This here is Duskice:
Elements: Convexity*, Ice** & Light***.
Rareity colour: extreamly rare.
Personality: Super Timid (scared).
*: Convexity breath(TEN), Dark Speed(TEN),fury from TEN.
**: (all from ANB.).
***: Light breath, Light Duskice, Spyro & Cynder's spirit appears and meld with Duskice and does a white Backwards Convexity fury then a huge wave of light bursts out.
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Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041 |
#1 Posted: 04:47:51 26/01/2009 | Topic Creator
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 05:44:16 26/01/2009 by Dark Cynder_27
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#2 Posted: 05:06:37 26/01/2009
sounds interesting, read my story: Leopardshadow: Icefall
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Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041 |
#3 Posted: 07:13:56 26/01/2009 | Topic Creator
The Intro
Once there was a Temple and inside was an egg. The egg hatched on the night of eternal darkness and Phara the mother called him after his father Duskice. 6 years later in the temple... 6 years after his birth he began to learn the elements of Convexity, Ice and Light. |
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#4 Posted: 01:51:37 27/01/2009
cool (short though )
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#5 Posted: 23:09:29 28/01/2009
(Same thing as Firestar)
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Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041 |
#6 Posted: 08:21:29 29/01/2009 | Topic Creator
well thats the intro its ment to be short.
--- Chapter 1: to harness his elements (part) At the temple... Duskice walked up to Terrador with a smile as Duskice was still a child. "hey Terrador mabey you can help me find Spyro to teach me Convexity and Ice" Asked Duskice. Terrador looked down to see him. "well most likely I'll help just-" Terrador saw Cynder walking around. "huh no prob I'll ask Cynder" Duskice ran up to her. Cynder stopped and looked angry at him. "Well Duskice what!" yelled Cynder in Duskice's ear. --- Thats all I could think of |
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163 |
#7 Posted: 13:33:10 29/01/2009
Hmmmm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer |
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#8 Posted: 15:33:18 29/01/2009
i like it, but i would consider making the parts a bit longer
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