darkSpyro

Here are some dragons I created! I hope you like them and if ya want me to I will write a fanfic about them...
(They are all teenagers its just you get better choice in the eternal night form, right?)


SKARAH: (Ska-ra) Skarah is a female, ice dragon. She is a kind, caring dragon and is always up for a challenge. She loves to venture with her freinds and her nickname is Skar.



DARGIA: (Darg-ia) Dargia is a male, earth dragon. He is very strong and also kind. He is best friends with Skarah and his nickname is Darg.



RASCO: Rasco is a male, shadow dragon. He can be very stubbon sometimes but once he realises what's going on, he puts himself into gear. This young dragon can also be a tad bit of a rebbel.



LYNDA: Lynda is a female, electric dragon. She is the quiet one out of these four dragons. She doesn't say much but when she's got something, she's got something.


PS: Now a fanfic. And I hope you liked them!

cool i like

skarah is a pretty well made dragon


ps:do you want to borrow 2 characters from me for the fanfic if you are writing one?

Hmmm....

Its okay don't worry.....Thanks guys anyway! I will be adding more I keep stoppping to see how it looks...

Any other info you could put on?

ooh i love the new one

Thanks and what sort of info are you wanting, Tango?

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Thanks and what sort of info are you wanting, Tango?

Like...their weaknesses? What there bad at? Give them a bit more charactor?

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Thanks and what sort of info are you wanting, Tango?

Like...their weaknesses? What there bad at? Give them a bit more charactor?

stop been picky i love them all

Oh yeah okay..Sorry :s ... Maybe if I wrote a fanfic about them you could find it out. Perhaps it would be a little more interesting!

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Thanks and what sort of info are you wanting, Tango?

Like...their weaknesses? What there bad at? Give them a bit more charactor?

stop been picky i love them all

It's a way to get rid of Gary stues and Mary sues.

erm right okay then. So am I writing a fanfic or what people?!

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erm right okay then. So am I writing a fanfic or what people?!

yes

i like rasco best

I say, write away. Writing is a good way to express your feelings, and it calms you.

At least thats what I think.

Okay then! But please Note I haven't been one to actually finish my fanfics in the past...But I try...I try!! I ama gunna start!

o9k ill comment evry day to keep u going

I'll be here to help if you want some advice. The one thing I can't stand is bad fan fics, so I try to help.

Okay...Then I hope mone is good! *gulps*

I'll help more tho

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I'll help more tho

Have you any experiance of writing a story?


Just wondering.

yer i wrote one in english and im good at that

Oh.


I've written 3 so far, well 2 and a half. Still writing one.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PART ONE:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Skarah's skinny tail flowed in the warm summer air as she soared across the emerald land. The scent of fresh blooming flowers invaded her nostrils. She smiled. The Kerton Valley was stunning; with the majestic mountains to the east, the healthy terrian and the cheerful atmosphere. Skarah felt lucky to be brought up in such a wonderful place.
She dipped her wing to the right and swiftly spiraled to the ground beside the running stream and the forest. Her icey-blue scales shimmered in the sunlight. Skarah took some sips from the stream, it was most re-freshing. She felt a cool tingle inside. The odd chirp of a bird rung in her ears. She lifted her head and scanned the area. Her eye sight was slightly blurry. 'There must of been something in the water,' she thought. Skarah felt faint. Then she collapsed to the soft grass and her surroundings slowly faded...
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ohhhhh intresting well english for me is hell all other classes wach a gothic horror film and miss never lets us wach any thig and todays excuse was we were going to wach frankinstine but its a 15 so we never did when other classes wached van helsing and frankin stine

Cool. Good start.

cool i can see that place right now

Tanks!

Oh and sorry that the parts are short....I thought I'd make it short other than my usual self making them pages long Lol!

its ok i prefer short caz long its just like ohh no but short you feel like your gwtting some where

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PART TWO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Skarah woke to cold, darkness. She got to her feet, shivering.
"Where am I? How did I get here?" She mumbled to herself, glancing around. (Not that was any point.) Even though she remembered passing out by the stream, it felt as though this was reality. But was it? This strange place had a small effect on Skarah. She felt scared, confused and happy all at once. Although the whole place was black she could feel stone beneath her feet, which was comforting.
"Don't worry, young one," said a voice. Skarah twisted her head around, looking for the owner of this croaky voice.
"I have summoned you here because I fear that the darkness is spreading," it begun, "you are the chosen quartret. Find the Goldne orb. Work together, be strong and do not fail!" It finished. Skarah was mostly confused now.
"Q-quartret? G-golden Orb?" She studdered aloud...
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love them please can you go on www.dragoncave.com/rhiaskin

soz this : http://dragcave.net/user/rhiaskin

Cute dragon now writing mooooooore

I write more tomorow! Okay I hope you like the first to parts, sorry if they are too short or simple or both! Its not my fault really! That's what the people like apparently!

ok ilove it

It's good.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PART THREE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Skarah's eyes peeked open to see three dragon heads looming over her. It was Dargia, Rasco and Lynda her best friends.
"Guys? What happened?" She questioned getting into a sitting position. Rasco shrugged and said; "Dunno, we just found lying there as if you were dead." Skarah looked at him then at Dargia then at Lynda.
"Are you alright?" Dargia asked thoghtfully. Skarah shook her head.
"I...I heard a voice. It said something about a golden orb...And "the chosen quartret". Does this mean anything to you?" She wondered. There was a pause before Dargia answered; "No. Do you know who said this? Where were you with "the voice"?" Skarah took a while to answer.
"I don't know who it was because I was in total darkness, nothing but black all around me," she explained. Rasco, as usual, was lazing to the side, Lynda, as usual, was being quite and Dargia, as usual, becoming interested in this mystory.
"Well what ever happened your okay, that's the positive way to look at it.

Brilliant!

wow thanks

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PART FOUR~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That night those words from the voice echoed in her mind, causing a wakefall slumber. It was annoying. Her eyes stung more and more with every wake. She hoped the voice would leave from her thoughts.

The next morning came too slowly. Skarah wished it hadn't. Nonetheless she got up like ay other morning and ventured to the creak to meet her good friends.

Really good! Better than my first story, and I'm (Aparantly) really good at english!