No this isnt a duplicate topic of the one in Games and RP's.
"Families look out for eachother, care for oneanother......I wish i had that." When hatching not to see her parents, Nightflare begins her journey accross the land of dragons to find her parents, but it wont be a sound one. With a dark group of dragons on the prowl, will Nightflare find her parents? Or will she be captured by the group before finding them?
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#1 Posted: 19:24:44 01/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 19:26:23 01/02/2009
cool write more!
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#3 Posted: 19:28:42 01/02/2009 | Topic Creator
That was a blurb to the story, you know the bit to the back?
Anyway.... I'll see what i can do
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#4 Posted: 19:52:34 01/02/2009 | Topic Creator
It was night outside. The moon shone through the fait clouds that obscured the lights path. One dragon, with black scales and blue wing inerds glided elegantly through the light. Her name was Nightflare. She flew further and further, eventually finding a cave. She then turned round to face the cave before landing on the edge. She walked inside. The light that shone off her scales dimmed as she walked further inwards. She looked around, searching.
'Hello? Is anyone here?' Her voice echoed off the walls as she called. She looked round once again. 'Hello?' She called once again. She then waited. Her hopes dimmed as no one answered. She then picked a book from her side accompneying a quill, picking both up. She led the book down and then searched through for a blank page. She then led down as she picked the quill up. 'A week since my last entry, but now my hope is dying. The cave I'm in had no one in, so i couldnt even ask if anyone knew my parents. Sometimes i just want to give up, but then i realise my hopes of surviving would die away. I need to find my parents, and soon.'
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#5 Posted: 22:31:30 01/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Is anyone reading?
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#6 Posted: 22:52:10 01/02/2009
Me "Raise hand"
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#7 Posted: 22:59:12 01/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Cool, i want my stories read, not left to die in the corner.....
'I'm wondering if i'll ever find them.' She writen before closing the book. She looked at it and then felt a tear run down her face. She then opened the book once again but looked at the start.
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#8 Posted: 23:04:07 01/02/2009
More, too short
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#9 Posted: 00:53:48 04/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Ill post more soon
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#10 Posted: 09:00:26 04/02/2009
Yay
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#11 Posted: 14:27:35 04/02/2009
OOHHH!!!!!! Please Continue!!
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#12 Posted: 17:53:54 06/02/2009
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#13 Posted: 03:38:05 07/02/2009 | Topic Creator
I will soon! Dont panic!
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#14 Posted: 08:27:02 07/02/2009
Ok,Ok
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#15 Posted: 14:10:29 07/02/2009
PANIC;PANIC;PANIC
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#16 Posted: 18:54:10 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Nightflare flicked through the pages of the book. She felt a tear run down her face as she read through the book. All of the pages dimmed her hope more as she read. She shut the book and looked out at the clouded night sky.
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#17 Posted: 20:29:34 09/02/2009
Continue, Please?
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#18 Posted: 20:39:24 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
She wondered where her parents would be. She then began to remember how her search started.
It was a night of snow. The sound of wind could be heard as it pushed the white snow across the lands. A warm cave lay not far from the fields, and inside, burdened a small, black egg.
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#19 Posted: 20:42:14 09/02/2009
More, please?
Sounds good
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#20 Posted: 20:47:01 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
The egg, with faint red markings, sat in the cave the warmth of the cave. However, nothing else was around. The egg lay on it's own, in the warm darkness.
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#21 Posted: 20:48:04 09/02/2009
More?
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#22 Posted: 20:51:27 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
The silence inside the cave soon broke as the egg gained a slight crack in the shell. Then cracks began appearing all round. Eventually, the shell split apart and revealed a small black dragoness. The young hatchling looked around it's enclosure, but found herself to be alone.
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#23 Posted: 21:00:30 09/02/2009
Continue
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#24 Posted: 21:02:01 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
In a minute...
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#25 Posted: 21:05:10 09/02/2009
Thanks
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#26 Posted: 21:28:45 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
The dragoness looked round, still with nothing there. She walked over to the edge as she tried calling for someone, but no came. The hatchlings smile soon unraveled itself.
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#27 Posted: 21:29:30 09/02/2009
Sad start, continue
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#28 Posted: 21:31:22 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
With no sign of anyone, the hatchling left the cave she hatched in. She wondered outside into the coldness of the snow. The hatchling used her small wings to try warm herself. But it was a cold night and she didn't walk far before entering the cave once more.
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#29 Posted: 21:34:24 09/02/2009
Keep going
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#30 Posted: 12:56:20 10/02/2009
Awesome man,please continue
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#31 Posted: 21:51:50 10/02/2009
Are you going to write more today?
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#32 Posted: 21:56:24 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
I dont know.
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#33 Posted: 22:01:51 10/02/2009
Please continue!!...... Or I'll kill the Hatchling!!!!!!!!!!!! Muahhhhhahaahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Not really)
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#34 Posted: 22:03:09 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
You wouldnt? considering you made a Hatchling killers topic?
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#35 Posted: 22:04:21 10/02/2009
^yep, Write if you can, Please?
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#36 Posted: 22:06:48 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
The hatchling entered the warm cave and curled herself up. The warmth made her drossy as she eventually fell asleep.
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#37 Posted: 22:26:41 10/02/2009
Oh, sweet
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#38 Posted: 22:27:50 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
The hatchling opened her eyes to a bright day. She stood up as she looked out of the entrance. She turned round to still see no one but her.
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#39 Posted: 22:41:23 10/02/2009
More
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#40 Posted: 22:51:27 10/02/2009
Yes, I made that!
Please Continue!!
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#41 Posted: 22:53:29 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Double post.
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#42 Posted: 23:06:25 10/02/2009
^it is
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#43 Posted: 23:28:44 10/02/2009
Sorry, It said I already posted, but i checked and it showed I didn't!
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#44 Posted: 23:29:19 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Well, delete it then
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#45 Posted: 23:48:20 10/02/2009
I did.
Please continue!!
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#46 Posted: 10:37:29 11/02/2009
Continue,continue,continue,PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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#47 Posted: 11:27:20 11/02/2009 | Topic Creator
I cant now, i shouldnt even be on this pc!
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#48 Posted: 11:32:06 11/02/2009
Ok
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#49 Posted: 13:16:24 11/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep..
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#50 Posted: 15:10:59 11/02/2009
I like to hear more.....
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