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Betrayed: A New World [CLOSED]
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#1 Posted: 01:20:57 13/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Well, I've been down sick for some time now, so I figured I should do something constructive. I'm going to be writing a story about the Dragon Realms, and what is going on right now. The story will feature new dragons, new places, possibly a different world or two, haven't decided yet smilie And, I will be drawing pictures to illustrate a certain point in the story. Now, I don't know when I will get time to write this, but I will post a short teaser this weekend smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 02:49:25 15/03/2009 by Nalemor
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#2 Posted: 01:32:30 13/03/2009
sounds cool! smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#3 Posted: 20:32:23 14/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Betrayed: A New World

“Something has happened; the days are no longer bright and sunny, filled with the sounds of birds, the smell of flowers, the feel of a summer breeze. No, that has all gone; the birds, the grass, the flowers, even the wind has left. We have been cursed by an evil force; a force that wants to bring an end to our kind. This force will do anything to see our destruction. I must ask you one question, and keep in mind, this is the most important question you will ever be asked. For this question, I do not want to hear an answer immediately. I want everyone here to think about their answer. The question, will be a difficult one. Now, I ask of you a great task, one that you may not return from. Come with me, fight this force at my side! If we don't act now, our Dragon lives as we know them, will be gone forever. Come, my brothers and sisters, let us cleanse this world of the evil that has destroyed it.”

This is the speech a dragon gave to his fellow brothers and sisters of the Dragon Realms one month ago. This is the real story.
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#4 Posted: 02:26:30 15/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Seems to me nobody is interested in any of my topics. Why do I even waste my time on this site smilie
Ice Bane Emerald Sparx Gems: 3200
#5 Posted: 02:27:50 15/03/2009
it sounds cool. smilie
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Facti sunt tenebrae et lux
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#6 Posted: 22:32:10 16/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter one: Six months earlier...

For some, when they think of a dragon, they think of a mythical fire breathing beast that raids castles, kills knights, and kidnap princesses. However, for me, I see dragons in a totally different perspective. I see them as wondrous creatures, flying over the land with such grace and dignity; walking through a dense forest with pride; fighting evil creatures with such rage, and courage. A dragon is not a murderous beast. It is an intelligent, caring, and proud creature. Dragons have the senses of a hawk, yet the precision of a super computer. Now, you are most likely asking yourself this: How do I know all of this? Am I a madman? A freak? No, I am neither of those; however I am not what you would think to be “normal.” I am not the typical human as you may think of me to be. There are things about me that only one person can understand. I am not just a human, I am much more. My physical self may represent me as a two legged human at times, but in my heart, I am a true dragon. And for this reason, I am presenting to you, my story as a dragon. I hope you will enjoy it, or at least take my writings into great thought, as I am about to reveal a world to you that is unknown to anybody on this planet. Unknown to all humans, with the exception of two very unique people. Let us begin with my first experience as a dragon. I will explain everything at the end of this story.

I was sitting at my computer, on a normal day, watching some videos on You Tube. I had finished a very funny video, when I came across a video with a very intriguing title. I clicked on it, and started to watch; it displayed very strange, eerie pictures, depicting different worlds, all while an almost hypnotic piece of music played in the background. About one minute through the video, I started to become very tired for no reason. But, I continued to watch, all while becoming more and more fatigued. I had sat through three minutes of the music, when I suddenly got a very strange feeling. My vision went black, my body turned numb, and I felt as if I were falling, yet at the same time, flying upwards. It was a very peculiar feeling, yet I had no control over it. I went through this for about ten minutes, or at least that's what it felt like. Then, as if I had been asleep, I awoke in a strange place. Everything was so blurry, but I thought I could see figures standing all around me. The feeling did not last long however, for then I heard one of the figures speak. “Nalemor...?”

Anyone who reads this, I would appreciate it if you could recommend some of your friends to read this. I am putting alot of work into this story, and I would like to have more people read it.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#7 Posted: 22:51:02 16/03/2009
cool! smilie
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#8 Posted: 23:09:55 16/03/2009 | Topic Creator
No comments on it? smilie
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#9 Posted: 09:34:16 21/03/2009
it is awesome! keep writing!!!
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#10 Posted: 01:25:05 24/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I will this weekend. smilie
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