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#1 Posted: 16:50:13 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah i know i spelt something wrong, anyway this is not luna's final story, this however will be short with only six chapters three for saints and 3 for the sinners, i might not concentrate on luna the enitre time though she will be in it the entire time, please read eternal one and luna the black dragon ( not in thaty order) if you want to read this.
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#2 Posted: 16:55:51 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
prolouge ( info on what has happened)
nighta is now 12 and is actually quite powerful, nothing bad has happened since tika and luna still worries about ocean and what she said little does she know that today of all days something horrible will happen that will affect nighta, star, and comet.
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#3 Posted: 22:24:12 24/03/2009
yay! another Luna story!
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#4 Posted: 00:55:52 25/03/2009
Please Continue!!
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#5 Posted: 19:53:53 25/03/2009 | Topic Creator
maybe tommorrow i am soo sick
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#6 Posted: 20:28:32 25/03/2009
ok. you shouldn't be forced to write if your sick.
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#7 Posted: 00:39:04 28/03/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah postponed till i feel 100% again
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#8 Posted: 01:42:17 28/03/2009
ok. take your time. you shouldn't have to write when your sick.
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#9 Posted: 23:35:59 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
ok tommrorrow the story will start!
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#10 Posted: 01:15:35 04/04/2009
yay!
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#11 Posted: 20:48:06 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
saint: luna
" do we really have to go camping mom?" star didn't want to get her horns dirty, comet just ruined them and she didn't want that to happen again.Luna looked at her" of coarse you do, the eclipse is coming and i want to see it shine. Mom aren't you the ecli[se already?" nighta looked down as soon as she said that, now one talks about that. " yes i am, and i don't know what going to happen to me either.' sunny came bursting into the room" were are we going?!?!, to a forset duh" repelied luna and then they left to a forset called eclipse.
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#12 Posted: 20:57:07 06/04/2009
cool. more please.
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#13 Posted: 21:02:59 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
When they landed at a perfect spot they made camp and the kids went into their tents to unpack things. luna looked, one day from today she might disappear or die, or become more pwerful, she looked at the amulet, or nothing will happen. she thought about that more." now i wait" said luna
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#14 Posted: 21:04:44 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
oh by the way this luna story will last one day( in the story i won't finish it in one day.)
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#15 Posted: 21:09:40 06/04/2009
ok. write more.
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#16 Posted: 21:10:12 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
luna woke to screaming the night before the eclipse. she saw sunny trying to fight off an invisble force, and start and comet were being taken away. " noo" yelled LUna and the eclipse power finished them off, the night sky turned bright blue not like day time though. and nighta's eyes turned black and she said" she is coming"
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#17 Posted: 21:15:20 06/04/2009
wow......more please!
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#18 Posted: 21:17:53 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
like i said this one is going to be really short, maybe not even a page
saint: chily chily was sitting on her throne in the spirit world, she was stressed out, the eclpise will come soon, what will happen to the spirit world, with luna around it might free spirits or worse. she shook her head that could not happen. " chily we have a problem, what is it? look at the sky....." chily looked and her eyes turned wide." who would release those soldeirs?" inquired chily and comet said " someone who wants revenge.
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#19 Posted: 21:19:30 06/04/2009
more!
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#20 Posted: 21:25:50 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Chily looked around and her eyese landed on comet. " only someone with power could relase a soldeir, or someone who was once a spirit, is luna trying to protect herself?" comet looked at her" no luna is not evil, maybe the eclipse will have that effect on her." replied chily
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#21 Posted: 21:32:42 06/04/2009
PC!!!
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#22 Posted: 21:33:06 06/04/2009 | Topic Creator
comet said" the eclipse does stand for good and evil, but i would have felt that change but maybe the eclipse will chnage luna....." chily then said, we must find her at once! beofre it is to late and she uses her powers for evil
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#23 Posted: 21:35:11 06/04/2009
great!
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#24 Posted: 19:26:57 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
sinner: Rosada
she smiled knowingly, the spirits will blame luna for this, her revenge came and nothing will go wrong," unless that eclipse super powers luna and i get burned to a crisp." said rosada. " know to bring the dead back to life!" she chanted her spell and more soldier and told them about her plan.
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#25 Posted: 20:07:15 10/04/2009
F: *growls* when i get my claws on her, i''ll...i'll--
Fireflight! F: what? this isn't your story, you can't do anything! F: well...every story should have me in it... well, it doesn't...
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#26 Posted: 20:12:12 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
luna: every story should have me in it!
yeah right.......... luna: i will kill you!!!
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#27 Posted: 20:14:01 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
"once the spirits attack her or maybe even take her powers away i will kill her and everyone there and take over the spirirt world. for now i will influence the trees so i can capture her for comet and the others." Rosada said looking very pleased with herself.
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#28 Posted: 20:21:07 10/04/2009
F: *growls angerly* Luna! some evil moron is after you!
Fireflight, your not in the story, theres no way you can help. F: i'll find a way to help her!
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#29 Posted: 20:22:37 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
saint: luna
she traveled through the trees, they had to get away and fast. Rosada finally will be taking her revenge is all luna thought. they needed to come up with a plan. Luna said to sunny" we must kill her. i know but we need to regroup with constelation." they nodded and then began to fly
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#30 Posted: 20:49:27 10/04/2009
F: alright! its time to teach her a lesson!
Fireflight... F: what? shut up!
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#31 Posted: 23:04:56 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
The tree wapped around their feet and they all were screaming. they controled the trees, some soldeirs appeared and Rosada said" finally have you now the spirits will kill you!!!! that won't happen" useing her eclipse powers she freed herself and attacked rosada just as comet and chily appeared.
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#32 Posted: 23:12:56 10/04/2009
great story
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#33 Posted: 23:17:02 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Sinner: Can't say right now
Comet imediatly attacked Rosada and chily quickly attacked luna as well. they had to make sure luna would not use her powers, the eclipse was almost here. Then somone pounced on comet's back and he fell to the ground, he looked behind him and he saw comet, luna's son smileing evily" evil will always win"
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#34 Posted: 23:23:44 10/04/2009
F: not while i'm around! evil will never win!
how many times do i have to remind you, your not in the story!
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#35 Posted: 23:25:58 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Luna looked at her son and chily looked at him too. Comet ( evil son) then said to Rosada" the world will be ours! good choice young one" then they both flew away. Luna collapsed, crying, this is what ocean was talking about. Start was wimpering and nighta said nothing. the eclipse came and luna started howling in pain
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#36 Posted: 23:28:07 10/04/2009
F: aw....poor Luna....
you would feel the same way, if anything ever happened to Starfire... F: true...
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#37 Posted: 23:33:59 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Luna then stopped and she turned to dust and floated away. nobody spoke everone looked at the eclipse. it ended but but luna did not come back. not even seso and sosa knew were she was. she wasn't the eclipse any more and there was no spirit, just nothing. nighta shook her head and remembered something her mom always said" when a tragety strikes, everybody should weep, but then a new window opens not a door and the wonderful will happen. " i will always hold this near thought nighta. she stepped infront of the group and picked up the amulet that was on the ground and said" lets go back to the temple" with that nighta took the place of her mother.
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#38 Posted: 23:39:38 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
sinner: luna
luna woke up, one hour later on an island. the eclipse changed her, she was evil now, just what chily thought. the eclipse stood for both and luna must become both. she saw the dragon realms a little distance away and she had eclipse power pulstaing threw her. this time it was pure dark. luna smiled and said" no one can stop me" and blew up the island
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#39 Posted: 23:45:37 10/04/2009 | Topic Creator
this is the end of this story, before break i will continue this story, but not end it in
The New Age: pure moon This story will have good ol luna in it along with hero nighta , the protagonist and luna as the antagonist for once. Nighta will discover her powers it will center around nighta trying to defeat the worst villian in history, luna
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#40 Posted: 01:11:33 11/04/2009
cool.
F: nice story!
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#41 Posted: 02:04:45 11/04/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah but now i don't know how to write it, luna will be evil
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#42 Posted: 18:04:58 11/04/2009
PC!!!!!!!!!!!
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#43 Posted: 20:04:20 11/04/2009 | Topic Creator
nice fireball
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