darkSpyro

Chapter 1: love sick...X <-----click for the origanal comic!
7:30 pm, Dragon realms, Temple, Ember's room...
Ember was lieing on her bed playing with a flower thinking if Spyro, her love will ever come back.
"Oh Spyro where are you, come back please..." Ember sheded a tear and noticed Flame in her room with a shes-going-to-freak look on his face.
"Yes Flame?" She welcomed him.
"Ember....Spyro's back!" he yelled. Embers face went from daydreaming
to happy. She ran outside seeing Spyro talking to a mystirious black dragon.
"It's pretty much quiet around here Cynder you'll-" Spyro stopped with his mouth gapped open.
"Spyro!" called Ember as she ran down. Cynder looked back at Spyro.
"Spy whats wrong? Who's that?" The pink dragon hugged Spyro leaning over with her snout on his.
"Uh Cynder this is Ember. Ember this is Cynder" He smiled faintly.
"I'm Spyro's girlfriend. Isn't that right Spyro?" Spyro broke free from Embers grasp and walked next to Cynder.
"What are you trying to say?" She could see Cynder was getting annoyed.
"I'm saying your nothing to Spyro and that he prefers me than you." Ember got cocky. Now Cynder was really angry.
"What did you say!" Cynder's paw smashed on the ground.
"I said I love Spyro-" Cynder whacked Ember with her tail blade. Flame walked up next to Spyro. Spyro's head was hanging down.
"Spyro you really have a good taste in girls. Cynder's a hotte."
"yeah I know..." The War Began!!!

the first chapter was funny

Spyro looked at Flame and said.
"one side feels like helping the other side wants to get popcorn and watch the movie." Flame laughed as Ember was chewing on Cynder's wing.
"Hey watch it you pink pest!" Cynder kept on calling out. Spyro facepalmed.
"Flame...go give Ember this." Spyro gave Flame a note written on it said.
"-Ember...I know this is tough to let in but I've fallen for Cynder and I think we should just you know split... from Spyro-" Flame walked over to Ember and gave her the note and she read it out then cried and slashed Cynder with her claws seeped with the Pink-Light element.
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End of chapter 1...
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Mama-mia!

You stole the plot from a comic on DeviantART.

(says in a mario voice)MAMMA MIA!

Quote: Tango

You stole the plot from a comic on DeviantART.

ya, i got the comic on my gestbook.

Iam not going to read his for two reasons
1. I don't read stuff that has been stolen.
2. Stories about Cynder and Ember fighting over Spyro is getting really old,

Why can't Cynder and Ember be friends?

I'm sort of a Cynder hater I like Ember betta! So what? it's not stolen I'm just making it into a story cause I like the comic anyway I'm too young to be on DA.

Even though this Ember and Cynder thing is getting old, I still think this is good!

Quote: Dark Cynder_27

I'm sort of a Cynder hater I like Ember betta! So what? it's not stolen I'm just making it into a story cause I like the comic anyway I'm too young to be on DA.

Did you ask permission to use the plot? No? STOLEN!

Quote: Tango

Quote: Dark Cynder_27

I'm sort of a Cynder hater I like Ember betta! So what? it's not stolen I'm just making it into a story cause I like the comic anyway I'm too young to be on DA.

Did you ask permission to use the plot? No? STOLEN!

was the plot trademarked? no

Quote: spyro super fan

Quote: Tango

Quote: Dark Cynder_27

I'm sort of a Cynder hater I like Ember betta! So what? it's not stolen I'm just making it into a story cause I like the comic anyway I'm too young to be on DA.

Did you ask permission to use the plot? No? STOLEN!

was the plot trademarked? no

Trade mark? Do you think that person will be happy when they find this out? They won't maybe I'll tell them. Would YOU like your story stolen?

Quote: Tango

Quote: spyro super fan

Quote: Tango

Did you ask permission to use the plot? No? STOLEN!

was the plot trademarked? no

Trade mark? Do you think that person will be happy when they find this out? They won't maybe I'll tell them. Would YOU like your story stolen?

actualy no,just as long they put the link to the original story up then

Quote: spyro super fan

Quote: Tango

Quote: spyro super fan

was the plot trademarked? no

Trade mark? Do you think that person will be happy when they find this out? They won't maybe I'll tell them. Would YOU like your story stolen?

actualy no,just as long they put the link to the original story up then

You see a link the the original comic here? No. So it's stolen.

I have the link!!! It's up isn't it!? oh guess what you see that smilie right there click on it IT'S THE LINK YOU ******!!!!!

more angry people...thats what makes me leave darkspyro for a long time

This arguement is pointless. If it's not copyrighted, trademarked, etc. etc. and there's a link then it's not stolen. If you had actually bothered to look, Tango, you would have noticed that the blue X inbetween the smilies, you would've seen that it's a link.

The link wasn't there when I posted. Swearing at me just making me think of what a pathetic little child you are. Why can't you write your own stories? The comic is far better than this.

Quote: Melchia

This arguement is pointless. If it's not copyrighted, trademarked, etc. etc. and there's a link then it's not stolen. If you had actually bothered to look, Tango, you would have noticed that the blue X inbetween the smilies, you would've seen that it's a link.

She edited. SHe didnt put it there the first time.
Now, lets stop arguing and calling echother names and get on with the story.