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The make it up story: Flame's day at winning embers heart [CLOSED]
Jackson117 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3875
#1 Posted: 07:46:21 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Add to it if you want and NO retarded carp like ZOMG CHUCK NORRIS CAME OUT


Chapter 1: Bandit breaks up

Yelling could be heard
"wonder what that is?" flame thought. He then got down to see bandit break up with ember.

"WOAHYA TIME TO MOVE ON HER..... How do i do that again"

i then paused " i know spyro already has a girlfriend that cynder chick ill go ask him"

Now try not to stuff it up like that zombie/lust thread
Spyrofanart Green Sparx Gems: 258
#2 Posted: 02:56:43 06/10/2009
Flame sat out on a rock staring at the waves that lapped at his white

claws. His heart was nearly broken, Ember ahd grown into a sweet dragon, her heart had been made with gold, and a soul that was your favorite candy. Her and Bandit had been together for quite awhile now. Flame had felt he never needed a girl, he was to cool for that. Until now.


Is this what your looking for?
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#3 Posted: 18:12:42 11/10/2009
Ember walked towards Flame.
"IM GOIGN TO MARRY SPYROOOOOOOOOOO! I LUV WOO SPWO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She yelled, making disgusting kissing noises.
Lord_of_Sheeps Gold Sparx Gems: 2352
#4 Posted: 18:45:29 11/10/2009
Flame stared at Ember in Shock.

"Are you serious!" he shouted.

Ember frowned and stared at him dead in the eyes "I'm joking, you numbnut." She then lighlty punched his shoulder and walked off with Flame following behind her tail. Flame struggled to find the right words to ask her, but he couldn't put a decent sentence together.

"Well, I gotta go help out Donna at the bakery, so I'll catch you later" she said smiling as she ran off in the other direction, leaving Flame there feeling pretty stupid. He decided to do what he was originally going to do.

Ask Spyro for advice.

He headed off towards Stone Hill, being Spyros' favorite place to take naps and just ditch lessons taught by the elders. Flame looked around the hill, from the old remants of the castle that once stood there, to the shallow stream that gentle passed around at the base of the hill. Flame finally found the purple putz snoring under an old oak tree, curled up into a ball without a care in the world.

Flame quietly snuck towards him, keeping low and hidden in the tall grass until he was close enough. He then lept up into the air, body slamming on top of the sleeping hero.

"DOG PILE~!"
"AHHH!" screamed Spyro.

He shoved the red dragon off him "What the **** was that for?"

"I need advice" Flame said, staring at him. Spyro gave him the look that said 'I don't care, let me sleep,' but Flame ignored the look and continued on.

"See, Bandit broke up with Ember and I really like her, but I don't know how to ask her out, so I thought 'Hey, Spyro's dating that chick Cynder, why not ask him-"

"We broke up" Spyro said bluntly.

Flame stared at him in shock, what had he just said.
"Oh, my, god, Cynder broke up with you!"
"No, I broke up with her."

Flame couldn't believe what he had just heard. He always thought those two were prefect, like they were soulmates or something, and they had been going steady for months, even years maybe, to suddenly just break up seemed unreal.

"Why did you break, that doesn't make sense."
Spyro sighed and looked at Flame blankly "Well, at first, our relationship was great, y'know. She was sweet, cuddled alot, and would do things with me. But after a while.... She started being a little, crazy."

"Crazy as in how?" Flame asked.
"Crazy as in she would stalk me to where ever I was going, would interrogate me when I got home, she almost threatened to kill Sparx and some other girl just cuz I talked to them, I couldn't take it anymore, I had to leave, so I did, I told her we were over."

"And then..."
"And now she's trying to find every opprotunity to kill me." He said, stretching his neck untill it popped.
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#5 Posted: 17:26:52 13/10/2009
^ isn't putting that much hogging the lime light a little?
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#6 Posted: 18:06:27 13/10/2009
Ember came towards Spyro.
"SPYWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
"FLLLLLLLLLAMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEE IMMMMMMM COMIN TO GET WOOOOO!" Screamed Ember slobbering al over them as she made fake kissing noises.
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#7 Posted: 18:34:11 13/10/2009
Ummm, WHite dragon, Jackson 117 clearly stated he ddin't want this story to turn al werid, and thats what your doing to it.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#8 Posted: 14:21:58 15/10/2009
Its in Ember's personality.
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#9 Posted: 03:19:13 03/11/2009
Quote: Spyrofanart
Flame sat out on a rock staring at the waves that lapped at his white

claws. His heart was nearly broken, Ember ahd grown into a sweet dragon, her heart had been made with gold, and a soul that was your favorite candy. Her and Bandit had been together for quite awhile now. Flame had felt he never needed a girl, he was to cool for that. Until now.


Is this what your looking for?


I shall continue MINE.

He had been to shy to ask her hardly anything. Now she was with Bandit, he hoped she was happy with her choice. A tiny tear trickled over his cheek.
He Watched as Ember sat down next to Bandit, there was a frightend look in her sky blue eyes. Bandit had a mix of frustration and dirtyness. Flame perked up his head to watch what the commtion was. He was about 15 yards away from the two, not to hard to see what was happening.
''I think you would have looked better in the tight-tight bikine'', Bandit grumbled.
''Well I don't think so!'' Yelled Ember. ''Whats gotten into you, Bandit?''
"This" he jumped onto Ember and pinned her down, muzzled her mouth, and began to try to rip her swimsuit.
Flame could see that she was sqirming to get away. Inner rage built up within him.
He's supposed to take care of her!
Flame jumped down from the rock and raced to her help, tears were welling up in her eyes, which made him more mad.
He launched on Bandit, splurting flames all over his rear-end. Bandit jumped and slaped Flame on the face. Flame built the brute strenght in him and threw Bandit aside, rolling in the waters.
Gently, he picked Ember up onto his back, and took to the air just as Bandit was out of the water.
He flew to his cave. He had gordged it himself, it was built so that only flyers with sherp eyes could see it. If you fell, you would meet your death ta the bottom with a thousand spikes thruogh your body.
He walked in, and placed her on his bed, gentely as possible. Tears still flowing down her cheek, silvery and wet.
Flames cave was well grated in. The ground was flat and smooth, and the walls were grated for his tpye of dragon. His bed was made of hay and soft down feathers from the bodies of baby Seer Birds. They had been throwing them away till Flame asked if could use them for his bedding, they had said yes because of his kindness to their family. Torches were lit by his own flames and magicly kept aflame. A wooden desk was floating in the air by magic. Flame practiced his magical powers there. He was ashamed the way it looked, yet it was very clean and orderly looking. He knelt by Embers side and thought: "TEA"!
He raced out of the cave and snaged the bukect that he kept net to the opening. Then he dove down, into the little canyon and dove straight for the freash water pool. He skimed the water then put his head down and filled the bukect.
He raced back up the cliff, back into his home. Ember was still crying alittle less now.
Flame placed the bukect of water down. He took the water into a tiny coved area
and put it down just outside the cove. He had some small logs and sticks already in there. Gently, he started a fire. He placed the bucket on a thick stone that he left jaging out when he built it.
Flame raced to Ember's side and nuzzeld her cheek. ''Ember, are you OK?'' he wispered. ''F-Flame,'' she stammered. ''Its me Ember''
She pushed her head up wearyly and looked at him. '' I thoght he was better than that, Im scared of him'', Ember wept.
Flame thoght for a moment, he could tell her now and tell her what he thought of her, yes he would tell her now.
''Ember, I-I wanna tell you somthing''. ''What?'', she perked up.
''I could have left you there with Bandit to rape you, but-but I can't, I wanna tell you that you are beatifful, sweet, and the best dragoness I have ever met. Ember, I LOVE you!'' Flame felt so much beter now that he had told her.'' But Ember, I understand that you probably don't feel the same way-
''Flame! I wanted to hear that from you the first I saw you!''
She lept up and put her wings around him, Flame was shocked, then overjoyed.
Ember loved him, she really had said it.
Flame pulled back, face reder then his own scales ''Do you want some tea?'' he asked. ''Gladly Flame'' she trembeled.
Tears of happyness roled down her cheeks, as she felt true love, which was what she had wanted more than anything.


Yes strange ending.
All copyright if the story goes to ME
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MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#10 Posted: 19:46:04 10/11/2009
Is'nt Flame like Embers' brother or something?
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You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#11 Posted: 02:12:53 11/11/2009
Where on earth did you hear that!? Of course there not related!! Get your facts strait before you go spreading stuff like that around.
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#12 Posted: 16:51:27 11/11/2009
For Skyqueens' fan-fiction The Legend Of Spyro: Dark and Light.
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You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
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#13 Posted: 03:13:26 12/11/2009
MinM20
NO DEY IS NOT BRO AND SIS
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#14 Posted: 16:35:46 12/11/2009
No need to shout! Skyqueen just need to get her facts straight.
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You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
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