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Malefor, Corrupted Soul [CLOSED]
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#1 Posted: 02:35:23 20/01/2009 | Topic Creator
This is a story about Malefor becoming evil and all.
I'll start tomorrow, I have to go to bed.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 20:21:43 22/05/2010 by Fireball
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#2 Posted: 02:36:30 20/01/2009
sounds interesting.
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#3 Posted: 15:19:16 20/01/2009
Oh cool sounds good! Are you starting from where ya know the Chronicler was saying about him? That would be awesome
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!!!SPYRO AND CYNDER RULE!!!
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#4 Posted: 01:34:31 21/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Nope, I'm starting from his borth.
Here it is:
Chapter 1 Malefor and the hatchlings

The 4 dragon guardians and the two couples watched the purple egg sitting in the nest.
Many young hatchlings were in bed, toddlers were wondering around, and kids were playing in a differn't room, none were purple.
It had been a week.
"Honey, I don't think our hatchling made it." said Firewing.
"Just keep watching." said Bluetail.
For 5 years they kept watching, still the egg had not moved.
"Honey....." continued Firewing.
Just then the egg twitched.
A smile lit up across the room.
A crack split down the egg and Bluetail feltlike butterfliesin her stomach.
Inside a tiny hole of the egg 2 beady eyes looked out of it, it was purple.
The top of the egg broke off and Firewing picked up the hatchling by the neck just the way animals hold their hatchlings.
Firewing sat the teensy one down as it looked up at him in fear.
It started crying.
"A purple dragon?! How can this be?! We've never had a purple dragon, what powers could it pocess?" exclaimed Crush, the earth guardian.
"Purple or not, he shall be our cute son." replied Firewing.
Bluetail was busy looking at the Hatchling, we shall name him........ Malefor!"
"Walefwor!" croaked the Hatchling in excitement.
The Guardians started laughing, but then Bluetail rushed into an empty room.
"Mwommwy?" asked Malefor.
Firewing scooped Malefor up in his mouth and walked into the room Bluetail had gone to.
Malefor screached in terror.
Firewing sat Malefor down again.
"Whats wrong?" asked Firewing
"More hatchlings are coming!" exclaimed Bluetail as she laid an orange egg, a black egg, a green egg, a pink, a blue, a white, a gray, and a red.
Malefor looked at all his brothers and sisters that lied inside, wondering what he was, and what was inside them.
All of the eggs started to shake and then they all cracked on the top.
A teensy pink Female dragon climbed out of her egg, she was smaller than Malefor.
A blue Male hatchling wth no wings and was really fat climbed out of its egg it fell on its stomach, it cried.
A handsome orange Male Hatchling climbed out of his egg slowly.
A pitch black Male hatchling waddled out of its egg.
A green Male hatchling, perfect size waddled out of its egg.
A white Female hatchling waddled out of its egg and sneezed.
A gray female hatchling waddled out of its egg and waddled out the door unnoticed.
Finally, a male red hatchling waddled out.
"We shall name the pink hatchling Ember, the blue Aque (O-cwu), the orange Shine, the black Darky, the green Rusty, the white Daisies, and the
red will be Flame, and finally the gray will be......" said Bluetail.
"Oh No! Where is the Gray!?" shouted Bluetail.
THe Hatchling screached and backed away, scared.
"Your scaring them...." whispered Firewing.
"Firewing! You go out and find her, I'll stay here with Malefor and the other hatchlings." ordered Bluetail.
"Okay, honey." replied Firewing as he dashed out the door.
He looked everywhere, he saw a glimpse of Gray out of the corner of his eye.
He turned his head and saw the Gray female hatchling about to walk off the balcany of the Temple.
Firewing dashed owards the Hatchling and grabbed her right as she fell off.
It screached.
Firewing took it back to Bluetail.
"Where was she?" asked Bluetail looking a the shivering hatchlin that staired at Firewing.
Firewing set her down and guarded the door.
The Hatchling screached and waddled into the center of Malefor, the other hatchlings, Bluetail, and Firewing.
"She was aout to kill herself by falling off the balcany." replied Firewing in dismay.
Bluetail grabbed the Hatchling and licked its teensy head.
It screached as it used its tiny claws to scratch her mouth.
Bluetail put her down and curled up with the hatchling and the other hatchling, and Malefor and laid down.
"We shall name her Shy." said Bluetail.
Thefamily then started to drift off into a long sleep.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#5 Posted: 22:56:52 21/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2 A horrible day

Malefor twitched in his sleep.
In a dream of his, or perhaps it was a vision,
"Malefor......." echoed a dark voice.
"What do you want?" asked Malefor in his dream, even thogh he couldn't actually talk yet.
"Malefor......." repeated the Dark voice.
"Show yourself, coward!" shouted Malefor.
A big lightning bolt shot across the sky.
A big beam of power none as convexity was seen.
2 dark eyes appeared inside it.
"Don't talk to me like that!" shouted the creature.
"Who are you?" asked Malefor a bit scared of the creature, after all hatchlings don't like loud noices.
"I have many names, but my true name is behind your thoughts! I am Convexity!" boomed the black eyes from the Convexity.
Malefor backed away, but realized he was on the edge of a platform in the dark skies.
"I have called you here to ask for one thing......." continued Convexity.
"Leave me alone!" shouted Malefor a bit scared for he was a small inecent hatchling, what could he possibly have to give him?
"I need you to -" said Convexity, but he was awoke bye his mom who kissed him on the cheek.
"Good morning, my young one." said Bluetail as she awoke the other hatchlings, Shy was still scared and wanted free.
Malefor looked at his mom.
Later that day,
Malefor and the others were waddling around the place.
One climbed up Crush and bit at his ear.
Malefor watched as Shy waddled towards a diffferen't room.
Malefor discided to follow her.
Shy waddled out of the Temple and towards the dangerous swamp.
Malefor croaked as if to tell Shy not to go there, but Shy kept going.
Shy waddled into a cave for shelter, not knowing a wolf was inside.
Malefor waddled after her, but didn't dare to go inside the cave.
A wolf grabbed shy by the leg and sprang out of the cave and pinned her to the ground.
The hatchling screached in terror.
Malefor waddled over to the wolf trying to help Shy, but he didn't go too close.
Shy screached as she started crying.
The bit her head, then he bit of one of her legs, then the others, and the ate her, whole! The Wolf finished eating its meal and went over to Malefor.
Malefor staired in horror that his sister was just killed when she just hatched!
"Mwomwa!" screached Malefor.
The Wolf tackled Malefor, but right as it was about to rip one of his legs off Firewing knocked the wolf off of Malefor.
Bluetail guided Malefor to safety as the wolf fled, leaving Malefor's dead inecent sister inside of it.
Malefor and the others looked down in dismay as they went back to the temple.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#6 Posted: 16:08:49 24/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3 Fire

Malefor was 3 days old, he could talk, but not very good.
One day,
Malefor waddled around outside.
"Fwame." asked Malefor.
"Yes?" asked Flame, he was better at speaking than Malefor.
"Ywour wit!" smirked Malefor as he waddled away from Flame.
"Hey!" replied Flame as he chased after Malefor.
Malefor waddled behind a boulder.
A tingly smoke arose from Malefor's nose.
Malefor panicked as he waddled back into the Temple.
"Mwomwa! Dwadwa!" screached Malefor.
Malefor sneazed a Fire came out of his nose.
Firewing looked at Bluetail.
"Malefor, that is Fire, come here." said Firewing as Malefor waddled into the training room.
"Flame those dummies." ordered Firewing.
"How?" asked Malefor.
"Just think about nothing, but flameing them." replied Firewing.
Huge dummies appeared and tackled Malefor.
"Dwadwa!" screached Malefor as he flamed the Dummies.
The Dummies turned to ash.
Malefor got back up.
"Exelent!" exclaimed Firewing.
"Now, curve your wings and charge those dummies!" ordered Firewing.
More Dummies appeared.
Malefor hesitated, then he curved his wings and charged.......... A huge Fireshield went around Malefor and singed the Dummies.
"That is called a Comet Dash." replied Firewing.
"Now, go into the center of the room and free your mind!" ordered Firewing.
Malefor obeyed and waddled to the center.
Huge dummies appeared and ran towards Malefor.
Ember waddled around in the room.
Malefor freed his mind and unleashed tghe Fire Fury.
Fireballs shot a cross the room and hit the walls, causing them to catch on Fire, A huge Firewall shot at Firewing and Ember, knocking them far away, Fire arose from the ground, then finally a Comet Fire Fury Dash shot up in the air and blew the Temple ceiling up!
Firewing stared at Malefor in shock, the Fire fury wasn't supposed to be like that.
Firewing got up and told Malefor to get out of the Temple for there was a major Fire!
Bluetail found Flame, Shine, and Aque.
Firewing gathered Daisies, Rusty, Darky, and Crush, the Earth Guardian, and Bolt, the electric guardian.
Together they left the Temple.
Malefor waddled out of the temple.
"We've got Malefor, Flame, Shine, Aque, Daisies, Rusty, Darky, and ........... Ember! Where's Ember!" shouted Bluetail in terror.
Ember was trapped in the Flames.
Bleutail and the others spot a Pink tail in the fire.
"Ember!" shouted Bluetail.
Then, the Temple cracked.
"Mwomwy! Dwadwy!" screached Ember.
"Ember!" screamed Bluetail as the Temple colapsed.
Bluetail started Crying as the Firewing, Crush, and Bolt acumpuepide her.
Malefor's siblings' faces were in dismay.
"Its all my fault." thought Malefor.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#7 Posted: 14:09:57 29/01/2009 | Topic Creator
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO????????????? ANYONE????????????????????
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#8 Posted: 21:44:05 18/02/2009
Please continue!!!!smilie
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#9 Posted: 23:16:53 18/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!!
Chapter 4 The Legend of the purple dragon

Malefor rolled in his sleep.
The Dark eyes appeared.
"Malefor....." said Convexity.
"What, leave me alone!" cried Malefor.
"Malefor......" said Convexity.
"Leave me alone!!" shouted Malefor in his sleep.
Convexity flew around Malefor.
"I ask of you to give me your soul!!!" boomed Convexity.
"What are you?????!!!!! And what do you mean??!!" cried Malefor.
"I am the evilness of the world, but I will not tell you my true being." said Convexity.
"I want you to stay with me, soon you will be corupted, there is no stopping it!" boomed Convexity.
"Never!" shouted Malefor as he tried to flame the eyes.
The Eyes looked at Malefor in a laugh.
"You think you can destroy a spirit?!" replied Convexity.
Malefor nodded.
"Where you are wrong!" boomed Convexity as lightning shot out of the sky.
"Look at you, you are a purple dragon, the first purple Dragon, the Legend of the Purple Dragon is that they will destroy the world, look at your paw." said Convexity.
Malefor looked at his paw, a black symbol was on it.
"This means you are to destroy the world! Now be Corupted!" boomed Convexity.
"Never!" replied Malefor.
Suddenly,
Malefor was awoken by Bluetail.
"Hello, my sweet Malefor!" said Bluetail.
"Hewo, mwommy!" said Malefor.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#10 Posted: 23:27:50 18/02/2009
what did this black symble look like
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#11 Posted: 12:41:57 19/02/2009 | Topic Creator
I don'tknow, I guess a Dark D.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#12 Posted: 16:44:47 19/02/2009
Continue!This story is getting better and better!!!
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#13 Posted: 16:45:01 19/02/2009
Continue!This story is getting better and better!!!
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#14 Posted: 22:31:32 20/02/2009 | Topic Creator
No double post please.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#15 Posted: 12:49:21 21/02/2009
Cool i like it plz continue soon!smilie
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
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#16 Posted: 20:35:13 15/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5 Ice
Malefor waddled around in the training room, watching other Dragons train.
Malefor sneezed and a Ice Shard came out.
"Mwommy! Dwaddy!" screached Malefor.
Bluetail came in.
"What is it, honey?" asked Bluetail.
"I snweezed awnd swomethwing cwame out." said Malefor.
Bluetail looked at the Ice on the ground.
"That is Ice, honey." said Bluetail.
"Cwan I lwearn it?" asked Malefor.
Bluetail, who did not know that Malefor caused the fire said yes, but Firewing would of said no.
"First, swipe your tail at that dummy." ordered Bluetail.
Malefor did so and a ice missile shot out of his tail.
"Great job! Next, take a deep breath and breathe ice." ordered Bluetail.
Malefor did so.
"Good! Now free your mind, think about nothing, but breathing Ice. Then, Unleash it, willingly." ordered Bluetail.
Malefor did so and Ice shards shot everywhere, snow came out of no where and froze the room, Ice missiles shot everywhere, Ice breath came out of Malefor's mouth, Icicles came out of the ceiling.
Aque was walking around in the room.
The Icicles came out of the ceiling and fell ontop of Aque, stabbing him to death.
Bluetail looked in shock, that wasn't what the Ice Fury was.
Bluetail looked at Aque.
"Oh no!" shouted Bluetail.
Aque lay there, twitching, Icicles sticking out of him.
I looked in horror.
It's all my fault. he thought.
And so there was a funeral, Aque was burried next to Ember and Shy.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#17 Posted: 00:42:03 19/03/2009
this is good..
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#18 Posted: 01:41:34 24/10/2009
Such is the price of unknown power: DEATH OF THOSE CLOSEST TO U!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
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#19 Posted: 13:02:58 24/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6 Leaving

That was it.
Tonight Malefor would leave the temple and go find a place where he would fit in.
The rest of the day was very sad and the other siblings kept giving him mean glares, Darky the most.

Malefor sat down in the food room eating a dead cow leg.
He knew this might be his last.
Darky came up to Malefor and gave him a huge slash with his tail.
Malefor fell over and cried.
"This is what you get when you kill people!" growled Darky as he raised his tail to slash Malefor's heart.

[i]Flashback...[/i]

"...the legend of the purple dragon is that you will destroy the world..."
"Never!"
"You shall be corrupted!"
"Who are you?"
"I have many names, but my true name is not to beyond your thoughts! I am -"

[i]Another flashback...[/i]

"... Now unleash it, willingly."
"Can you teach me it?"
"Take a deep breath..."

[i]Yet another flashback...[/i]

"... curve your wings and charge those dummies."
"How?"
"That is known as a comet dash."
"Your wit!"
"Hey!"

[i] Yes, another flashback[/i]

"A purple dragon?!"
"Purple or not he shall always be our cute son."
"Just keep watching..."

[i] Ahhh...... another flashback[/i]

*The accident with Shy...*
*The funeral goes by...*
"Leave me alone!"
"I need you to -"

[i] The last flash back... [/i]

"Look at your paw."
*Malefor looks to see the black symbol.*
"This means you shall destroy the world..."
[i]It's all my fault...[/i]
"Now be corrupted!"

[i]Fade back...[/i]

Malefor's eyes gleamed white and suddenly he caught Darky's tail.
"Wha...??" wondered Darky.
Malefor threw Darky into a wall and slash him deep in the chest.
He slashed harder and harder as Darky screamed for help.
No one came.
Malefor stopped as his eyes faded back to normal.
He gasped at the lifeless body laying on the floor.
"What have I become???" he asked himself.
"Who's in there?" asked a voice from another room, it was crush.
Malefor looked towards the open window and flew out of it, leaving the body there.
Crush came in the room and saw the dead body and gasped as a tear went down his right eye.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 19:33:28 01/11/2009 by Fireball
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#20 Posted: 03:05:56 26/10/2009
Awwww it's so sad!
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#21 Posted: 03:37:11 14/01/2010
PC? PLZE??
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
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#22 Posted: 19:04:23 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
I will soon...
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#23 Posted: 00:08:57 23/03/2010
OMG?! I CANT BELIVE THE WOLF EAT THE SISTER smilie HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!
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#24 Posted: 15:37:41 29/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Gotta make Malefor's life miserable...

Chapter 7 Out on my own

I must leave my life behind for the sake of my family and everyone else in the world. I must go out on my own.
Malefor flew over the swamp and saw someone. It was Flame, his brother. He looked up at Malefor and waved his paw goodbye as Malefor flew away. A tear ran down Malefor's cheek.
Malefor flew over the dark caves of the wolves. He growled at them and continued to fly away. He saw the moles building a dam.

Malefor landed on a dark cliff and looked back to make sure no one was following. He then turned back around and looked out at the horizon, a dark purple ocean.
I'll just go ahead, hopefully I'll found some place for me to have a better life.
He flapped his wings to fly, but then he heard a howl from behind.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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#25 Posted: 22:20:10 31/03/2010
More MORE! please! this is good and good point on making him miserable
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#26 Posted: 02:01:22 01/04/2010
It kinda sounds like my story, but keep on going! It's still good!
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#27 Posted: 21:30:15 08/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8 Scar

Malefor turned around to see a furry figure walking towards him. Its yellow eyes glowed in the moonlight.
"This is a bad place to be at this time of night." said the figure.
Malefor jumped back as the figure appeared to be another wolf. This one had a thick red scar going from his front leg all the way to his left eye.
"Who are you?" asked Malefor.
"Can't you tell from my appearance?! I'm Scar!!" growled the wolf as he walked closer to Malefor.
Malefor stepped back a little and growled.
"I remember when I killed that kid, what was her name, I think it was Shy." said Scar.
Malefor growled, "You are a monster, your whole clan is a monster! And I'm going to put an end to it!"
"Oh really..." said Scar. He pinned Malefor to the ground and began to tear at him.
Malefor quickly kicked him off and shot a blazing fury of fire.
Scar jumped back, screaming in pain.
Malefor then jumped off the cliff and began to fly away.
Scar growled and jumped off the cliff. He grabbed Malefor and tried to drown him.
Malefor shot fire into his eyes.
Scar howled in pain as he let go and fell to his doom.
Malefor quickly got control and flew away.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#28 Posted: 19:59:37 10/04/2010
"Good, Shy can rest in piece." ~ Mali.
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
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