OK, this is a brand new story from yours truly. The actual inspiration from this comes from a dream i had last night. Basically what happens is, my dragon Gridion, a normal, everyday dragon, finds out he has a rare aura. To hone his powers, he must gather the two dragons, Spyro and Cynder, and a third animal...it depends on what powers he needs. Then, just before midnight on the Summer Solstice, he is to draw power from the beings, to defeat a rising evil.
Umm...how does it sound?
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#1 Posted: 00:08:20 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 00:12:38 03/03/2009
cool!
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#3 Posted: 00:16:26 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx, i would start now, but i've got no idea how...i'm thinking...
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#4 Posted: 00:17:05 03/03/2009
ok. just start whenever your ready.
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#5 Posted: 00:18:55 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Meh-heh, will do!
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#6 Posted: 00:19:47 03/03/2009
ok! i hope you start soon!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#7 Posted: 00:20:32 03/03/2009
so this is the dream you had? cant wait!
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#8 Posted: 00:21:36 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah...except, instead of Gridion it was me...but ah well, Gridion would do better anyways!
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#9 Posted: 00:22:27 03/03/2009
it still sounds cool to me!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#10 Posted: 00:23:39 03/03/2009
sweetness
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Yeet |
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#11 Posted: 00:25:16 03/03/2009
yeah. start soon please!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#12 Posted: 00:25:22 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Oh, and another thing, i'm telling it from Gridion's point of view. In other words, I'm gonna be Gridion for the time being.
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#13 Posted: 00:26:49 03/03/2009
yay!
RANDOM: Bo bo bo bobobobo sorry, plese staryt right awayXP
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#14 Posted: 00:29:47 03/03/2009
we'll go crazy if you don't start soon!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#15 Posted: 00:33:48 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Alright, i'm ABSOLUTELY WINGING IT HERE!
Tick, tock...tick, tock... I lay lazily in the noonday sun, flies buzzing around my head. I absentmindedly snapped at them. Tick, tock...tick, tock... I sat up, listening. What the heck was that noise? Standing up and stretching, I spread my wings and flew in the direction of the noise. Today was the first day of summer, June 21. The Summer Solstice. And all day, strange things had been happening. My hearing had been much more clearer, my eyesight even better than normal. Now this last one is odd, since I am dyslexic. Anyways, I located the source of the sound at a nearby cave. I raised my eyebrows. This cave is quite close...how can I never have heard this before? I wondered. The sun was high above right now, so the cool of the cave was going to feel nice anyways. I stepped inside and was immediately hit with a wave of nice cold air. I followed a small tunnel for a few minutes. All of a sudden it widened out into a cavern. I gasped. |
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#16 Posted: 00:35:57 03/03/2009
the first part reminds me of the Darren Shane books
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#17 Posted: 00:36:30 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
The whaty-who books?
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#18 Posted: 00:37:22 03/03/2009
sounds good. write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#19 Posted: 00:40:38 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! And the first part actually, umm, reminds me of the Percy Jackson and the Olympians series.
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#20 Posted: 00:42:57 03/03/2009
i don't care, it still sounds good!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#21 Posted: 00:49:15 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Meh, thanks!
The cavern was completely silver. No joke, everything was silver! There were silver flowers, silver tables, chairs, even a silver toilet! I chuckled to myself at that one. The only thing that wasn't silver was a large bed smack-dab in the middle of the room. A large silver (no surprise there) dragon lay in it. He opened his eyes and saw me. He smiled and stood up. He walked to me, and spoke. "Gridion...we have been waiting for you," he said. I looked at him in total surprise. "M-me? How do you even know me? Who are you?" I demanded. He chuckled. "Oh, please forgive my rudeness. My name is Silvertongue," he clarified. I looked around the room and smiled at him. "Not much of a surprise there," I told him. He laughed a deep, low laugh. "Ah, yes...silver is quite an inconspicious color, don't you agree?" I shrugged. "Now, we have much to discuss. Shall we talk over some tea and cakes?" My stomach grumbled then. "I suppose so...?" I answered. lol, that tea and cakes thing, kinda original, don't ya think? |
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#22 Posted: 00:51:18 03/03/2009
i like it......*stimach growls* i wish i had some of that cake
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#23 Posted: 00:54:03 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
lol, i don't think i'm gonna write anymore tonight. I need to think of what they're gonna talk about. I just went on an impulse on that one.
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#24 Posted: 00:55:41 03/03/2009
i make up stuff in my story all the time.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#25 Posted: 00:56:19 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
lol, i'm forming something of an idea.
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#26 Posted: 00:57:39 03/03/2009
I didn't just put my avi upside down!I inverted its color!
How about cupcakes and Bananas and Peanut buter and Jelly PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!PEANUT BUTER JELLY TIME! I shouldn't have said bananas and peanut butter and jelly.
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#27 Posted: 01:48:00 03/03/2009
Quote: SpyroKing
*gasped* im ashamed jk jk. You should read his books Good as the eragon series but shorter to, wishing you had more Cirqu du frek and Dementra Great books!
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#28 Posted: 02:00:29 03/03/2009
^ it sounds intresting!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#29 Posted: 21:05:13 03/03/2009
they are.
Cirqu du frek is about vampires, but they beat the twilight vamps by a long shot (Wtf!? sparkiling vamps!?) And dementra is about demons(MUA HA HA HA HA)
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#30 Posted: 21:06:32 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Sweet, sounds VERY cool, something i would DEFINATELY read!
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#31 Posted: 21:10:34 03/03/2009
But they contain ALOTE of bad language But the main character is only a kidO.o i read both sires, a book recamended
What i whant to know is WHO the heck whould be afraid of sprkiling vampires?? anywhay.....PLEAsE CONTINUE!!!
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#32 Posted: 21:20:24 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
lol, bad language, awesome. OK, i'll try me best here.
Silvertongue and I sat down in a room off from the main cavern. He brought out the refreshments, then sat down directly across from me. The way he stared at me was kinda unnerving. Tick, tock...tick, tock... There was that sound again! Only this time, closer. I looked around and saw what was making the noise. It was a HUGE clock. The whole clock was about the size of my full wingspan. This huge machine got me thinking. Who is this guy...really? I decided to ask him. He chuckled at me. "I'm sure you've heard of me. Perhaps only stories, but perhaps. I am the new Chronicler," I swear, my mouth was gaping. I HAD heard the stories of the Chronicler, but I had disregarded them as myths, pure children's fairy tales. "So, then...can you really control time?" I asked in wonder. He nodded, then said the most shocking thing ever. "And so can you," I just laughed at the old fool. "Me? You've gotta be kidding me, I can't even ask out a girl! You REALLY think that I've got these...powers?" I cried. He held up a paw for me to stop. "Just listen. You are a very rare dragon. You are one of the sons of the Legendary Dragons, Spyro and Cynder. Your aura, or force that drives all matter, is perhaps one of the rarest this world has ever seen. And next summer, on the Summer Solstice, you will find your first Component and awaken your true magical being," |
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#33 Posted: 21:23:27 03/03/2009
Deanna;*clapes*
Me: :3
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#34 Posted: 21:26:59 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Thank ya! Thank ya very much!
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#35 Posted: 21:30:07 03/03/2009
:3.
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Yeet |
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#36 Posted: 21:30:51 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I had a hard time with it, actually. I couldn't seem to put the words together right...
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#37 Posted: 21:32:32 03/03/2009
i could help if you wish?
Meh, im going to wright some more in My story brb
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#38 Posted: 21:33:54 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
lol, ok.
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#39 Posted: 00:37:02 04/03/2009
Mem!!!Im back!
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Yeet |
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#40 Posted: 21:57:08 10/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Well, well, bad case of writer's block, that was. Don't worry, this story isn't dying on me yet!
I stared at Silvertongue, trying to comprehend what I just heard. "Isn't today the Summer Solstice? Why can't I just start now?" Silvertongue just smiled at me. It was getting a little creepy, that grin of his. "Because you haven't been trained in what you ALREADY know," he said, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. I replied sarcasticly, "Oh yes, what I ALREADY know. Of course! So what? Can I breathe Ice? Betcha that myth was real too, eh?" The Chronicler nodded. His confidence...it just made me angry. "So, you believe in childish myths, do you? Here's what I think of them!" I stood up and smashed his teacup on the floor. Grumbling angrily, I made my way out of the cave. Silvertongue didn't move to stop me, and I'm glad he didn't. He just sat there, unmolested, and said, "You'll be back. Trust me...you will," |
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#41 Posted: 19:38:26 14/03/2009
Silvertongue...where did i hear that before..?
*cofe*inkheart*cofe* please continue!!
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Yeet |
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#42 Posted: 19:39:07 14/03/2009 | Topic Creator
lol, i knew somebody would catch it. Yes, i took the name from Inkheart.
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#43 Posted: 19:41:32 14/03/2009
i own both books
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Yeet |
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#44 Posted: 19:46:43 14/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Kewl. I'm guessing you're gonna read Inkdeath when it is released?
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#45 Posted: 22:04:59 25/04/2009
yesh:3
i briught the story back to life ;3
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