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The mist started to leave the earth.The twin dragons ran outside. Bibi and Toni. They were only 6 years old. Toni was a minute older than Bibi. Bibi still learned everything before Toni. Bibi was very smart and educational, while on the other hand, Toni was stupid(learning disabilities) and sporty.

They were learning to fly when Toni all of the sudden, took off like and airplane!!!!!!! "What the heck??!?!?!?!?!!?" screamed Toni. Bibi said, "I- I- I- can't believe it..... Y- y- y- you're flying before I learned....." Toni replied in a scared voice "GET ME DOWN FROM HERE!!!!!!!!!" "I'LL TRY!!!!!" replied Bibi. She took a few hops, stepped a couple steps backward, started running, and took off!!!! She got the hang of flying and got to Toni. She flew down with Toni.

They went inside when the air was dewy, and the sun was almost gone. "Where the **** were you guys???????!!!! I was worried!" said Toni and Bibi's mother. "Sorry mom, we'll get home sooner next time" they said at once.


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Any comments?

yes....its a good story...

'Tiz great! Plz do more!

The next day, it was sunny and bright. Bibi and Toni ran to thier favorite fiend, Dragon Falls. They were running around when Bibi ran into a big, orange dragon. "Whoops. I'm sorry Mr.Dragon." said Bibi. "Bonjour amigo." replied the orange dragon. Then, the orange dragon flew away.

"He was wierd." said Toni. "Don't judge a book by it's cover!" said Bibi. They flew back home. "Hey mom, we're home." screamed Bibi. "Dinner's at the table!!" replied thier mother. "Okay" Bibi and Toni said. When Toni started to eat his dinner, he fell on the floor poisened.

Holy snap Toni got poisoned!? Plz continue!

"MOM!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Bibi. "Why are you screaming dear?" asked her mother. "TONI GOT POISENED!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Bibi. Then, Bibi's mother fainted. Bibi called 611(911 in dragon form). "I need a docter right away. My brother got poisened." said Bibi breathlessly.

Toni came out of the hospital 3 days later. "I bet that orange dragon did it. He looks like a bad dragon to me." he sad. "I bet you're right Toni. I guess we have to find out ourselves."

And...THEY ARE ON THE CASE!!
Plz continue!

They went to Dragon Falls, and there he was, sitting on the ground, waiting. "Leave me alon you big mean orange dragon!!!!!!!!!!" said Toni. "How'd you know I poisened you?" said the orange dragon. "Because we are smart, well Bibi is." said Toni. "Let me tell you why." said the big dragon.

"I dated your mother. And she dumped me. I got really mad. So, I poisened one of her most precious things. You" he said. "B- b- b- but she never sa-" "I know young dragon. I know."

Are they gonna fight? Let's find out!

uhh....this is getting kinda wierd..........

Quote: SpyroKing

Are they gonna fight? Let's find out!

My hands killing me!!! It' on fire! But I'll write.

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They all went to the waterfall. "But why did she dump you?" asked Bibi. "Because I thought she cheated on me...." replied the big dragon. "Well, she didn't. She never ever would." said Bibi. "I know that now young dragon."

"Someday, I hope she gives me another chance...." said the big dragon. "What's your name?" asked Bibi. "Lightning" said the big dragon. "Well Lightning, I'll persuade her to give you another chance. " said Bibi. "Thank you Bibi!!!!!!!!" replied Lightning.

Well you don't HAVE to keep writing!
But it is good.

Here's the story all together now:


The mist started to leave the earth.The twin dragons ran outside. Bibi and Toni. They were only 6 years old. Toni was a minute older than Bibi. Bibi still learned everything before Toni. Bibi was very smart and educational, while on the other hand, Toni was stupid(learning disabilities) and sporty.

They were learning to fly when Toni all of the sudden, took off like and airplane!!!!!!! "What the heck??!?!?!?!?!!?" screamed Toni. Bibi said, "I- I- I- can't believe it..... Y- y- y- you're flying before I learned....." Toni replied in a scared voice "GET ME DOWN FROM HERE!!!!!!!!!" "I'LL TRY!!!!!" replied Bibi. She took a few hops, stepped a couple steps backward, started running, and took off!!!! She got the hang of flying and got to Toni. She flew down with Toni.

They went inside when the air was dewy, and the sun was almost gone. "Where the **** were you guys???????!!!! I was worried!" said Toni and Bibi's mother. "Sorry mom, we'll get home sooner next time" they said at once.

The next day, it was sunny and bright. Bibi and Toni ran to thier favorite fiend, Dragon Falls. They were running around when Bibi ran into a big, orange dragon. "Whoops. I'm sorry Mr.Dragon." said Bibi. "Bonjour amigo." replied the orange dragon. Then, the orange dragon flew away.

"He was wierd." said Toni. "Don't judge a book by it's cover!" said Bibi. They flew back home. "Hey mom, we're home." screamed Bibi. "Dinner's at the table!!" replied thier mother. "Okay" Bibi and Toni said. When Toni started to eat his dinner, he fell on the floor poisened.

"MOM!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Bibi. "Why are you screaming dear?" asked her mother. "TONI GOT POISENED!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Bibi. Then, Bibi's mother fainted. Bibi called 611(911 in dragon form). "I need a docter right away. My brother got poisened." said Bibi breathlessly.

Toni came out of the hospital 3 days later. "I bet that orange dragon did it. He looks like a bad dragon to me." he sad. "I bet you're right Toni. I guess we have to find out ourselves."

They went to Dragon Falls, and there he was, sitting on the ground, waiting. "Leave me alon you big mean orange dragon!!!!!!!!!!" said Toni. "How'd you know I poisened you?" said the orange dragon. "Because we are smart, well Bibi is." said Toni. "Let me tell you why." said the big dragon.

"I dated your mother. And she dumped me. I got really mad. So, I poisened one of her most precious things. You" he said. "B- b- b- but she never sa-" "I know young dragon. I know."

They all went to the waterfall. "But why did she dump you?" asked Bibi. "Because I thought she cheated on me...." replied the big dragon. "Well, she didn't. She never ever would." said Bibi. "I know that now young dragon."

"Someday, I hope she gives me another chance...." said the big dragon. "What's your name?" asked Bibi. "Lightning" said the big dragon. "Well Lightning, I'll persuade her to give you another chance. smilie" said Bibi. "Thank you Bibi!!!!!!!!" replied Lightning.

Cool, cool.

It's long.

Ja...it's long.

Longer that I expected. Lawl. I hear a kid screaming weather out of my window.

Whoa.

He was playing soccer with someone. He was cheating. He kept picking up the ball.

Lawlz, dat cheater.

Lawl.

I like it.

Are you going to continue?