Please review...I really don't know why no one is reading most of my stories, because I'm so proud in my stories and you don't know how it feels when no one likes it. However, I guess if I enjoy writting it...it's all that matters and I should keep writting...but feedback helps...a lot!
The Egg
So far ago the barely anyone can remember, a special and rare dragon egg was dropped from the sky into the burning lava of the volcano. The egg was black with purple gems bond to it’s shell. The fire raced over and over it, so much heat that any normal egg would break. But it remained until once the mighty volcano blew and the egg was sent flying down the ragged side going faster then the lava could travel.
It landed in a lake and sank to the bottom of the beastly lake. The lake froze suddenly and soon it was as solid as rock. The egg still was there, resting peacefully and untouched.
Years later, the ice melted and the water evaporated. The black egg rested in sand, but soon after a bird picked it up. The bird brought it to a very far place and just dropped it down to what the bird thought was the egg’s eternal doom. But of course it wasn’t and it landed gracefully in a patch of grass. That night there was a terrible storm and somehow the lightning was attracted to its gems. The lightning shocked the egg with all its might.
Fire, Ice and Electricity couldn’t scratch this egg. Not many creatures neared and soon the egg was buried deep within the rock.
However…
“Something is beneath.” Terrador said, looking down at the ground.
“But what?” Cyril asked as he walked towards the mighty green dragon.
“An egg.” Terrador observed.
“What? How could that be?” Cyril was washed with sudden shock. However, the earth dragon didn’t reply. He placed a claw where it was and then made the ground crack. It was so deep down…was that even possible?
And that was when the egg was hit with the final element needed, earth.
The dragon inside it awakened. It’s only response was to crack his shell and break free, so he used his horn on the tip of his muzzle to crack it. It took some effort, but he soon saw a large and rather frightening green face.
And he thought it was his mother.
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Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045 |
#1 Posted: 00:33:46 18/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163 |
#2 Posted: 17:26:35 18/04/2009
LOL, PC!!!
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Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045 |
#3 Posted: 18:09:37 18/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Unexpected
The little black and dark purple dragon purred like a cat while clinging to the ugly green thing’s leg. He didn’t understand a thing he was saying but mother did seem angry and confused maybe. His mother wasn’t even looking at him now! The little black dragon whipped at his ugly mother’s green leg but his mother didn’t notice, he started to chew his mother's leg. A weird liquid went into his mouth that tasted like cooper. Another, maybe less-ugly large dragon but this one was yellow came close. His mother was making a loud noise but he hid behind his mother’s legs anyway. His ugly mother moved, but he ran under his mother. He whined and held tightly to one of his mother’s ugly legs. He whined and whined, digging his claws deeper into his mother’s leg. “Oh how cute, he thinks you are his mother!” A more pretty large blue dragon spoke. “He almost bit my leg off!” His mother yelped. It was strange that the little black dragon understood so fast, he felt their emotions and understood them. But when he tried to talk all that came out was a pathetic squeak. He felt something overcome him and then shot his mother with a bolt of blue lightning. All eyes where on his dark purple eyes now. He sank down; it felt as if the eyes were weighing him down. “I guess we have a very special dragon here.” The yellow one said. “Wonder what other things he has hiding…” The blue one spoke. “Great.” His mother sounded disappointed. |
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#4 Posted: 18:11:48 18/04/2009
Awsome! Please write more!
(Read my stories: Tovias: Hidden Power and Xay Blood Dawn plz) |
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045 |
#5 Posted: 18:34:21 18/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Name
“What should his name be?” Cyril asked, eyeing the little dark purple and black hatchling. “How about little pain in the-“ Terrador was cut off. “He is of a different kind, his name should be different.” Volteer said. The little black dragon chased his two-bladed tail, after a few turns he grabbed it. He chewed on it but every time he chewed on it he felt a sting. He stopped and started to snarl at his stupid tail angrily. He collapsed on the ground from dizziness and squeaked a whole bunch of squeaks. After that, the little hatchling tried to dig into the hard ground crazily. Minutes later he gave up, growling at the ground he slammed one foot onto the ground. A huge crack emerged and made the ground rise. He ran off before the big ugly things and the almost pretty dragon thing made him go to another place. The place he ran into had a huge statue of another big dragon. Another ugly dragon! It was rather dark. He was afraid and then suddenly he blew a green burst of fire to lighten the place. Torches lit and there was light everywhere. The black and dark purple dragon spread his wings and yawned. He squeaked himself into a rather deep and endless sleep…well for him. There were two sleek and white glowing eyes staring at him. ‘Sinos…you are my continuer, you must be.’ A sweet voice said but it was more like in his mind, more like telepathy. The little black dragon squeaked and squeaked. Then he woke up. Sinos had always had the dream since he was just a hatchling long ago, the same thing over and over. He was sixteen and he didn’t know what he was! Sinos was a dragon but he didn't know what kind! He needed answers, and that was why he was planning to escape this jail. |
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#6 Posted: 18:42:47 18/04/2009
Aww, Sinos is so cute! Write more! Your a really good writer!
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Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045 |
#7 Posted: 19:07:34 18/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks but I'm not really liking this part...
Escape Sinos yawned, the slight rays of sunlight shone through a huge hole in the wall. Instead of going through the hole, he went for the large door. He tapped it and it opened for him making a loud sliding sound. Sinos stepped out towards a pool of green water. One very special thing about him was the ability to see more vivid pictures of what is to come. Sinos was telekinetic and telepathic, but the telepathy had its limits. He looked into the pool, trying to see images of what his journey will lead him. But he saw the strangest of images – it was one of four demonic eyes staring at him wildly. Four eyed? He didn’t have time to thing about what he saw. Sinos had to get away, escape and be free. He summoned the powers of the dark purple crystal on his head with all his might, and then he disappeared. Okay, he was invisible but sometimes he did wish he could disappear that easily. He walked towards another door and touched it with an invisible dark purple claw and it opened. But this room was one he never seen before. There were markings everywhere on the cave everywhere he looked. There were stories about a purple dragon written but something inside him made him too angry to read them. Sinos slowly walked out of the room and tried another door. But none of those old guardians were there sleeping where they should be, where he planned. Had they woke up? He didn’t know but all he could think to do was go and escape this caged world. When he was finally free, there was flames surrounding him. Not just any flames, blue flames. The new ice guardian was trying to put the fires out; Sinos somehow knew that this hadn’t been going on for long. But he couldn’t help; he had no idea how to use ice. A shard of ice hit the invisible Sinos; his dark purple crystal absorbed it. Then he was putting out the flames with stunningly powerful blades of very light blue ice. After the fire was out, he flew up into the black clouds of the sky. “Goodbye.” He whispered. |
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163 |
#8 Posted: 20:22:58 18/04/2009
PC!!! Aw man! No baby Sinos!
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#9 Posted: 00:11:15 19/04/2009
GO SINOS!!!
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