I am making a new Fanfic about a young dragon, Spyro's son named Icy!
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#1 Posted: 02:29:19 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 02:38:17 10/02/2009
ok i'll read
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#3 Posted: 02:49:29 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! Let's get this show on the road!
PART 1 Childhood Chapter 1 Icy Spyro and Cynder laid in the Temple. Spyro thought, "He would soon be a father, he woudl have a great responsibility." Cynder felt a sharp pain in her Stomach. "Spyro, the egg is coming!" exclaimed Cynder. It took a long time of Pushing and breathign until finally, Cynder laid one blue egg. "Well, Spyro, all we have to do is wait!" said Cynder. "Yes, all we have to do is wait." replied Spyro as he fell asleep. Cynder could not wait, she just wanted to see her baby. Later that night, A loud Crack was heard. "Spyro, it's hatching!" exclaimed Cynder as she gazed at her egg. "Just to think, our baby playing in the room, us playing with it!" said Spyro as he looked at the egg. Suddenly, the egg split open and I, a handsome blue Ice Dragon fell out of the egg. "He's so cute!" shouted Cynder. "What shall we name him?" asked Cynder. Spyro thought, then said, "Icy......" said Spyro. "Ic-y!" I croaked.
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#4 Posted: 02:54:01 10/02/2009
aww good story
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#5 Posted: 02:59:04 10/02/2009
"'He's so cute!' shouted Cynder." ROFL That's hilarious!
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#6 Posted: 05:55:56 10/02/2009
HEY!!!YOU STOLE MY DRAGONS NAME!!!
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#7 Posted: 17:42:27 10/02/2009
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#8 Posted: 21:38:36 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry, but this Icy is a boy, and yes, that is a common name!
--------------------------- Chapter 2 Escape from the Temple It was a fun night to Spyro. He and Cynder fed me, played with me, and taught me how to walk, after a couple of stumbles, I finally got it. Cynder laid down with Me. "Momm-a!" I managed to say. Cynder used her wing as a blanket for me. I slept, my small tail sticking out from underneath Cynder's wing. Spyro slept too. Around Midnight, Spyro herd something. Then it came louder. The Noise of Clanking Metal, Apes. Spyro jolted up to see a pack of Apes walking in the room. "Capture the Adults! Kill the Hatchling!" ordered Gaul. Terridor, Cyril, and Volteer ran in. "Save yourselves!" ordered Terridor as he charged Gaul. Gaul grabbed his staff and pointed it at Terridor. "Move, you get killed!" shouted Gaul. "You too, Cyril and Volteer!" finished Gaul. A bunch of Apes grabbed Spyro and Cynder, taking me up as well. I was still asleep, tight in Cynder's grasp. Terridor focused hard enough and jumped above Gaul, he rammed him. Volteer and Cyril joined. Gaul shot a bolt of power at Spyro, Cynder, and me , but my parents ducked and it hit the Apes. Now free from their gripp, Spyro, Cynder, and me flew through the cold night air, I was still asleep while Cynder carried me.
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#9 Posted: 00:34:41 12/02/2009
wow interesting please write more.
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#10 Posted: 00:52:53 12/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
Chapter 3 Lost A Dark Storm was forming. Lightning crackled. I, now awake screached. Cynder shaded me. "Oh, Spyro, This is a disaster, they want to KILL Icy!" Cynder exclaimed, teary eyed. I shivered at the word 'KILL'. Spyro and Cynder took me into a abandoned cave and put me in a pile of Straw. There you slept. Cynder woke up to find her and Spyro in a cage, I was missing! "Icy, come here, honey!" ordered Cynder, a bit scared. "Mom-aa!!" I screached as I was taken away. Cynder tried to get up, but she was chained. "Spyro, they took Icy!" screamed Cynder as she woke Spyro up. I was locked up in a Dreadwing sized cage. "We have lost everything, Ignitus, Icy, many Warriors, I don't know when this will end!" exclaimed Spyro.
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#11 Posted: 02:06:15 13/02/2009
wow great write more.
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#12 Posted: 21:01:42 13/02/2009 | Topic Creator
K, I will later. *Wink*
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#13 Posted: 11:04:59 14/02/2009
Cool story! Please continue!
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#14 Posted: 00:58:22 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay!
Chapter 4 A Prophecy I squeked in pain as he was carried by the tail. I bit the Apes hand, but he only had 2 teeth so nothing happened. "Quiet! Stupid Hatchling!!" boomed the Ape as he wiped Icy. Icy screached in pain. "Doyu!!!" I squeked. The Ape carried Icy out of the area and towards a Mountain. Icy squeked as he batted at the Ape's hand. "Doyu!!!" I squeked. "Shut up!!!" boomed the Ape as he wipped Icy again. "Doyu!!!!!!" I squeked in pain. The Ape came to a door in the mountain and went inside. "Doyu!!!" I hissed. The Ape pushed me against the wall and strangled me. "Do-yuuuqkkkhh!!!" I weezed. The Ape stabbed me with his sword. I screached in pain as I looked at the Gashes in my body. The Ape quit and took me to a Huge Ape. "I've got him, Master Gaul." the ape said. "Good, now lay him on the table, don't let him get away or you are good as dead!" boomed Gaul. The Ape slammed me on stable. I banged my head. "Doyu!" I cried. The Ape pulled out his sword and held it up to my neck. "Now, kill him!" ordered Gaul. I shivered at the word 'Kill', soon I would be with the Ancestors. "Doyu!" I cried as the Ape cut my tail. The Ape brung his sword down on me, but then was stopped by a voice. "Master Gaul, why must we kill this Dragon?" asked a Small ape. "How dair you interupt me!" weezed Gaul as he and the Ape about to kill me walked over to help Gaul. That was my chance. I quickly jumped off the table and hid in the shadows. I could here Gaul saying something like: "Because if we don't kill him, then he will grow up to be a King that will reign all over the Lands, he will defeat Malefor, and become a Hero!" I didn't stop to think what Gaul said.
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#15 Posted: 01:11:29 17/02/2009
what dose the word doyu mean?
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#16 Posted: 01:22:45 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
*Shrugs*
Baby talk.........
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#17 Posted: 01:55:09 17/02/2009
oh...
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#18 Posted: 14:02:15 17/02/2009
Why will he become king and defeat Malefor?
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#19 Posted: 23:56:43 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
You will have to find out!!
Chapter 5 Breakin' out of prison Cynder cried some more. "Don't worry, Cynder, I'll get us out of this." said Spyro. Spyro looked around. Stone walls everywhere. Spyro saw a Scroll on a wall and read it. " When the Stones are blocking, Twas the time is night, Find the stone that is mocking you, To find the one that might give you sight." said the Spyro, it was a riddle. "When the stones are blocking." repeated Spyro as he looked to see if everywhere there were stones. "Twas the Time is night." repeated Spyro as he saw through a small crack in the wall that it was night time. "To find the stone that is mocking you." said Spyro. Spyro looked at all the stones and began to search. Spyro touched one stone, it was cold, as usuall, "Are you the right stone?" he asked. "No, I am not." replied the stone in a windy voice. Spyro touched another, it was Hot, "Are you the right Stone?" he asked. "No!" boomed the stone. Spyro touched another Stone, it was just right, "Are you the right Stone?" asked Spyro. "Are you the right Stone?" the Stone said. "What?! I'm not a stone!" replied Spyro. "What?! I'm not a stone!" said the stone. "Yeah you are!" said Spyro. "Yeah you are!" replied the Stone. Spyro thought. "Spyro thought." said the Stone. "I'm an idiot!" replied Spyro. "Your an Idiot!" replied the Stone. Spyro smacked himself in the head. "Spyro smacked himself in the head." said the Stone. Spyro got an Idea, he coudln't break the stones, but mabye a stone could... "Spyro got an Idea, he couldn't break the stones, but maybe a stone could..." said the Stone. Spyro smashed himself into a wall. The Stone hopped out of it's spot and smashed it's sellf into a wall, making it topple. Spyro grabbed Cynder and ran out.
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#20 Posted: 00:06:48 18/02/2009
hu talking stones?
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#21 Posted: 01:20:50 18/02/2009
ok talking stones.... good story write more your really good
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#22 Posted: 23:18:02 18/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!!
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#23 Posted: 00:15:14 20/02/2009
continue please
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#24 Posted: 22:48:49 20/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok!
Chapter 6 Through the Mist I waddled towards the door. Gaul saw me and ran over to me. "Get him!" ordered Gaul as the apes ran at me. "Doyu!" I squeeked. Gaul grabbed me and squeezed me. "Doyuuuuuuuu!!!" I squeeked as I tried to use my tiny legs to get loose. I kicked Gaul. Gaul squeezed harder. "Doyu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I hissed as I shot a icy chill at Gaul. Gaul's hands froze and I dropped to the ground. "GRagghhhh!!!!!!!!" Gaul said. 2 Apes chased me. I tripped on a rock and went flying out the door. "Doyu!" I squeeked as I started to fall into the Darkness. Deeper........ and Deeper............. Deeper and Deeper into the Mist............ I landed with a hard thud in a swampy area. "Doyu........" I cried. A Lizard came up to me and wrapped it's toung around me. "Doyu!!!" I squeeked as I froze the Lizard. I waddled off and saw a light. Meanwhile, Spyro and Cynder ran through a Dark Swamp. "I sense Icy near...." said Spyro.
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#25 Posted: 22:54:48 20/02/2009
cute, please continue
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#26 Posted: 00:14:09 21/02/2009
why are you diong it in first person?
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#27 Posted: 01:27:32 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
*Shrugs* I like first person! Also, I like this new thing on the posts, wow Dark52 really updated!
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#28 Posted: 01:56:23 21/02/2009
I like it!!!!
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#29 Posted: 17:19:27 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7 Found
Spyro and Cynder ran through the forest and saw a ice Hatchling wondering around. "Icy!" shouted Cynder as she grabbed me. "Momm-aaa!" I squeeked. Spyro and Cynder took me back to the cave. I Squeeked herting from the stab in my tiny tail. Cynder saw it and the gashes. "Spyro! They've hert my dear Icy!" screached Cynder. Spyro took a look. After a long amount of nursing it, I took one last Squeek then I fell asleep. Cynder curled up to me. I felt a sharp pain in my vains. It felt like my body, and Poisen clashing together. I squeeked, "Doyu!"
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#30 Posted: 00:06:53 24/02/2009 | Topic Creator
PART 2 Middle-ages
Chapter 8 Frick I walked out of the cave. My family had started a village when I was only 5, I am 12 now. My Father walked up to me. "Hey, Dad." I said. "Hey, Son." said Spyro. I walked across the Village and up to my friend, Frick. He was the first of our kind. The Day I saw him, he had been abandoned by his Parents when he was a Hatchling, we took him in, as a Orphin. "Hello, Frick, how you been doing with your Rock collection?" I asked. "Fine, thankyou." replied Frick. Frick was very fond of himself. A other Dragon, Female, walked around near by. "I think she likes you." said Frick, seeing that the Dragon was stairing at me. "*Gulp*" I gulped. I walked over to the Dragon.
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#31 Posted: 01:27:52 24/02/2009
cool write more
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#32 Posted: 02:18:18 24/02/2009
oooooooooooooooooo this is good and i don't know why i want to ask but can we be friends
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#33 Posted: 21:52:30 24/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Sure!!
Evil in the story Chapter 9 Love I came up to the dragon. "Ehem," I coughed, "What is your name?" I asked. "It's Beauty, yours?" the dragon asked. "Icy." I replied. "Would... you like to go out..... to the Woods?" I asked. Beauty staired, but then she said, "Sure, hothead." replied Beauty. I staired with a smile at the respond. Together, me and Beauty walked into the woods. Suddenly, I tripped on a rock and landed on Beauty, lips touching. I got back up. "Sorry!" I said. Beauty passed out. I leaned down, picked up Beauty and took her home.
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#34 Posted: 15:48:22 28/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10 Quest
After I took Beauty home my Dad ran to me. "Son, you have to see this!" shouted Spyro. I ran into our cave. "Cynder is ill, we have to find a cure." said Spyro. "What?!" I screamed. "There is a way....." a voice said. We turned around and saw a Hermit in the shadows. "What?" we asked. "There is a way, but it will be hard." said the Hermit. "What is it?" I asked. "You have 2 months to find the Ripliex and bring it back here, only then will Cynder be safe, you must hurry, she will die if you don't get it here in 2 months." the Hermit said. "That's impossible!" Spyro yelled. "No, Spyro, you will not be able to do it for you are to old, but he will." said the Hermit. "Me?!" I asked. "Icy?!" Spyro asked. "Yes, he will be much faster, and he is the only one that can get past Grook, the deadly oger, his advisor." said the Hermit. "But Icy can't get past him." said Spyro. I was sure they ment Grook. "I'll go." I interupted them. "You can't!" replied Spyro. "It's for Mom." I said. "Very well, but there is one warning, don't look into Grook's eye or you will die." said Spyro. "Here is a map to the Ripliex." said the Hermit, giving me a map. Spyro gave Icy a magic Amulet and a picnic basket with a bunch of food that would last for 2 months. "Use this Wisely, son." said Spyro. "Thanks, Dad!" I replied, taking the basket and putting the Amulet around my neck. "That Amulet gives you power." said Spyro. "Bye!" I said. "Bye, son!" replied Spyro. "You did the right thing." said the Hermit to Spyro. I walked off. Beauty stood infront of me. "I heard about your, quest, see you later, my love!" said Beauty. "See you too!" I replied. Frik stood in my path. "See you, Icy." said Frik. "You too!" I replied. I took a look at the map, I couldn't find the Ripliex on the Map, but then I saw a label that said "Stairway to the Ripliex", it was on the other side of the map. I left.
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#35 Posted: 20:32:21 28/02/2009
wow you have such an imagination. how old is Spyro?
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#36 Posted: 21:08:46 28/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! He's 30.......
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#37 Posted: 01:24:14 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11 Dante dead ahead
I trekked across the forest and reached a sea. I froze a walris with my Ice breath and hopped on it. "Giddy up!" I shouted as I kicked my paws into the water. I started to go faster....... and faster...... to fast. I fell off the Ice cubeifide Walris and started to drown. "Help!" I shouted, but no one herd me. The Water was freezing cold, but not to me because I'm a Ice Dragon. I tried to get free from the water that was pulling me in. The Sea carried me deeper under, and farther up north. "Help!" I shouted. I dog paddled, but then my head went under. "Hgwhhhhhhe!!" I muttered. This was the end of me. I took one last breath and went deeper into the water, mouth right open....... my heart stopped. -------------------------------------------------------- I woke up and found I was on a Icy cold beach. I looked around, frozen figures everywhere, a fort in the distance. I took out my map. "Dante's freezer." I said as I walked off.
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#38 Posted: 02:22:13 03/03/2009
uhhh 30 is'nt really that old for dragons.
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#39 Posted: 12:51:03 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Let's scratch that, how about 50.
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#40 Posted: 00:48:31 04/03/2009
30000 would be old for a dragon they can live for thousans of years.
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#41 Posted: 01:09:30 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
30,000 years then.
Chapter 12 Dante's Freezer, Frosty's Freezer I trelled across the snow, it didn't bother me though. I herd a loud shriek. He turned around a corner and saw a Dreadwing. The DreadWing flew at me, but me froze it. I walked past frozen objects and herd a CRACK, then a CRASH! 5 Soldiers came out of the Ice crystals and swung their swords at me. I ducked and shot Ice. It didn't freeze them. A large growl was herd from behind me. Soldiers on creatures that were huge ran towards me. More Dreadwings plopped to the ground. Huge Soldiers walked towards me, I was surrounded. The Soldiers and Dreadwings came towards me while the Soldiers on beasts guarded the exits. "Oh no." I moaned. I stepped back, trying to put my Back on a Icey Ice burg sticking out, but for some reason, I fell right through. I relized I was falling down a dark cavern. "Ahhh!!!" I screached. "Mwahahahhahaaaa!!!" growled the Enemies as they covered up the exit with rocks. I got up and looked into the pitch blackness beyond. "Hello?" I asked, voice echoing. I went through the Darkness and ended up infront of a throne, which sat..... a Dragon? I thought it was supposed to be the Ice King. "Who are you?!" The Dragon asked. "I-Icy, who are you?" I asked. "I am the Ice King,", shouted the Dragon looking over to a metal suit that was the Ice King's, My name is Dante!" he shouted. "I-I come in peace." I said. Then, a Ice Dragon, my age stepped out of the Shadows. "Then you are welcome to stay." said the Ice Dragon. I peered over at the Ice Dragon. "You may stay." said the Ice King. "Meet my son, Frosty, he is also the owner of the Freezer." said Dante. "Hey!" said Frosty. "You may play with him." said Dante. Frosty led me through a Cold corridor and we went into his room.
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#42 Posted: 23:32:45 04/03/2009
good story.
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Chapter 13 Uncle
"Frosty, why did the guys outside attack me?" I asked. "Oh they always do that." he replied. "Weird." I said. Frosty and I walked towards the center of the room. "Your it!" shouted Frosty as he tagged me. "Hey!" I shouted. I chased after Frosty. After playing tag, a chat went on. "My great Uncle is named Fred, who's yours?" Frosty asked. I paused thinking of my uncle, I was sure he wouldn't care. "I-i-it's Malefor." I said. "Ughhhhhhghghhghghhhhhghhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" hissed Frosty. "I can't believe I just touched Malefor's nephue!!!!!! Glahdhfhhghghghh!!!!!!!!!!!" "Leave!!!" shouted Frosty. I stared teary-eye and then something came to me. "RAGGGHGHGHGHGHG!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU SAY SUCH A THING?! IT'S NOT MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!! IT'S NOT MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed knocking Frosty backward. I pinned him down. "TAKE IT BACK!!!!!!!!!!!" I shouted. I smacked Frosty. Frosty smacked me back. Dante ran in with guards. "He wants to kill me!" shouted Frosty. I was immeadeatly kicked out of the Ice Palace and into a Gladiator Arena, as a slave.
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#44 Posted: 22:09:36 10/03/2009
wow cool.
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#45 Posted: 08:22:07 12/03/2009
Hi,Fireball! I'm new here and I should say, i read all of it and it was GREAT, you even included Dante's freezer! Please continue!
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#46 Posted: 11:25:41 12/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Welcome to Darkspyro!
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#47 Posted: 08:09:30 13/03/2009
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Thanks! Wonder how long does it take to make the story's next part...
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#48 Posted: 15:29:21 14/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 14 Gladiator Arena
It had been a week. "I've got to get out, I'm running out of time." I said. A Pirate came to my Cellar. "Get out there!" ordered the Pirate as he pushed me out into the arena. I landed on the ground with a loud thud. "Oh........" I moaned as I got back up and walked to the center of the Gladiator Arena. "Destroy our prisoner!" ordered Scratch. I gulped as 10 Skurvy Wings came out. I ducked as he flew at me. I froze them and ran towards the exit, but the Exicutioner came out. He hit me with his sword. I fell and froze him. "I'm the son of the Ancient Spyro the Dragon you know!" I shouted. "Spyro is our worst enemy, now we shall kill you to get our revenge!" shouted Sniff. I saw the Blundertails coming. I meleed them. Pirates of all sizes came out. I froze them. I grabbed one of the huge ones and threw him into the ceiling, making a hole. I flew up. Pirates shot cannons at me, but I dodged. I flew through the opening and away from the floating ship.
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#49 Posted: 15:35:05 14/03/2009
this is getting good.
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#50 Posted: 16:44:20 14/03/2009
Awesome! That sounded as cool as the legendary Spyro himself! What a story! Make the story fast!(tone gets higher and higher)fast!fast!fast!
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