darkSpyro

ok before we begin id like to get the general stuff killed. so this is a series of numerus reading passages its a made up story about my first dragon pet in dragon adopters oh did i say pet i meant friend. well heres what he looks likehttp://spyroxxx4.dragonadopters.com/ umm stay tuned please dont read the first post then never come back... i think dats it---- pumkins have you seen my sliper? awww mom not infront of the internet =(. btw almost everything in these passages are made up

chapter... uhhh 1 yes 1

greetings as declared in the post all the way at the top i am a dragon. it wasent an easy life heres my story... i said heres my story! some guy: oh sorry =). so he was born on... ah darn i forget... anyways he was born at work his mother didnt care for him his father is divorced... at first the mother wanted to sell the infant but thats illegal (at least now hehehehehe) he spent his early childhood with no info on his mother everyday affter school hed wacth television and eat whatever was in the fridge that he struggled to open. well lets go to some specific days... dang it this means whole new post ill finish this later...

Dude. .___.
That was very crappy. Try adding paragraphs, some better puncuation, and maybe a better plot?

Chapter Something

At school i was kinda scared. All the other dragons were strong, my fire can't even burn iron. So as the final class we had to fly through a short obstacle course. Boy did i stink at it. i ripped into the ring of fire and crashed my left wing into the circumference thingy, ( Man: Its circumference kevin: shud up!) but the worst part was when i reached that gravity device i came body slamming down into a pile of dragon poo. This all isn't my fault my mother never took care of me i didnt even know how to glide.
At dismissal all the mothers came to pick up their hacthlings unfortunatly, my mom once again forgot to pick me up i had to not fly but walk on the cold drizzling day. I could feel the other dragons and dragoness above sharing there laughter pointed directly at me. when i got home my mother was dancing to some song i dont know of. I didnt have any homework . As i stood infront of the fridge I used all of my strengh to open the door there laid only fruit.
Kevin: "yuck! vegtables" I blurted
I closed the door. the television always made me happy so as you can guess i tackled the remote like helpless juicy barbecue covered fried mouthwatering prey and started wacthing violent shows. and at such young age.

hey im not feeling well while im typing these ill work on punctuation later you try worrying about every little thing on a stumic virus

Very crappy and clique. Also, use the edit button, don't make a new post.

Still Chapter 1
Note: "this is kinda like a play you know typing whats going on start new line everytime new character speaks"

I dont wanna type about it. ~ Wavy flashback lines~
Kevin: (laughter)
television: "Get out! Get Out!" (Honey Mooners very old show)
(flop)
kevin: "Mother?"
As we use imagery, to picture kkevin walking slowly unarware of whats going to happen lets not do anything)
The mother of kevin chooses to lie flat on the floor, as a dragon sized mug of wine lay beside her.
There was no use it was obvius she had left without saying goodbye.
Over the next few years Kevin lied in a shelter hopless , and he also did alot of things he wasent proud of just to survive in the world.
A low voiced moaned, " Hi there have you heard about the vote?"
Kevin: "Whos there? Dont come any closer, i'll blow your brains out! Ahhhhhhhhh!"
The mysteries voice echoed
Flare: "Guess not, anyways my name is Flare, ive been here for several years, and ive noticed you around Kevin.
Kevin: "Sorry ive been so inconsiderate"
...( A long silence)
Flare: "As i was saying" ( Boy: "Hahaha he said"---- Flare: "Shud your mouth!") theres this small vote if it succeds all shelter animals not taken away for a month, will be realeased into the wild.
Kevin: "But but but but dats proposterus."
Flare: "Not many people care about us."
Kevin: "Urgh i dont wanna think about it. Whats for dinner?"
Flare: " Bread!" =)

Still doing it wrong man...
http://blackdog4kids.com/holid...read/howto.html

Yea yea i know there are still numerus mistakes. I will destroy them as soon as i get a chance and when my agony chooses to rest.
Just a quick apology to "Spyro 2008"
I greatly apologize for being agressive to you...
any chance you wanna be friends? (most likley answers no due to ending up in a fight and gem rating difference)

You weren't agressive and I don't really go by making friends by odd reasons. ._.

oh i see and i guess now that i look back i wasent.
I just got through dinner and reading fourm rules and theres nothing in it on punctuation you know those japenese comics where you read from right to left and theres like almost no puncuation?

No, I was just giving you a suggestion.

chatper one still

im bored so ill skip to the another part of the story.

over the next few days all kevin and flare did was plead beg and reveal the limits of their tears telling costumers of the shelter to vote to keep those helpless dragons. the day of the vote...
kevin: omg i just know well lose this vote
Flare: Comeon lets keep a positive atitude. besides the voting area is right across the street.
Both of them rushed to the edges of their cage and punched their heads out the bars facing the window.
The suspence was vile the numbers were growing closer and -ok can we just get to the point- k it loss by 3.14159265475 votes i mean 3 votes no i mean 1.
It wasent long before a large muscular dragon picked up their cage and hauled it into a flying veicle of large capacity. the main storage roomed seemed to be filled with other homeless dragons.
The light slowly nutralized. it was picth black powerful engines were enching through the walls made of unknown alloy.
The large cargo ship swayed back and fourth for hours. kevin and flare could hear other dragons vomit all over the floor.
A loud crash made flare jump actually it forced everyone into a small jump.
A light started to come from the roof it was completly opened. the cages seem to turn brown and red and slowly and shockingly disinagrated. This was the beginning of the end mwahahahahahahaha hahahah ha -cough cough cough- hahaha
Kevin was the first to step out into the forest. All the trees were dead there were no leaves. No winds bloe. no light shined through but it was still light enough to see.
Kevin: hey everyone check this out.
All the others wacthed as two dragons fight vishously against what seemed to be erm... well theres only like no zombies left now.
Flare just raced at them.
they were quick the dark one whiped her tale right at flare who tried to baclfip back and desperatly failed leaving pain and a cut on his private part.
kevin: ack! stop we come in confusion and were stranded.
yea im not good on the friendship section so... -fast foward-
spyro: its settled then oh by the way my name is spyro
cynder: and im cynder
mysteries cry: ahhhhhhhhhhh!

O MY GAWD*dies* THIS IS SO ASOME!

cant help but get the feeling your sarcastic all well

Quote:

O MY GAWD*dies* THIS IS SO ASOME!

Nooooooooo! im a monster!
...see you soon cynder1
*stabs core*

This story kinda scares me . . .

well it kinda should here comes those zombie dragons or any type of undead dragon or undead human or undead dragonslayer or undead teacher ahhhhhhhhh!

Chapter 2 survival oh and be sure to read this at nigh- Kevin: wtf! dats not part of title *screen goes back* ahhhhhhhh! (due to anger difficulties please enjoy this imagery as we wait its many times less urrrr strong as what there omg! doing. (bloody guy with hockey mask and chainsaw =)

Everyone raced to where the cry was took about 1000 miliseconds. There laid a dragon named killer a claw decayed to the bone grabbed Killer by the neck the strucure if the attacker was a complete skelotion it was a dragons skelotion only the arm and hand moved.
Flare: i just farted
Spyro zoomed into the bone and snapped it with a charge of his horn.
it was too late killer was already down he took a nap and never awoke from it.
In memory of Killer. A rather volent dragon 1990-2009 he was young fearless desperate lonley cold left alone in sorrow. Even though the war against the slayers may be over let us never forget those who served charged into darkness and never returned.
spyro: friend of yours?
Kevin: yea
Right before he closed his eyes something happened.
Killer: kevin... come here... take this...
killer surrendered one of his sapphire necklaces and his eyes closed.
Flare: i dont get it... =(
Cynder: dont spoil the moment
Flare: *pfffffffffffffffft*
cynder:ewwwwwww
There was an immediate meeting after the funeral.
Spyro: i dont know how this happened me and cynder woke up and there were zombies everywhere everynight they attack everynight we fight for survival and you will help us
All other dragons: yea!!
over the next few days the auto turrets went fireing like how a dragon salvages food.
one day they were just finishing up an attack wait i mean night there was one zombie dragon left who was dreadfully wounded.
spyro: would you like to do the honors?
Kevin: wait! cease fire!
kevin ran up to the final zombie
no this cant be!

This story is crap. Sorry, but it sorta is.

This story is like my old computer downstairs... In other words its crap...

this is kinda dull but your spelling has improved alot

Alright since you all think its crap or dull ill start fresh later