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#1 Posted: 01:48:59 04/02/2009 | Topic Creator
A egg with a fire symbol sat at volcano's foot but it was no ordinary fire dragon inside was a opal dragon,a dragon formed when it's parents have died and when when a opal dragon is born the world waits 10,000 for the next one.It hatch and slept on the volcanic floor.
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#2 Posted: 02:14:38 04/02/2009
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#3 Posted: 12:51:01 07/02/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks :3
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#4 Posted: 00:57:28 08/02/2009
Please Continue!!
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#5 Posted: 02:31:51 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
The hatchling was near a blue crystal radiating with majic and it gave her the ability to talk at an early stage. The hatchling woke up scared and confused."MOOOOOOOOOMMMMMYYYYY...DDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY"!said the hatchling she curled up in a ball crying then she saw a diamond dragon and a fire dragon in her head."Mommy Daddy". It was a meassage they gave before they died."ll..ittle oneee weee ....... are not ..herjkhjg anymore you armjv.,...."said the meassage before it cut off. "What can I do?" she said"YOU WERE MADE TO DESTROY!!!!"said an evil voice. "What do you mean".said the hatchling. Come through the portal to find out as the green and purple portal opened she was hypnotize by they colors that temped her to go in."Pretty colors"she said then her parants ghost said"DON'T GO!!!!!" and she snaped out of it by the time she woke everything in the background was normal.
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#6 Posted: 02:37:30 10/02/2009
Please continue!!
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#7 Posted: 02:51:33 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
"I better get walking"said the hatchling"but i'll guess i'll name myself...I know Flare until I think of a better name"she walked over the whole area until she came across a map and three tiny chunks of meat "Not much but it is meat"she said.two days later she decided to stop and admire her orange scales and her new scarlet horns . and go to bed
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#8 Posted: 02:53:51 10/02/2009
Ooohh!!!!!!!! See you then!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer |
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#9 Posted: 01:01:55 14/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Hi had so much homework but now it's done so here you are
Flare woke up and sniffed the air it was different and had a smell.An unpleasent smell."I better hurry out of the area" said Flare. She ran as fast as she could ok where am I she stopped for a second and the map was blank she looked at it harder and then she saw the area she was in.Then the map showed it's name the Flame Core mainly because it was in a extremlly deep crater near the core of the planet Dracus. But that was all that showed on the map."Ok let's get out of here"!said Flare.She ran as fast as possible with lava exploding from the hyper active volcano."Gotcha"!!!! said the evil voice."NOOOOO"!!!!! screamed Flare as she slid on the floor.By the the time she stopped she was half way in the portal. she tried to get out from the portal and lava.She was saved from the lava but not the portal she landed in a opal castle surrounded by roses in the air.Then a opal dragon had emerged from the dark she had a third eye on her forehead and a crystal growing from her chest."We meet at last". said the deformed dragon"Have any questions"she said."Y..yes what is your name and what are you a..and what.. am... I"said Flare.TO BE CONTINUED |
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#10 Posted: 13:11:04 14/02/2009 | Topic Creator
"I'm glad you asked you I am Mortala I got my other eye from an shadow training inccident perfect for hypnotizing and brainwashing,I am a opal drgon completely grown you are one to just not as old jugding from your apperance you can't even breathe fire". said Mortala. "Oh yeah just watch me kick your butt"said Flare.They went around in circles."I'll try to go easy on you since all my power could kill you". said Mortala as they prepared to fight.Flaare had made a starting attack she bit Mortala and stabed her with her sickle tail to climb on her back and before Morlala could get her off Flare jumped in the air and hornbashed her head.
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#11 Posted: 13:56:02 14/02/2009
Awsome! Please Continue!!
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#12 Posted: 20:13:21 25/02/2009 | Topic Creator
"Not bad for a hatchling"said Mortala then mortala knocked Flare into a alter and bit her leg. Flare stab Mortala in the face and escaped into a portal back to the Flame Core she walked and all of a sudden a raptor ran to her and begged for help a banished male from her clan was eating her 5 eggs she had layed she was desperate"I'll help get you eggs back"Said Flare.By the time they got there two eggs were left. The raptor glared and prepared to strike.
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#13 Posted: 20:18:24 25/02/2009
Where'd she get the map? Where did the raptor come from? Why would it ask a DRAGON for help? Why did Mortala run away? How come she can talk already?
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#14 Posted: 21:51:11 25/02/2009 | Topic Creator
She got the map while she explored the area.The raptor was running towards her. The mother raptor was desperate. Mortala didn't run away Flare did.She had a crystal shard near her egg the embers around it triggered special radiation causing her to talk an early stage.
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#15 Posted: 01:25:40 26/02/2009
Please Continue, all though this is confusing.
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#16 Posted: 16:37:57 26/02/2009
Ok. next time mention those things, otherwise their called "Plot-holes"
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#17 Posted: 16:59:32 27/02/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry it's confusing want me to edit some of it?i'm going to edit some of the errors anyways.Oh and I did metion where did she get the map and that Flare ran away(Mainly if you look at the last part Flare got her butt kicked).
The banished raptor was glaring deeply into Flare's crimson eyes then her eyes became fierce and she pierced his skin with her teeth and smacked the raptor with her tail.(Warning this next part contains blood)The raptor was bleeding on his tail and flare pushed him on the ground she bit the ratptor's neck,grab his upper body jumped and sickle tailed him on the back. She landed with the banished raptor nearly dead ."I WILL SPARE YOU IF YOU LEAVE THE RAPTOR OF ANY CLAN ALONE".Commaned Flare. 'Y...yes ma'm'said the male rator as he ran as fast as possible but since he was heavly damaged ,he limped as fast as possible."Thanks!"said the female raptor"Here is your reward"The raptor gave flare 5 huge chunks of Fire Crab meat and some water since if Flare got too dehydrated she would catch on fire and burn while in her fire form.She ate 1½ of food,drank the water,and moved on. Flare was no longer a hatchling but now a teenager ready to get her wings |
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#18 Posted: 11:57:23 01/03/2009
Ok, that was quick...teen already...
Anyways, still doing pretty good. |
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#19 Posted: 19:25:08 01/03/2009
Please Continue!!
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#20 Posted: 21:14:28 12/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Flare jumped up a ledge and climbed the tallest volcano Mt. Cumulonimbis she was rapidly climbing the volcano. Back at the Mortala's Castle she threw a dragon's fang in to a mix of dragonfly stinger, tears from her third eye,opal stone,and dragon scales so far."Now all I need is the mind control potion and she will be MINE!!!"Said Mortala"Now I shall put the raptor cheifan under my spell unlike her I don't need the potion to do so be better if she didn't have magic resisting skin like me".Back at the volcano she had made to the top. But doing so her magical senses had knocked unconscious with a protective bubble around her.In a second she had left her physical form behind she traved in a spiritual form and saw Mortala saying"Baukflam arek tenflem".Before she could investigate Mortala had caught the spiritual scent (the fact they're both opal)and narrow her eyes"FLARE YOU CAN'T HIDE FOREVER I WILL FIND YOU AND YOU WILL BE UNDER MY CONTROOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!"she bellowed.Flare went back to her body as fast as possible."Wait a minute how the the heck could I do that and what is she planing". Flare said to her self confused.
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#21 Posted: 18:13:37 15/04/2009 | Topic Creator
I want someone to guess what Mortala's plan is. Go ahead guess You'll never figure it out
I hope the'll never figure out that she's going to force Flare into joining her but that just part of what's shes planning MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!! |
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#22 Posted: 18:15:30 15/04/2009 | Topic Creator
NO one touch the spoiler *gives off crazy look*
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#23 Posted: 04:52:43 26/05/2009 | Topic Creator
comments please
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