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The new age: pure moon ( luna story) [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 22:31:56 16/04/2009 | Topic Creator
this is luna's 4th story! yeah! smilie anyway i will begin soon people please read luna the black dragon, the eternal one, luna 3 saints and sinners if you want to read this
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#2 Posted: 22:37:30 16/04/2009
i'm ready for moresmilie
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#3 Posted: 23:26:07 16/04/2009
PC!!!
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#4 Posted: 20:59:55 23/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah i will start soon, i had some distractions
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#5 Posted: 21:01:14 23/04/2009
thats ok. everyone gets distracted sometimes.
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Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#6 Posted: 21:06:04 23/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah now mine is obvious
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#7 Posted: 20:44:41 29/04/2009 | Topic Creator
nighta 13 was resting on chit island trying to fine some sort of clue. she was all by herself now, star ran away long ago and who knows what happened. sunny is captured, and is up againist luna now. she clutched the amulet tighter. nothing can stop her mom now. nighta had no special powers to name, she couldn't even use the amulet. yet. the sky was no longer blue but instead a deep dark shade of red, luna's doing when she declared war. nighta suck deeper in the grass. " it's over." she whispered. she is the only one left she blinked one more time. " this place probaly isn't safe any more" she said. she looked at the red sky again.
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#8 Posted: 20:53:29 29/04/2009 | Topic Creator
nighta knew the spirits didn't see this coming they were inlsaved by luna, no prochecy predicted this. nothing could stop this. nighta looked below and saw the chaos. dragons in tourment and an evil laugh from luna crackled out. nighta shook her head and a rage grew within her soul. she stood up and went into the temple.
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#9 Posted: 20:59:06 29/04/2009
awsome storysmilie
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Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#10 Posted: 23:25:24 30/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah go nighta!
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#11 Posted: 14:29:28 02/05/2009 | Topic Creator
she walked threw the halls in a deep silence forming her surrendor, luna was her mom, she couldn't be too hard on her. shaking her head she went up to the wall with strange symbols on it. " this is odd, i've never seen this before." she stepped on a stone and the door opened nighta walked in " i have nothing to lose" and the she walked down the steps as they ehcoed threw the temple. once on the floor again nighta looked at the room in awe
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#12 Posted: 21:02:49 04/05/2009
PC!!!
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#13 Posted: 22:13:12 07/05/2009 | Topic Creator
the room was covered with orbs, shelf apon shelf of them. some little whispes of spirit or something was floating inside. in the middle of the room was a orb that was half white half black, the eclipse. nighat stared around the room again and walked up to a orb and touched it. the world she went into was filled with horrible creatures that started to tear her apart. she screamed and was back in the room.she stared into a blue one, it looked like an ocean was in there. nighta heard luna's voice in the temple, she came to get her. " this way she must be this way" nighta panicked. she looked around and a voice told her, " touch the eclipse........." nighta ran and touched the orb quick and disppeared before luna came in.
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#14 Posted: 21:43:22 08/05/2009
continuesmilie
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Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#15 Posted: 22:22:19 12/05/2009 | Topic Creator
nighta was somewhere else, some where better than before. it was almost like nothing ever happened. she was young again and her mom was playing with her. they were a family again. constelation was coming in the room, holding treats. nighta ran up to him and hugged him tight. everything was better..................... then she woke up. she was on the moon, half was white and the other black, she was on the white side. then she saw a dragon looking like a hunter with gloves that didn't cover her hands and i red with gold on the sides cap. a book at her side. nighta ran up to her and demanded why she was shown that, she was crying now. the dragon replied " you showed it to yourslef, on the light side you see what you want to see". nighta looked up and said " who are you?" the hunter smiled and said " queen of the moon, your fair goddess, or as other like to call me, the true form of the eclipse"
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#16 Posted: 23:59:55 12/05/2009
PC!!!
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#17 Posted: 22:35:18 18/06/2009 | Topic Creator
"ummm true form? i.i........i don't get it." the goddess smiled" of coarse not nighta your mother is the eclipse but i created the truth and power of it, i was freed by your mom as well, she has turned quite evil, such a shame." nighta looked around still weeping silently. they were in what seemed to be a libary floating in nothing bit dark and light. the books had names but only pictures of animals and shapes. the goddess walked beside her and sighed" i showed you that, to see if what i thought and read was true about you. so was it?" questioned nighta still crying, she was used, this world is terrible." you used me! that image, the happyness, i shouldn't experience that now!!!!!!" goddess wouldn't look at her." well???" asked nighta." nighta, queen of the angels. as you know that and you have the power to deform angels but that is not what i searched for, i searched for a different odd power you some how can manifest.i admit it is a strange one that not even i fully understand. i can only describe it as......................................................................resistance."
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#18 Posted: 20:19:47 23/06/2009 | Topic Creator
k people sorry for my lazyness, just lazy
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#19 Posted: 01:15:19 24/06/2009
thats ok. i'm lazy too.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#20 Posted: 00:21:26 07/07/2009 | Topic Creator
:resistance to what exactly" questioned nighta the goddes answered"to magic almost like you repel it or absorb it i've never seen anything like it and unlike your mother you will never turn, evil so to speak i dont know how to explain it much after that, and you seem to draw strength from the moon, your heart is pure hmmmmm a pure moon so to speak it is your job to help your mother using her eclipse powers againist her, how is fireflight absorb her power and use it too you are pure good my little pure moon but use it wisly" nighta was suddenly back in the room surronded by luna and her warriors
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#21 Posted: 00:32:17 07/07/2009
cool. please continue.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#22 Posted: 01:38:00 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Luna smiled evily at her daughter" i have you now Nighta my annoying little twerp, resistance is over!!!!" not quite thought nighta smugly. she drew power from the moon outside and felt it go straight for her heart, it almost like she expanded her heart. Luna attacked swiftly using dark eclipse magic. however nighta countered absorbed the magic and shot it staright back" i'll never be evil mom, don't you remeber when you fought evil and...............and really was my mother?" Luna seemed confused for a second but then said "haha i was weak then and didn't see my full potential!!!!!" nighta sighed" you should have stayed in the eclipse. yu are not worthy to hold your powers. you were meant to be a hero......." suddenly nighta remebered the prochecy " to pay the price far worse than death." luna turned againist good, and that was worse than death, it made sense now. Nighta knew she had the stay strong hold on to her amulet and fight her mom. it was the only way. Luna smiled" i am not the mother you remembered nighta" and attacked her daughter
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#23 Posted: 14:21:57 30/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Nighta quickly dodged the move, but was hit by a wall of eclipse magic right afterwards. it didn't seem right to have some big battle now. But nighta may have to. " this is similiar to the time you fought Juno" luna just growled at that statement. The amulet was still not glowing and nighta tried to scrtach her on the face, her magic dripping from nighta's claws. However luna was smart and shoved nighta back and hit her with an orb full of energy, nighta passed out. " carry her to the palace in chains" said luna and she went back down to torture some souls.
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#24 Posted: 01:26:22 31/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Luna was sitting on her throne happily hearing inprisioned dragons below her in their cages. Her Son, comet, who was the only person who would never feel Luna's wrath, walked into the room. "mother, the gaurds need to know what to do with ........my sister." Luna nodded her head. "i'll deal with her Son, you go inform Rosada of what i good job she did getting those warriors." Comet left and luna called the gaurds to bring nighta out to see her.
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#25 Posted: 18:56:21 31/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Nighta was beaten up very much in the week she has been at prison. she hasn't seen star or sunny around either. Did Luna kill them?! Nighta thought this could be a possibility. Luna then spoke." what should your punishment be for resisting me? Death? No not death, you are my daughter after all, how about i take that amulet" Luna grabbed the amulet." and i throw you in a mgical prison?" before nighta could say anything she was encased in a orb and put on a shelf, she saw other orbs too, Sunny was among them. These must be luna worst enemies or problems. Sunny saw Nighta and said to her" Nighta!!!!!! You are alive..................but here.....................anyway this is where people who went againist her go." sunny seemed depressed. " is star here????" sunny shook her head, knowing nighta meant her litttle sister named star. after a week talking to each other sunny and nighta knew they had to get out and soon, with the amulet luna would be too strong. One night, a little dragon sneaked into the palace she was covered in a cloak that had some sort of magic on it. she chanted some words "Be free imprisioned souls" And sunny and nighta and a few other dragons were freed from the orbs. "thanks" said Sunny but the cloaked dragon said" we must hurry before she returns! or she will imprison you worse than before." the nodded but right before they got the the castle walls luna appeared" where do you think you are going? Places" Nighta and the cloak dragon said. nighta created a sheild around them and bounced luna's powers right back at her.they ran quickly out the palace. " who are you??" asked sunny to the dragon. but Nighta already knew. the dragon took the hood off. and the familiair face of star smiled at them" i hope you remeber me."
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#26 Posted: 00:24:06 01/09/2009 | Topic Creator
"well i started doing magic, i needed a way to defend myself, so now i am a sorceress. this cloak actually hides me a little bit thats how i was able to sneak in." star was telling nighta what happened when she ran away, meanwhile the other six dragons that were rescued hung out in the back of their little camp." who are you?" asked Nighta staying at the strangers. one of the males said " i am arrow, i use my archery skills as a weapon." then he sat down. another male stood up" i am hunter i am a purple dragon." another male stood up" i am stark nothing can penatrate my wings and my claws are very sharp" and in truth they were. A female stood up" i am pepper, i am a prochetess, i see visions of the future" Another femlae stood up" my name is ivy, i read nature and it bends to my will." the last female stood up" I am named huntress and i use magic and put it into my knife to make it stronger." nighta nodded" you all stood againist my mother? yes we did" said pepper. nighta started to think. " all of us we come together and start an army, star,sunny,arrow,hunter,starkmpepper,ivy,huntrees,and I, we will stand together and deafeat my mother once and for all.
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#27 Posted: 14:58:04 02/09/2009 | Topic Creator
All the dragons nodded and pepper said "we should prepare ourselfs, and find objects of which is long forgotten and practice out strengths.your mother is strong but she can not stand againist us all at once."All the dragons began to practice. Arrow shot his arrows with deadly accuracy, hunter did powerful furies from each of the elements. Stark sharpens his claws and sliced trees down the middle and used his wings to defend himself againiat arrows and elements. Ivy made vines and trees twirl to her will. Huntress spoke words in her knife and stabbed a mouse the mouse turned into a flower. Pepper sat and closed her eyes, trying to get visions. sunny practiced her wind and star practiced with her cloak and magic. Nighta harnessed resistance, it was the most powerful out of all of them. "pepper than spoke in a creepy voice" i had a vision! we must find three powerful objects to use aganist luna. Golden arrows the track their target and in the sack they are found in they never run out. created by a warrior they were" Arrow looked happy." next a book found in the caves it reads of fates" Huntress knew this was for her." finally a key, and key with the symbol of luna's powers on it, luna is looking for it, it will unlock her full potential, this key was thought to be of myth, created my raw elements but nighta is the one who shall weild it's powers and you will know what to do once we get that key!"
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#28 Posted: 14:04:46 03/09/2009 | Topic Creator
i must be writing to entertain myself by now smilie oh well i guess this might be the end of luna soon
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#29 Posted: 23:56:29 03/09/2009 | Topic Creator
wow i keep posting no ones reading, people must think it is funny i haven't quit yet..............wait who am i talking to????????
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#30 Posted: 20:48:08 07/09/2009 | Topic Creator
WHO AM I TALKING TOO??
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#31 Posted: 21:23:36 07/09/2009
i'm here! sorry i haven't been on in like four weeks, but i got really busy.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#32 Posted: 20:15:35 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder09
i'm here! sorry i haven't been on in like four weeks, but i got really busy.


let meh guess, school, me too, i haven't been on in a week smilie meanhwile i've been playing around on my fanfic, i thought it was funny (i was so freakin bored that day)
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#33 Posted: 22:05:38 18/09/2009
yep, school, and other things hve kept me offline. i've been doing stuff with my story too, i just need time to come on here and post more of it.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#34 Posted: 22:41:13 29/09/2009 | Topic Creator
The band of hero's set off to find this mystical key, meanwhile in her palace luna was brooding, watching them stalk off to their journay. "they won't even find those worthless arrows if i have anything to do with it." she waved her hand and i large monster came out, a giant, long since thought to be extinct, "find them, but don't kill them, i need them, go find them you lumbering oaf." luna ordered
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#35 Posted: 22:03:34 30/09/2009
uh oh...
F: i sense trouble...
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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#36 Posted: 15:20:35 01/10/2009
Where did you get the New age bit from? I really like the story!
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#37 Posted: 20:42:42 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Whitedragon
Where did you get the New age bit from? I really like the story!


cause the protagonist in the other stories i wrote (luna) turned evil in this one because i her ecllipse powers and her oldest daughter (nighta) must try to kill her or bring her on the good side again. Also she must try to help her brother who turned to evil too with Rosada ( and villian in saints and sinners and the eternal one)
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#38 Posted: 20:50:10 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
The group marched to an area where the arrows were thought to be kept in hiding, arrow seemed anxcious to get them. Nighta couldn't stop looking at how much her little sister grew up and sunny, her mother's former best friend. Then ivy said with a smile" it's underground. but i can see the door over there." everyone noticed it" now arrow you go in, if what pepper says is correct we will burn to death in a scond if anyone else but you stepped inside." Arrow nodded but right before the door opened and roar filled the clearing there were at. A huge giant came running from the trees, club swinging. Imediatly everyone got ready for the battle. Huntress spoke words in her knife and it glowed bright red. Pepper hung in the corner. Arrow started shooting arrows but nighta yelled " arrow go get those.............arrows!!! this beast can not be killed without them! he is mythical!" Arrow escaped into the door and nighta looked at the giant as her friends fought it, giving arrow time to rechieve the arrows. She noticed an emblem on the giants forehead, it was the sign of the eclipse, the giant worked for her mom, enraged luna charged for the giant and flung a wall of pure resistance energy right at it's heart.
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#39 Posted: 20:54:47 01/10/2009
cool. continue.
F: yeah, continue.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#40 Posted: 20:56:23 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Nighta: yeah i am all powerful
not again with this......
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#41 Posted: 21:00:06 01/10/2009
F: *mutters to self* hmph...all powerful...
here we go again...
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#42 Posted: 21:26:07 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
nighta i am warning you.......
nighta: hey i come from i really powerful freakin family!
* slaps hand on forehead*
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#43 Posted: 21:40:32 01/10/2009
F: uh, we're in the same family...your mom is my aunt remember?
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#44 Posted: 22:42:34 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Nighta: right.......
*sighs again*
Luna: you should know that nighta, fireflight is your cousin
Nighta: why are you here?
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#45 Posted: 21:32:40 02/10/2009
F: *shrugs* i have no idea...
*sighs*
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#46 Posted: 15:16:13 03/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Luna: oh thats right i am supposed to be evil!
*sigh* (i might be over sighing)
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#47 Posted: 01:34:25 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
The giant staggered but did not perish by the power attack, huntree kept mumbling words and stabing the ground with the kinfe, making vines come out that wrapped around the giants feet. Stark started to swipe the beast too, but nothing damaged it. Star was throwing stars at him, he turned to her and picked her up. "luna say capture dragons!!!" Nighta eyes started to glow red, at the same second arrow came out and threw a silver arow and the giant. Nighta looked at the arrow and her eyes went silver and the arrow started to glow a bright shining silver, the beast exploded into nothing and everyone sat down trying to catch tehir breaths, knowing luna will send more monsters at them.
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#48 Posted: 01:40:47 10/10/2009
cool. write more. smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#49 Posted: 21:19:19 15/10/2009 | Topic Creator
wow, i am having a writers block smilie
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#50 Posted: 21:33:03 15/10/2009
i never get those smilie
F: except when you have other things to do...
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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