Its basically what happened to her in the past
part one will be coming soon.
Was inspired by Sapphire*clapes*
Sapphire dragon race - Sapphire (partly eragon 'Saphira' but Sapphire was the one who made the poweres of the Sapphire dragon. I added the blue aroura and water fire)
Amysist Dragon race- Me
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#1 Posted: 18:05:34 15/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 02:39:25 16/02/2009
ro'zan: YAY! 8D
me: *waves foam finger*
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#3 Posted: 03:03:42 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
@_@ foam finger?
Deanna: @_@ what? Deanna: why did you make me a dragon? *shruggs* why? Deanna: CAN I BE A CAMILIAN!? im sorry...but your a dragon Deanna: why did you whant to be a camilian? Deanna: *shruggs*i felt like saying something random ok Chapter 1: egg Dark. She tried to open her eyes, and even then it was dark. she whould close them. still darkness. she felt around with her forming paws. a smoth surfes replied her touch. she wiggled snuggaly and claosed her eyes again. she could hear voices outside. most where muffles. *a few days later* She opened her eyes once more. She hasnt opened them in a wile. She glared around. everyhting was basked in light. her eyes woundered. a gold liquid surronded her. she whanted to look sideways and fell. The egg cracked and she crashed out. she tried to open her eyes but they failed. Why now? She made a little roar and tried to stand. she fell down istantly. She could hear laghter. she slowly opened her eyes. A silver dragoness looked down at her, alone with a gold dragon. "Hello darling..." the silver one cood. "pft. kill it!!!!" the gold one said. "Why?" the silver dragon hissed. "its not the color we whanted!!!" the gold one hissed back "Dear, what color did you whant!? what dose it matter now?" She said to him. "We nedded a Sapphire dragon!!!Not this pethetic purple pesk!!!" The gold one hissed, looking at the purple hachling on the ground. "NO, you whanted a sapphire dragon!!!we dont need one!!!" The silver dragon hissed back. The hachling looked at the two arguing dragons. she tryed to stand again. "Look, it dosnt even have wings!!" the gold said coldly. The hachling looked at its body. she tried to leap at him and fell. her wings that where raped around her spread. "Holy sh**!" the gold one roared The hachlings wings where half the size of the gold dragon. The silver looked at her again and lowered her head to the hachlings. "Ill name her..." she said "Gone." the gold one finished. "Deanna." the silver one said "Why that!?A odd name of a odd dragon."he snorted. "Deanna.....it means divine girl." the silver cood, nussling the hachling. The silver smiled. the hit the gold with her tail, indicating to smile. the gold smiled as well. Deanna's fanged, sharped tooth smile replied theres. The silver gasped. the gold laghed. he pointed to her mark. "the mark of him" he spat. he then pionted to the fanged, sharped tooth smile. "also the mark of him" he hissed. He pointed to her long, sharp talones. and the silver cried out. "the last mark of him" he said coldly. "kill her now!" the silver took Deanna in her tail. "never!!!she could change!!!!you know that!!! your only made that she wasnt a sapphire dragon!!!"the silver hissed. " whats wrong with a Amysist Dragon??" "Amysist!?" the gold asked the silver nodded.Deann hugged her mom and fell asleep in her grasp.
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#4 Posted: 03:18:14 16/02/2009
AWWWWWWWWWW! 8D
SAPPHIRE DRAGON!!!!! ro'zan: she's so awesome! :3
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#5 Posted: 03:20:15 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
no Amysist Dragon
Deanna: GA!!!>.< NO MORE!! hu? Deanna: Ro'za, Grindion- *cuts off* ok!
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#6 Posted: 03:29:44 16/02/2009
(Its actualy Tale, not Tail)
The gold one is just....... either idiotic or racist.
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#7 Posted: 03:34:38 16/02/2009
cynder1, be sure to put what race it belongs to!
the sapphire dragon race belongs to me. :I
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#8 Posted: 03:51:44 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder_fan
BOTH!!jk jk
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#9 Posted: 16:28:30 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2-
"Ha!!!" the gold dragon snorted."no such thing as a Amysist dragon!!!" he stood over a book, looking at old pages of diffrent dragons."i see purple, but not Amysist." The silver dragoness walked over to him. "ask the elders, thell tell you great tales of them." "Thats just it!!!!there tales!!!How whould you know if you whernt there to witness the dragon!?" the gold spat The silver held out Deanna. "I just did. The elders said, that she is a Amysist dragon." "pft. shes not a Amysist, and she baers the mark of him"the gold hissed. "What dose color matter to you!?" the silver roared. "I whant my name, my lineage, to be known everywhere!!!" the gold roared back. "We mated and we got this lovly little dragoness.isnt that enof for you?"The silver asked "Then well mate again intill i get my son." the gold said "NO!!! I WILL NEVER!!!We mated, got this lovly little girl, and you whant to kill her!why whould i baer anymore of your children if your going to kill them!!!!Face it!!!!! your never going to get a sapphire dragon from me or eny other female!!!!" She roared, a few tears escaped her. "Salfera, please......dont start." The gold said as he put his wings around her and hugged."well keep her then, if dystroying us all will make you happy." he said to her. "I dont care if she dystroyed the world, shes my daugter."The silver said The gold nodded. "Now, to the elders." he smiled at her. "Why?" she asked. The gold wiped away a tear with his claw. "I whant to know about my daughter, the Amysist dragoness" he replied, still smiling. The silver smiled and hugged him. "im glade you can accept her as your kin." she wispered. Deanna looked up at the pair and smiled. She made a little roar and the gold looked down. He smiled and picked her up. "So..." the gold started. "No, i told you that i whount have eny more children....at least, not now" she laghed The gold chuckled. he looked at Deanna with a hint of hate and anger with a false love to cover the hate and anger.Deanna didnt see this and so she smiled. "Dady!" She roared happily. the silver chuckled. "if oyu whant to see the elders, we have to go now, before they fall asleep." the gold nodded."you can lead the way." he said. Salfera walked out, followed by the gold and Deanna.
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#10 Posted: 16:43:00 16/02/2009
ro'zan: 83 i still think she's awesome!
sapphire: me: sapphiren: *throws pie at deanna's father's face*
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#11 Posted: 16:47:14 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Deanna:* tries not to lagh*
Me: Shirnx: *growles* Salfera: no, bad boy Shirnx:* shaked head* do you have to do that? Salfera: yes*takes him by the horn and dragges him.* Shirnx:holy fu**ing crap, wimen let go of me. Salfera: MUA HA HA Deanna:
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#12 Posted: 16:49:32 16/02/2009
me:that was hillarious
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#13 Posted: 16:51:14 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i need a avi that says:
"i see random people"
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#14 Posted: 17:49:12 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Capter 3- dream.
Deanna curled up that night in her mothers grasp.she smiled and fell asleep. She layed on the ground. A battle raged before her. Crimsion blood splatedered from dragon as a black dragon slashed at them. She got up and saw her mother in the bloody mess. she ran twordes her but she roared "Deanna!!!go, now!!!!" Deanna shook her head and keep running. "GO now!!!!" she roared once more, fighing a red dragon that tried to snap at her neck. Deanna backed away from her and ran the opiset direction. The red dragon stoped trying to kill her mother and saw the hachling. He let go of her and flew twordes her. She ran faster and faster. Everyhting got black. the only thing that she saw was the red dragon walking twodes her, smiling coldly. his eyes said death. she backed up and one of her back legs fell. she looked behind her and saw it was a cliff. everyhting was still black. she looked at the apoching red dragon and forgot about the cliff. she backed up and she fell. her two paws clinged onto the ege. she saw her paws whernt little. she spred her wings, and they streched as long as a full grown dragon. "A 21 year old dragon Amysist dragon, is afraid of little old me?" he chuckled coldly She tryed to get back up, but her hind leggs keep sliping. The red dragon towered over her. hes smile was still cold, his eyes still said death to her. he lowererd his head and his cold smile widened. he placed his paws onto hers, his claws dug into her scales. Crmsion blood seped out of her paws. he moved in closer and wispered in her ear: "Long live the sapphire dragon, may Amysist burn in he**" his head backed up like a snake ready to strick, and his cold smile widened,showng his sharp teeth. his eyes where the one thing she couldnt look away from. His claws whent thre her paws and she roared in pain. he pushed her off and she fell into the darkness. she reached out to grab something, enything, but nothing she felt. she looked at her paws and saw holes where in them. Blood driped down and she tryed once more to grab somthing. See saw the red dragon dissapere as the darkness overpaowered her...... The little dragoness awolk with a fright. her heart pounded in her chest. she panted, sweet driped down.she looked around franticly and saw her mother asleep. she layed back down and looked into the darkenss of the forset. a pair of red eyes apered and she jupmed up in fright. As soon as they came, they dissapered. she shook all over and layed back down. she shook as if it was in the middle of winter and she was stuke in the middle of the snow.she closed her eyes but could not sleep. she lisened to the night sounds.
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#15 Posted: 18:44:42 16/02/2009
sapphiren: this doesn't look to good.
ro'zan: ; sapphire: me:
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#16 Posted: 20:28:54 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Deanna:*shivers*
Me: how dosnt it look good? Deanna:*shruggs* Me: im not talkingto u!!!!!! Deanna: who are you talking to? Me:T_T sapphiren. Deanna:...o.... Me: Chapter 3 Mornning came and everyhting lightened. Deanna opneded one of her eyes. Light basked everything as the sun gentaly rose. She felt piece and whent to sleep. Salfera wolk up and looked at her. she smiled as she saw the light shine on her dauthers scales. she looked closer and saw a few spots of sapphire. "If only you didnt hachy so soon.....you whould have been a sapphire dragon..." she sighed. "but it showes." she smiled. "Who are you talking to?" Shirnx asked. "noone dear....noone."she replied. Shirnx got up and walked over to Deanna. His anger and hate dissapered when he saw how peacfull she looked, how cute and tiny she was. "she hached to soon..." he said "How do you know?" Salfera asked, worried "shes way to little." he said. Salfers leet out a sigh of relief. she took her dauther and put her on her back. she started to walk away when Shirnx said: "where are you going?" "Elders, dear." she replied "Why?" he asked "She needs to know her hyistory." she told him. "But shes a hachling, how could she learn?" He said "She will understand, whount you dear?" she asked Deanna. Deanna opened her eyes and lifted her head. she nodded. "Yes momy" she said. "See, shesonly 2 days old and she can talk. how about that?" she said "She bears the mark of him dear, of cource she can." he replied She nodded and whent on her way. They got to 5 dragons. One was black, one was red, one was yellow, and one was grey. "Elders?" she said. "Yes?" the grey one asked. "Please, take Deanna for a wile." she said "Why?" the black one asked. "She needs to know...everything.." she told them. "Deanna is to young, bring her back when shes 15."the yellow one said "please!!!" she pleaded. "Im sorry Salfera, but we cant." the grey one said. "make her go play with the other hachlings." the red one said She nodded and droped her off by the other hachlings. "Momy will be right back." she said as she walked off. Deanna whached her mother walk away. she turned around to find a light blue dragon staring at her. "What?" she said. The light blue dragon hit her and Deanna looked at her. "What was that for!?" she asked. The dragoness pointed to a Red dragon and a green dragon. they both looked at her. "What about them?" she asked "They both like you!" the dragoness said angerly "so?" she said "So. one of them is my boyfriend!!" she hissed "Arnt you to young to have a boyfriend?" she asked. The dragoness blushed and walked off. Deanna sat alone, whaching the dragons and dragoneses play. sorry if its to shourt
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#17 Posted: 22:19:05 16/02/2009
me: short? of course not!
ro'zan: WHY THOSE JERKS! sapphiren: agreed. sapphire: yup.
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#18 Posted: 22:43:33 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Deanna: i was only 2 days old, most learn around the age of 12 or 13 the hystory of there dragon kind.
Me: ; Deanna: ; A few days later Deanna sat at the root of a tree. a new dragon approched. she liked being the only child but soon it whould dissaper.Her mothers swollen belly stood out. Deanna got away from the roots and approched her mother. she put a paw on her belly and felt something hard. "thats your brother of sister." she cooded. Deanna smiled.Finally someone to play with. "wen will it come?" she asked "Its When dear, when. and i dont know." "when.." she repeated. Deanna left and whent back to the tree roots. she been having the same dream for dayes now. It scared her. Every night she saw the same thing and when she opened her eyes, the red eyes stared back. SHe layed her head down to take a little nap. She had the same dream and snaped open her eyes. she looked down and saw she was in a puddle of crimsion blood. she jumped up. whas it another dream? no. the blood seemed real. the blood feelt real. Where did it come from?She looked around. Noone was in sightr. not a single animal. her mother had left so talk to the elders about somthing so she was alone. she searched outside and saw the pircing red eyes. She looked up at the sky and saw it was still day-time. she got out of the blood and walked twordes them. "who....ar....are you?" she studdered. "Your nightmare" the red eyes said coldly. they dispereded into the dark forest. she looked at herslef and saw her paws where bleeding. not to much, since it was a little cut. But she couldnt have bleed that much. her body was soked in the crimsion blood. as she walked she left behind a bloddy trail. when she got to the others, some gasped. others wispered. she whent threw the crowed and found her mother. her mother screamed at the sight of her and the blood. she rushed over and hugged her Deanna. blood driped down both of them. the black elder whent over to deanna and licked some of the blood. he turned around and said: "its him." Why did everyone say 'him' as if it was a curse? "Its a mix of dragon blood and the seekers." the black continued. "Deanna, walk around in a circle." the yellow one said. Her mother let her go and she did as the elder told her. the blood followed her. "stop and slash your tail"the grey one said Deanna did as she was told. Her mother gasp after she saw it. Wirten in the crimsion blood was a curse.
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#19 Posted: 22:52:17 16/02/2009
ro'zan: HOLY ****! 8O
sapphiren: *flinches* sapphire: mommy! me: *faints*
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#20 Posted: 22:55:23 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Deanna:*lookes at ground, ashamed*
Me: its on deanna... Deanna: MUA HA HA HA HA!!!Im evil Me: thats the spiret deanna i juess
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#21 Posted: 21:20:17 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5- the outcome
The Elders lowered there heads. Deanna looked at them and turned to her mother. "Mom.What are they doing?" She asked. she saw her mother shead a tear. She let out a sob. She knew she had to kill Deanna before it was to late. "Mom?" Deanna repited Her mother took her with her tail and hugged her. "Nothing sweety." She lied. Another sob excaped her. Why did this have to happen to her first child?Her dear, sweet, inicent child?She put Deanna down. Blood stuck to both of them. "Comon sweety, lets go get cleaned up." Deanna smiled. A tear rolled down her mother. Deanna was so inicent, she was so little to. She didnt have a clue what was going on. Deanna walked twordes the river, followed by her mother. When they got there, they cleaned up and her mother set fire to a rock. "Get on dear." Her mother said "But mom, its on fire." Deanna complaned "Dear, its ok, get on." Her mother smiled a sweet smile. "Momy, will you come with me?" Deanna asked "Yes Dear." Her mother said Her mother got on. followed by Deanna. The rock was worm and she felt the water dry up. "Why are we on a flaming rock?" Deanna asked "Its flameing dear, not flaming. But the heat of the rock will dry the water faster." she replied "Then why not put the fire on us?" Deanna asked "Why I didnt set fire to us? Dear, it whould have burned us" Her mother sighed "O.Ok." Deanna said. Her mother smiled. They layed curled up together. The flames died down and her mother got off the rock. She picked Deanna up and put her on her back. She whent back to the elders, who where examining the bloody curse Deanna made. The black one got up and walked to her. "You know what you have to do." He wispered "Please, dont make me kill her. Shes only a hachling, still to see the whounders, still to have a mate, still to have my grandchildern." her mother pleaded. The black dragon shook his head "The more she lives, the harder it will be to let her go." "But please!shes not what you think she is!" she can change! shell be free somday, just not now!" her mother cried The black dragon tuted. "Salfers, I know exactally who she is!" he snaped. "A Amysist dragon is not for this clan!I dont care if shes the last Amysist dragon! I dont care if shes a godess! She has the mark of him and shell bring the doom to all of us! If you whant her to be free, kill the da** thing now!!" he snaped "Dont be so hatefull, Death." The grey one said "He lives up tpo his name" laghed the other two Death growled at them. "Death is right." The grey one said. "you have to kill her. NOt now though. I whant you to have a few more childern before you kill her, that way, youll forget about her after a few days. Kill her in a few years, itll be fine Salfers." Her mother nodded she looked at the sleeping dragoness on her back . Itll be so hard to lose her. "Your guys soft hearts will be the fu**ing doom to us all!" Death growled "Death!" Salfera snaped "You all have a soft heart for the little heathen!" he growled. Salfera growled, low and dark. "Death, its a bad idea to mess with a dragoness with a child, let alone shes having another soon." Death layed down and growled.He looked at the others and got up. He dissapered into the inky deeps of the cave.
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#22 Posted: 21:48:01 17/02/2009
ro'zan: poor deanna.
sapphiren: *throws salmon at death* sapphire: me:
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#23 Posted: 21:51:00 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Death:*growles*
DeannaONT KILL HIM!!!!*growles* Death:*grummbles* Deanna: Death is the grim reaper for dragons@_@ i suggest you dont pi** him off....
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#24 Posted: 23:35:45 17/02/2009
Please Continue!! This is awsome!!
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#25 Posted: 23:54:39 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
; thanks
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#26 Posted: 20:05:10 18/02/2009 | Topic Creator
*year later*
Deanna was playing around the blood filled roots of the tree. A low growl came from the bushes. Deanna jumed back. "whos there!?" Deanna yelped "Good questian, who are you?!" snaped the voice. "Hey!!!I asked first!!!" Deanna said. The bushes shook. A paw came out of the bushes. soon the whole dragon was out and it jumped at her. Deanna yelped and tried to run away. It takled her and pined her down. "Names Spinx." He said "Mines Deanna." She replied. She knowticed the color of the dragon. Sapphire!!!!.Her heart thumped in her chest. She felt as if someone was tikling her belly.SHe suddenly felt shy. He got off of her and smiled. "Deanna..." he repeated. "I like your name." Deanna blushed. "I-i-i like yours t-to." she studdered. He laghed then helped her up. "Comon, lets go." he said "Where?" she asked. "In the trees." he smiled He leaped up and took ahold of the tree with his claws. he climed up and jupmed onto a branch. Deanna let out a lovfull sigh and climed after him. She jupmed at the branch and smiled at him. He smiled back. "Now what?" she chuckled "We jump" he laghed. He jumped from tree to tree. DeannaWas stuck on the one branch. the branch........it was.....so far..... "Comon!!!" he called. Deanna blushed. He jumed over to her. He placed his paws on her back. "Stand up like this.." he instruked her. He bended Deanna to the right posision. "Now.....JUMP!!" he said She jupmed and landed on the next branch.He laghed and smiled at her. He jumped over by her. "Now, we jump." he said Deannagot ready to jump but her put his paw in frount of her. "Together." he smiled Deanna blushed and they jupmed. Deanna sliped after the 10th branch and fell. Spinx quicly grabed her tail but he fell also. he pushed her up and fell on his back. Deann landed on top of him. "Thanks" deanna said, looking at him. "its nothing, my sweet."He smiled "What!?" Deanna saked Before she could reject he pulled in closer and kissed her. Deanna blushed. She got off and turned around from him. "Whats wrong?" he asked, his smiled dissapered dheanna shook her head. "Nothing....." she replied. "Deanna!!!" Her mother called "I have to go." Deanna toold him. He frowned. "well...ok....um.....see you tomorrow?"He asked "Ya, shure."She said."Here?" she asked "Yep." he replied Deanna turned around and ran back to her mother. They curled up and saw the sun go down. They all whent to sleep exapt or deanna. she thought about her fellings, and how he kissed her. She clsoed her eyes and fell asleep.
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#27 Posted: 20:40:57 18/02/2009
sapphire: 83
sapphiren: 83 ro'zan: >8O me:
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#28 Posted: 20:46:53 18/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Deanna: whats his prob?
Me:*shruggs*
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#29 Posted: 21:58:08 20/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Everything........Its black........Where am I?
The dream......why dose it keep on comming back? Why was I 21 in all of them? Who....who was the one....the one who pushed me.....the....the one who.....who lookes so....so....so familier? Her eyes snaped open. A bloody battle raged around her. Her mother roared in pain, trying to get the dragon off of her. She looked in a bloody puddle and saw she was still a year old. She looked over at her mother. She roared again. She looked over at her. "Go!Run!" Salfera roared. Deanna backed up. The dragon looked at her and leaped.Deanna ran. She passed every bloody puddle. She seemed to be getting older with every puddle she passed. One puddle........3 years Scares apered on her eye, her wing, tail, leg, neck, and hind Second puddle..........7 years third puddle...........15 years It whent on. She looked back and the red dragon dissapered. Tenth puddle........21 years.... She stared wide eyes at the puddle. She looked around. No battle raged, no dead bodys enywhere. "Why?" He chuckeld coldly "Why him?Why not me?" Deanna turned around. She saw him. The one who pushed her. He looked diffrent from the one who chased her....but...he looked almost like him. "WHY!?" He yelled "Who are you!" Deanna roared in fright. The dragon smiled. A shiver ran down her spine. "You know exactally who i am!" he snaped "Dont pretend you dont know who i am! I cared for you, I pushed myself farther then youll ever know, for you! I loved you and yet you still love HIM! WHY!?!" he roared Deanna shook. she took a step back and her back paw fell. She knew it was the cliff. "Wh-h-ho are y-y-you!" Deanna roared again in fright "Tut, tut, tut." he shook his head "Deanna, stop. You know its me." "Im sorry but i dont!" Deanna cried. "Did you get memory loss!?" he snaped Deanna thought about it. If she said yes, he whould have to tell her. "Yes.." she wimpered, darting her eyes from the cliff to him. He smiled coldly and leaped. Deanna now hung on the cliffs ege. He dug his claws into her paws. "If i cant have you....noone can." he wispered to her. He looked at her. Deannas eyes widened in fear. His claws wherenow covered in her blood. "Deanna..." He smield "You know exactally who i am." Deanna tried to clim back up but failed. "You know Im......." He wispered the rest to her, so soft. He ley go of her She fell......fell...........fell..... She fell into the darkness below She fell......fell..........fell....... She saw water at the bottom, but also spikes. Spikes of rock stuck out of the water like teeth so sharp She fell.......fell............fell.........onto one. Blood splatered as it weht threw her heart. Her eyes widened in one last deep breth. And suddnely.... She wolk up. Her breathing was heavy oce more. She clenched her heart. NO holes. She looked at her paws. Blood. She jupmed out of the hole she sleep in, that her mother will dig for her if she dosnt whant to sleep with her enymore that night. She looked around in fright. The name ecoed in her head. She didnt known him.....She dosnt even know who, what, or where she was. But the name........it ecoed like a lingering curse....it ecoed in her head.... ........................................ Ro'zan.......................................... This part will give the reson away why she 1. cant trust rozan and 2. why shes afraid of him I know its not real but its her dream so...ya... Ro'zan is Sapphire's character.
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#30 Posted: 22:24:16 20/02/2009
Please Continue!!
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#31 Posted: 23:32:59 20/02/2009
ro'zan got his name from his father.
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#32 Posted: 23:36:32 20/02/2009 | Topic Creator
no...its the other rozan.....
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#33 Posted: 14:13:02 23/02/2009
huh? i decided to change the name of his father. zor'ran.
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#34 Posted: 17:15:17 23/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Its Zor'ran who chasess her but Its Ro'zan who pushed her off.
Chapter 7- A birthday is calabrated. Hell is born. (do not report) A Year whent by like a day. Her mother had layed her 10th egg 20 days ago and is pregnat again. Deanna ran around the egg. "O and on my haching to!!!such a exiding present!!!" Deanna laghed. Her mother and father sat next to echother happily whaching Deanna and the soon to hach egg. Her father had his wing over Salfera, bringing her closer. She laghed and looked at her swolled belly. "I love you." he wispered to her "Ewwwwwwwwwwww!!!!i can hear that you know!" Deanna said, she was on top of the egg, looking at them. Salfera laghed again. Crack Deanna looked around for the noise. Her mother picked her up by the neck with her mouth, like a lion and her cub. Deanna let out a little hiss. She cuckled and put her down between her and Shirnx, Deannas father. Crack Deanna whached the egg. Pices of it came off. The little dragon insideut its paw threw the hole and Caved the rest in. A little sapphire dragon came out. Shirnx laghed whith delight. "FINALLY!!!" he laghed Salfera shook her head. "Dont forget its Deannas hachying day to."she said He sighed and pushed Deanna twordes the sapphire dragon. "Go on and play." Salfera said, growling at Shirnx Deanna got up and laghed. She and her new sister jumped around. They played as if they new echother for years. well....her sister didnt jump around....she crawled and she walked like a newborn puppy. Deanna heard a roar. it seemed closer then the usawall battle roares she hurd. She looked around for the sorce of the roar. Salfera huard the roar aswell. "Zor'ran..." she wispered in fright "hu?" The gold dragon asked she didnt say a thing. she ran to her hachlings. Kintin....Flimt....Bella....Temg....Gem.... She rushed to them all. Where was Deanna and Her newborn? SHe spotted them and ran. But a roar stoped her. Up, on top of the peak, was Zor'ran. "O Salfera!!!!Why didnt you ever love me?" he laghed coldly. Salfera rored. "I never did trust you!!!" she snaped at him. "My sweet Salfera......i alwas loved you....why couldnt you see that?" He said coldly. He jupmed down, missing Deanna and her sister by a inch. They where behind him, so he didnt knowtice. He curcled Salfera.A cold voice. "Salfera.....i was there for you....and you only push me away....But now....i found someone who will love me....not to menchen that she will pass down my blood.."He said "You mean your using her!!" Salfera growled "So harsh..but yes....I only love you....but now today....you die under my rath." He wiped his tail at her. She roared in pain as she flew to a rock. The clan saw her and they all came to help her. A gold dragon pushed his way past the clan. "Salfera!!!" He roared as he rushed up to her. A black dragoness flew down by Zor'zan. She hugged him and he bared his teeth in discuss.But when she looked at him, he put on a fake smile. "our child..i dont think i should fight with it.." she said "o you can fight. There only wussies. No harm will come to you my sweet" he chocked out the last part He stood on the rockand looked at Salfera below. The dragoness came and stood next to him and loked down at her as if she was a dead bear she had to eat. (Bear meat is nasty to most dragons, shes one of the ones who hates it) "Salfera....meet....my dragoness." he refered to the black dragon. Salfera's eyes widened and jupmed up. The clan hissed and the blac dragoness roared. Shirnx rored back. "STAY AWAY FROM ME AND MY CLAN!!!!" He roared at Zor'zan Zor'zan smiled "AND HE*L AS BEEN BORN!!!!!!" he roared at the sky, for all to hear. And so..the battle started..
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#35 Posted: 20:42:46 23/02/2009
zor'ran: im so awesome!
ro'zan: *takes out gun then shoots him* sapphire: GO RO'ZAN! sapphiren:
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#36 Posted: 20:44:53 23/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Deanna:
Me: YA!!!YOU SHOOT HIM!!!!
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#37 Posted: 00:24:18 24/02/2009
Please Continue!!
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#38 Posted: 16:34:37 25/02/2009 | Topic Creator
He looked at all the dragons below. They all looked back. Over 500 eyes steared. Over 500 mouthes hissed. But only one Leaped and takled him. Deannas father.
"You ba***** you stay away from us. If your going to kill enyone, kill Deanna." He hissed to him. So quietly that only they could hear He kicked him off. And blew fire at him. Deanna ran to the top of the mountain. She climked with her claws, the was Shirnx taout her. She hid in a log and looked dawn at her newly born sister who wabbled twordes the mountain. She tried to clime but couldnt. "Comon!" Deanna wispered in fright to her sister. "Please come!" Her dad felw into the crowd of dragons. He crushed some little hachlings. He gasped when he felt somthing cool. He jupmed up and was 3 little dead hachlings he crushed. blood pooled out.Zor'ran growled at him and roared. He flew up into the air and dived down. He Spread his claws and hit a dragoness in the head. "Salder!!!" Salfera roared. She ran to her and looked at her. Her eyes roled back and blood driped down. She layed in her own blood. Salphera put her paw on the once soon-to-be hachling that was now dead with her mother. Salphira sobed as she saw her last breath of her dear, dear friend. She turned to Zor'ran and roared. Zor'ran was still in the sky. Salders blood staned his claws. He smiled coldy as he saw her pain. The black dragoness flew up to him. "Dear.....what about him?" She said "He'll be fine on his own for a wile." He replied. "Now, to busness..." He said as he dived down again. She followed him. They slashed at some of the dragons. They roared and snaped at them. She roared as a dragon got her with there claws. He pulled her up and they continued ther slater. He dived down and grabed a hachling. "LET HER GO!!!!" Salphira sobed. He smiled at her and took the hachlings head. He hovered in the air with his cold smile and one paw on her wail the other on her head. "Love me Salphira...." He said coldly. "NO!!!" she sobed, tears drenched her face. "If you wish to be that way..." His cold smile widened and he tore off the hachlings head. The mothers gasped and screamed as the blood splatered eveerywhere. As pices of meat clinged onto the red neck bone. Her droped the head, followed by her body. She layed there, lifless. the blood pooled alone with the other blood of the dead. Her neck bone hung clear for all to see as strips of meat driped blood. Deannas eyes widened to see the horror. Her sister now dead. Her moms best friend dead. A few other of the grown dragons dead. The hachlings who rejected her first but then grew to play with her, dead. Her heart beat rised. Never have she seen enything like it. "The Amysist dragon....will....DIE!!" He roared. "YOU CAN HAVE HER!!!!JUST LEAVE THE REST OF US ALONE!!!" her mother roared. Deanna felt tears. her own mother, her dear loving mother, will give her away to this...this....monster...this....killer. "why..?" Deanna sobed "I thought you loved me..." she said them in a wisper. Why..........?
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#39 Posted: 20:35:33 25/02/2009
ro'zan: GRRRRRRRRR! I HATE MY FATHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sapphire: agreed. sapphiren: *takes out gun then shoots zor'ran again* me: ...
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#40 Posted: 01:31:28 26/02/2009
Oh yeah! I love it when Hatchlings die!!
Plz continue!!
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#41 Posted: 21:10:19 27/02/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry i didnt get this up elyer. I wright the chapter in Study Hall and so i have to type it up on here lolz. At the end(of the chapter) the story will tell you of what you may have questions about. So if your confused or dont get it, just read on till the end.Ill also leave a space inbetween deanna and her mother talking to echother to whats happining with Zor'ran and the others......wow.....2 readers its better then non eh?
No i did not wright that in study hall but the rest i wrote. She didnt say enything more. Thoughts rushed rapidly. Should I help? If I do will it be like in my dream? Why should I help!? There my family....I cant let them die like this!' 'Deanna! Where are you!? her mothers voice ecoed in her head. 'Mom?' She replied 'Yes dear. Where are you? Are you.....She heard the voice stop and a gulp.'Dead?' She finished 'No.....'Deanna replied 'Im not in the crowed ethier. Im in a log on the mountain top' 'Dear, dont come out intill he leaves. Ill get you down and.....' She didnt get to finish her sentence before Deanna interupted. 'NO!!!You whanted me gone!!!You whould give me to this...this killer!!!' She interupted Her mother said no more. Deanna instintly ended the convershasion. She whanted to know one more thing from her mother. 'Mom!' She snaped 'Who the he** is he!?' 'Deanna!!' Her mother scoulded. 'Who. The. He**. Is. He'Deanna repited 'His name is Zor'ran. He is one of the last to know about the Amysist dragon.' She replied 'How dose he know you?' Deanna asked 'Well.......Where from the same clan' She told her Deannas eyes widened 'So hes related to me?' she asked She heard her mothers chuckle. So soft...... 'No dear. Not everyone in the clan is related. Your related to only a few other dragons, but the rest are friends or just dragons who are just there. Hes not one of you relitives.' She replied Deanna let out a sigh of relife. The conection ended again. Zor'ran smiled. Everything looked so cold about him. His smile, his lagh, even the way he looked at you. Nothing was warm about him, not even his fire looked warm. Cold Hearted Monster was what discribed him exactally. And that was who he was. "Now?" He asked "Never!" Salfera snarled The black dragoness was furiaous when she heard him. "ZOR'RAN!!!"She roared His eyes widened. "O dear...not the bi**" He wispered to himself She flew right by him. She growled. "Dear, please, its all a act." He lied "Dear, Im not a morron!" She snaped "Please, I love YOU. Why whould I love a dull dragoness like her?" He lied again. She bought the lie.She was calm again.He looked down at the other dragons. Some where wepping over the dead hachling, others whached him carfully. He looked at the black dragoness and whached her glide down, away from the group. He dived down again, but this time, a dragon leaped at him. Death!!! He pinned Zor'ran to the ground and snaped at him. Zor'ran tried to push him off, but no luck. Zor'ran took the tip of his tail and stabed him with it. Threw the back. The tip was visable at the other side. Death smiled coldly. "You think you can get rid of me that easaly?!?" He chuckled coldly. 'Death is your uncle..' Salfera told Deanna Deanna nodded. Zor'ran gasp when he heard the words "But....but....but...I...I...I stabed y-y-you....i-i-i-in the he-he-heart!" he studdered. Death laghed. "I....Am.....Death!" he hissed to him. "I am the one who killes the dragons!" "You may think you reap the dragon.Now its time for you to retire." He laghed coldly as he driven the tip feather. Zor'ran smiled and pushed him off. More came at him. One used there fire, but Zor'ran jupmed out of its way and slised the dragons head off. The head rolled away. Freash blood scwerted out of the stump where it use to be. Bone was visable. Some of the dragonesses screamed. They thought about the hachlings and took them to the den, where they thought they whould be safe. Another dragon slashed at him. They got him on the tail. Zor'ran roared in pain and slashed at the dragon. He cut off his arm and the dragon roared. The dragon bleed to death at the spot. Satisfied of what he did, he turned around to find another dragon leap at him. He lowered his head and the dragon plunged into his horns. Zor'ran jurked his head and the dragon flung off. The dead dragon crashed into 2 other dragons. One died from a cracked neck, the other died from a horn from the dragon. Deanna sat in the log. she looked down, her little sister scuried to get up with her. Deanna quietly whent down and picked her up. She climed back up and they both sat there. The little, newborn whant to sleep, but Deanna whached the bloody murder of her clan. She looked around ..................................Where was the twin? Most of the dragons where dead. Zor'ran looked around for his next victom. He thought about the mothers and the hachlings. A crule, evil, cold smile appered
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#42 Posted: 21:28:34 27/02/2009 | Topic Creator
He ran to the den. He whent in and looked around. Emty. He slashed at the ground with frustration. He heard a little cry. A hachlings cry. A little purple dragon ran past him. He took it with his paw and held it up. His smile dissapered.
"This is no Amisist!" He yelled, slamming the helpless dragon into the ground. Blood splattered out of the hachling. It sqweled in pain, it wigled and roared for its mother. He injoyed the squeles of pain, fear, and he injoyed the death, the blood between his claws. 'Why is he doing this!?' Deanna asked 'I thought he was in our clan!' 'Well....he whanted to be. He never was in the clan. He asked your father, but he rejected him.' Salfera replied 'Why?' Deanna asked 'Because of his blood lust.....And the fact that he liked me incressed your fathers choise.' She replied Deanna said no more. She looked over at the hachling. 'Mother, I have one of them...the twins. Wheres the other sapphire?' Deanna told her 'I dont know....But stay hidden..' She said Deanna nodded. Althought she couldnt see it, she mouthed to her mother 'i love you mom' Zor'ran whached the hachlings blood poor down. He heard a few other cries. Some of them hachlings, others where mothers. He smiled, knowing there where more to slaghter. "All I ask, was to be apart of the clan......And you reject me. Now all shall pay. If I cannot have Salfera, then let me be in the clan.........or at least have the Amysist dragon." He said. His voice was cold as alwas "Salfera has a mate!" A female voice cried "Your blood lust if not for us!" Another female cried "We already gave you the Amysist!" Some other dragoness roared Wisperes where heard all around him. Wisperes of the Amysist. Most didnt know what the Amysist was. "That was not the Amysist!" He roared "How can you tell? There all the same!" The dragoness roared back. "The Amysist has a glow to it, wail the purple is dull. Amysist has a purple fire, waile the purple can not master it!" He spat More wisperes came. The laghes of joy came out of a few. "So you look for the cursed one?" A female voice asked. ******************** Meh ill finish it later today
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#43 Posted: 21:30:11 27/02/2009
nice carry on
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#44 Posted: 21:42:50 27/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: DARK CINDER
Where the he** am i?
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#45 Posted: 22:04:50 27/02/2009
Please Continue!! I love it when Hatchlings die, I guess me and Zor'ran are related.
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#46 Posted: 23:50:45 27/02/2009
zor'ran: heh. you wish.
ro'zan: i hate you father. sapphire: 8O sapphiren: that's terrible... me: *throws pie at fireball*
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#47 Posted: 02:34:01 28/02/2009
Please Continue!!
*Throws pie at Newborn Sapphire*
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#48 Posted: 13:55:28 11/04/2009 | Topic Creator
i cant find the rest of the page so ill finish what i remember ill begin where i left off
"So you look for the cursed one?" A female voice asked. Zor'ran gorlwed. He spread his claws. O, how the hachlings blood felt so good between his claws. His legs, his paws, his tail, his wings and even his head was drenched in blood of the victomes. "STAY AWAY FROM THEM!!!" A roar came from the mouth of the cave. Zor'ran looked back. It was a green male, about a few inches shorter. He was a new worrier. Even though the clan was a pecfull clan, they whould have to fight when needed to. The green dragon jupmed at him "GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!" he yelled. Zor'ran smiled and lowered his head. The green dragon punged into his horn. Ahorable scrream came form the dragonesses and the hachlings. The green dragon, he looked as if nothing hppened to him and was still in the jump. The only diffrense was the horid look apone his face. Eyes wide, beggining to lose color. Zor'ran saw he got him right below his heart with only one of his horns. Perfection. Thedragons blood dripped down from the wound, onto his horn. Streams of blood came down his hornn, onto his face as if his face was put together from esotic puzle peases. A cold smile spread. The green dragon gave a mix of a hicup and a cofe as blood came out his mouth. Then.....the dragon whent limp slowly. His eyes, compleatly white. Darkness. Cold. Death. Zor'ran chuckled. "A slow and painfull death is alwas the best." he chuckled and he flung the dead dragon off of his horn. The green dragon layed there, mouth open, eyes open, laying in a pool of his own blood. Zor'ran turned back to the voice. "Yes." he said "I know where she is, follow me and everything will be all right. Noone will attack you as along as your with me." the voice was old. A voice of a wich almost. Zor'ran held his head up high. "Lead me to her! NOW!" he snaped. The Eldea knew he couldnt see her in the dark so she had the advantge. She knew it whould be faitle. And if she failed to do whant she needed to, he whould shurly kill the rest of the clan in his blood-lust rage. SHe jupmed out of the darkenss at him. Zor'ran had wide eyes, in shok. "DIE YOU BAST***!!!" she roared as she takled him. He struggled and slashed at her with his tail. He inally pushed her off and she landed with her stomec up, like a dog whould when it whanted you to rub its belly. Zor'ran stood over her. His tail was higher in the air. And he grought it down on the Eldeas heart. Her eyes whent calm as the blood porred out of the others side. A smile spread across her face. And she died. She died with the most peasfull look on her ace. Zor'ran saw this and his cold smile dissapered. He spat at her with descuse and brought his paw up. Blood driped of the topes of his sharpeed clawes. Her brought his paw down and Squich screams came form the dragonesses. The Eldeas head was cut compleatly off. Zor'ran had her head in his mouth, shredded mucle and scales dripped freash blood. Blood squerted from the stump where her head once was. he threw her head to the side and roared in agony, pain, revenge, anoyence, and blood-lust. His eyes raged in betrail and he leaped into the shadowes, slashing his horns, tail, wing tips, and claws. He slashed at all the dragonesses and they died. One by one. Two. Three. Screams of horror and pain came out of the cave. Screams for help as well. But noone came. Deanna could see it all clear from the mouth of the cave. every slawter. She gasped and ran back to the log where she hid. She saw her mom and dad, in the middle of all the dead dragons and hachlings. Her mother weep into her dads chest, wail he comferted her with his wing. He wispered a few words to her and she left the gold dragon. She whent into the forest,but she didnt leave. She wached him. Zor'ran came out of the cave and smiled at the gold dragon. "So. you finally deside to come out of hiding and fight me. FInally, i can get revenge for taking my beloved. She will see she made a bad choise picking you over me!" He spat coldy at him, a smile across his bloody face as usawall as they both curcled echother. And the fight began. ~~~~~~~~~~~~End of Chapter~~~~~~~~~ Eldea ia a female Elder (pronounced El-da like Zelda exept without the Z)
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#49 Posted: 13:17:07 12/04/2009
Cool! PC!!
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#50 Posted: 01:04:57 13/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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PC???
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