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The Story of MALEFOR [CLOSED]
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#1 Posted: 19:27:44 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
This a story about Malefor from his birth to his death.
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#2 Posted: 19:30:37 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll start it right now!!!!!
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#3 Posted: 19:31:50 01/03/2009
sounds interesting.
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#4 Posted: 19:45:51 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1: The birth of the purple dragon.

It was the Year of the Dragon the elders and the futue parents waited for the hatclings.Malefor's parents were a Fire Dragon and an Ice Dragon.The fire dragon's name was Firestar and the ice dragon's name was Crystal.
Suddenly one of there eggs started to hatch.It was a male fire dragon Malefor's oldest brother.They named him Flame.The next one was a male earth dragon.It had small wings and it was really fat.They named him Rocky.Then a male electric dragon hatched.It's name was Bolt.Then a female ice dragon hatched.She was very pretty and they named her Icy.Then a white dragon came it was bigger than the otters and it was very strong and handsome.They named him Kopa.And finnaly a purple dragon came.They named him Malefor.

Firestar:A purple dragon i've never seen one like this what powers could he have.And this White one it's very strange and bigger than the others.

Crystal:I don't care what powers they have.I don't care if they are fat.I like them the way they are.

Firestarsmiliek well...look other dragons are coming look all of the famlies none of them have a white or a purple dragon.It doesn't matter let's get some sleep.
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#5 Posted: 20:06:25 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:The legend of the white dragon

A week past sence Malefor and his siblings hatched.They were all playing in the back yard of the temple.All the dragons learned to talk but not that good.Only Kopa knew how to talk perfect.Flame made fun of all the otters.He made friends with other dragons and they made fun at Rocky beacuse he was fat.They made fun at Bolt beacuse he was the smartest one of the family.

Flame:Hey there nerd.
Bolt:You are bad.
Flame:Swut up
Malefor:Live him awone
Flame:You twink you can stwop us
Kopa:He can't but i can.Live my little brother alone.(shouting)
Icy:Yeah Kopa is appsowetly right.
Rocky:They callwed me fat.
Kopa:You should stop picking on everyone or i'll tell mom and dad.
Flame:You know i wish you would dwie.
Malefor:T****s
Kopa:No worries

Meanwhile in a dark tample far far away in the land of darkness...
Gaul:Look at that purple dragon and that white one we must capture them.

Then in a portal a dark shadow shows.

Dark Shadow:We need that purple dragon we need his soul.But to get to him we need to take out the white dragon

Gaul:Why? You think a little white dragon can stop us...

Dark Shadow:Fools do you know the story of the white dragon?

Gaul:no...

Dark Shadow:The White dragon can pocsses all of the dragon elements:Fire,Ice,Electricity,earth,poison,fear.wind,shadow,convexity and laser eyes.But the worst part is that they hunt dark spirits like me if i find a strong buddy he couldn't catch me or defeat me you must find him and kill him HAHAHAHHAHAHHA

...to be continued
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#6 Posted: 20:19:23 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:The horrible dream

It was night Malefor had a bad dream.

In the dream:

Malefor saw a dark sky he was on the top of the mountan in front of him there was an army of apes cheering for him....

Malefor:What is this where am i?
Dark Spirit:Welcome purple dragon would you like a drink.
Malefor:Who are you what are you?
Dark Spirit:I am the Dark master the evil soul of the world.I need your soul to escape this prison and destroy the world.

Malefor:Well you can't have it.I won't let you destroy the world.
Dark Master:Well it's your chose you or ....

Malefor was woken up by his mother.Malefor now was two years old.He learned to talk very well and he played with Kopa every day.Rocky got fatter and fatter.Icy became very beautiful.Bolt became very smart he became smarter than the elders.Flame hated Malefor and Kopa ,he wanted Kopa to die beacuse he knew he was the young prince of the temple he wanted all of his brothers and sisters dead .every one dead.
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#7 Posted: 20:53:29 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:The first elements

Malefor and Kopa were playing in the garden suddenly Malefor sneezed and fire came out of his nose.Kopa was suprised.Malefor sneezed again and he hit Kopa.Than they ran to Firestar and he too was suprised.

Firestar:Malefor Kopa follow me to the training room...
Firestar:I see that you've learned fire Malefor flame those dummies Malefor flamed the dummies and he did it he learned so much tings about fire.
Firestar:Now Kopa your turn

Kopa breathed a stronger fire than Malefor and did pretty well.Firestar was proud of his sons.
The next day...
Firestar:Now my kids today you will master your elements Malefor and Kopa already learned fire now its time you to learn Flame to master fire.

Flame learned fire and had a plan to kill Kopa.
Crystal learned ice,Bolt learned electricity and finally Rocky who was scared.
Firestar:Come on son
Rocky:No they will all laugh at me i can't learn earth.
Firestar:Son earth is easy just fell like you are in a ball

Rocky tried but he was fat and he didn't fit in the ball and he didn't master the element.
Flame:HAHAHAHA the fat guy can't fit in his own element HAHAHAHA....
Firestarsmilieshouting)FLAME!!!!!Rocky come on son lets ....

But Rocky was gone he went to the river alone.

Kopa looked at him very sad.
Malefor:Maybe you should go talk to him.

Kopa went...

Rocky was looking at the river suddenly he noticed footsteps...
Rocky:Go away
Kopa:Rocky i'm sorry that everyone laughed at you
Rocky:I hate myself why am i so fat?
Kopa:Beacuse you were born this way it isn't your falt
Rocky didn't say anything...
Kopa:Rocky why don't we tomorow go to the training room and learn earth you me and Malefor what do you say?
Rocky smiled...
Rocky:You are the best brother ever you and Malefor!
Kopa:Let's go
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#8 Posted: 21:18:13 01/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4:End of the White dragon

It was a sunny day.Malefor learned Fire,Ice and Earth.Kopa learned Fire,Ice,Earth,Electricity and Wind.The other dragons were confused.Flame finally had a plan to kill Kopa he made friend with a wolf.He saw Kopa drinking water from the river and he called him...

Flame:Kopa can you come for a miniute.
Flame told the wolf to attack Kopa.Flame went back to the temple.

Kopa went to Flame but he didn't see him.He saw a cave.He went in the cave and suddenly a wolf attacked hm but Kopa wasn't scared.He started to use fire than he ran away from him.He saw Malefor and he told him him to get the other dragons.Malefor went to the temple.The wolf threw Kopa at the edge of a cliff.Then the wolf wanished and Flame showed up.

Kopa:Flame please help me,brother...
Kopa couldn't hold on for long Flame grabbed Kopa by the claws and he said to him his last words...
Flame:Long live the prince
And then Flame throw Kopa of the cliff to the silver river
Then the parents and the elders came
Flame:Mommy daddy the bad wolf throw Kopa in the river and it hit me.
The dragons looked in the river they didn't see his body but they did see his blood.They were all unhappy especially Malefor who lost his brother.

Meanwhile in the mountain...
Gaul:Master the white dragon has found his death.Your plan worked!!!
Dark Master:Yes now that the white dragon is out we can finnaly catch the purple dragon.
From the portal Flame came out but the Dark Master corrupted his soul he used Flame to kill Kopa.
Dark Master :Now to get out of this horrible form

The dark master went back to the portal and he trhew Flame back to his temple.
Dark Master:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!!!


On the other side of the world Kopa travelled and he was picked up by a Fire dragon and was taken away.He opened his eyes and saw nothing but he knew that he started a new live!!!

To be continued...
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#9 Posted: 12:06:37 02/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5smilieeath

It was a rainy day.All the dragons were inside exept Malefor he stayed outside just looking at the silver river.

Meanwhile the Dark Master has corrupted Firestars soul and he went to Malefor.Malefor turned around and Firestar gave Malefor a scar.Malefor ran away to his mother.Firestar chased Malefor....

Firestar:Give me that purple dragon!
Crystal:To get to him you need to go threw my dead buddy!!
Firestar:Whit pleasure...

It was a battle between Firestar and Crystal and in the end Firestar won he left Crystals boddy on the ground.All the other dragons were scared ,the dark master left Firestars body and he was back to normal,but he was proud for what he had done.
Malefor looked at Crystal

Malefor:Mom no,no no no (he cried)

To be continued...
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#10 Posted: 12:30:21 02/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5:The truth and the death

10 years have passed sience Kopas death and Crystals death

Malefor was 12 years old he's live was almost ruined he lost the once he loved he never forgot Kopa and he didn't learned any elements and he was hungry and so were Icy and Rocky.

Firestar teached the dragons how to fly.He just loved Flame and everyday Flame got stronger and stronger.
Firestar:Today you will learn how to fly.Beacuse Flame already knows, he will teach you the most important thing.Now get in line.Your first test will be to glide from this ledge to the other ledge.If you fall you will be eaten by piranas.
Malefor tried and he did it so did Rocky and Icy and all the other dragons.Flame wasn't happy so he made a plan how to defeat the fat guy Rocky.
Flame:Now your next lesson is to fly now i will teach you that if you don't know how to fly you will fall and drown in the river.
Rocky:I can't do that...

Then a thin old earth dragon came out of the temple it was the chronicler but his name was now Steve.
Steve:Excuse me child but you need to tell them the most important thing!
Flame:Shut up old man!
Malefor:I did it
Rocky:I don't care i wont do this

Then Flame made him fly and he fell in to the river he was still alive but the river was too fast Malefor couldn't do anything Rocky still struggled but he fell out of a waterfall,no one ever heard of Rocky ever again.Everyone were sad exept Flame and his dead.

Steve:Come Malefor let's go for a walk....
Malefor:Rocky is gone like Crystal and Kopa
Steve:Who is Kopa
Malefor:He was my brother a white dragon
Steve:A white dragon no way i've only heard stories but...come whit me

They went to a cave it was full with books....
Steve:Welcome to my home.Listen son ,your brother is what we call a invinsable dragon a powerful dragon stronger than you.He pocsses every element:Fire,Ice,Earth,Electricity,Poison,Fear,Wind,Shadow,Convexity,Laser eyes and he can fly and run faster than anything, and the only way someone can defeat him is if they have mastered more elements than him,and they are dragons that hunt dark spirits.Where is he?

Malefor:I don't know how to tell you this but he died a long time ago
Steve:I'm sorry, would you like to live whit me.
Malefor:Yes
Steve:You must be in good hands these are dark times....

To be continued...
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#11 Posted: 20:30:54 02/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6:The future

Malefor moved into Steve's cave.He was happy.Firestar Flame,Icy,Bolt and all the other dragons moved into Dragon City.One day Malefor went in the Dragon City and he saw Bolt leaving.

Malefor:Hey Bolt where are you going?
Bolt:I'm leaving Malefor i got a message from the biggest school in the world,they asked me to come and be the president.I'snt that cool?
Malefor:You know you don't really have to go!
Bolt:I know but Firestar keeps arguing me and hating me infact i'll be more happier there.
Malefor:Well it's sad ,we didn't had time to get to know each other a little better i was coming to ask you if you wanted to move in Steve's cave.
Bolt:Sorry Malefor you've been a good friend but i really have to go,sorry.
Malefor:Be careful!
Bolt:I will,goodbye Malefor.I won't forget you or Kopa even if he died a long time ago.
Malefor:Bye Bolt.I'll see you around right!?
Bolt:Well...Yeah yeah you will,see ya Malefor.

Malefor went back to the Dragon City and he saw a dragon running toward him.

Tomas:Malefor,I don't know how to tell you this but Icy is dead a herd of wolfs attacked her nobody found her i'm sorry.

Malefor didn't no what to say...
Tomas:And Steve's gone too, i'm so sorry he died beacuse he was an old and sick dragon.

Malefor:Went to the cave and he saw Steve dead.He went to him and sad he's last words...
MaleforsmilieSadly)You are gone like the rest of my family.Maybe some day i will see you again ,but until then please take care of my family beacuse...I love you Steve

Malefor went away sad, lost, confused he went far away from the dragon city.And suddenly he heard something a pack of wolfs were chasing him.It started to rain one of the wolfs bit Malefor by the leg and he fell down,they were all atacking him....

Voice:Stop i will take it from here...
Someone hit Malefor and he was hanging at the edge of a cliff
Voice:HAHAHAHAHAHHA....
Then Flame showed up
Malefor:Flame how could you...
Flame:Now to take care of you
He grabed him by the paws...
Flame:Now here is my little secret i killed Kopa
Then Flame throw Malefor of the cliff throw the silver river just like he did to Kopa 10 years ago

To be continued...
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#12 Posted: 20:47:22 02/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7:A new life

Malefor was floating down the silver river dead, blood was all over his body and traveling, many months later he made it to the shore.A group of dragons gattered around him.

Dragon:I don't belive it the purple dragon
The dragons picked up Malefor and brought him inside a temple.There was a balcony,a garden,a room whit a mystirious poll and two rooms.they put Malefor ina bed and he waked up.

Malefor:Where...where am i?
Dragon:You are in a temple.
Malefor:Who are you?
Dragon:I'm Flame this is Thunder,this is Snow and this is Rock.
Malefor:You have strange names oh and my evil brother's name is Flame.
Flame:Evil brother?
Malefor:Yeah well he almost killed me he pushed me off a cliff,but when i find him i am gonna kill him.He killed my brother Kopa and the rest of my family!
Flame:Kopa?What kind of dragon is this?
Malefor:He was a white dragon the first of his kind he died 10 years ago.

Flame didn't say anything....then he sad:KOPA

A large white strong dragon whit white pink wings came out of a room.
Kopa:Malefor!?
Malefor:Kopa i can't belive it you're alive you are alive!

Malefor and Kopa started playing

KOPA:this is a miricle i thought you were gone.
Malefor:Well i am alive now ,oh and can you give as a miniute Flame.

Malefor and Kopa went in the forest
to be continued...
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#13 Posted: 02:21:45 03/03/2009
Awsome! Please Continue!! Athough some of those chapters seem familiar from "Malefor, corupted soul", my Malefor fanfic.
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Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#14 Posted: 12:54:51 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry!

Chapter 8:The corruption
Malefor and Kopa talked in the forest...
Malefor:This is awesome i can't belive you are alive just wait until we get back home everyone will be glad to see you
Kopa:I can't go back
Malefor:What why not?
Kopa:I'll die.Before Flame threw me from the edge of the cliff he sad something to me but i can't remember.Besides it's safer if we stay here.
Malefor:Well i'm not going back i'm staying here two now let's go back to the temple and forget this thing.


5 years later...
Malefor and Kopa were all grown up and they played every day.One day Malefor thought:I can't belive i didn't tell Kopa about Crystals,Rockys and Icys death.
Kopa:Hey Malefor good news the elders are gonna teach you some new elements making you stronger.

Meanwhile in the mountain...
Gaul:Master we haven't found trace of the purple dragon beacuse you killed him.
Dark Master:FOOLS!I didn't kill him it was Flame he has been evil from the begining.But i will corrupt his soul without Kopa noticing me and destroy the world ,the world will finally pay HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!!

End of Part 1
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#15 Posted: 13:20:26 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8:The corrupton Part 2

It was night Malefor was sleeping but he got awake and he saw Kopa at he balcony.
Malefor:Kopa what are you doing here
Kopa:I'm patroling ,i can fell something dark coming this way
Malefor: Why are your eyes dark they were green yesterday
Kopa:Malefor listen i'm a white dragon.I never sleep i never eat i never drink.I can fly and run faster than anything i can leave for generationgs i have the strenght to lift temples trees cityies.(shouting)You think you can run faster than me.You think you can defeat me.
Malefor:NO
Kopa:Well you can you are the only one YOU.When i came here i was diffrent from the other dragons i am designed to kill were all designed to kill.But i'm not like that, you now what i only drink?
Malefor:No
Kopa:I drink dragon blood.But i'm not like that.For 17 years i haven't eat or drinked anythink.Because i'm not a killer.You should stay away from me

Kopa flied away.Behind Malefor somethink dark came and he went in to his body Malefor fainted and he fell of the balcony in the water.The next day he felt diffrent.
Kopa:HI malefor
Malefor:What happend?
Kopa:You fell in the water.I live you alone for one miniute and you
explode
Malefor:You know i had enough of you.All these years is about you but you know what?I think you're not wanted here anymore.
Kopa:Whatever i have a cave in the forest i rater go live in there instead of here.You are not the Malefor i remembered.

A week later the elders started to teach Malefor the secrets of the elements.He learned so muck elements and beacame more and more powerful.But his power had no boundary.So the elders stoped teaching him elements.Malefor couldn't stop so he lost control.He flew above the temple.It started to rain thunders hit the ground.And then from Malefor came a flash of Convexity.The explosion destroyed everything.Kopa saw that and he flew to Malefor whit a big speed and he hit him.Malefor fall on the ground.
Kopa:Are you ok?
Malefor:You idiotic white little whipling.You ruined everythink.Leave me alone,or i will take care of you myself.
Kopa:I can see the future Malefor it's not you anymore but a new evilness called the dark master.You know i think i'll go.

Kopa staned in front of Malefor and then the leaves came to him fire spred all over his body he beacme all white there was flash and a moment after that Kopa was gone.

To be continued...
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#16 Posted: 19:16:27 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9smilieark Life

5 years have passed since Malefor was corrupted.He was acting strange.So the elders exiled him.Malefor went away he walked away in the forest and suddenly the elder fire dragon Flame showed up

Flame:Malefor
Malefor:What?
Flame:I'm so sorry that this happend i really am.
Malefor:Flame you should stay away from me.I louse control darkness is in me!
Flame:Malefor i know that deep there is steel you.
Malefor:It's not Malefor anymore.I'll be lost in the darkness forever.When Kopa said that he is designed to kill he meant me!
Flame:Maleforyou aren't design to kill trust me we will hide in secret.
Malefor:I...I don't wanna heart you ,i will never escape the darkness...never escape the dark master
Flame:Malefor i...
Malefor:We should say goodbye i'm now The Dark Master, from my birth i was evil and to my death i will be...i need to go.I just know the horrible things i'm gonna do.(sad)I never wanted to hurt or lost anyone.Even if everyone in this world think that i'm evil they are wrong.My time has come the Malefor story is over the dark live is beginning!

Malefor flew away.
Flame:Goodbye Malefor!

End of part 1
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#17 Posted: 19:33:31 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter10 Dark Life part 2

Malefor flew away and he got corrupted.The dark master went in the mountain.
D.M.:ahh free and safe at last.And this is a nice comftorable body.
Suddenly Malefros face change.It became dark.
Gaul:So where do we start our world domination.
D.M.:At the Dragon City.

Malefor and an army of apes attacked the dragon city.At the end noting was left.Malefor found Flame and he killed him.Then Malefor created a bigger army of apes stronger and he almost destroyed the world.But for a miniute the army of apes wanishes.
Malefor:What is this?
Kopa:Stand down Malefor i will free you from this dark shadow.
D.M.:Malefor isn't here anymore.But i will take pleasure of killing you!

After a battle Malefor falls down.Kopa is ready to kill him but Malefor comes back to normal.
Malefor:No Kopa what are you doing!

Kopa stands down and then Malefor get's corrupted and he hits Kopa.Then Kopa uses laser eyes and escapes.Malefor thought Kopa was gone for good.But than Kopa uses an uknown power and opens a portal of convexity.Kopa heats Malefor whit laser eyes and he gets sucked in the portal.Nobody ever heard about Malefor or Kopa ever again.The world was peaceful once again or is IT!!!


END OF FIRST PART OF THE STORY OF MALEFOR
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#18 Posted: 19:35:34 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll start the second part tomorrow.smilie
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#19 Posted: 20:54:51 03/03/2009
NOO! KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!smilie
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#20 Posted: 23:16:41 03/03/2009
Please Continue!!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#21 Posted: 14:29:18 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
OK!
The story of Malefor
Part 2


Chapter 1:Birth of the second purple dragon

Ten generations have past since Malefor was defeated.In the year of the dragon a fire dragon Ignitus waited for the purple dragon.

Meanwhile in the mountain of Malefor...
Gaul:Sir the army is ready to attack the temple where the purple dragon is.
D.M.:I must prevent the prophices from coming true.From so many battles they are weakned.Destroy all of the eggs exept one .Kill all of the guardians leave noothing alive!

Meanwhile....

Ignitus:I should have heaten the eggs long before but i...i thought we were ready i thought they were save how i was wrong.

Suddenly the ape army attacks.
Volteer:Save them the dark armies have come.

Ignitus took the purple egg to the silver rive.Then he came back to the temple.He saw the other guardians overrun and the eggs all smashed,all exept one.Gaul took it.Ignitus tried to save it but ...he failed.

The purple egg was found by a family of dragonflys.

Meanwhile in the mountain Gaul had the egg and it hatched the same time the purple one did.Malefor used his dark magic and she was corrupted making her evil.Creating a new weapon of destruction called CYNDER!!!

to be continued....
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#22 Posted: 14:47:25 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:Ignitus and Cynder

12 years later the purple dragon was liveing a happy live with Sparx the young dragonfly that was born the same day.Suddenly Spyro and Sparx ran to a pack of apes.Spyro learns Fire.After he saves Sparx,confused and upset he leaves his home to find his real one.Sparx goes with him.Then they find Ignitus.
Ignitus:You are alive.
Spyro:Who are you,do you know me?
Ignitus:Yes you are a purple dragon a dragon born every ten generations.

You guys probably know the dialog right.After freeing Cynder, in the mountain of Malefor....
Gaul:Long have we waited long have we sufferd but soon our master will return.And know we must attack the pirate ships too capture Cynder.

Meanwhile in the Felmuth arena...
Spyro:Cynder i'm not going to fight you.
Cynder:Relax i'm just pridenting while we find a way to escape.

Than the apes attacked and they grabbed Cynder.
Spyro:Cynder!

They took Cynder to the mountain...
Gaul:So the traditor returns.
Cynder:You can't go through with this gaul.
Gaul:It wont be long until our master returns.HAHAHAHAH!

Spyro travelled to the mountain
Spyro:Where are we?
Gaul:HAHAHAHAHA the purple dragon at last you made it.

After defeating Gaul....

Cynder:Spyro stop!
Sparx:Whoa calm down man it's me.
Spyro:I...I can't
Spyro:What have i done.
Cynder:You're Ok spyro you're with friends.
Spyro:I'm sorry i couldn't stop.
Sparxsmilieh oh that's our only way out.
Spyro:Just go get up Spyro were not leaving without you.

They couldn't escape...
Spyro:Get close to me NOW!

Spyro saved them in the crystal.Until then Malefor escaped ,history started to repeat itself.

To be continued...
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#23 Posted: 14:53:50 04/03/2009
Please Continue!!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#24 Posted: 19:13:50 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
OK,OK it's just a story Fireball
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946
#25 Posted: 19:41:09 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3smilieeath of Malefor

Three long years have passed since Spyro and Cynder were trapped in the crystal.Until then Malefor has relesed his evil among the world.

One day one of Malefors forces release Spyro and Cynder from the vrystal and they stuck them togeter.

In Malefors Lair....
Warior:Everything is going according to plan.
Malefor:Yes!Are my warriors ready to attack the dragon city.
Warior:Yes!Nothing will stop us.HAHAHAHHA
Malefor:Shut up!Only i can laugh now go and get the war machine ready.


The war has started.Spyro and Cynder came to the dragon city and they destroyed the siege towers.

Malefor:The purple dragon.So he survived well.Kill the purple dragon ,open the citys main gates, let the ogre in!

Spyro and Cynder destroyed the war machine and defeated the ogre.

Warior:Masterwe must attack the dragon city what do we do?
Malefor:Fall back.
Warior:What?
Malefor:Fall back i've got something special for them.

Spyro and Cynder flew to hunter.
Cynder:This is odd why are they retriting when they were so close to taking the city.
Hunter:I don't know something not right.
Spyro:They're turning around look.

The golem attacks the dragon city but Spyro and Cynder defeated him.

Malefor:Grrrr that's it.I'm going to senda messege to our friends.

The crystal appers in front of them.
Malefor:Citizens of Warfang congratulations!You are the first ones to withness the destroyer and the end of the world.
Ignitus:Malefor.
Malefor:The destroyer has comenced it's journey to oform the ring of destruction.

The dragons have a plan.Spyro and Cynder open the gates to the ruines of warfang.And they made it to the destroyer.They break the dam.

Malefor:I loved that dam.Oh i'm gonna miss it.

Spyro and Cynder destroyed the destroyers heart.But Malefor awakend him.

Spyro:Ignitus what do we do?
Ignitus:I....I don't know.Listen to me not much time is left.Everyone must get to shelter.Hunter send your folcons to the outlean regions and tell them to get benith the surfice as deep as they can.

Spyro:What about us Ignitus?
Ignitus:I will get you trough the belt of fire.
Sparx:that doesn't sound too bad.
Spyro:Sparx you can't come with me i'm sorry.You need to make sure the others reach the underground city i time you've been there before you can guide them.
Sparx:Cynder you have to promise me you will look after him,we have been throw alot togheter.
Cynder:I promise.

After Ignitus's death...

Spyro:Ignitus NOOO!
Cynder:Spyro stop it's too late you can't do anything for him now.
Spyro:No he isn't gone.
Cynder:Spyro let it go!
Spyro:NOOO
Cynder:No Spyro don't
Spyro:You can't stop me
Cyndersmilielease Spyro don't do this.We have to go on he wanted us to.
Spyro:I feel so alone.
Cynder:You are not alone.

Malefor:Ugh girls.

Spyro:Are you ready for this
Cynder:I'm scared.
Spyro:Just stay close to me...

You all know the dialog.

End of Part 1 To be continued.....
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#26 Posted: 19:41:50 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll start the second part tommorow
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#27 Posted: 19:56:21 04/03/2009
KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!! smilie
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#28 Posted: 21:28:26 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: Death of Malefor Part 2

Spyro,Cynder Defeated Malefor.

Malefor:You can't defeat me i am eternal
Spyro:Just hold on!
Malefor:What is this?NOOOO!

Cynder:Spyro i'm sorry i'm so sorry.
Spyro: Don't be it's over now.
Cynder:So this is it!
Ignitus:Spyro when a dragon dies he does not leave this world.His spirit leaves on binding itself with nature offering hope to the future.
Spyro:I know what i need to do.Just get out of here Cynder.
Cynder:Spyro no.You don't have to do anything ltes just go.
Spyro:Where Cynder there will be nothing left the world is breaking apart.But i think i can stop it i think i'm meant to.
Cynder:Then i'm with you."I love you"

Spyro put the world back together.

Chronicler:Be welcome friend i've long been expecting you.A new age is beginning....
Forward....

Ignitus:Well young dragon where might you be!

END OF THE SECOND PART OF THE STORY OF MALEFOR
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#29 Posted: 21:28:50 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
tHERE WILL BE A THIRD PART
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#30 Posted: 21:36:51 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
The story of Malefor part 3

Chapter 1:Return of Malefor

Two long years have passed sience Spyro and Cynder defeated Malefor.

In the well of souls...

Malefor:They think they defeated me well they are wrong.The purple dragon can be defeated by a white dragon.But now to the dragon City.

Malefor went to the dragon city and he throw dark magic.He turned everyone into black monsters exept Sparx which ran away to find his brother Spyro.
Spyro and Cynder were in the valley of avalar playing everyday.

Sparx:Spyro you are alive!
Spyro:Sparx what are you doing here.
Sparx:To find you.
Cynder:Welcome back Sparx.
Sparx:Thanks.
Spyro:Well lets go back to the dragon city to see everyone.
Sparx: Oh OK!

Spyro,Cynder and Sparx went to the dragon city.They thought they did something right,but they did a big mistake!

To be continued....
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#31 Posted: 21:37:39 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Thats enough for now!smilie
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#32 Posted: 21:51:23 04/03/2009
NO!!! MORE!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! smilie
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#33 Posted: 00:30:54 03/04/2009
Yeah.
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#34 Posted: 00:42:05 03/04/2009
Yeah.
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#35 Posted: 12:00:21 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:The confrontation

Spyro,Cynder and Sparx went back to the dragon city and they were suprised

Spyro:What...what happend here?
Sparx:I have no idea man, when i left it was'n like this
Cynder:I hardly belive you Sparx
Spyro:Maybe we shouldn't go there for a while we should camp here okay.
Cynder: OK OK

It was night the sky wasn't black anymore the tree's weren't green anymore the sun never apperd.Blood everywhere on the ground.Death dragons and moles gave there life to protect the dragon city.

In malefor's lair a large black dragon was standing out of the balcony.Suddenly a disgusting small ape showed up.
Ape:Sir i found a few apes in the forest so when are we gonna kill the rest of the dragons.
Malefor:I don't know i since spyro has returned.
Ape:Spyro is dead you're probably mistaken.
Malefor:You're right now for you're reward....

Malefor's spirit shot dark magic at the ape.And he turned into a black dragon with the power of shadow fire.

Malefor:Go to the dragon city there are soldiers there kill them.
Dragon:Yes sir.
Malefor:I'll go see the prisoners

Malefor's spirit went to the hall mols trapped also the city dragons.He went into the cell of the guardians.
Malefor:I see how you gave you're live to protect the dragon city.
Terrador:Shut up Malefor!!!
Malefor:I'm not malefor i'm the dark master
Cyril:Well we can still call you malefor
Malefor:Maybe you wanna see something.Bring the prisoner
Terrador:What prisoner.
Then the apes brought a big purple dragon.It was the real Malefor
Volteer:What?! Two Malefor's
D.M.:Fools!Don't you know when Spyro defeated Malefor he became good again.After they hit me with the convexity i escaped and the dragon spirits
Thought that Malefor was evil.And that's why he was so confused after he looked at them.
Terrador:You idiot! Malefor wasn't born evil when he gained so much powers he didn't became evil you corrupted him.
D.M.:HAHAHAHAHAHHA
Malefor:You will not succseeed Dark Master
D.M.: Put him with the guardians.

The dark master left....
Terrador:So you are Malefor the good guy.
Malefor:Yeah i am but don't worry spyro will stop him.
Cyril:But he's gone
Malefor:No he isn't he's small but he's miighty i just know

To be continued....
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#36 Posted: 16:33:50 03/04/2009
Awsome! PC!!
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#37 Posted: 16:17:15 04/04/2009
PC = Please Continue!
WM = Write More!
CWFM = Can't Wait For More!
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#38 Posted: 11:27:08 19/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:Malefor and Spyro

Spyro,Cynder and Sparx were camping in the night.Spyro was mumbling in his sleep he had a dream.

In Spyro's dream

Spyro was in the burned lands when he heard a familiar voice.Spyro ran and he saw Malefor hanging of the edge of a cliff.Spyro was suprised

Malefor:Spyro...Spyro help me
Spyro:I'll never help you
you're evil
Malefor:Spyro please....
But Spyro didn't help him.Than he heard an evil laugh.It was the Dark Master.Spyro was confused
Spyro:Wait two Malefors.No....Malefor!
Spyro ran to help him.But the Dark Master cought him
DM:Got you trust me
Malefor:Spyroooooooooo.......
Spyro:NOOOOOOOOOOOO.......Dark Master
And the dark master threw Spyro of the cliff.

Spyro woke up
Spyro: Phew...it was just a dream...b-but it was so real.....
Sparx:Spyro could you keep it down we are trying to get some sleep here!
Spyro:Sorry Sparx i just had a bad dream
Cynder:What kind of dream?
Spyro:I..had a dream about Malefor being a good guy...

Sparx and Cynder started laughing
Spyro:I'm not joking ok
Sparx: (lauging) Spyro....that's the most stupid thing ever...
Cynder:Sparx...Sparx
Sparx:What?
Cynder:Shut up!
Spyro went to the river.He looked at it.
Spyro:It was just a dream...it was just a dream
Spyro looked at his reflection and then suddenly he saw Malefor
Spyro:No it wasn't real

Meanwhile in the Dark Kindom.....

Terrador was sleeping Cyril was preying Malefor was looking out side the window while Volteer was complaining
Volteer: (fast talking)O my god..oh my god what are we gonna do.I can't stay here forever i'm meant to have a family have a son and teach him how to talk fast WE"RE GONNA DIE!!!!
Malefor:Will you shut up!
Volteer looked a little scared.
Malefor:Sorry guys i guess i still have a little darkness in me.
Malefor looked outside the window as he fell on the groundsleeping

To be Continued...
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