Story has NOTHING to do with Dragons....but vampires and vampinez.
I think its quit strange since i rarely think of storys without at leat a few dragon thinks in it. Hope you injoy
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#1 Posted: 20:41:45 05/03/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 21:17:51 05/03/2009
sounds cool.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#3 Posted: 21:33:32 05/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I whach the waves crash against the rocks. I look at the sharp rocks that come out of the water like sharp teeth. I get up. I think to myself
'I have two options. I could live and be misable or I could die and be happy...' I lift up a leg to plung into the ice cold water, hoping the sarp rocks will pierce me or the waves to drag me down into the iny deeps. I fell a hand on my shoulder. "Dont do it. You know mom and dad wouldnt like it." The voice said to Me. I look back at him and look down at my feet.
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#4 Posted: 21:38:13 05/03/2009
nice story.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#5 Posted: 00:00:15 06/03/2009
Sweets...i likes it! Plz continue!
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#6 Posted: 20:24:27 06/03/2009 | Topic Creator
it was only a few words the whole chapters longer
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#7 Posted: 22:15:57 06/03/2009
just write more! i like it!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#8 Posted: 02:24:14 07/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I whach the waves crash against the rocks. I look at the sharp rocks that come out of the water like sharp teeth. I get up. I think to myself
'I have two options. I could live and be misable or I could die and be happy...' I lift up a leg to plung into the ice cold water, hoping the sarp rocks will pierce me or the waves to drag me down into the iny deeps. I fell a hand on my shoulder. "Dont do it. You know mom and dad wouldnt like it." The voice said to Me. I look back at him and look down at my feet. How whould they like it? "Comon Eva,lets go back inside before you get a cold."He said again as he picked me up. I grunt and fold my arms. "Im a little old to be carried like this!?"I say "As alone as your little, ill alwas pick you up." He replied. How come he sounded so emtionless?I thought about his words and anger filled me "ILL ALWAS BE THIS LITTLE!!!HOW COME I NEVER CHANGE!?!!?" I yell He didnt answer me, just continued. He put me on the couch inside and shut the door. He walked over to the mantle and took a frame off. He picked me up again and sat me down on his nee as if he was one of the fake santas. He held the fram up to our faces. A happy photo of me, my brother, mom, and dad sat. "Look.What do you see?"He asked i stare at it. I see there picher. The happy picher before the accadent.I see our reflections most of all. "Our reflections..."i wisper He nodded. "Yes....and look. You have moms apperence..."He wispered back Anger filled me once more. "How can you say that!? Look at me!!!!! I look 7!!!!!And i alwas will!!!What is wrong with me!??!" I yell as i wiggle out of his grasp and walk to my room. I slam to door behind me and lay down on my bed. I start to cry. I hear a clik and he comes in. He walkes over to my bed and rub my back as i cry. The memories, the stuff that happenes to me, it all comesback and stabes me in the heart. He says nothing. He just lookes out the window as if hes looking for something, but still rubbing my back. The tears die down and i get sleepier. I slowly stop and fall asleep.
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#9 Posted: 06:52:38 07/03/2009
Sound cool :O
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#10 Posted: 07:04:37 08/03/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks
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#11 Posted: 17:19:55 08/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I wolk up in the middle of the night. I hear something outside. Liam comes when i yelled for him.
"Theres something outside..." i tell him "Its probally a imp. Ill shoo it away for you." He said as he walked over to the window. He waved his hand to shoo it away. A shadow-like creacher came up his arm. He looked at it in tarror. It formed a clawlike hand and swiped at his face. He fell back, blood comming out of the cuts. "Where is the one who dose not change!?" it hissed "Shes not here!!!!!" He shouted. He got back up and it lashed at him again. He tried to punch at it but his hand whent threw the shadow creacher. The claws came at him and again, cut him. He hissed in pain and it knoked Liam down once more. Blood gushed out of the cuts. The once blue rug was now a blood red. THe creacher hissed at him and whent back out the window. I peeked up and got out of bed. I ran over to him and looked at his whounds. The memories flooded back. Memories where i stood over my dead parents, weeping.
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#12 Posted: 18:02:25 08/03/2009
awsome! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#13 Posted: 20:51:46 08/03/2009
Wow...please write more! This is awesome!
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#14 Posted: 23:16:23 18/03/2009 | Topic Creator
The doctor came a few minites later. We got Liam and put him on the bed. The doc cheked him and turned to me.
"Do you know how demons kill, miss. Eva?" He asked me. "no.." i tell him "Demons will attak from the outside, but by doing so, they also dystroy the soule. Im suprised he servived the attack...." I look at Liam. Tears filled my eyes. "Ill come back tomorrow and give you something to help heal him.." he said as he turned and walked out the door. "YOUR NOT GOING TO GIVE HIM ENYTHING!?" i yell He turned to me and nodded. "Tomorrow Eva." he said And with that, he was gone. I go back to Liam and kiss his forhead. A tear driped down to his chek, then to his chin. I whach him threwout the night.
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970 |
#15 Posted: 23:34:25 19/03/2009
Great job! Plz write more!!!
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#16 Posted: 19:55:15 07/04/2009 | Topic Creator
i know it suckes so im going to 'lie' and add a dragonness
I stay up and wach the clock. Tick. Tick. Tick. Tick. Time just whent so slow. The clock ticked, never stoped. I hate waiting. It gave me time to think of everything. Why do i never change? Will i ever change? will the suicide fase....fade? Will i fade? SO many questions but....never enofe time. And no answers to them. Just wait and see, Liam says. I cant wait! As i wait it gives me more questions. Questions that i have to wait to get answered. Then more questions appere as i wait for that question to get answered. A never ending chain..... Ding- dong! Who was it? I look outside to see the sun start to rise. Why so erly in the morning? Great...another question. But this time, i didnt need to wait. I get off the chair i sat on and walked to the door. Of corse the doctor was there. I let him in and close the door. He opened it right away and a small black and blue dragon came in. What kind was is? Another question i didnt havbe to wait for and i didnt have to ask it. "Varmpire dragon. Its a female. Vary young." I look up at him and he wisperes something to the dragoness. He then puts her down. SAhe was only half my size....and i was as smale as a 7 year old.....I nod and the dragoness trotes off to Liams room. We all follow to see her do her work.
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