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#1 Posted: 14:19:10 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1:silver the dragon. this is silver ignitus's son. before ignitus died he had a egg that rolled of a cliff so he thought it was gone. but later it was found in the ocean and taken care of until it was hatched. at 3 years of age,he already had a dragonfly partner named flare. [he was just like sparx exept he was red.] the dragons who raised him were water dragons who lived on an island with a small villiage in the middle. finnaly at age 10 he found out how to glide and breath small flames. he also fought a grublin for the first time. he found gems and bought them back to the villiage one day. he showed his dad. he told silver they were rocks. when he turned 11 he found out his fake dads name,...........cyril. im working on chapter 2. |
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#2 Posted: 18:35:48 30/01/2009
I'm this guy's fake dad and i'm silver him self,......cool!
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#3 Posted: 23:51:54 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
srry i made this up randomly................................................? im making chpter 2 soon
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#4 Posted: 00:13:57 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 2: gems.
silver and flare wondered why there were so many rocks [gems] in a cave they kept on asking cyril but he just said they were rocks. later that day... why do you keep asking me about these rocks? silver: because they are shinier than others. all rocks are different. so silver asked his friends in the villiage and they called them gems although they still didn't know what they did they knew the name of these rocks. silver: my friends called them gems...... why? ill tell you later. silver's 12th birthday.... its time i told you about gems. silver: what are they for? there are a few uses for gems... 1: some gems can be used for money you can buy stuff at moneybags shop. 2: some are used to open doors locked by dragon millions of years before this villiage was found. 3 the third and greatest use of gems are for dragons to draw energy from. silver: what do you mean? here focus on this gem. silver then gains a stronger fire breath. silver:what just happend? you regained lost strenght from your first battle. silver:can i do that again? no not until you lose energy... have flare find you some gems after a few battles. silver: k. |
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#5 Posted: 12:03:18 31/01/2009
cool! keep up the cool story and whatever you do DON'T CLOSE THIS STORY!!!
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#6 Posted: 14:12:16 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
i wont...cuz this is a good story.
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#7 Posted: 14:34:46 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 3: moneybags.
silver and flare go to moneybags shop and see what they can buy... silver: what do you have for sale for 6 gems? nothing. my cheapest item is a pack of energy gems for 25 gems. silver: isnt that expensive when you can just go to the cave and get some. but the cave is running out of gems and eggs are getting stolen so only the remaining kids and dragon elders will be going in there or they can buy from me. silver: what do you mean the dragon eggs are being taken? thiefs are coming to the villiage and taking the eggs. silver: why do you let them get away? im too slow and the dragon elders are too big to fit into the thiefes hideout. silver: why? where is it at? inside that tree. if the tree dies so will the island, so they cant burn it. we need someone to go into it from the inside. an ice kid. the next year...silver turns 13 we need a ice kid. elder: but who can go in? every kid here is fire. i could give energy to a kid to give them another element... silver then uses an element gem to gain a second element. silver: i thought i was fire. you are both now. there is an opening go in it now. silver: ok. silvers ice form: |
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#8 Posted: 15:09:25 31/01/2009
WOW this story is inmencly cool! keep going and don't give up on it.
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#9 Posted: 16:16:40 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
i wont i will continue
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#10 Posted: 16:42:34 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 4: the thiefs hideout.
in the thiefes den........... silver: where are those eggs? flare: *bzzz* *bzzz* silver: im so confused, that i dont even care that, that didnt make any sense. they continue and they find the first thief. silver: give us that egg!!! thief: *annoying laugh* they start chasing the thief. silver headbashes the thief. thief: *annoying laugh......again* silver: we got the egg and gems. they go to the main room and defeat the thieves. silver: i thought it was gonna be harder than that. dad must have not told me something. then he remembers ice breath. silver: wait... why would he give me ice breath if the thiefs are so weak? then hundreds of thieves come and try to trample the eggs. silver:run! they keep running till they hit a wall and the thieves keep coming at the eggs. silver: i have an idea. he freeses himself and the eggs. the thieves fall out a hole in a tree and run away...........but silver is still frozen. |
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#11 Posted: 16:58:31 31/01/2009
.... why do you torture me by leaving it there, please write more.
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#12 Posted: 17:10:55 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 5: ignitus. [short]
1 year later after they thought silver died.... cyril: silver was a good kid. but just then silver came gliding out of the tree. cyril tells him about his dad. silver: i have to find out who killed him. cyril: spyro already killed malafor. .................... but there is another that killed your dad. silver: who? cyril:blaze. first go to volteer and get lightning. then terrador. here are gems. silver ill go now. by dad. cyril good luck silver lets go flare buzz buzz. |
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#13 Posted: 17:26:50 31/01/2009
cool but you spell malafor like malefor ok? but keep at it this is the best story I've read, and I read alot ( and I mean alot). x1000000000!
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#14 Posted: 18:10:30 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yea i type fast and i dont really look at the key board that much and i dont care how i spell it this is only my 5th chapter of the story. ill have another chapter here soon. k?
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#15 Posted: 18:13:47 31/01/2009
can't wait! ^v^
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#16 Posted: 23:20:55 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 6:volteer.
silver takes a boat and turns back to his normal form. silver: i wonder where volteer is. flare: *buzz* *buzz* silver: ok, you need to learn to talk or something. they arrive at an island and look around. silver: lets look here. they go into a hut. silver: is anyone here? ???: welcome silver. silver: ? what ? then a grublin appears and they fight. silver uses a small fire bolt so he doesnt burn the house. the grublin gets hit. he gets back up and hits silver with a wooden club. silver gets back up but he is having a hard time standing. he head bashes him and the grublin leaves. silver:what was that for? later that day he finds a castle. silver: maybe they had a bed to rest. lets use thse gems first. they regain strenght. silver in side the castle: hello? ???: hello silver. silver: aw great a grublin. volteer: no it is me,volteer. silver: volteer can you give me lightning? i need to find blaze. volteer: prove to me your silver. silver: how? volteer: FIGHT ME!!! cool isnt it? |
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#17 Posted: 03:23:11 01/02/2009
WOW this is a really cool story!!
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#18 Posted: 09:16:52 01/02/2009
wow, I agree with super spyro, this is the stuf of legends!
can't wait for the next chapter, but I know it's going to be good!
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#19 Posted: 17:05:27 01/02/2009 | Topic Creator
yea its gonna be good...
thnx pplz |
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#20 Posted: 19:03:39 01/02/2009
oh, this is torture please write chapter 7 soon I'm dieing here!
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#21 Posted: 01:09:04 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
srry 4 da delay here it is!!!
chapter 7: flying lessons. they begin silver swipes his tail across volteers feet. he falls and gets up. volteer: your good for a kid. silver: *pant* thnx *pant* volteer uses lightning. silver gets hit. he gets up and glides over to a platform. he uses fire and hits volteer. he falls again. he gets up and breaks the platform silver is on, he falls and there is pure ground beneath him.............................................................................................................................................he wonders if he will die...then he sees volteer coming to save him. but then a gnorc comes and hits volteer. volteer is knocked into a wall and silver is still falling..... he tries to glide but his wings are injured from his battle. he uses his fire breath to hurt the gnorc and the gnorc leaves. he is almost halfway to the ground about 3,000 feet away from where he was originally at. he hopes volteer will come. he does but then the castle walls fall on him and every thing goes black for a moment. he thinks he is dead but he is just closing his eyes and waiting then he wonders why he can only glide. he tries to fly one final time and it works. he starts flying just seconds before he hits the ground he goes to see volteer. volteer: so you can fly now? silver: yes. volteer: i gues you are silver. here is your new element. silver flies off with flare to find terrador. this one is short but good. |
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#22 Posted: 03:10:16 03/02/2009
this is really cool!
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#23 Posted: 17:23:42 03/02/2009
wow, you should make this into a book!
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#24 Posted: 23:06:31 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i know.
it is good. |
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#25 Posted: 11:40:53 04/02/2009 | Topic Creator
chapter 8:running from war.
they continued thier flight through the forest. they fought gnorcs, rynocs, and grublins. silver:where is he? volteer said we would find him in avalar, through the forest by the catacombs. thats where we are right? flare: *bzzz* *bzzz* silver: ????????????????????????????????? flare: *bzzz* *bzzz* silver: wait.............i think i see a dragon. they ariive at avalar and talk to the dragon. silver:are you terrador? terrador: yes. you must be silver. hunter said you dad sent you to defeat blaze. silver:and i need the earth element......what do i need to do? fight you, pay you, or what? terrador:nothing. im not going to wear you out when you are so close to fighting blaze. here is your new element. silver gets earth. so where is blaze terrador: ill show you after we leave. silver:why cant we go now? terrador: war in avalar. the enemies are coming at night and im the only guard. they wait but when the war starts he told silver to run...he does. then he sees the villiager being attacked and he uses and earth ball to attack the enimies. terrador : itold you to run. silver: im staying. terrador: no, you have to go now. here is a map to get to blaze. go..... silver..... he sees the other dragon elders come and help terrador. he leaves to end the war by fighting blaze. he returns to his fire form. and approaches the center of the war...blazes castle. |
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#26 Posted: 21:16:12 04/02/2009
NOOOO.... you're sooooo close! go on, silver beat up that blaze!
please tell us what happens next.
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#27 Posted: 20:19:35 05/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i will...
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#28 Posted: 01:52:59 07/02/2009
ya!
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#29 Posted: 16:30:02 07/02/2009 | Topic Creator
my pc is broke with viruses so i have to type on my nintendo wii 4 now it wont be fixed 4 up to about so here is chapter 9 short
chapter 9: the flashback as silver and flare flew to the castle, silver tried to get there as fast as he could. the burned lands... they were halfway to blazes castle when blaze came. silver: BLAZE!!! blaze: welcome silver... then gnorcs came from behind him and attacked. silver dodged one but then the other gnorcs tackled him. he fell down and was very injured. blaze: good luck.......... then he left silver and 1 gnorc behind. and silver was too hurt to fight. he got up and used fire and he beat a gnorc... but silver didnt know where blaze went... he went to the floating islands and found blaze... blaze: so your still alive? before silver could answer blaze head rammed silver and silver couldnt move... blaze hit him a second time... then when he was ready to finially kill silver... the dragon elders came and guarded him amd blaze opened a hole in the sky and left..... silver is now 14 and is ready to fight blaze. cyril: youll die!!! silver: im going... volteer said the hole is sucking the life out of earth. when silver was young.. take this silver.... what is it? a new form use it someday.... dad!!!!!!!!!!!! he remembers when his dad died.......... he leaves to fight blaze next is the last chapter. |
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#30 Posted: 23:34:35 07/02/2009
i like pickles pickles r green
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#31 Posted: 23:36:01 07/02/2009
your taking medicine mcrspyro
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#32 Posted: 23:38:27 07/02/2009
lol bravo i like the story
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#33 Posted: 23:38:41 07/02/2009 | Topic Creator
stop plz!!!
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#34 Posted: 12:29:25 08/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ok ignore spyro fan 9 he is my friend and is a little wierd sometimes...
here it is...the end chapter 10: the end. as silver went into the dark hole he thought about what his dad said before he died... he thought about what the fight would be like this time... he finally got there and blaze was there too. blaze: are you going to run away like you did last time? silver: no. blaze: then iguess i have to do this. then the gnorcs came back and attacked silver. this time they all attacked at once and silver was hurt again, and cyril and the other dragons cant help him. blaze leaves again... the top of the tower... the gnorcs are still following him when he finds blaze. silver: your the one whos running away! blaze uses his fury breath and hits silver and even kills the gnorcs... silver is lying on the ground unconscious... blaze uses it again on silver and silver fall off the tower into the lava... blaze: theres no way he could survive that. silver is lying in the lava and wakes up and is now burning... then he remembers what his dad said and tries to use his last gem. flare: *buzz* *buzz*? i dont know what im doing flare but i hope it works... the only reason im alive in this lava is cuz im fire but if this form isnt fire... the world will be destroyed and so will evreyone on it. he gets out the armor cyril said would kepp him alive from going into the hole and he transforms. he gets out of the lava and uses his fury againgst blazes fury and silver wins and blaze falls. he goes over to blaze and is about to kill him when cyril and the other dragon elders come and watch when finally blazes hole in the sky is destroyed and they return home... silver: so i guess i am like this forever...? cyril: yes and you can use any breath now. silver: cool volteer: i was watching blaze leave when he left a note... note: dragons... the world is still dying, by the time you see this it will be tarting again... you need to sacrifice a dragon... silver. they all look at the letter. terrador: but silver beat him and saved us remember? cyril yes but look. they look at the sky where there is a hole big enough for only silver to go in. silver : im going. cyril: there is another way. silver what is it? he tells him to go in the hole without flare... and beat blazes spirit he goes in and 2 days later returns. cyril: silver you did it....again. yea i did........... they look at the sky that will stay the same forever THE END... |
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#35 Posted: 14:55:57 08/02/2009
wwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww! this is sooooo cool but what are you going to do for a no.2?
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#36 Posted: 17:51:26 08/02/2009 | Topic Creator
should i make a new forum or add on with this forum with a new story?
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#37 Posted: 18:30:02 08/02/2009
that was a cool story also i have a wii and i have internet channel to but cant you buy the wii key board it will be easyer.
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#38 Posted: 18:32:21 08/02/2009
yeah, i've heard of it but i don't have a wii, any way back too the topic i think you should do a second one, but what is it going to be about?
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#39 Posted: 00:22:34 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
idk give me ideas plz
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#40 Posted: 00:22:49 09/02/2009
well......... PURPLE MONKEYS WITH A BANANAS is his next story
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#41 Posted: 02:04:52 09/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: spyro fan 9
what? |
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#42 Posted: 16:36:34 10/02/2009
ignore him if he's bothering you.
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#43 Posted: 22:05:06 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ok..............................
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#44 Posted: 22:08:39 10/02/2009
im his bffl for life
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#45 Posted: 22:12:00 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
B:best
f:female f:friends l:life IM NT A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but u r kinda messed up sometimes... so i should have expected that... |
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#46 Posted: 22:12:37 10/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ok back 2 topic...
any other ideas cuz new chapter is coming soon... not that silver's isnt good cuz that is a good 1. |
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#47 Posted: 01:00:27 11/02/2009
hello so you need ideas i will think
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#48 Posted: 18:23:47 15/02/2009 | Topic Creator
yay comp is fixed...[finnaly[]
ok im startin on book 2 soon. post ideas cuz i need a good storyline. |
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#49 Posted: 22:13:00 16/02/2009 | Topic Creator
book 2: chapter 1: a new beggining.
silver is now 17 and almost a fully grown dragon on the othe side of the world.. a 17 yr old dragon is resting on the beach when money bags comes.. moneybags: scarlet[thats her name] ripto is returning. we need you to find silver at dragon villiage. warn him and defeat ripto. scarlet : who is silver? money bags : a dragon who has saved us many times. scarlet: i will find him and defeat ripto. scarlet begins her journey to find silver... i know its short but its just like a prolouge... here is scarlet. |
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#50 Posted: 03:24:03 17/02/2009
cool cool cool
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