darkSpyro

ya ya, i know, the title sounds like the song

This story will be in Hawkfrost's point of view.

For any of you who read the Warrior Cats series: The New Prophecy should know the character, hawkfrost.

He is part rogue (stary cat). His father, Tigerstar was a murderous tabby tom who fell in love with a rogue, Sasha. Tigerstar had a dark, dark past, his birthplace was in ThunderClan, but he was eventually banished. Tigerstar then took over ShadowClan, rebuilding it. Tigerstar died a bloody death, but Sasha and her kits, Moth and Hawk survived. When he was old enough, Hawk and Moth ( later renaimed Hawkpaw & Mothpaw), were taken into RiverClan. Hawkpaw grew up to be a strong warrior, while Mothpaw was made a medicine cat apprentice. Their warrior names are Hawkfrost and Mothwing. hawkfrost is like his father though, ambitious, cold-hearted, and calculating, while Mothwing is more compassionate.

Hawkfrost is a broad-shouldered dark brown tabby tom with ice blue eyes.

Mothwing is a beautiful tabby she-cat with golden fur, a broad-flat face, and a long pelt rippling with dark tabby stripes

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Hawkfrost got back from the dawn patrol along with Mistyfoot, Stonestream, beechfur, and Mosspelt. He eyed Mistyfoot with disgust. I'd make a much better deputy than her, he thought. Like when Riverpaw and Silverpaw accidentally crossed WindClan territory, Mistyfoot just told them, "never do that again" while I would have given them a serious punishment for being so mouse-brained! He gave a slight hiss. Mistyfoot padded over to Leoapardstar. "Everything is fine", she reported. Hawkfrost glared and padded up to them. 'Athough, I did catch a slight hint of ThunderClan scent", he added. "It was probably a vole", Mistyfoot argued. "There are so many of them in thunderClan territory that they basically have ThunderClan scent on them". "Thats rubbish!", he snarled. "Thats enough!", Leoapardstar ordered with impatience in her mew. "No more argueing!", she snarled. She settled down, letting her spotted fur lie flat. "hawkfrost please go help the apprentices clean out the elders den", she ordered. You'll be feeling more than impatience if you keep giving me rubbish tasks like this, he thought. With an annoyed hiss, he padded off.

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awsome! cool story! write more!

Thanks! I like Hawkfrost's character 'cause he isn't afraid to say what he thinks.

heres more, enjoy!
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Hawkfrost felt a surge of anger go through him that almost threw him of his paws. He, a warrior, was cleaning out the elder's den with the apprentices. Silverpaw & Minnowpaw were the other apprentices cleaning out then den. They looked at Hawkfrost and started whispering to each other. Hawkfrost glared at them with his glittering eyes blue eyes. He clawed a pawful of moss, almost tearing it to shreds as he put new bedding on Shadepelt's bed. "You missed a spot!." Loudbelly complained. Why don't you get it then, you stupid elder!? He swept the moss over the missed spot. "Happy?"< he snarled. Loudbelly grunted in approval. After several minutes Hawkfrost burst out of the den, happy to feel like a warrior again. He noticed Mothwing scanning the camp suspiciously and then stalking out of camp. He glared and followed her. Where are you going? Suddenly he detected a scent that no RiverClan warrior ever smells this close to their territory. ThunderClan!

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Hawkfrost crept closer and closer to Mothwing and the unfamiliar cat. He tried to eavesdrop, but he couldn't hear a thing. Suddenly, his gaze lightened as he saw Mothwing jab the ThunderClan cat into the river. Nice!. But Mothwing wasn't trying to drown the ThunderClan apprentice, she was trying to hide her from Hawkfrost. The unfamiliar apprenitce slipped through the bushes without being seen. Hawkfrost made his aproach. "What are you doing?", Mothwing hissed, startled. Hawkfrost glared at his sister. "Just keeping my eyes open for WindClan," Hawkfrost lied. "I know very well they're stealing fish and one day, I'll catch them at it". "Not down here, surely?" Mothwing replied innocently. "WindClan would fish closer to Fourtrees-if they're fishing at all". "WindClan and ThunderClan," Hawkfrost growled. He added, "I can scent a ThunderClan cat now."

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I'll write more soon, I don't want to make it too long.

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"So? The border's over there," Mothwing pointed out. "It would be odd if you didn't scent ThunderClan." Hawkfrost grunted. Why does Mothwing always have to be a big know-it-all? "Theres something not right in the forest. Cats have gone missing from all the Clans, for one thing. Do you remember what the other leaders said at the last Gathering? Thats four more cats, beside Stormfur and Feathertail. I don't know whats going on, but I'll find out." Mothwing was chilled by the hunger in Hawkfrost's voice. She bit back a retort, "There's nothing wrong in RiverClan, so why should we care?". "Have you got bees in your brain?", Hawkfrost snapped. "This could be our chance to make RiverClan great If the other Clans are weak, we could rule over the whole forest." "What?", Mothwing sounded disgusted. "You're the one with bees in your brain. Who do you think you are--Tigerstar?".

cool! write more!

good story!!!i love it!!!!

who do you like better? hawkfrost or mothwing?

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"There are worse cats to imitate," Hawkfrost meowed. Pure icy fear lanced through Mothwing. Tigerstar had been prepared to kill any cat who opposed him in his quest for supreme power. And now another cat was prepared to follow in his pawsteps. She glanced back to make sure Leafpaw, the ThunderClan apprentice was still hidden. "Have you forgotten what happened to Tigerstar?" Mothwing snapped. "He failed, and now he's just a name to frighten kits with." "I shall learn from his mistakes." Hawkfrost's voice rumbled deep in his chest. "Our mother told us enough about him, after all. He broke the warrior code, and he deserved to fail. I shall know better."
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Leafpaw, the light-brown tabby apprentice, noticed the wind had changed, and that a playful breeze, twisting its way upriver, had carried her scent with it.
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"I can smell ThunderClan," Hawkfrost declared suddenly. "The scent's fresh too. If one of their warriors is on our territory, I'll claw his fur off."
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Leafpaw's heart nearly jumped out of her chest. Silently, she took a pawstep backwards, shrinking down.
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"Your right!", Mothwing lied. "It's this way. Come on!" "Mouse-brain!" Hawkfrost argued. "It's downstream..."
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Leafpaw didn't want to hear anymore, she plunged back into ThunderClan

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hawkfrost scented the reeds one more time, then let out an annoyed hiss and followed mothwing. mothwing led him away for leafpaw to escape. "You really think that it went over here?", Hawkfrost muttered. "Uh-of course", Mothwing stammered. She pretended to scent the cat, holding her muzzle high in the air. "Mouse-dung! It must have gotten away", she lied. Hawkfrost snarled in disbelief, then relaxed a little. "When I find that cat, I'm gonna make him wish he'd never been born!", he snarled. He padded away, back to the RiverClan camp. Thanks for nothing, Mothwing!

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Hawkfrost gave one last hostile glance at Mothwing and padded off to join his friend, Blackclaw. "Hi", he grunted. "Whats with you?", Blackclaw hissed. Hawkfrost curled his lip, baring his teeth. "I scented a ThunderClan cat on our territory", he explained. "I'm starting to think Mothwing was leading me away on purpose". "Where did you scent it?", Blackclaw asked, clearly interested. "Near Sunningrocks, by the river", he mewed. "Probably some mouse-brained apprentice", Blackclaw suggested. "Probably", Hawkfrost agreed. He whipped his head, facing the river, his ice-blue eyes intense. "When I find that cat, they're crowfood!", he snarled. He grabbed a plump fish from the fresh-kill pile and settled down by Blackclaw again. "I'am a pretty good tracker", Blackclaw explained. He whispered softly, "Plus, I want to see where that scent was so how about you and me go down by the river again at Moonhigh to check it out". Hawkfrost took a bite of his fish, swallowing. He paused for a long while, then added, "Fine. But if we get caught it's your fault", he hissed. Blackclaw rolled his eyes and padded off. Hawkfrost took another bite of fish, then pushed it away. he wasn't hungry. He wasn't hungry because he was too busy pondering about that ThunderClan tresspaser. He padded to the warrior's den and settled in for an early sleep, he would need strenght for tonight.

weee!! warriors rule!

YES!!!!

I like Hawkfrost's character cause he isn't afraid to say what he thinks.

yeah! can you read my fan-fic? i need more readers.

okay, post a link and i'll read it. did you read mine?

yesh! it awesome! its blueshadow: a life untold in fandom!

yeah, i've been reading some, its awsome too! which post do blueshadow & tanzanite admit their love for each other?

i'll write more tommorow or possibly tonight.

yeah! they do! ro'zan, shadow, and terron are all gonna be in my next one! i can't wait! *squils* i can't wait for the next part!

yeah, but which post?!

i think ether page 2 or 3. yeah, don't remember so well.

oh okay, i'll have a look

Eh what the heck, I'll write the next part
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A sharp paw jabbed Hawkfrost awake. "What?", he snarled, his ice-blue eyes still closed. "Come on!", Blackclaw whispered. Hawkfrost sighed. he didn't expect he'd be so tired already, he'd just woken up. "Coming", he muttered and got up, his powerful broad shoulders jolting upright. he joing Blackclaw and they padded to the river, trying to make as little noise as possible. Mothwing's nest smelt stale. Fox-dung! She must be out gathering herbs! Hawkfrost quickened the pace, afraid of being spotted. "Hey, wait up!"< Blackclaw whispered. The smoky black tom dashed to catch up to him. Hawkfrost could soon hear the flowing bubble of the river. "Were here", he whispered.

hawkfrost is a bad boy! LOLZ!

ya well he inherited it through tigerstar

should i continue?

if you want too! oh! and sorry if i commented really late!

NP! This one will be slightly short

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"Where did you scent the ThunderClan cat?", Blackclaw asked. Hawkfrost pointed with his snout near a clump of reeds. "near there". Blackclaw approached it while Hawkfrost sat with his tail curled over his paws. His white underbelly shone silver in the reflected moonlight on the river. Great StarClan I'm tired! "The scent is stale, but it smells like an apprentice", Blackclaw explained. "Yeah, mouse-brain, I told you that!", hawkfrost snarled. Blackclaw flinched. Hawkfrost sighed. "Sorry, he hissed. "I'm-tired".

i love this! i really need to buy those books!

yeah you do! the first bookis called Into the Wild.

I'll write more tomorrow, its late and I'm tired, lke hawkfrost

also sapphire, if you have any ?s on warriors, feel free to ask me!

like for your story? he** yes!

ya for that and if you nuy the books and you have ?s

last one for tonight!
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"i see", blackclaw meowed. "well ... can we go now!", hawkfrost growled, curling his lip. "yeah-yeah, whatever lets go", Blackclaw agreed and padded back up to camp. Hawkfrost drowsily enter the warriors den and curled up in his nest besides Swallowtail and Rainstorm. Blackclaw's nest was on the other side of the den, nest to Mosspelt and Watershine. Once Hawkfrost closed his eyes sleep crashed over him like a black wave ...

hmm...im thinking...


oh and blackclaw is my favorite!

Why? I like Hawkfrost, he is one of my fav characters in the warriors series thats why I made a story about him because there is a lot left untold.

yes! i meant the cats for your story! do you need some characters?

No, thanks anyways
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Hawkfrost woke, blinking sleep from his eyes. He remembered the long, dreary night and just realized that he had slept until sunhigh! Almost all the warriors had woken up already, only Beechfur and Mosspelt remained. Yawning, he got up and pushed his way through the bramble screens that lined the den. Camp was peaceful. The fresh-kill pile was stocked and cats looked sleek and well-fed. Hawkfrost looked for Blackclaw, but he couldn't find him. Must be on a hunting patrol. Hungry, he grabbed a smal water vole from the fresh-kill pile and sat down besides Swallowtail, a dark tabby she-cat, and Stonestream, a silver-gray tom. "Hi", Swallowtail greeted Hawkfrost. "Hey', he grunted and took a smalll bite of his vole. "Why do you look so tired?", Stonestream asked. Don't mention last night!. "I went on two patrols yesterday", he lied. They both beleived him. Stupid furballs... "Well I caught a huge fish yesterday, leopardstar let me have the first pick of prey", Swallowtail boasted. Big deal, Hawkfrost thought. Hawkfrost finished his vole, got up, and padded away. Swallowtail and Stonestream watched him with narrowed eyes. "Whats with him?", Swallowtail asked. "Ah-Hawkfrost has always been like that", Stonestream replied.

D**N YOU STONESTREAM!!!!! >8O

What? He's not being mean or anything.

oh...oops. LOLZ! great story by the way! and i wrote another part for my fan-fic! 8D

cool, i'll take a look, do you want me to write more?

yes! go ahead! 8D

Okay! enjoy!
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Hawkfrost padded at a quick pace to the river. He gazed down at the reflected light that shone on it. Tiny fish swam by. Hawkfrost concentracted on their movements. He swiped his paw in the water, claws unsheathed and grabbed a sparkling fish.

I'll write more later

GO HAWKFROST! GO HAWKFROST!

YAYZ FOR HAWKFROST!
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Ha!. He trotted back to camp and put his fish on the fresh-kill pile. A patrol came rushing in with Mistyfoot at the lead follwed by Blackclaw, Voletooth, and Splashpaw. Mistyfoot streaked to Leopardstar's den. Amused, hawkfrost watched. "theres a badger on the edge of our territory!", Mistyfoot declared. "What? They never come this far!", Leopardstar hissed. Hawkfrost stepped inside the den. "The warm weather must have driven them near the river", he explained. Mistyfoot and Leaoprdstar both looked at him. "Well I couldn't help overhearing", he confessed. Leopardstar glared at him, dark blue eyes meeting ice blue eyes. "Fine", Leoaprdstar declared. "Since you seem so interested, I will allow you to go with Mistyfoot and Blackclaw to help stop this badger", she told Hawkfrost. Yes! Finally some action! Hawkfrost wanted nothing more to sink his teeth into flesh and tear fur with his claws. He helped mistyfoot gather up Blackclaw, Voletooth, and Spashpaw and they all plunged back into the undergrowth.

Great story Firestar! I like Mothwing and Blackclaw. Hawkfrost is too evil...

Thanks! Well, Hawkfrost is supposed to be evil.

Because of Tigerstar.

Yep, should I continue?

yes! 8D