...
he looks up at the sky,outside of the temple..and says,"I'm going back...To a world of dragons...

good? smilie
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#50 Posted: 15:25:52 23/05/2009
yes
NOW BYE BYE GAULY?

my story sucked, thats why
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