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Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#1 Posted: 21:29:31 06/05/2009 | Topic Creator
i decided to make a story

now before i start, id like to tell u who some of the characters are based on

Seerie: me
Zaveera: elder volteer
Flame: Dark Gaia999
Wanderist
Freezer: Spyroboy
Amber: Cynder5
Eclipse: SK
Comet: Eragon25
and Blizzard: JAK


some will come late in the story

Chapter 1
Confusion

Seerie was gliding above the woods. When he landed, he saw a white stone. The stone was hollow, yet hard. He heard a noise from the stone. This was no stone, it was a dragon egg. There was a crack! A head popped out. Soon, a small white dragon with completely blue eyes, large wings, and a tail with a blde-like tip was standing in front of Seerie.
Seerie walked up to her. "Hello," said the white dragon.
"Hello, where did u come from?"
"I don't know,you?"she asked.
"I dunno, I have lived alone for 11 years."
"What's your name?"
"Seerie, what 'bout you?"
"Hello, just hatched. Name me?"
"Icey? Blizzard? Snowdrift? Icera?"
"Icera! good, thanks."
"Come too my house?
"'Kay, thanks."
They flew to Seerie's cabin. They walked in."This is small." she said. He ignored her. "where do you sleep?" H pointed to a blanket on the ground. "Where do I sleep?" He pointed to a small bed.
They went too sleep.....
They woke at a loud knock on the door. "Let us in please, or we'll knock down this door!"

it sucks right now
but itll get better
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Edited 4 times - Last edited at 20:16:12 19/05/2009 by Icera
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970
#2 Posted: 21:46:18 06/05/2009
It's pretty good, please continue.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#3 Posted: 22:48:37 06/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1 (continued)

Seerie walked over too the door. Three dragons were outside. "Hello I'm Volt, this is Frost, and this is Boulder." said the yallow dragon, indacating too the blue dragon to the green one. "And I'm Zaveera."said a yelow dragon about Seerie's age. She was yellow, with blue horns, and large yellow eyes.
"What are you doing here?"asked Seerie.
"We're here for you, and a white egg or dragon."
"Over here!" Icera yelled.
"Please come with us."
"No."said Seerie.
"Oh, you must have a lot aof friends here that you dont want to leave."said Zaveera sarcasticly
"Fine."
"Good, Volt can take you to the village, while me and Boulder give news to Shadow."said Frost
"Shadow?"
"The other elder that sent us."
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#4 Posted: 23:35:24 06/05/2009
nicesmiliei like itsmilie=)
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#5 Posted: 23:36:52 06/05/2009 | Topic Creator
lol

the first friends too read it
r comin in the end of the first part
lol
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#6 Posted: 23:39:22 06/05/2009
lolsmiliei like mah namesmilieComet8D
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970
#7 Posted: 23:42:06 06/05/2009
Same here. Eclipse. It's catchy. smilie
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#8 Posted: 23:49:21 06/05/2009
THE MIGHTY COMET AND COLIPSE
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#9 Posted: 23:52:02 06/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Eclipse.
SK is shadow
and ur fire
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#10 Posted: 23:55:19 06/05/2009
mah badsmilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#11 Posted: 00:00:53 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
u 2 r also brothers
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#12 Posted: 00:12:47 07/05/2009
DUDE!mah bro, SK and I!smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#13 Posted: 00:15:20 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry
im a bit lazy today


Chapter 1 (still continued)

They flew too a small village. Icera was talking too Seerie the whole way there. When they arrived Zaveera started talking to him. "I'm sorry about earlier."she said
"Its okay. Is Volt your father?"
"Yes, are you an orphane?"
"I dunno. Probly never will."
Zaveera bumped ito a red dragon."Hey, watch it Zaveera!"
"Sorry, Flame."
"Good."
"You shoudnt talked too her like that."said Seerie.
Flame blew a ball of fire at Seerie. Seerie ducked his horns and charged. Flame stepped out of the way easily. Icera blew him against a hut with wind. She charged at him and ramed his side. Flame blew fire in her face. A blue dragon came running up. "Knock it off Flame."
"Why should I, Wanderist?"
Wanderist didn't reply. She was staring at Icera.
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970
#14 Posted: 00:19:42 07/05/2009
Awesome job! smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#15 Posted: 00:22:37 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx
i got a bitof action in there
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#16 Posted: 00:23:12 07/05/2009
dude,like awsome.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#17 Posted: 00:26:35 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
not realy
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#18 Posted: 00:30:07 07/05/2009
yes really.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#19 Posted: 00:30:42 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
not realy
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#20 Posted: 00:33:15 07/05/2009
you dont wanna play this game.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#21 Posted: 00:34:45 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
yes, yes i do
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spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#22 Posted: 00:36:30 07/05/2009
good story. smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#23 Posted: 00:49:52 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
thanx
not that good yet
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Celtianna Yellow Sparx Gems: 1708
#24 Posted: 00:54:26 07/05/2009
More! smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#25 Posted: 01:01:53 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
that all i hav so far!
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spyro fan 8 Ripto Gems: 2948
#26 Posted: 01:03:08 07/05/2009
icera, i made my new one. (just so ya know)


great story,like i said before. smiliecontinue. X=smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#27 Posted: 04:15:16 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1(still still continued)

"Hello, I'm Wanderist. You are?"
"Icera."
"I see. Where are you from?"
"I dont know."
"Wanna find out?"
"Yes."
"May I help?"Wanderist asked.
"Sure!"
"Um, sorry to interupt, but, where can i get some food?"asked Seerie.
"Follow me." Wanderist showed them the food storage.
Icera walked over to the bread curiosly. She grabbed some cheese and put it on the bread. "Hmmmm. Zaveera?"
"Yes?"
"come here."
"You want cheese toast?"
"What?"
Zaveera lit a fire with a lightning bolt
"Here."
Icera tasted it. "OW! It burnt!"
"Sorry."
"What else is there?"
"you want meat?"
"Meat?"
"Here."
Zaveera gave her a peace of warm meat.
"This is good."
Then, Shadow came in. "Hello Icera, come with me." He led her to a large building. "So, you got in a fight with Flame?"
"Sorry. He was...."
"No excuses!" He whipped her with his tail. She froze his legs to the ground. Shadow broke free and blew a stream of black fire at her. She yelped. Then she blew him off his feet. He stared at her. "You can use two elements!"
"Is that good?"
"Yes! You are specail Icera!"
"Why?"
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#28 Posted: 01:24:01 08/05/2009
cooliosmilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#29 Posted: 01:34:23 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
not really
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#30 Posted: 01:44:12 08/05/2009
dude,its good.why do you argue its not?its really good!
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#31 Posted: 01:48:18 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
cause i hav no self confidense
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#32 Posted: 19:41:32 08/05/2009
I love it! smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#33 Posted: 19:42:27 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
YAYZ!!!!
thanx
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#34 Posted: 21:36:00 08/05/2009
Quote: Icera
Chapter 1 (continued)

Seerie walked over too the door. Three dragons were outside. "Hello I'm Volt, this is Frost, and this is Boulder." said the yallow dragon, indacating too the blue dragon to the green one. "And I'm Zaveera."said a yelow dragon about Seerie's age. She was yellow, with blue horns, and large yellow eyes.
"What are you doing here?"asked Seerie.
"We're here for you, and a white egg or dragon."
"Over here!" Icera yelled.
"Please come with us."
"No."said Seerie.
"Oh, you must have a lot aof friends here that you dont want to leave."said Zaveera sarcasticly
"Fine."
"Good, Volt can take you to the village, while me and Boulder give news to Shadow."said Frost
"Shadow?"
"The other elder that sent us."


That sounds like something he would do.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#35 Posted: 21:55:58 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
who???
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970
#36 Posted: 22:00:06 08/05/2009
Like, awesome job. smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#37 Posted: 22:01:50 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
like, thanx
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#38 Posted: 22:35:15 08/05/2009
Quote: Icera
who???


DG999. You said he was DG999.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#39 Posted: 22:37:02 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Flame???
yes
lol
u quoted the wrong thing
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#40 Posted: 22:38:13 08/05/2009
Quote: Icera
Flame???
yes
lol
u quoted the wrong thing


Ops. smilie

ERROR: You quoted the wrong thing. smilie
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#41 Posted: 22:42:00 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
lolol
how do i change the name of a topic
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Dark Gaia999 Ripto Gems: 199
#42 Posted: 23:12:10 08/05/2009
Quote: wanderist
Quote: Icera
who???


DG999. You said he was DG999.


Only my friends can use that abreviation for my name.

And awesome story, dude.
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#43 Posted: 23:13:27 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
really
cause u r the main enemy in the end
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Dark Gaia999 Ripto Gems: 199
#44 Posted: 23:14:45 08/05/2009
I'm a villain? HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! smilie And I don't care if I get killed, I just wanna be a villain!
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#45 Posted: 23:16:36 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
u kill the main character
and me
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Dark Gaia999 Ripto Gems: 199
#46 Posted: 23:19:28 08/05/2009
Quote: Icera
u kill the main character
and me


Can DC_27 be my extremely hot villain GF?
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#47 Posted: 23:27:51 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
no
but u can take over her mind in part 4
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#48 Posted: 00:55:50 09/05/2009
Quote: Dark Gaia999
Quote: wanderist
Quote: Icera
who???


DG999. You said he was DG999.


Only my friends can use that abreviation for my name.

And awesome story, dude.


I can say your name however I want to. It's my life. smilie Anyway, Icera, please continue. smilie
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#49 Posted: 00:57:16 09/05/2009
Please continue!
Icera Yellow Sparx Gems: 1786
#50 Posted: 01:17:52 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
i hav to copy all this down
i had it writtenn but i put more in
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