darkSpyro

this is wat i think the story for the next spyro game will be.its my own fanficill start later.

okay,since no one seems to care,ill start now.


Spyro sat and stared at the two eggs.His eggs.They would hatch soon.He remembered Terradors words."These two children of yours will be quite powerful Spyro,I can sense it."He had said.Spyro and Cynder were now as big as the elders,except Cynder was much more sleek and smaller."Are you going to stare at those eggs forever?"Cynder startled Spyro.She sat down and smiled.Slowly they both fell asleep.Spyro was dreaming about Ignitus."Ignitus?"he asked.Ignitus smiled."Spyro,two will becom one,and will stop the fall"he said.Spyro blinked."What does that mean?Ignitus?Ignitus!"Then Spyro heard a crack.

That sounds like it could be really cool already! Keep going

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"Cynder!They're hatching!"Spyro yelled.Cynder got up and watched the eggs.Then,from the purple egg,a small head popped out.Then the red egg,another head popped out.


Spyro watched Violet,his daughter,play,and Crimson,his son,just sit there.Volteer was congratulating them."I say,they are quite the beauty!"Volteer said.Spyro smiled."I only wonder why Crimson just sits there."He said.Volteer stepped forward and looked at Crimson."Why,Spyro,he's blind!"Cynder gasped."Blind?!Not my baby!"She wrapped her tail around Crimson.Spyro couldn't beleive it.My son?Blind?

this is gooooooooooooooooooooood write more more more it's soooooooooo gooooooooood i really like it this is goldeneye reporting on the nightly news for spyro fans now back to you chuck

oh poor Crimson

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okay,since no one seems to care,ill start now.


Spyro sat and stared at the two eggs.His eggs.They would hatch soon.He remembered Terradors words."These two children of yours will be quite powerful Spyro,I can sense it."He had said.Spyro and Cynder were now as big as the elders,except Cynder was much more sleek and smaller."Are you going to stare at those eggs forever?"Cynder startled Spyro.She sat down and smiled.Slowly they both fell asleep.Spyro was dreaming about Ignitus."Ignitus?"he asked.Ignitus smiled."Spyro,two will becom one,and will stop the fall"he said.Spyro blinked."What does that mean?Ignitus?Ignitus!"Then Spyro heard a crack.

lol 'two with become one' sounds like the prophecy in warriors: the darkest hour:

"Four will become two, lion and tiger will meet in battle, and blood will rule the forest..."

Sounds great so far, keep going!!

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Spyro sat and stared at Crimson.It had been 2 years since they hatched and Crimson seemed upset all the time."It's only because he's blind,Spyro."Cynder would say.He didn't think so.Crimson had one good thing though;His dreams.He said he could see in his dreams,and talked to The Chronicler.He was destined for greatness.Violet on the other hand was hyper and playful.She seemed to be a stable base for Crimson.Withou out Violet,Crimson would be nothing but an empty shell.Spyro still thought about what Ignitus had said in his dream.Two will become one,and stop the fall.he had said.What did it mean?

This is sounding REALLY interesting now

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yeah man continue it's awsome

yeah very interesting.

Crimson was so mad!All the dragons tried to baby him just because he was blind!He knew how to do things!His hearing and smelling were better than anyones!Violet was the only one who didn't baby him.People just don't understand what it's like to see nothing but darkness.The Chronicler understands.Being impaired makes you fell like you shouldn't be cared for.he thought.Then the alarm bell went off.He sniffed the air.He smelled a combination of metal and skin.What was it?"What are those things?!"he heard someone yell."The Grublins found a new technoligy!"another said."They transform!RUN!"someone screamed.Crimson whirled around.Transforming Grublins?Wait.....I smell magic!They're wearing magic armor!Suddenly he passed out.

This is awesome! Plz continue!

Spyro saw the Grublins."Violet,where's your brother?!"he screamed.Violet shrugged."In Warfang somewhere."

ohhhhh this issssss soooooooooooooo goood ! write more

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What the other person said!

it's goldeneye dude and i have a story too it's called my crazy story of spyro and cynderand me and my friends and yeah i need help so after reading it if you want to you can give me some ideas if you have any

Violet...such a common name...


Anyways, piece of advice:

"I did this" Said spyro.
"You did?" Said cynder.

NOT
"I did this said spyro. "You did?" Said Cynder.

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What the other person said!

it's goldeneye dude and i have a story too it's called my crazy story of spyro and cynderand me and my friends and yeah i need help so after reading it if you want to you can give me some ideas if you have any

I know your names goldeneye, I just wanted to be different... lol. I'll check that story out

Plz continue!!! The story roxs. (Plz read: Shadowclaw: The Poison Moon)

In Crimson's mind he saw The Chronicler.
"Chronicler?"He asked.
"You may call me Ignitus."Ignitus said."Has your father spoke of me?"
"Has he!He never stops!Says you were like a father to him.What news do you have?"
Ignitus sighed."Terrible.I assume Warfang is under attacke from thes magic wearing Grublins,Crimson?"
Crimson blinked in surprise."Yes,"he remarked."how'd you know?"
"I'm always watching you,Crimson.Do you know why you can see things here,but not in the real world?"
"Because I'm blind in the world,but you show me kindness and let me see what it's like to see."Crimson answered.
Igintus smiled."Yes.Now,I must go,but before I leave,beware the one who seems harmless."And with that he was gone.

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oooooooooooooooooooo this good

this is AWESOME!!!write more!!

i havent wrote in a long time,simply because......im lazy


Crimson woke to darkness.He panicked at first,then remembered he was blind,and calmed.
Violet saw him."Crimson!Crimson!"
Crimson turned and headed towards her voice."Violet!The Grublins!"
"Don't worry,come on!"
"No!Someone left them in!Theres a traitor among us!Who do you know who seems harmless?"
"There's the elder,Red."
"Red!"


OMZ,Red makes an appearence!as will G-Nasty G-Norc(),Ripto(although he will be bigger and much more threatening),and the Sorceress!

awwwwwwwwwwwww no the sorceress aka hemroid butt cuz haven't you seen in the first three aww man small short and non-threating aka ripto and this guy smells really bad aka G-nasty Gnorc weeeeeeeeeeeeee well HOBY HO LETS GO PENDRAGON-vo spader in the book pendragon by DjMchale

im making them revampedscarier.tougheri cant wait to introduc my D-Fly Sparky

Cool, plz write more! (also read meh other story, The Legend Of Spyro: Dark and Light)

Crimson headed to the temple.All elders stayed there."Dad?Hey dad!"
Spyro was guarding the temple."Crimson?What are you doing here?Violet,I told you to go to Cynder!"
"He wouldn't come."
"Dad,I think Red has betrayed us."
"Nonsense.Red is a trusted Elder."
"I think he's out for power."
"Crimson,go to your mother.I've had enough.Next you'll say the Soul Carrier is back,and is out for domination."
Crimson couldn'y beleive it!If his eyes weren't clouded,you could see the anger in them.

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i appoligize once again for not posting for.....2 weeks.my monoter wasnt working.as soon as i get insperation to write,ill continue!

ok cuz me all out on mine trust me

Crimson stormed past Spyro."Crimson!"Spyro called.
"Red's behind something!I know it!"
"Come on bro!Lets go!Hey!That rhymed!"
"Violet,just focus on getting Crimson," Spyro said.He huried after Crimson."Crimson,come on.Lets get out of-"
"To late,dad.Crimson found him."
Red stared down at Crimson."Me?Betray this city?Ha!"He sniffed."Prove it."
Crimson thought hard.Then had an idea."Did Red dissapear around the time the Grublins attacked?"
Volteer,who had started to live with the Elders since an unnfortunate accident stepped forward."He did.I followed him.He had opened the gates to the city,but I left when he heard me."
Spyro stepped forward."Red?You betrayed us all?"
"What?!You'll believe him?!?!"
"I will,"He called over to some cheetahs."Take him away."
Suddenly,a cheetah messenger came in."The Grublins have help!"
"More Grublins?"Spyro asked.
"No sir!We don't know what they are!"
Red gasped."No.....They couldn't have!"
Spyro looked at Red."What?"
"The Grublins called upon.......Gnasty Gnorc!"

Hunter stood atop the mighty wall.Looking down at the Grublins,he saw something that looked nothing like a Grublin.It had long tattered black hair.He wore a mask that resembled a dragon skull.No.....It is a dragon skull!The creature carried a giant war hammer with him.It was obviously in charge.
"Hunter!Hunter!"
Hunter turned to see Spyro flying to him."Yes?"
"Red has betrayed us!He told the Grublins how to get in the city!"
Hunter growled."That no good lousy oathbreaker!"
Spyro looked over the edge and gasped."Do you see that creature down there?"
"Yes.It's in charge,but it's not a Grublin.Strange,isn't it?"
"Red spoke of him.....His name is Gnast Gnorc.He comes from the lands across the sea."
Hunter looked at him in surprise."What does Red want,that he will call upon someone across the sea?"
Spyro looked troubled."I don't know.Maybe-"
Suddenly,a giant rock smashed into the wall.Gnasty Gnorc screamed."Ha ha ha!Dragon, come down and face me!I destroyed your ancestors,and I will destroy you!"
The wall crumbled.Spyro and Hunter landed before Gnasty.He was larger thatn both of them,but not in fat,in pure muscle.
Spyro hissed in rage."It is you who will be killed!"
Hunter drew his sword."Indeed.Back down now,and we will let you live."
The gnorc chuckled."Is that so?Well them,meet my hammer!"He swung with such speed,Spyro didn't have time to react.The hammer crushed his chest,yet somehow,he lived.
"Spyro!"Hunter yelled.He dodged another blow and started to drag Spyro away.

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